Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Tanya is rotten!
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
How come the cute guys in high school always went for the shallow, bitchy girls?
Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Woooooo!! Loved it and can't wait to read more!
Date: 06 Jan 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh skanyka really is pushing her luck. How rude to invite someone to another person's house like that.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Tanya made her bed and from the sound of it, she enjoyed it. I am glad that Edward is showing the world how slutty Tanya is.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 28 Sep 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Email a clip to her parents
Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
lol for none of them lasting a day. He needs to just make a copy and send it to skankya's daddy.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
LOL OMG!! I love that cant take there hands off each other!! Anyways wow Tanya is a slut, god i hate her. I hope she gets what she deserves. Please continue and update very soon pls!!! =D
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Please continue and update soon pls!!!! =D
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! Funny chapter!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it! I hate Tanya! Way to go Rose!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! I really hate Tanya!
Date: 03 Sep 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
They will not die without sex for 2 weeks. The girls needed to teach them about privacy. They just need to group date. The boys will make it, but they can have fun with the girls by driving them crazy. The boys know that they want it just as much as they do. They should torture them back. Keep it fun.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG this chapter wa tooooo funny at the end!!! LOL I loved it! and also enjoying reading this story! please update ASAP!! thanks
Date: 28 Aug 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok -- I'm drawn in -- I hope you take it slow and develop their characters naturally. There is good energy in this story!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Nooo way that bella makes it 2 weeks
Date: 27 Aug 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
THAT WAS GREAT! I LOVED IT SO MUCH, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was a pretty good lesson the ladies are teaching our young men. Looking forward to more!
Date: 26 Aug 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 26 Aug 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
awww They are so cute together. Boys deserve a ban after that stupid camera stunt.
Lemon Dance for first time
Date: 13 Aug 2013 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! Tanya is some piece of delusional work. I think she needs to go away before she really causes big problems. Maybe Tanya will be seen for what she really is when Edward shows all the wonderful video she has...she shouldn't threaten a man in love and his girl! I hope B and E can talk about this and Bella can handle it. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Hi.
Thank you so much for your review. i love reading them all
fiona (Robsessed73)
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
That's a cruel cliffie....wtf is on that tape?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
They are so cute together. Time to bring Daddy into the picture. Get her arse sent off to a girls only boarding school or something. What a witch.
Author's Response:
Hi.
thank you so much for the review.
fiona (Robsessed73)
Date: 12 Aug 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
This story is really good, I would definitely enjoy to read other chapters. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Hi.
Thanks for the review. the next chapter is already half written.
fiona (Robsessed73)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think a clip of that video needs to be leaked. How dare she throw punch at Bella! I am glad Rose took care it. Edward would never punch a girl, but Rose can. I hope she doesn't get in very much trouble.
Author's Response:
Hi.
Thanks so much for the review. Leaking a clip of the video is the plan in the following chapter.
fiona (robsessed73)
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Hi.
thank you so much for the review.
fiona (robsessed73)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Too bad nasty ol' Tanya had to ruin the evening for everyone. Wonder where her parents are? Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
hi
Thank you so much for the review
fiona (Robsessed73)
Date: 22 Jul 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella needs to stay strong against Tanya. She can't show any weakness or it will be worse. Edward loves her and that is where she needs to concentrate her energy. She does need to keep Edward informed.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Pls continue and update very soon! Pls!!! =D
Date: 09 Jul 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
glad they had a great date despite Skankya's appearance. She just keeps popping up everywhere. Sigh
Date: 09 Jul 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
What's on the tape? What's on the tape?
Another great update!
Date: 09 Jul 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great Chapter, I am glad she stood up to Tanya, now lets hope she is strong for what ever happens next..
Date: 26 Jun 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved the girls telling Skankya off. Wonder what she's do when she finds out about the jacket?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward needs to let Bella know that Tanya never wore the jacket. Bella would love this fact, especially when she finds out how much she wanted it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Pls continue and update soon! I really hope you continue soon and its quick! =D
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww! He gave her his jacket!!! Thanks for the update
Date: 19 Jun 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great Chapter as always, yes please send me a teaser...
Author's Response:
hi.
thanks for the review. Sorry for the fact that it took me so long to get back to you with a teaser.
thanks for your continuing support.
fiona (robsessed73)
This teaser is unbeta'd
I was in the car driving us to the movie theater thinking that I was the luckiest bastard alive to have this beauty on my arm. I was so excited that she agreed to go to the sweethearts dance with me on Valentines day and just seeing her in my Letterman Jacket, gives me a hard on, knowing that she is mine and that she is wearing something that I wore.
I finally pulled up outside the movie theater and turned off the engine before leaning over to give my Bella a sweet but chaste kiss.
"You ready for us to continue our date," I asked sweetly.
She looked up at me while smiling before nodding.
I got out of the car and went to open her car door but she bet me to it.
I wrapped my arms around her before pulling her close and walking up to the ticket counter to buy our tickets for Face Punch.
"I DON'T FUCKING BELIEVE THIS! THIS MUST BE A SICK JOKE," shouted a nasally voice that I hate.
