Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Wow, those two are so stubborn. I am so glad that Emmett finally decided to tell her how he felt and stopped her from running away from him. I am also glad that he stepped in and stopped her from going in the alley with Paul. Based on her reaction later, she definitely would have regretted it, and he may have used it against her with Jacob and Seth.
I love the Emmett/Bella pairing, and this one is great since they already know each other so well as friends. Great job!