Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good grief! I think I need to reread this fic. I can't remember anything. lol.
Author's Response:
Haha I don't go THAT long without updating!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Why is she making him take out Angela again? Good grief! What the heck? lol.
Author's Response:
Ha, because she identifies with Angela in a major way. She's putting her old wounds on Angela and making Edward help her out I guess. It makes sense to Bella, but not to the rest of us since we're in E's head! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
loved it
Author's Response:
:) I'm glad! Thanks for taking a ride with me and these crazy kids, it's definitely bumpy but hopefully still fun!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Your Bella is a complete loon. This story is cracking me up. :D
Author's Response:
Hee, she's a bit out there but if she was normal he'd probably get bored with her really fast. He needs someone who keeps him on his toes. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
I enjoyed this fic. It is a lot of fun. Seems to me, those two got a lot to work out. Can't wait to see it unfold.
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Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm having a lot fun with it! They do have plenty to get through but at least they've finally had a couple important conversations! Hopefully a new chapter in a week or two!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
I do feel sorry for Edward, gosh you can't help but love the boy, and he is going out of his way to do as Bella wants.
"And then there was the fact that I actually enjoyed her in a purely nonsexual way. Okay, sex was never far from my mind when it came to Bella" - Lol, he's so cute, and I LOVE his thoughts, they ALWAYS seem to have me giggling away :)
I laughed at him teasing her "because it's fun" & I cracked up at Bella slamming the keybourd through the screen. It'll be interesting to see how this date with Angela goes *grin*
Thanks for another awesome chapter :)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey bb don't worry about leaving author replies to me on here. I'm pretty much just copying my reviews from FF over to here. Keeps your review count up.
If I ever miss a review on here I'll still review on FF. I do use FF alot more than here atm, which could always change with the stories being pulled :(
Thanks for this chapter, which was the begining of my addiction to a taste of innocence ;) My first Darkward experience.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
EXCELLENT chapter!
I killed myself laughing, Edwards thoughts are bloody brilliant...*chuckle* poor guy
I felt a bit guilty because I really enjoyed him taking Jacob apart while having a conversation with the corpse. And then disposing of bits of him everywhere. *grin*
I had another giggle when he bought the clothes & you find out he's rich, because he stole the car earlier, so that just makes him a hot,bad(funny) vampire.
I loved Angela, I hope he remembers to send her flowers. He's so wicked dazzling her (hot, wicked *grin*)
Oh my goodness brilliant idea to put the blood on his lips, that was really hot when she attacked him.
Thanks for the great chapter ♥
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my goodness, I think I'm discovering a sadistic sense of humour in myself :)
This chapter was hilarious. Poor Edward REALLY needs a release *giggle*. Lol, his first Vampire headache. His confution over Angel (being an Angel). I never got caught up in the whole Buffy craze (funnily enough, I DIDN'T ACTUALLY LIKE VAMPIRES, lol, I guess I didn't realise in a few years I would LOVE them *grin*)
I didn't know the series was by Joss Wheldon either...I LOVE him, I might have to go to the video club & rent them out.
I cracked up laughing when Edward got cock blocked by Jacob AGAIN, *chuckles*. When he kicked him after Bella left I was laughing in ernest.
Listening to the show it DOES sound a bit ridiculous but I LOVED Edwards internal thoughts, he was fucking hysterical.
Oooo interesting place to leave it. thank you for the chapter!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol, yeah Jacob surely is a cockblocker! I thought this chapter was quite humourous, Bella thinking he gave her an STD *giggle*
Edward being COMPLETELY clueless to what she's actually feeling...there's going to be some problems there I think. Good on Bella for not wanting to kill people, but Edwards going to be a bit out of ideas to feed her I think. Thanks for the chapter hon!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lol, You do realise you are the 1st & probably one of the only Darkward stories I read. (I'm the biggest wussperv ever, seriously) But I just can't NOT find out what happens next...*chuckle*
I like that although he battled against it, He actually let Bella live(?)..uh continue to exist.
Hey I am NOT a Jacob fan, but I did feel a wee bit sorry for him in this, I wonder if Bella is going to feel guilty when she realises what she's done.
(Lol I did enjoy Edward Hotwiring & stealing the Lexus)
*Groan* another cliffy :P
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Edward! He just wants her to be a little jealous and she doesn't care.
Author's Response:
Not yet! Right now her innate kindness makes her feel bad for a girl she identifies with but I think watching the guy who has become her entire world readying to take out someone else might bring out a little green eyed monster. It definitely will happen if Edward has any say about it!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward thoughts are too funny. Very enjoyable read.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a lot of fun with him, even if I do worry where they come from in my own head! He is certainly a character! Hopefully I'll have a new chapter in a week or two :) Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
I laughed so hard I thought I was going to have a heart attack when he called Buffy a racist show. That's some funny shit. LMAO
Author's Response:
:) I don't want to cause you heart attacks but I'm thrilled you liked it. That's actually probably my favorite line of the whole fic so far. Looking at Buffy through Edward's eyes was quite a different experience from my usual fangirling over the show. I'm far more Bella than Edward when it comes to Buffy! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think Bella's hungry!
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks, glad you're enjoying it! She's hungry all right, just not quite in the way Edward wants yet! He's working on it though.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hysterical chapter as usual, just love this cocky Edward, cannot wait to see Bella own him some more,
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! He's so much fun to play with and Bella shall enjoy it as well!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Very interesting story,Edward is too much for words. I like this story, I want to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
He is a character alright! I'm glad you'e enjoying it! Hopefully I'll have a new chapter soon! Thanks fo reviewing.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Very interesting story,Edward is too much for words. I like this story, I want to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you again :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh this will be fun to see how this goes. Meg
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so, Meg, I'm having a good time writing it. It actually seems to write itself. It's almost disturbing how Smugward takes me over! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Look who has a stalker. But you let Bella kill Jacob, as much as like the guy, it deserves few cups.
Author's Response:
Haha when I get the email alert it doesn't show who sent the review. I was wondering who liked Jacob. Why is it that I love you again? Oh right, cause you make me sound coherent! I've always wanted a stalker!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
So Eddie decides forever. I feel Bella is going to be pissed. Great start. Meg
Author's Response:
Yeah, he definitely wants to keep her around but he doesn't really understand why :) It'll be fun to watch those two butt heads for awhile! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have got to recommend this story it is just great! I love it and cannot wait to see what happens and who gives in first. Hehehe
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! I was getting lots of reads but no comments and wasn't sure how to take that! The story is writing itself and I'm just a filter for those two! Thank you for your kind words!