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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

*Sigh*  I do love a happy ending, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, lol.  

Thank God Emmett had a vest on and the worst thing he suffered was bad bruising.  Finally he's getting it together with Rosalie 'growing very fond of her' *snort* and the rest, lol.  

I'm glad Esme came to her senses as well, I'm not sure that I would have been so forgiving, maybe I just hold grudges too long.

Anyway, I loved this story and always love a happy ending.  I'm sorry it's taken me so long to read the last chapter but I just had so much going on, personally, and I lost my mojo for everything really.  Thank you for sharing.

Jane x 



Author's Response:

Hi Jane, thank you for your last review. I'm glad you enjoyed the ending - I wanted to give everyone at least the promise of a HEA :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

Well I'm glad he finally came out of the woodwork but, oh my God, Emmett, he's been shot again.  You have to make him alright, he has more flirting to do with Rosalie and then he has to fall head over heels in love and settle down, lol, I have his life mapped out for him, never mind what you have planned. *snort* Sorry. *grins*

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Thank you for your reviews. I like your plan for Emmett :D  You'll soon see what happens to him after the attack though in the last chapter :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

It seems like they've only just got to be with each other and now they're parting again.  I really felt for Edward clinging to Jake at the airport not want to leave and trying to draw Jake's strength into himself.  You've got to love Emmett though, he's so blunt and straight forward, no frills attached, lol.  I'm sure he'll do everything in his power to keep Edward safe.

I hope this nutter does come out of the woodwork so he/she will be caught and then Edward and Jake can relax.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 25

Reunion sex is hot.  The start of the rest of their live together certainly began with a bang, lol.  Is this the end of all of Edward's problems?  Hmmm, I'm not so sure.

Jane x

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 28

So the movie didn't get any awards? Boo... LOL

Thank God Emmett was fine! I almost had a heart attack last chapter.

Esme surprised me, but I guess the attempt made her realize what's really important like Edward said.

Bella, on the other hand, disgusted me. WHAT A BITCH! Ugh! The sad thing is that there are in fact people like her out there, trying to exploit their children for fame and money.

I'm sad this is over, would you consider writing an epi? I hope you do... I would love to see if during their travels Ed and Jake adopt a child. *swoon*

Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us, looking forward to the next story.

xoxoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I'm sad to see it come to an end really and maybe I'll think about adding an epilogue later, we'll see. Kids wouldn't be something I'd include though, weird as I am I can't relate to them at all :(

As for the movie - *cough* - I omitted to mention that! :O  I have inserted a paragraph in Jacob's POV to say that it was expected to win awards and had done very well at the box office. Edward might be called back to LA later in the year to attend if it eventually gets nominated. Oops!!  I was so keen to wrap it up...

Bella's just awful, isn't she? At least the baby will have a decent life with Sam; he was always intended to be a good guy.

Thanks again for reading, and for the awesome banner for this one. Hope you will enjoy Torn!

Sarah

xx

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

OH NO! NOT EMMETT! AAAAAHHHH

I think this is by far the worst cliffie you have given me... yep, at least in this story. LOL

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

xoxoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and sorry for the evil cliffie. I'm hoping to get the outcome of this posted tomorrow - all is not quite what it seems though ;)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

I'm SO disapointed in Esme. I also think she might be behind the threats and is using them to get Edward to fix his public image or Bella might have done it for the same reason. Good ch.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. The source of the threats will be revealed in the next chapter and Esme really needs a kick up the rear to sort her out! Glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh poor Edward... I'm glad Emmett will be with him, I'm so scared for him, and why coulnd't Jacob come along too? At least to LA? 

I'm so proud of Carlisle for really opening up, I wasn't surprised with the split from Esme, I was kinda expecting it, but it does saddens me that she is the one refusing to realize she's in the wrong.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Edward will explain the reason for Jake not going with him in the next chapter, but it's because their relationship has brought Jake into the spotlight again and he worries that the stalker might target both of them.

