Date: 02 Nov 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Outtake 2
I originally read this story a while back (back before I realized you had to go through two pages to add a story to your favorites list), but re-reading it has me falling in love all over again. I miss these guys (bring them back! bring htem back!)
Date: 08 Dec 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Outtake 2
I thoroughly enjoyed revisiting the In Pursuit gang.
You have even left us with a snippit of news that could spin off into another future take. wink wink......more is always good when it comes to a well written saga!
The traumatic events surrounding Edward and Jasper's job was a bit taxing but stayed true to how they met in the first place.
The expansion of the family, the revelation of Esme and Rosalie already knowing the situation about how the boys met their girls, and the possibility of another move kept me on the edge of my chair while reading. I love the effort the two of you put into writing this exciting tale.
As I wrote prior, More is always Good! heheh.
Thanks for sharing this outtake.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 35: Teaser
This is, without a doubt, one of the best and well-written stories I have ever read! Just wow! I don't think I've ever been this upset to see a story come to an end. I'm sooo gonna miss these characters. Well done ladies. Damn!
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 35: Teaser
I want to contribute for many reasons. Right now being on SS we live pretty close to the penny until our next checks come in. My husband will have a cancer biopsy in Decemer. Seems far been put off twice because he has stopped up arteries. Not too many procedures at once they say too hard on his 72 year old body. Our son had cancer and is 6 years out now and hopefully will not have a reoccurance. My mother and and father in law died with cancer. My husband has a daughter by his first marriage she lost a grand baby two years ago to a very rare cancer. She was 13 months old when she died. We have many more to tell in this space.
God Bless you for your efferts here. I will contribute when my next SS check comes in.
Date: 19 Nov 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 34: Outtake
I'm new here. I've been reading on fanfiction.net for a while, but I tried a few more places after alle this smuck about adult writing. Sorry. I live in Quebec, Canada, and I'm quite open with these things with my kids.
I simply wanted to say I've been reading this story for many days, and I LOVED it. You have the sentimental part really well covered, and managed to have a very good action part in there to.
Sorry if the "wording" sounds weird. French is my first language.
So anyway, thanks for the good moments!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
This was a really great story. I enjoyed it all the way to the end. Kinda wished that you would have at least gave us the proposal, but I understand that you have to stop it somewhere. Love your stories, keep them going.
Date: 11 Oct 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 34: Outtake
It's very hard to find words for a review for you two. The reader simply knows that when they read your stories that they will be of the highest caliber. You ladies continue to outdo yourselves each time you come together and put pen to paper. I guess what would say it best is "In Pursuit" is fucking fantastic!!!
You always write the most delicious Edward. He's manly, sweet, tenderhearted, and just smells freaking good. Yeah, that's what Bella said.
I really enjoyed this Bella. She evolved from a girl who had self-doubts (Mike) into a very determined strong-willed young lady. I loved that she needed Edward but was also able to stand on her own for her beliefs.
I appreciate that you two always come up with a premise that is unique. What you don't know information wise, you find out and when you're not sure, you simply make it "fit" the situation and sound as beliveable as the known truths. You also never fail to allow the reader to experience the emotions of your characters. Simply tangible at times.
I must apologize for not reviewing after each and every chapter. I could say real life got in the way (some of the time), but I was just too friggin' into IP that I didn't want to quit reading except to sleep. I must add here that there were a few nights that I feel asleep with my computer in my lap!!!
You two are the awesome whether you write jointly or individually. Thank you so much for giving to our fandom. You make me proud to be a member.
Elaine - Sparkle Damnu Elaine Phillips on Facebook sparkledamnu on all other sites
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 34: Outtake
Thank you for sharing your plot bunnies with us!
This epilogue was perfectly presented allowing our minds to follow these characters to the end of our imagination!
Looking forward to more entertaining stories. Either jointly written or singularly penned!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
You guys had me goin for a bit as Rosalie and Esme wouldn't let their knew found knowledge drop. Hope they never have to run!
Loved this story! Well done!
I'm counting on the two of you to cum, oops (hahaha), come up with another fantastic storyline. I have the utmost faith in both of you!
Date: 08 Sep 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 34: Outtake
wow so this is the end....good really good story...thank you and i love this edward....i love marshallward and mobward oh and mercenaryward...damn mighty fine..ovle your writing i learn examples of sentence structure from your story...thank you...
Date: 04 Sep 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
So bittersweet, this last chapter. It was a big deal that Esme and Rose figured out who Bella and Alice were! Hopefully Edward scared them enough so that they will keep it to themselves. I loved that the girls both moved in to live with their men. How else could this end? No other way that I could imagine... I really want to save this story to my kindle but will wait until you let me know it's completly done so I have all the outtakes included. I have so very much enjoyed taking this journey with you, loved and looked forward to every word of this story. Next time you 2 get a bug up your butts to write again, I will be here. I love your individual stories too but something very special happens when you write together. Until next time....