Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Such a fun ending!
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Absolutely gorgeous. This brought me to tears.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love the fierce storm of emotion in this chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love the rollercoaster of emotions in this one.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
The way he took care of her when she had the chills was beautiful
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was one of your sexiest love scenes ever. I loved it.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
This break up is revealing so much about their feelings about each other.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the passionate anger between them.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can totally understand where Penelope is coming from. I look forward to when she sees how different her and Derek are from what Derek has had in the past with anyone else.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
The way he speaks to her in this fic is absolutely beautiful
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
That moment when he admitted he had been waiting five long years for her was breathtaking. Loved it.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Even though this was all in Penelope's POV, you wrote it in such a way that I felt like I knew just what Derek was thinking too.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
You make each love scene a true work of art.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
"Because right now I want you more than i have ever wanted a woman in my whole life."
Love that line and all the erotic talk between them in this chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
The way you write the push and pull between them is exquisite.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love all the little details you put in your stories.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Reading this a second time because I'm trying to spark my muse. I've always loved the way you put together a story.
Date: 11 Sep 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! I had no idea you were over here! I thought I had read all of your CM stories, I was very very wrong! I think I have made it clear that I am a huge fan of your work. (If I haven't then shame on me) This has to be my favorite M/G story. I am going to check out your page on here tomorrow and see what else I have been missing. Thank you, as always, for providing a wonderful read!
PS: How do the ratings on this site work. Is 10 the highest praise, or is 1 the best rating?
Author's Response:
Date: 12 Apr 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
omg how did i miss this sigh kricket it is fantastic :)
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Mar 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Aww I love them!! Such a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
You write sweet stories, loving stories, sensual stories, but this chapter is still one of your sexiest! Phew! :-)