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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 51

still wonder if Renee knows more than she's saying

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 50

Wonder who the debt is owed to?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 49

Renee sounds a bit on the psycho side

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 48

Sounds like Renee knows more than she's said

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 47

Well at least its a start

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 46

Sounds like E is a bit POd

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 45

Oh Embry...you are going to regret not talking

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 44

oh embry.... hope you tell E what he wants to know.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 43

Hmmm wonder what B's mom will say.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hope E finds the artist first and beats the answers out of him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 41

Bet that makes E know who is involved

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 40

Fire is the right word these days, but even with that people still stand by

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 39

wow  can understand why Ali is upset with herself

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 38

Go Ali.  Tell them everything

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 37

Sounds like a nice Rose for a change?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 36

poor Ali.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 35

Poor Alice.  Hope she can give them a description

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 34

Looking for a non descript black van.  yea right

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 33

Gotta love Esmom

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 32

Glad Eleazar was there.  Of course the cops have no idea.  Did they think to check the cameras in the area.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 31

Sounds like cops dont care about B and only want to arrest E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 30

Glad daddy C came

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love how the cops are ignoring the hysterical woman

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

Stupid cops sometimes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

Cops prob wont do anything.  Prob being bribed

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Go Big Bro E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well thats one way to get the cops attention

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 24

Good thinking E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

Glad He is being calm for Alice

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow  alice is really upset.  Can understand that

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

Silly E trying to hide

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

awww E is starting to see her worth

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

cool on starting a business

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

glad he is bonding with the family

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

aww for esme.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Figures it was a plan.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hope someone killed James for that.  What a pussy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

well at least he beat james.  Guessing a cheap knife or gunshot?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 13

surprised they have a 21 rule.  would think 18 would be ok to them.  ah well.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

naughty man whore

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

At least he is trying the school route

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

uh oh  all is not well in B land huh

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

ah we're intro'd to B

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

great to have supportive peeps in your life

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Daddy C is cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

Gotta hate bullies

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ugh for roid rage

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah Sam.  Wonder how he got an invite to the fights

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor e

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

awww soul mate

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 137

Really good I enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 137

That was great Thanks so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 136

What else could she say

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 135

Wow he is good very good

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 137

Bloody fantastic. Loved the whole thing.

Hugs & kisses for each 137 chapters, :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 134

how very cool

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 133

Everyone is together and happy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 132

life is moving right along

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 131

Renee knows

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 130

perfect

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 129

please tell me she comes by herself

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 128

I am sure that Renee knows how Bella feels about Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 127

he is the best

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 126

makes me want to cry

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 137

Yayy!!! That was a wonderful story. So glad Jacob, Bill and rest got theirs.. Can't wait for more from you guys. Thats why your one of my favs..

E/k

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 125

She is a smart girl

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 124

He is such a great guy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 123

she cant let him go

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 122

did she hear what he said

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 121

She loves him 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 120

Tanya knows they need time alone

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 119

They tryed to brain wash her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 118

good for Seth

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 117

it was time for him to stop

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 116

she is taken care of him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 115

her being with him will make them both heal

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 114

thank god they have her 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 113

Run Run Run how many will go

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 112

is he going to give up??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 111

cant wait

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 110

wrong thing to say Jacob I dont think people will like what he says

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 109

Jacob needs to die what a creep

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 137

fabulous !   loved every minute

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 108

No tricking him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 107

That is not the way it goes Jacob

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 106

dont stop now beat his ass into the mat.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 105

Is Jacob getting tired Edward will make his move

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 104

she was going to go to him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 103

will he be able to consentrate on the fight???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 102

relife now the battel begins

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 101

Seth knows how this is going to work

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 137

:) loved this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 100

He is an the verge of breaking down he needs to get it together

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 99

he will not take no

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 98

Now we know

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 137

I love all the stories yu guys have written together. This one was awesome. 10's all the way.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 137

I loved this one!  It has heart, action, and lots of twists and turns.  Kudos!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 124

I would think Edward would also want to give her time to seperate Edward - Alice's brother from Edward - her savior.  That is not why he wants her in his life.  He wants them to be straight up with o reservations.

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 137

Awww 

Reviewer: mom3270702 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 137

Love it grate job

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