Next chapter won't be long as I'm trying to get the story finished in the next few days :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh, I'm still worrying about nutty nutter and I won't be happy until he or she is caught.  Thank God Jake thought to get Emmett to look after Edward in LA.  I think Jake and Edward should open a hotel because the amount of visitors they're going to be getting it will feel like they're living in one, hahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Thank you for your reviews!  I loved writing Emmett's character and he will get another part in it before the end. You're right to worry about the nutter; he hasn't just disappeared! Not many chapters left to go on this one though, I'm sad to say.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my God!  I can't believe this is happening to Edward.  He really should have reported this even if it does turn out to be some nutter that just wants to tell him how disgusting he is, it's better to be safe than sorry.  If something scares you like this you should report it.  Why isn't Dave actually going with Edward?  I know they all think the threat is just in New York and that's where it'll stay but they can't guarantee that, changing his flight doesn't guarantee his safety either.  I hope nothiing happens to him and they find out who the nutty nutter is.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad Jake managed to catch up with his friends.  I love Emmett, his banter and his no nonsense approach to life, I should imagine he was very good for Jake when he was his bodyguard.  It's good that Edward and Carlisle are beginning to rebuild their relationship and that Carlisle feels comfortable enough to begin to get to know Jake again.  It's a shame that Esme is still taking such a blinkered view of everything.  Maybe time and distance will put things into perspective for her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Damn!!  I need a shower and a lie down, I'm exhausted, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yeah!  What a reunion!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter, that lemon was HOT! I need a shower one... a very cold shower. *fans herself*

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the lemon - I needed a cold shower after writing it, haha!

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

YAY!  He made it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. He just has the tour to do - anything could happen there ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Good chapter, Emmett to the rescue! How many more chapter are left? I feel like the story is coming to an end...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There's not much more, probably 4 chapters at the most - once Edward's tour is over it will wrap up :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well, glad othing happened, but I have a bad feeling about this. The letters could've been sent to NY on purpose while the psycho waited in LA...

Please don't let anything happen to Edward!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; we haven't heard the last of the letter sender quite yet, but I do intend for this to be a HEA :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Emmett had at "Bella Swan's enough to turn anybody gay, even me and that is saying something!" LMAO Love that guy...

Glad Carlisle is making an effort, too bad his wife is too much of a egotistical bitch to do it too. I say good riddance.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one. xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - Emmett's line made me chuckle when I was writing it; glad you like him :)  He will have an important role to play before long.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

As always - insanely hot!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the lemon! :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

I need a very cold shoer after that! HOT DAMN!

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Hehe, glad you enjoyed their steamy session, it was certainly enjoyable to write. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

So Collin's sick, that does explain a lot of things especially with bi-polar.  So many people with that take their meds and then stop because they feel better and don't think they need them which is probably with Collin did.  Things could have turned out a lot worse, especially for Jake, thank God Paul was there and stopped them all pussy footing around.

I'm feeling a bit sorry for Edward, it seems he's not destined to get a moments peace to just enjoy what's developing between him and Jake, there always seems to be some drama to deal with.  I hope they can escape for a while soon.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Thank you for your reviews on the last three chapters. Poor Edward really has had far too much to deal with, but things wil begin to calm down now.  There is still evil Esme, but not too much longer before the movie is done and then he gets a break until he has to do the tour and go to the premiers etc. In the meantime the next chapter will be rather more enjoyable for him :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I thought Collin's dropping off the radar was a bit too simple.  I was thinking the same as Jacob, that he'd done it for the money.  Now he's turned up a the hotel I'm wondering if he's trying to set Jacob up with the press so it looks as though he's cheating on Edward.  He may think that if he does that then Jacob will just fall into his lap as he consoles him after Edward dumps him.  Jacob needs to be really careful and not be alone with Collin.

I never thought that Esme would stoop so low, she's going to miss out on some fabulous holidays to Barbados, lol.  At least Edward has his dad and Carlisle apologised to him again.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh, I hope the green eyed monster in Edward isn't going to go shouting the odds before finding out exactyl who Collin is and possibly why he's giving a kiss and tell story to the papers.  Edward knows what the press is like.  They dig around, take a coment made by someone that means absolutely nothing and then turns into something major.  I really hope he doesn't blow his top at Jacob and I hope that Jacob doesn't turn things around on Edward and make this into a trust issue.

I knew the baby wouldn't be Edwards, like I said I had a whole theory on that, I worked it and everything and, woohoo, I was right!  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm starting to think Paul is an okay guy! I must be crazy!  LOL

Great chapter.  LOVED how you had the Colin issue resolved.  Keep it coming, Lady!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the latest. Paul is actually a decent guy underneath, he's just let some tough years make him unfriendly to begin with :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

So Collin was completely mental... Jeez, the crazies just keep popping out of nowhere! I'm wondering what's the situation with Esme, maybe she should join Collin and share a nice padded cell together? LOL

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Collin was, as Paul put it, "a nut job", hahaha. Esme should definitely follow him! :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

WHAT THE FUCK?!

