Date: 30 Mar 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I had sure hoped kidnapping was the case. Good chapter!
Date: 30 Mar 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
I knew they didnt let her just go with that creep.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
They didnt let her go the guy kidnapped her. That is one big step for both of them.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
HMMM they all need counselling of some sort. hmmm renee and marcus huh?
Date: 26 Mar 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow! Exciting chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
Can't believe she didn't recognize her own daughter!!! And the mother of the year award goes to .....
Date: 25 Mar 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Esme she cant get away but now she has people on her side . Edward will be with her no matter what.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you...I'm really loving seeing these guys develope, not just as couples, but the peeling back of the characters...got to love the slow reveal....
Great stuff, keep it coming! T
Date: 21 Mar 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hope they can help Esme. Hate when the Wall of Blue hides their criminals.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
She stood up to that ass hole so proud of her.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow that is some heavy shit so much for her to take in. Love Carlisle he is such a good big brother want to be.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hope Sam's offer is on the up and up
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
Go, Bella! Way to tell him.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!!!!
now I hope she can reunite with Charlie somehow. I just know that the man that took her lied to Charlie and Renée and took her from them. At least I'm hoping that's the case. And that Charlie's been looking for her all this time. Time shall tell
Date: 14 Mar 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Poor B. Wonder how much of her being forced away was Charlie's actual doing moreso than Renee's
Date: 13 Mar 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow what a fabulous chapter! I look forward to seeing how the rest plays out. and good for Edward knocking Call out
Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG he found her and now what . Why didnt he ever tell her who he was?? Mr Call needs more than just a good ass kicking.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow so much bad things happen to kids it is so sad. They need each other.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved this chapter
Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG Can't believe you left it there!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you...great story. T
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
They've both had it so tough
Date: 08 Mar 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow they've both had screwed up childhoods.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
So happy he showed up they both need to let down there walls
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why is she protecting that guy he is out to kill her. She need s a friend like Edward.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
What has the old man so scared??
Date: 01 Mar 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Those two are really messed up
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
There is so much pain and none of them are talking that is what they need to do
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
She needed to hear him again. What is going on with Emmett.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Dont think Esme is a bitch. I think she's been hurt really bad like Rose.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds like the old man had a stroke.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow they are all messed up.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loving this story, I hope your muse inspires you to give us more!;-)
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Sam came in when he did. They need a new waitress soon. Aww for flowers.
Date: 09 Jul 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like Em is in for a rought ride. Aww for stargazing together
Date: 27 Jun 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmmm wonder if Daddykins will pay B the back pay she is owed?
Date: 24 Jun 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow some bad stuff happened to her and she doesnt feel like she is worth anything how wrong she is.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow busy night at the sleezy bar
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow Embry is an arse. lol for Carlisle flirting with Alice.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella was attacted before ??? Edward needs to find out about her.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hahahaha I love it, some Calisle and Alice action would be a hoot!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
What happen that Carlisle didnt protect her??? Who was mean to her
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hard to picture Ali and Em together. LOL. Cant wait for more
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
He still didnt get her name poor boy but he got some music
Date: 28 May 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
looking forard to more
Date: 26 May 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Embry is a real piece of work. Em and Ali are funny
Date: 26 May 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Why did Edward run ??? He will come back???
Date: 21 May 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, like it! Interesting. More please! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 20 May 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Cant wait to see where you take it!!
Date: 20 May 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
always looking forwaqrdto what ur writing
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading this
Date: 20 May 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great and cant wait for more
Date: 20 May 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
glad you reposted!