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Reviewer: ggf83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yay! I'm so glad they got their happily ever after after all the crap they had to go through. LOVES!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the ending :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 29

Aw lovely ending. So sad to see it end, but happy that they got their ever after at last.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the ending, and the saga in general. Kind of sad to finish it myself, but looking forward to working on my new stuff :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

great ending and tying things up.........glad you included Chloe and Wolf getting married! Thoroughly enjoyed your story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 29

Lovely ending



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

Is this the end? It seems like all is settled and life is good for our favorite twosome...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It's not the end yet, but I think there will only be one more chapter.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 27

now what is Aro up to? Oh what a tangled web you weave.......

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 26

been on vacation.......enjoying catching up. I am now in love with Wolf..........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you like Wolf, he's one of my favourites since he's a descendant of Paul ;)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 28

Good for Wolf. This is amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 28

Phew! I need a cold shower after that lemon. Vampward turned into Domward for a minute there! LOL

Thanks for the update.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the lemon; it was enjoyable to write! Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 27

Awesome update. I've found a lot of Jake/Edward mating stories and they all pale in relation to yours. I think you're writting the definative series on the subject and others should just give up. Well done. I hope oneday you're published as you have a real talent. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much; what an amazing compliment!

I am hoping to try to get something published in the future, I just need to get an original all human story down first :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 27

*sags in relief* oh thank God it didn't turn into fight! I can't wait to read what happens next! xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - yes, the Volturi just wanted to see the reincarnated pair for themselves.  Only a couple more chapters to go with this one now *sigh*

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 26

OMG ARO!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, he's on the way with some of his minions! Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 26

That's it... I want this week over! You are oficially the fifth cliffie I've read this week!

Did all ff writers had a meeting I didn't know about and decided to fuck with the readers this particular week? I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! ARGH!

Nonetheless... thanks for the update. *sighs*

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Oh no, sorry for adding to the cliffies, haha!  Thank you for reading - there will be more about Aro and his rebuilt Volturi in the next chapter, but it won't be so bad as last time ;)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

So excieted when I saw this update. This was good, but I miss Edward/Jacob-hope they get to interact more in the next ch. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I just need to wrap up the Wolf/Chloe situation a bit more in the next chapter, but then it's mostly Jake/Edward until the end :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

love this story line..........you are doing such a great job with it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the update, I guess this means Chloe won't reject the imprint? I hope she doesn't.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

oxoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Chloe won't reject it; I think Wolf has been through enough without making him suffer any more ;)

Next update should be up by the weekend :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 24

Never saw that coming... Can't wait to find out what happens next! xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I enjoyed throwing that little twist in there :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

love how you have developed the character of Wolf and so glad to see you show what a good teacher can do (Edward).......I am a teacher too!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like Wolf - he's a great character to write. You are in good company being a teacher, with Edward :)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

Another great ch. I still think how I wish Alice didn't have to die...but I love this trilogy. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I did read them all- they were a wild ride.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed. I have remembered one story you might like if you haven't read it - "Whispering Heart" by Ratts. I'm not sure if it's posted on here, I read it on Fanfic.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

So happy this updated. I hate to ask, but you opened up this new pairing for me. Do you know of any other good J/E imprint stories? I've looked at a few and they just suck compared to yours (sorry but I wouldn't make it though ch 1 the writing was so bad). Any recommendations would be appreciated. Thanks 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I don't really get a lot of time to read myself so I haven't really anything to recommend (and thank you for the compliment on my writing there!)  I'm not sure if you've read the whole series of my United stories though, but if not, the first part, United We Fall is an Imprint story as well. Anyway, hope you continue to enjoy this one.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

glad life is more normal for them now-so is the story coming to a close or do you still have sme twists for us?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There are one or two twists left yet and a few more chapters before we come to the end :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

Aw, that was a cute chapter... thanks for the update. xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the latest :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

YES! So glad our boys could finally be together the way they were suppose to be! Great lemony chapter! Nicely written "wink"!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the lemons :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

Holy crap... you need to warn a girl next time, because I'm flush and slighty uncomfortable in my ruined underwear in the middle of the library!

