[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2023 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 15: First Christmas
Thank you for the updates..well done. I can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading will be updating soon
Date: 03 Jan 2023 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15: First Christmas
I am excited to read more! ;)
Author's Response:
I will update as soon as I can, I'm trying to finish another story so that I can solely focus on this one. If you have a chance, check that one out. Its called The Last Swan. Happy new year, thanks for reading!
Date: 26 Dec 2022 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Her Sentence
Interesting storyline
Date: 29 Apr 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: September
Hope you finish one day.
Author's Response:
Hello, this message may come as a surprise to you. I've decided to come back and finish this story. Well it's actually finished im just making everything nice and pretty for this site. There should be a chapter up in the next few days. This version on the story is a little different than the one I have posted in fanfiction.net where the story is completed but is a total mess, many things are the same but not all. For example, on the other one She never reconciles with her parents, second, the wedding never happens. The other one's a bit messy and some things aren't explained very well which is why im taking my time to fix things now. Ive been away because I strayed away from anything twilight for 8 years, plus I'd lost the access to the site. Hope you are still willing to read after all this time.
Date: 18 Nov 2013 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 14: September
Really cute story I hope you come back soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Hello, this message may come as a surprise to you. I've decided to come back and finish this story. Well it's actually finished im just making everything nice and pretty for this site. There should be a chapter up in the next few days. This version on the story is a little different than the one I have posted in fanfiction.net where the story is completed but is a total mess, many things are the same but not all. For example, on the other one She never reconciles with her parents, second, the wedding never happens. The other one's a bit messy and some things aren't explained very well which is why im taking my time to fix things now. Ive been away because I strayed away from anything twilight for 8 years, plus I'd lost the access to the site. Hope you are still willing to read after all this time.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 14: September
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Hello, this message may come as a surprise to you. I've decided to come back and finish this story. Well it's actually finished im just making everything nice and pretty for this site. There should be a chapter up in the next few days. This version on the story is a little different than the one I have posted in fanfiction.net where the story is completed but is a total mess, many things are the same but not all. For example, on the other one She never reconciles with her parents, second, the wedding never happens. The other one's a bit messy and some things aren't explained very well which is why im taking my time to fix things now. Ive been away because I strayed away from anything twilight for 8 years, plus I'd lost the access to the site. Hope you are still willing to read after all this time.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14: September
i am glad that charlie went to her birthday i bet that meant the world to bella
her mom is stubborn and she is the one missing out on her daughter's life but i am sure she doesn't are
love it
Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: September
I hope Edward and Bella have many more years together. For some reason this chapter was very moving to me.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14: September
Sweet!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 13: This is the life
I visited your blog. Love the pictures. I did not see pictures of emmett and Rose. I was wondering how old they were. I can not believe that Edward and Bella had to go through all of that because of Renee. I am sad that I now have to wait for updates. I have loved that I have been able to go from chapter to chapter. Hope you update soon. Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
did you see the video? the link is on the reply of your last review, the one before this one. There are no pictures because i use the characters and kellan and Nikki are too youung, rosalie is 30 (a few years older than Nikki Reed) and Emmett is 28 (kellan is 28 actually lol!) Ill see what i can do about the pictures. Thanks, go see the video. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qhpWZy63lGM
Date: 03 Jun 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 12: Here goes to nothing...
I am glad that Charlie seems to have come around. Renee is a piece of work. Glad that they can be together now.
Author's Response:
Thqanks for reviewing, here is the link to the video i made for the song that bella and charlie were dancing to. enjoy and thanks! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qhpWZy63lGM
Date: 03 Jun 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 11: First Weekend
Loving this story. Your Edward and Bella are perfect for each other.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Wedding to Remember
PERFECT!!!!!! I am sooooo loving this story. You are doing a great job writing it.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9: Planning
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! I can not believe that Bella has not told her parents. Glad that Bella has Alice and Rose. What do you mean that Rose is also the Godmother???
Author's Response:
it is something that we have on weddings in my country, we have both the maid of honor and the "madrina"/ godmother, here in my country she is sometimes in charge to pay for the wedding dress or the cake, rosalie will be the witness of their wedding (she will sign the marriage license). Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8: Ex-Gilrfriend, a Birthday and a Proposal
That was PERFECT!!!!!!!!!
I have a question.....Is Bella in high school or college? I know that she is close to 18. Just wondering. What is Bella's parents going to say about her marrying Edward? I have a feeling that Edward is not as poor as Bella is thinking he is. He is paying Rose to let him stay there. Plus in this chapter is said that it was because of him that Rose could hire a better cook because of him. Plus he wants to leave everthing he has to Bella. Can't wait to find out more.