First of all, what the hell Esme? What is wrong with her? I cannot believe she would dare do such a thing! Sh only ended up hurting Edward more... *smh*

Second, kudos to Carlisle for apologizing, he is an honest man.

Thrid, FUCKING COLLIN! WHAT THE HELL DOES HE WANT?!?!

And finally, thanks for the update. I'm glad Edward didn't assume anything after reading the story about Collin.

Can't wait for the next one!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Esme really is an uncaring bitch; at least one parent is now supporting Edward. Collin is certainly going to bring drama, as if they haven't had enough already ;)

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

Uh-oh!  Collin visiting at the hotel is going to be all over the press!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It will indeed be all over the press, as they're lurking outside the hotel most of the time :(  Poor Edward.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 18

I knew that baby wasn't his!

Also - SUPER HOT love scene!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the lemon :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 18

Fucking hell, they can't catch a break, huh?

That lemon was hot... thanks for that.

AND FINALLY! I knew the baby wasn't Edward's. PHEW!

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the lemon! Now they just have another hurdle to get over :(

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well, at least one parent has seen the light.  I'm so proud of Carlisle for finally listening to Edward and paying attention.  I can undestand how it would be a shock for him when he thought Edward would be marrying Bella and having a whole load of kids, it would be a shock for any parent, but as I say I'm proud of him for the way he's chosen to deal with Edward's revelations.  Now all we have to hope is that he can convince Esme that this is the right thing for Edward and he's not doing it to spite them in any way.

Edward's first time was worth waiting for, lol.  Jacob was a little surprised and more than a bit turned on at the thought of Edward experimenting, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I thought it was high time one parent offered Edward more support and Carlisle has had to spend 3 weeks on tour with him, seeing how miserable he was and it made him think properly and start to feel guilty.

Glad you enjoyed their first time! :D

 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Sooooo, I need that lie down even more now, lol.  Wow!  Bella seemed almost contrite at how she'd behaved and contributed towards collapse, she's not completely heartless after all and she agreed to the test so at least they don't all have to wonder for however many months are left.  Hahahaha, trust Paul to think of getting condoms and lube, Edward can thank him later.  I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.......not sure why........but I am, bwahahaha!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Thanks for your reviews - I'm sure you will enjoy the next chapter, hehe.  Now Edward just has to deal with the parents and the public, plus the DNA test. Still plenty of stress on the way for him, but at least he's got more support now ;)

Take care

Sarah

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

I need a lie down in Edward and Jacob's bed......well if they stay out of it long enough, lol.  I can't stand the way Carlisle and Esme treat Edward.  They should love him unconditionally not because he does as he's told.  The fact that he's now with Jacob seems to put the final nail in his coffin where Carlisle and Esme are concerned.  I'm not sure which angers them most; the film he's making, that he won't do as he's told, that he's retiring or that he's in love with Jake. It's really sad that it looks as though publicly they're going to support Edward when privately they're going to turn their backs on him.

Jane x

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well, bet many will open tumblr accounts celebrating Jakeward! LOL This two are so amaxing together. I love the way you write them. Also, kudos to you for writing a realistic first time gay sex scene. Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; I'm glad you're enjoying this one and thanks for your comment about the sex scene :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

asdfghjk..... you tease! can't wait for the next chapter!!! LOL

I keep picturing Edward going to the Ellen Show during the promotion of the movie for some reason... I hope it all works out, but I'm scared Edward hasn't heard from his dad yet, though his mom is one piece of work! UGH!

thanks for updating!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Haha, that was pretty mean of me to stop there ;)  Next chapter will continue the scene from Jacob's POV and then Carlisle will be in touch ;)

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

DOUBLE COCK BLOCK!!  No fair!  LOL

Keep it coming, Lady!



Author's Response:

Hehe, sorry about that! They'll finally get to do the deed in the next chapter :)  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

YAY! So proud of Edward... now I need my wn shower, that little lemon there was HOT!

Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I was so happy to get them together at long last! :) 

Edward still has a tough few months to come, but it won't seem half so bad with Jacob's support.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

Unf! So dang sexy!



Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH MY GOD!  I can't believe it!  I have limited internet access at the moment and loaded up all the chapters of this story whilst I had the access, I reviewed as I went along so that I could post them when I got connection again.  After catching up and reviewing this last chapter, some two hours later my stupid effin laptop does a crash dump, aaarrgghhhhhh!!!!!  Effin stupid blue screen of doom.  Needless to say I lost all the reviews I did. *sigh*  

Anyway, here I am to say I effin love this story.  Bella's a cow of epic proportions and an ultimate user, she deserves to live the rest of her life as a single person.  I've said all this before but you wouldn't know that, lol.  She needs to leave Edward alone, not only is she hurting him but she's hurting herself as well.  She needs to be planning for a life as a single parent and then anything else she gets is a bonus.  I know it's hard but then keep giving yourself hope is hard too when nothing comes of it, it just serves to torment you and keep you in a high state of anxiety.

I dont think Edward is the dad, I had a whole theory on that one, but hey ho never mind and of course I could be wrong but still I really don't think he is the dad.

I'm glad that Paul is turning out to be a decent friend to Edward and seems to have left his dickhead like behaviours behind him.  I do think that now more people know about Edward and Jake and Edward's decision to quit that he should tell Carlisle and Esme before they find out from the media.  Will he tell Bella or just leave her to find out as and when?  I don't think he really owes her anything after the way she's lied and treated him.  I do really feel sorry for Sam to he's as much as a victim as Edward and it's just a shame that only one of them is going to get a clean break from Bella.

I'm so glad that Jake has come to take care of Edward.  They need each other so much.  Edward needs taking care of at the moment and Jake can help with that and I really do think that Jake needs Edward's reassurance that he hasn't changed his mind with all the drama and stress that's surrounding him.  Im sure, between them, they can find a few ways of relieving that stress for each other, bwahahahahaha!!

So again, I love this story, I'm all caught up and can't wait for the next chapter.  I'm just hoping that the blue screen of doom doesn't appear again before this gets to you.  All I need now is for the internet to connect.  Stupid bloody patchy connection.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane, thanks so much for the amazing review. So sorry that your internet was such a pain though, after you spent so much time reviewing. Really glad that you're enjoying the story so much.

Edward will be having a conversation with his parents very soon, once he's been comforted a few times by Jake ;)  The baby's father will be revealed sooner rather than later as well, given Paul's advice about the earlier test.  

Next chapter should be up in a couple of days and I hope the blue screen of doom allows you to enjoy it!

HL. x

 

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

Aww NO FAIR!  CLIFF HANGERS STINK!!  LOL



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you for reading I do love my cliffhangers. The scene will continue in a couple of days :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

yes-Jacob cares for him so much...................



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and your reviews. Jacob will make everything easier to handle ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

thank goodness that Paul is now a friend-oh the tangled web you weave!!!!!!!

Reviewer: blossom Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying. Keep up the good work. My first Edward/Jacob fic. Can't wait to see we're you will go with plot.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing; happy to hear you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh, you are such a tease.... LOL

I'm happy Jacob is there now, can't wait for the next chapter!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Haha, I left it there on purpose ;)  The scene will continue in the next chapter from Jake's POV.  Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow close to real life but Bella was out of town when the story happened.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. The real life story gave me the idea for this, but it'll certainly have a very different ending ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 13

Bella can't get a hint, huh? Bet she is gonna leak that they spent the night together or some shit... ugh.

Paul did a complete 180 and I'm glad, he seems like an okay kinda guy. I hope Jacob comes to keep Edward company, who seems so lonely and in need of some good TLC.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Paul will be a good friend for Edward and next chapter wil be Jacob's POV after he get's Paul's call ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

glad Paul is not such an ass-Edward needs him to much!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Paul is a good guy :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

As much as I hate to admit it, that make out was hot... Now I wonder if Edward will feel more guilty about it? He probably will...

I will refrain from mentioning the Bitch, I'm too pissed off and I'll probably get banned with all the insults I wanna type.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Poor Edward will feel guilty, but at least Paul will be a good guy. I can't wait to get rid of the bitch, but sadly it will be a while yet.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

HOTNESS!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed their bit of fun :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh, poor Edward... I'm glad Jacob was there for him, and they were able to partake on some fun ;)

Can Edward just ask for a CVS test or amniocentesis to find out who is the father? I know there is also another non-invasive one where they analyze the fetal cells in the maternal blood.

I just want Bella gone! LOL

Can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxox

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I want Bella gone too! :)  Edward just hasn't been able to think about the possibility of finding out who the father is before the baby is born, with all the stress he's been under. It will be suggested to him though, so we won't have to wait another 7 months to find out :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh hell... Bella is such a slut! I feel sorry for Sam, he was deceived by the whore too. What a clusterfuck!

