Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
I lived her life once so glad i got AWAY
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
I an surprised by a nice rose
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
poor Bella
Date: 16 May 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
That's really the best ending I can think of out of that mess that was Bella's life. Thanks for the story!
Date: 16 May 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
someone is going to get it...
Date: 15 May 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
I would never hurt you? Really? What planet is James from?
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, sh*t! Girl can't catch a break.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
well aleast Edward is still outside, maybe he will hear and go in after you and help..
Date: 26 Mar 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait to read more please!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
This whole chapter I kept thinking "What if James comes home early?". I don't want Bella to take another ass whuppin'. Thanks for the update!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Bella listens to her
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love Rosalie! Edward is such a sweetheart and I think Bella is the one he has been waiting for! Please let Bella come to her senses and realize that she can get away from James. Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad your liking it :)
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh the poor thing. I'm glad that Edward is finally going to try and talk some sense into her. I hope whoever he brings will make a difference.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
I thought he would of played nice a little while longer to give her a false sense of security to get what he wants.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
She deserves happiness. She needs to get away from James.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Until shes ready to accept help she needs to keep herself safe and being with Edward would only put herself at more risk.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope they get a happily ever after.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
The poor thing finally has something good in her life and she has to give it up.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella really needs to see a doctor, and leave James
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
While I'm sure Bella would make a fantastic mother there is no way she can bring a baby into that house. I'm glad that she knows that.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
It's simply heartbreaking that she's afraid to even have a friend.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Bella's dream comes true soon.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
More privacy for him to torture her.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh the Poor thing. Truer words have never been spoken a abused woman always think that it won't happen anymore. I hope she is saved soon because it seems it's been going on for a long time. And even once is to long.
Great story, I can tell its going to break my heart.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank God for Edward.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Does Edward know someone from the police? If James is arrested for many years and they change their country name and think they can have peace. Or maybe James die .... I think the second hypothesis more plausible and less laborious.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
I already believed that James had childhood problems by hitting her so much. Now I believe he is totally sick mind.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think it will help.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Nella needs help and maybe he can give.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
these last few chapters leave me with a taste of a life i never want to visit ever again...I lived her life ...I got out I hope she can too
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
What an evil bastard.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
he is pure evil please dont leave with him too much longer
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww, so sad.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
So heartbreaking
Date: 23 Mar 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. I like it. I more will be hard to read, but more please!
Author's Response:
Glad your liking it. I'm purposely making it in this writing style. I read a book once with a similar writing style and I liked it a lot. I thought I'd try it out.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Alright I'm in favor of it and be happy but stay with Edward James is in the middle of the two and they have to be careful because if James suspects something she's dead.
Quickly update please.
Author's Response:
Glad your liking the story :)
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
She was wrong to go into town with Edward because she has the husband pushy.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
The work of Edward is listening? Bella has to think like James attacks he will harm her while she is pregnant and he eventually had attacked his own son.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Our hero is presented. I said that the attacks would return soon.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Finally a break but this time without aggression think James should be brief.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very isolated place, I'm afraid for she.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Unfortunately there are such men and women who make it happen. Interesting history.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hate James!
Author's Response:
who doesn't? hahahaha