Author's Response:
Hi, she is a senior in high school. for the answer to your question i suggest you keep reading! Lol. Yes you are correct, he has his $$! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: Failed attempts
So glad that Rose did not get mad at Bella or Edward. This is the 1st mention of Emmett. Are he and Rose married and running the hospice or what??? I hate that Bella's parents are treating her like that. Bella's sister was mentioned in another chapter. Does Bella ever talk or see her sister??
Author's Response:
hello, thanks for reviewing. No rosalie and emmett are not married, they are a couple but not married. rosalie owns the hospice, emmett a doctor, rosalie has a degree on general medicine with a monir on heart dideades and business management. Bella doesnt know where Leah is, she wont come up until almost the end of the story. Thanks again!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: I Love You
Finally, they both come to their senses!!!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Neon Lights
Bless both of their hearts. That situation has got to be really hard on both of them.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 4: Twilight
I was a little lost at the beginning of this chapter. After the kiss in the last chapter, Bella left and went home. At the beginning of this chapter they were in a garden, I am assuming that it was the next day. Glad that Bella and Edward are getting along. What is the deal with Bella's parents???? I hate that they did that to Leah. That is just wrong.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Kiss
That was so sweet!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 2: Edward
Poor Edward. That is awful. I hope they come up with something to help him.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Sentence
Sounds interesting.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 13: This is the life
i am dying to know what rose was so upset about. too bad her mother is such a bitch. i am glad bella and her dad have made peace i have hope
i am glad edward and bella are living their lifes and are happy
so does bella have to shower each time she comes home because of the germs and does everyone else need to do the same
love it look forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind review. Rosalie was mad because of the obstentecity of the party, she knew that neither of them had part on the planning and she was worried about the quality of the air conditioner and of the food preparation. He cant eat a lot of things. Yes everyone has to at least sanitize their hands just to give him a glass of water. Bella needs to be very careful and shower and wash her hands frequently.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 8: Ex-Gilrfriend, a Birthday and a Proposal
i love that he is following his heart
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was time for him to do it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4: Twilight
how sad how her parents treat her
Author's Response:
yeah, lets see how it goes with that. Thanks for reading!
Date: 30 May 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: Edward
Don't know if I'm going to be able to read his one. I mean I know I will because I already like it but I better get a box of tissue ready! :)
Author's Response:
Okay you do that, but stay please. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 May 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 13: This is the life
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
more soon enough...
Date: 30 May 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 12: Here goes to nothing...
This is such a great story! I just found it and have fallen in love with it. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you are not dissapointed...
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Sentence
something new look forward to more
thank you
Author's Response:
Keep reading, the story gets better. Thanks!
Date: 25 May 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 12: Here goes to nothing...
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 May 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: First Weekend
more please!
Author's Response:
soon enough, im writing the next chapter...
Date: 20 May 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: First Weekend
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Next chapter will be up in 3 days or so.
Date: 20 May 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: First Weekend
Very sweet chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 17 May 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Wedding to Remember
Sweet!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 17 May 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Wedding to Remember
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! :-)
Date: 16 May 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Planning
I can't imagine how Bella's parents are going to except her getting married. Will Bella and Edward have to live seperatly or will Bella move to the home with Edward ? I love the photos that go along with the chapters, it makes for a more visual experience when reading. See you next update :)
Author's Response:
Very good question, the answer to that will be adressed on chapters 11 and 12, I am currently finishing it (chapter 12) although it will not be posted until chapters 10 and 11 are, respectively of course. Thanks for reading and I love doing the visuals for my stories, I know it helps the reader visualize it as I have it in my hand.
Date: 16 May 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 9: Planning
This is so sweet. It makes me cry.
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you! Glad you liked it. Thanks for your review!
Date: 11 May 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: Ex-Gilrfriend, a Birthday and a Proposal
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
A bit more maybe tomorrow or during the week...! thanks for reading :-)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 4: Twilight
Interesting story plot please update soon.
Author's Response:
I Will update soon...!!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4: Twilight
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks! Will update as soon as i can...
Date: 29 Apr 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Edward
This sounds to be a very good story :) poor Edward being so young and facing what he's going through, a time when kids their age should be having the most fun. I hope he shows Bella what's most important and to not waste time on things that are silly. Looking forward to reading more. Till next time
Author's Response:
Lovely review, thank you! More will be updated soon...
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 2: Edward
Love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, i will upload more soon
Date: 28 Apr 2013 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 2: Edward
I LOVE IT! THANK YOU!
Author's Response:
Im glad, thank you for reading!
Date: 28 Apr 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Sentence
Wow inhope hes ok.at least bells has his baby.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, lets see about that...!
Date: 27 Apr 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Her Sentence
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I will upload more later on...!