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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow 10 years difference

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

They always love you Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sneaky Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

Carlisle is the best

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Not good Ed 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

But Sam I am sure Ed s going to take you down

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

 :( poor ed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sounds like he is one tough customer!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:52 PM Title: Prologue

Oh my!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 137

Wow I really liked this one he fought for he so romantic thank you

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 137

i liked it...

great story

Reviewer: kinsano Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 137

It was really good.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 129

Does no one realize that's a stalker song! Its not a love song...Sting even said so!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 137

What a great story. It was really amazing how it all came together in such short chapters. 

Even though the song you picked is the ultimate stalker song. Just saying. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 46

Okay wow! Just wow! I had never seen a dribble war before. But this is amazing. The story is so gut wrenching. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 137

great ending.  TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 136

sweet proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 135

aww too sweet

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 134

aww for fflower

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 133

yey for the multiple HEAs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 132

YEY for B doing well

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 131

B is 18 now.  Renee really has no say, but ah well.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 130

YEY for song

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 129

awww sweet song.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 128

hmm  so renee is clean?   Still wonder about the jake statement about buying her virginity.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 127

Love E.  Glad tanya get her dad back

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 126

Really hope Renee is not behind her kidnapping.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 125

Glad she isnt accepting it as fact.  I'm still worried about her Renee reunion.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 124

oh E.  I agree with no relationship till 18 but dont cut out of her life.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 123

Glad Tanya gets to go back with them.   Oh E.  you wont be able to get rid of her that easy (i hope)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 122

Glad they didnt take it away from her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 121

Kinda figured that would be part of the lie they would tell her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 120

Felix?  Guess he was one of Seth's men?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 119

Guessing they were threatening Alice to keep her in line?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 118

go Seth.  Hope E can help him out a little maybe.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 117

BS that E and Seth are banned.  Wonder if Jake will still come after them though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 116

Wow  long time to sleep.  Still wanna know who sold B to Jake. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 115

glad she is staying close

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 114

glad tanya gets to go with them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 113

hmmm we'll see how honorable Aro really is.   Pussy move throwing him out that way though when his tribe did wrong.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 112

Hope Jake doesnt try to stab E in the back

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 111

oh boy.....sounds like Jake and co are about to go down.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 109

Wonder what Jane will have to say?  if anything

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 108

Nice try you f'ing cheats

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 107

Oh screw you Jake.  you pussy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 106

Go E  Take the arse down

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 105

Poor E.   hope Jake has equal injuries.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 104

Let's get ready to rummmmbbbblllleeee.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 103

Bet they've been starving her too

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 102

At least B is there in one piece.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 101

Glad Seth is thinking and on E's side.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 100

agree with Seth.  He does need to rest a bit

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 99

Hope E knows what he is doing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 98

hmm Hope the NY thing wont go bad for them.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 97

Hopefully the ref will do the right thing in this match.  Of course the tribe is there to see jake try to cheat to win.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 96

Wonder what Jake will try before the fight.  I have a feeling he will.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 95

Good plan E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 94

Hope he drops James like a rock   and gets out unscathed this time

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 93

Hope T keeps a clear head.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 92

Oh T.  You're dad will welcome you both.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 91

hope T doesnt panic

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 90

glad E is being so nice

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 89

hope tanya takes the rejection nicely

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 88

Awww little Jakey is losing fans.  ha ha

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 87

aww nice gift

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 86

aww poor B.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 85

awww b is so sweet

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 84

sweet gift

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 83

can see them not going to cops, esp if B is being held somewhere else.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 82

Ah  E knows T's pops.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 81

Sounds like Jake and crew are terrorizing renee.   Guess E decided not to involve the cops?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 80

awww happy Bday E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 79

Glad the girls are keeping thier bargain.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 78

Hope those girls dont screw him over.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 77

Then Aro is just as culpable.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 76

Sounds like they know the brainwashing, so why havent they left.  Sounds like Sam and Jake both need to die....along with the elders.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 75

Sounds like those girls, at least Kate, isnt there by choice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 74

Can understand Kate being scared.  hope its not an act by her or Tanya.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 73

Wonder if Skankya give a damn or not.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 72

Whew you had me worried for a min.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 71

Hope he tosses Skankya on her arse.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 70

I'm sure Jake is going to try and cheat again.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 69

Hope E can find a weakness on Jagoff Jake

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 68

Glad E is getting his head int he game.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 67

Prob keeping B hidden till the end

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 66

Should have changed his first name to just Ed or Eddie or something.  Glad he can get Jazz to cover the biz for him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 65

Seth better listen up.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 64

Oh Seth.  You dont think you'd get off that easy.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 63

Aro is prob getting big $$ he wont care.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 62

Wonder if seth will do right or try to screw over E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 61

Oh Seth.  I'd get a new attitude quickly.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 60

oh E you know they have the girls hidden somewhere.  Prob on the Rez where the reg police cant go.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 59

aw man.  You know Paul is gonna go run straight to Jake

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 58

oh Paul....you are digging yourself a huge hole.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 57

Oh Paul is starting to rethink the attitude huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 56

Go bad ass E

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 55

wonder if the friends know about the kidnapping?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 54

Hope he can do something to Paul without the other fuckers jumping in.  have a feeling they will though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 53

Glad Pete is on his side.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 52

at least they looked at the camera footage, but you'd think they'd use other cameras footage too.  

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