Date: 11 Feb 2021 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
For a newbie you're a great writer. I was excited for more, but I guess you got caught up in life. I hope all is well with you and your family. I will message you on FF to see if you might add a few more chapters. Thanks for your story. ðŸ’‹ðŸ’‹ðŸ’•
Date: 03 Oct 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVED it PLEASE CONTINUE, I just stated and finished your story the last two days but YOU LEFT Off SAYING THERE will BE MORE NEXT WEEK and there's nothing there .. I checked when it was last updated and it said April... Ummm its October .. Fits this mean there will be no more from this story.. I really hope you update though cause yr story was brilliant ;-)
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
I really like your story and I hope you come back to it soon. It's nice to have a sweet one to read without the drama. I also like that you dealt with Hyde. Of course there's always room for some drama. Like Elena showing up even if its just for a second or finding out there was more to why Linc bailed Hyde out in the first place. But this is your story. I hope everything with your original work is going well. I'd like to read it when it comes out if it hasnt already. 😀
Date: 01 Aug 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't know why but I like Storm more than Tina. She seems like she's one of those dull nannies that thinks everything has to be perfect while Storm seems like he'll be the fun one that likes to play with the kids. I don't know why I feel that way I just do.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yep I remember cocoa butter!! Made me want a chocolate bar!! Lol. The gossip rags suck but they do provide great entertainment! I especially love when they make hugely outrageous statements and I have a great laugh!! Lol great lemon!!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I remember that Rh shot. I'm a negative blood type but the hubby is positive so I had to have it. As for her getting cold its most likely the weather. I was extremely hot throughout my whole pregnancy because I was pregnant during the summer. I know Christian doesn't want to look into his birth parents but for medical reasons he needs to. I love it so far!! On to the next chapter!! Also I noticed you have this listed as incomplete but haven't updated in three months almost four. I hope all is ok with you!!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just started reading this story and so far I am loving it!!!! I am a BIG HUGE FAN OF ANA AND CHRISTIAN STORIES!!!! Esp. If they have HEA!!!!! I sometimes like a cheat story but only when they do get back together. So many cheat stories the main characters become so ugly and mean to each other and that just isn't my Ana and Christian.
I would like to suggest a story of Ana getting pregnant again with Phoebe and the story told mostly by Christian's P.O.V. I would love to see a infant than toddler etc. That is wrapped around her father's little finger!!!!!! Christian as a daddy's girl! Priceless!! The reactions between Teddy and Phoebe would be to cute, jealous rivalry, not to mention boyfriends. If Christian doesn't have a stroke by the time Phoebe will be full grown will be a miracle!!!! Also being Teddy Greys sister would be a nightmare all it's own (you know dad would teach him to protect her.) I read a story where 15 month old Phoebe saw a beautiful bracelet when she was shopping with her daddy and of course he bought it for her!! The bracelet only cost 800,000.00 but she wanted it and she is princess! SIGH!!!! Wish I had a daddy like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! Look forward to more stories!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hi, just found your story,and I love it. How ofter do you update? Take care!!
Thanks for reading! I don't update as often as I'd like to. I've been taking a writing class so updating my continuation has slacked off. I will get back to it. Hang in there.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you so much for this story & all you do to bring it to us. This was a good chapter.
Thank you for your nice comment. It is a labor of love, and lately I've felt it's been more labor than anything. ;-) I'll keep the chapters coming.
Date: 08 May 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
this was a great first chapter was so entertaining. i absolutely loved the humor you put into it. i cannot believe i've been missing out on your story. is it on fanfiction? great job!
I don't know how I missed this comment. Thank you for the kind words Karen. I haven't posted this on FanFiction, mostly because I was under the impression they frowned down on NC-17 content, so I only posted here. I guess I should look into that site too huh?
Date: 06 May 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter again. I can't wait to see how things go after Teddy's birth. Thanks for thinking of writing these missing parts of the story, ypu're doing great!
Thanks Tiff! It's fun writing them, so I'm happy I finally decided to share my writing.
I may be a little late this week... allergies have been kicking my butt!
Date: 17 Apr 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
It really gets more difficult to join together the further sling s pregnancy is... A girls body just doesn't bend or maneuver like it used to.
Great chapter, I'm glad they had fun at the wedding.
Ana's going to have to get back into shape to please her Dom after Teddy comes. ;-)
Date: 11 Apr 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ana wants and needs to be herself, so shopping online and picking her own clothes is a way to do that. I get it, as should Christian.
I always thought that it would take Ana time to get used to her new lifestyle, and it Christian needed that same time to stop overwhelming her. It's fun writing that transition.
Thanks for your comments and your continued support.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
As a fifty shades freak I Love your story beautifully written and edited (no grammar or spelling mistakes).. Thank you for taking such pride in your story. Can't wait to see how it developes!! Hazel (South Africa)
I'm glad you're enjoying my labor of love as a fellow FS freak. I think it's so cool that someone from the other side of this wonderful world has read my story. There is more to come next week after all the Easter prep and celebrations have finished.
Thank you so much!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
The went well. I'm glad it's out. I new she got pregnant on their honeymoon, I wonder why it was never revealed in the books?
When I read the books I wanted to know for sure if the pregnancy was due to a missed shot or a birth control fail. So I pulled out a calendar and figured it out from there. LOL!
Date: 21 Mar 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
yeah! easy to read - well written - lots of fun! looking forward to the ride!
Thanks so much for your review. It means so much that you complimented me on the easy read and it being well written. Thanks again!