That was hot Hot HOT!

Thanks for the update!

xoxo

Mina

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing - glad you enjoyed the hotness, despite the discomfort of being in the library :)  I should try to remember to post a smut warning :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 21

YES! Glad you ended on a positive note-pretty heavy stuff with Wolf................



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - things will be on the up now for everybody for a while, Wolf and Zara included :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

I still think they should have handed that digusting pig to the authorities. but I'm glad Wolf Jr. and Sr. are okay.

Thanks for the update, Zara is amazing, I really hope she can find hapiness again.

xoxoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I wanted Jacob to kill Wolf's uncle, but I know he wouldn't do that if there was another way and he wanted to keep things quiet for the boy' sake.

I have one or two idea's for Zara's future - her character is actually based on me, believe it or not, so I want her to have a happy ending :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

Finally found the time to read this update, and it sucks that Jacob feels that way. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope Zara get better soon, for Jake's sake.

xoxox

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; Jake is going to have a hard time for a little while, but at least he did Imprint on Edward so he got what he wanted; he will be ok :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

glad the imprint worked-Jacob has so much to deal with, I understand his struggles....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; poor Jacob will have a tough time for a little while but at least he got what he wanted at last :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

YES! but please remember who you are Jacob-and who you love! Great job keeping us on the edge of our seats!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the suspense :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!!! *WAILS*



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and sorry for the awful cliffhanger! :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

you keep teasing us!!!!!!!Come on Jacob!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, sorry! Next chapter, I promise. Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Aw... maybe it is happening, I noticed Jake being a bit more agressive during their love making. Mmm...

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Something's definitely happening, even if he doesn't think so himself ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

wow-cool description of the first phasing by the new wolves......now if just Jacob would get riled up a little........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing - glad you enjoyed the phasing. Poor Jake. But he gets some drama in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

I feel sad for Jacob, he wants it so much... Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Liam can help Wolf change back. Thanks for the update. xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Drama is on the way with regard to Jacob, probably next chapter ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

I thought in the Twilight books, the presence alone of the Cullens caused the first of the pack to phase........but then shouldn't Jacob have already? So much to worry about!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. That was certainly the case in Twilight, but this is the United trilogy and things are different - veggie vamps don't cause wolves to phase, Edward can't mind read unless he can see the person in question and there are a lot of other differences throughout the trilogy.

Anyway, there is certainly more drama on the horizon and the next few chapters should have a lot going on :D

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh boy... the many "what if..." are gonna drive them cray. One step at the time boys. I hope the rogues won't cause too much trouble, but it seems like Jacob is gonna end up leading a pack.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Unfortunately some of the boys' fears will shortly be realised :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

is th phasing close????? Glad they worked out their probles...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Phasing isn't too far off ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Gah! What a cliffie! Can't wait to find out what is going on.

I'm glad Edward and Jacob went back to normal, and Jacob seems happy with his new career. I'm happy for him.

Thanks for the update!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; Jacob will visit Stuart in La Push in the next chapter to find out what's going on. I have a couple more cliffies up my sleeve for future chapters ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh Jacob, if only it could be easy...and Edward, so much to worry about. They love each other so much, what a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; the boys do have a tough time ahead to deal with ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh no... I feel sad for them, but it was bound to happen, things were going too soothly. I hope they can work things out. xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They have a bit of a tough time ahead of them now :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

come on wolf genes!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. He'll get there eventually ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 13

Mmm... I wonder if Edward's scent will attract a rogue vampire, being that they are in a populated area.

I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for the update.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; it'll be a bit longer before Jacob's worries are appeased, but then it's going to be all drama ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

hope all is ok with Jacob-why the wierd fears???



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Jacob is fine, it was just a normal fear most people get when they have an operation coming up ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

So proud of Edward... and hot damn! the lemon was GOOD!

Are Jacob's wolf genes flaring up? He did say his leg healed faster than he thought... 