Can't wait to read what happens next.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Sam is actually a decent guy and he won't really get much bad press over it - Bella will end up universally hated though, the way she's going :D

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

what a bitch!!!!! Find out the truth Edward!  Great job stirring up our emotions by the way!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad the emotions came across.  Edward will insist on tests to prove he's the father befoe he'll believe her :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

OH HELL NO! I KNEW IT! THAT BITCH IS PLAYING GAMES!!!

Ewdard playing it safe was smart, can't wait for the next chapter. How many more until we get rid of Bella? I can't fucking stand her!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

I can't stand her either, but she'll be around for a while I'm afraid :(  Thank you for reading any reviewing.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

had a feeling that was coming........started reading this story of yours too as I have enjoyed your other ones so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - I hope you continue to enjoy this one :)

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Probably not his.



Author's Response:

She's such a tramp, it could be anybody's really ;)  Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

OH NO SHE DIDN'T! SHE IS LYING! I bet it Sam's... that bloody skank!

I can't believe she is playing him like this, urgh! I wanna bitch slap her so bad!!!

Thanks for the update, Edward's parents also need a swift kick in the butt.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Poor Edward, she's an evil bitch isn't she? Just what he doesn't need when he's trying to make some big decisions and work out how he can be with Jacob :(

Next chapter won't be too long, I plan to start on it tomorrow :)

Reviewer: Ren68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

I've been following your United Trilogy and loved that, so I thought I would give this one a try. Another great story so far. Hate where this left off, but I will return when there is more. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the United saga as well as this new one. Edward is in for a tough time back in LA but at least he knows Jake loves him now. I'm updating regularly, once or twice a week :)

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

So sweet!  I really like this story.  It's such a fresh take on the Edward/Bella/Jacob story line.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm happy you're enjoying this one :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, he told him he loves him still, awwww...

But he had to go back, boooo....

Can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. At least they got one little kiss before Edward had to leave, but it'll be a few months before they see each other again :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oj poor Edward... I hope Jacob comes clean, and Bella needs to get a clue, that bitch ain't going to have Baby Boy back! ;)

Thanks for the update, looking forward to more.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, glad you enjoyed the chapter. The pair will work it out although it'll be some time before they can be together.

Reviewer: twiannis Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying this story, I can't wait for them to get it on ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm happy you like it. It'll be a while before they get it together, but I can promise it'll be good when they do :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

'My boy,' I thought. The times I had wished he could be just that.

I loved that line!

I'm glad Edward finally ended things with Slutella [kinda wish things were like that in RL, huh?] I hated how Carlisle tried to emotionally manipulate Edward... At least now he has finally realized he has to make his own choices. I'm so proud of Edward right now!

Thanks for updating, can't wait to read the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. It'll take a while, but Jacob will get 'his boy' in the end.

At least in the meantime Edward has his support. I loved getting rid of Slutella and I totally agree - if only that were RL! :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh poor Edard... but at leat now he is doing what he wants. I bet Jacob will be happy to help him practice his lines and certain scenes ;)

Thanks for the update, looking forward to more.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Poor Edward has so much to deal with - but at least he has his old friend Jasper now and soon...Jacob! ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is nasty! WHAT A WHORE!

Edward's parents are no btter.

At least, he made a choice of movie.

Can't wait to read what happens next!

xoxoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

Poor Edward, stuck with unfeeling parents, but at least he can get rid of Bella and find pastures new ;)  I'm carrying on with his POV for the next chapter so we get to find out what the movie is about, which is going to be a bit of a shock for him.

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting premise, sounds familiar.  ;) I actually am looking forward to where you take this.  I feel bad for Edward having to deal with such intrusive parents..  Jacob seems like a cool guy too.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)  Haha, yes I used a rather familiar scenario there, but it'll have a much more desirable ending, I'm sure :D  Hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to this! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy this one :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great update! Of course the Cullens care more about image than their son, disgusting. I hope Edward returns Jacob's call soon.

Thanks for the update! Can't wait to read the next one. xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I thought it would be interesting to make the Cullens different in that they're so image-conscious, they're not bothered if Edward is happy. To them, it's all about how they look to the world.Edward will contact Jacob although it won't be right away :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a bitch! I guess she is a good actress after all, huh?

Can't wait to read what comes next!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! She'll get what's coming to her :)  

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