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing - glad you enjoyed the lemon :) 

Jake is just lucky with his leg, but it won't be long before we do see a bit of wolf emerging! It just needs a prompt in the form of rogue vamps ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

awww some good loving!  thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

YAY! Edward got to see Jake's dad! So proud of him...

And they also got to do the deed! NICE!

Lots of progress in this chapter.

I'm so happy.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed. I was looking forward to writing this one! :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

yes! Such a positive ending to a near disaster----Go Edward!!!!!!! and jacob is certainly his savior......such a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. The pair will always be each other's rocks. I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Edward, but I think he handled it beautifully. Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one. xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Edward is getting along much better than everyone except Jake is giving him credit for. He'll be ok :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

ohhh boy-hope Edward can handle this and they can get him back to casa Cullen!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It'll be a dramatic exit from PA, certainly :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

OH NO! Poor Edward... he was doing so good. Maybe it was too much too soon? Can't wait fro the next chapter. xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. It absolutely was too much too soon. The journey out of PA will be hard work :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

glad Edward is making such yummy progress! Jacob is being so patient with him.....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - they're getting there slowly :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

A+ for Edward's first handjob and for receiving his first blowjob as a vampire ithout hurting Jacob!

Glad they were able to reconnect somehow.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed their long awaited progress :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

so good!!! I love them!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well, I'm so happy Edward is doing better, the fact he was playing again speaks volumes. Did Edward see Jacob's fantasy? Mmm... I hope he did! LOL

Thanks for the update, can't wait fro the next one.

Btw, that little lemon zest was HOT!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the lemonyness! :)  Edward was too far away to pick up on Jacob's fantasy, but they'll be making up fantasies together eventually ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

progress......a long road......but definitely worth it!!!!!! Loved the chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

More progress... at least Jacob was able to kiss him. Thanks for the update. xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing - they'll gradually be able to get close again physically :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

their progress makes me smile...........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It'll be slow, but at least they're going in the right direction :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, progress.... I'm glad Edward is doing better. Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one. xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - one step at a time and they'll be ok :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow-great job with all of the emotions written into this chapter-you had me crying!!!!!! And while we all want everything to be fine quickly, I fully realize it is much more real when things must progress gradually......well done



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm happy it came across so well, although sorry for making you cry! There is still more sadness to come ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

I just feel like Jake is gonna turn into a wolf and go back to square one... or they could change Jake. They said he doesn't smell like wet dog anymore... Gah, I don't know, my poor heart is breaking for these two.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I can tell you that they will get a happy ever after one way or another, but it'll be a long time coming ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

you are breaking our hearts here.........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Sorry it's so sad at the moment :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

But Jacob hasn't phased, the gene died long ago, right? Will Jacob be able ot be changed too? Or is he gonna phase? GAH! I don't know how can this not end in tragedy again... *sniffs*



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It won't end in tragedy...promise :)  The gene isn't dead by the way, only dormant from so many years of no rogue vampires coming to the area ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

had a feeling this was going to happen........poor Edward.......



Author's Response:

It will get worse before it gets better. Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh no.... poor Jacob... and Edward! What h must be thinking! I can't even imagine. Thank you for updating, can't wait to read what happens next. xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Poor Edward will be heartbroken. It'll be a rough ride for the boys :(  Next chapter at the weekend ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you get an awful satisfaction in torturing us... though I must admit I could feel the heavy cloud of doom all the way fromt eh begining... damn it.

Please tell me you will update soon! And I sent you the bnner to you email, just fyi.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Hehe, I just couldn't help myself with the mean cliffhanger.

My next chapter is almost done, just a few hundred words to go to wrap it up.

Thank you again for the fantastic banner!

 

Sarah

x

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG  what a start, my heart is breaking..............please let a Cullen be near enough to hear and to start their lives in a different direction????? But what about Jacob's family....so sad I knew the happy ending at the end of the last story was to good to be true!!!!!  on a second note-so glad to see this started so soon.....I was missing your stories.....  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sorry or the awful cliffhanger ;)  They will be found in the next chapter. Hope you enjoy what I have in store.

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