We turned to see Tanya storming towards us, anger and fury flashing violently in her eyes.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very sweet!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Alice can be so annoying. She acts like she brought them together. Edward knew he wanted Bella. He just had to get rid of some trash. Bella had to learn about the real Edward. It is their relationship, not hers. Poor Bella will have to put up with hours of Alice torture. Alice never realizes that Edward loves Bella just the way she is. I love the meadow seen. Edward is a romantic through and through.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Pls continue and update soon pls!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks so much for the update! I'm so glad they had a stress free afternoon. Looking forward to more
Date: 27 May 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
sweet chapter. Glad they talked and spent quality time together.
Date: 27 May 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 27 May 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 27 May 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
NO I DON'T THINK BELLA GAVE IN TO EASLY TO EDWARD I DON'T GET WHY EDWARD HASN'T ASK BELLA TO BE HIS GIRL, THAT WAY HE COULD HAVE TOLD MIKE THEY ARE DATING AND TO BACK OFF THAT WAY BELLA WOULD NOT HAVE A REASON TO BE PISSED AT EDWARD. AND I LOVED THE WAY EDWAARD HANDLED JESSICA AND TANYA HE TOLD THEM GOOD. I HOPE BELLA DOESN'T STAY MAD AT EDWARD.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
pls continue and update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
I THINK BELLA SHOULD GIVE EDWARD A CHANCE AND AS FOR TANYA GOES SHE WILL MAKE ALL THE TROUBLE SHE CAN BUT BELLA AND EDWARD CAN GET THROUGH IT ALL IF THEY JUST TALK THINGS THROUGH AND STICK TOGETHER.
Date: 14 May 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is being a bit of a jerk herself. She is cuddled next to Edward at lunch. Her accepting a date with Mike would be the same as Edward being with Tanya. Edward was just telling Mike that he was too late. Bella was his love. It is a sign of affection. If he said nothing it would be like he didn't care about her. Bella shows she cares about Edward by running away and crying.
Date: 13 May 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad E is holding out against the skanks. Think he needs to warn Daddy C about the threat though so he can watch if Skankya's Daddy tries anything
Date: 13 May 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
I graduated high school 40 years ago but it'snice to know nothing has change ...wonderful story
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yippie the witch is dumped! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Just found your story and I really am enjoying it. I think Bella needs to grow a uterus and stop crying all the time though. Where is that British "Stiff Upper Lip" and all that? I mean, these are the same people that gave us Bodicea and Elizabeth the First! Lets give Bella a real backbone and watch her run with it. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity with us.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
i would looooooooove love loooooooooove you if you would send me a teaser for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
hi, i am so happy that you are enjoying this story. hopefully we will have a lemon in another 2 or 3 chapters. anyway here is teaser for chapter 6
"I will be hear for you as friends for whenever you need me until you are ready for us to be more." I said, taking her hand. I felt the same tingling as I did earlier and knew that I had no control over my feelings so I decided to do the one thing that I wanted to do ever since we were alone in my bedroom. I leaned in and pressed my lips softly to hers. Her lips moved with mine, hesitant at first, but gradually picking up in their urgent nature. I took her bottom lip between mine, and kissed it gently while running my, cool tongue across the surface. She slowly pulled away, her eyes clouded and lustful. She smiled a heartwarming smile at me but I could not help but feel ashamed. "I'm sorry, Bella. Here's me telling you that we will be friends until your ready and the next thing that I am doing is attacking you with my lips. But remember this. You are so fucking special to me and everyday my feelings for you intensify. It's like I need you more and more every day. Never, ever doubt that." [Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I truely am loving reading this beautifully captivating story & would love if u please would update story a little more frequently if possible.
Author's Response:
i am so happy that you are enjoying the story. At present time I am also writing another twilight fanfiction story called all alone. i try to update both once a week but sometimes it might be a bit longer. this story will be complete and I will try updating more frequently.
fiona (robsessed73)
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 26 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
who the hell falls to their knees and sobs in the middle of the hallway. She's a dramatic, maybe you make her pregnant then she would have a by. And why did she go running from lunch Tanya didn't say anything that bad.
Date: 26 Apr 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Of course Bella will listen to Edward. She is a kind and lovely girl. They will work it out and soon (I hope), but you know all the answers. So please (and I would love a Edward on top!) update soon! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my God pls continue and update soon pls!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
glad he finally broke up with the skank
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
WELL NOW HE GOT RID OF TANYA HE NEEDS TO EXPLAIN WHAT BELLA SAW WASN'T WHAT SHE THINKS IT WAS. PLEASE UP DATE SOON I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
i get it tanya's dad couls fire charlie if his daugther ask him to. poor edward and bella it's not fair but i do hope they can find a way but edward needs to kick tayna to the curb and fast.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh man i hate tanya so much she is always mean to bella i am pleased edward and bella got to work together.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
damn the first chapter at i love it already please tell me you won't do like so many authors and quit writing in the middle of your story it is so disapointing and i am thinking of not reading story's unless they are finished that way i get to read the whole thing. moving on to chapter 2
Date: 02 Apr 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your writing is good but you are jumping too fast into the love stuff. Why not slow that down some?
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it!!!! Great story!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Tanya is mentally unstable. This should make for some interesting drama.
Date: 30 Mar 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
poor bella no one should have to deal with that not cool!!!!!! and tanya we all know is a whore so but of course she'll come back and cause problems and edward better tell bella what he said to tanya!!!!!!!!!!! and jessica!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved It! hate Tanya
Date: 29 Mar 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Go get her edward!!!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
:( they are too cute! I don't like Tanya!!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked already!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad E broke up with skankya but don't think this is the end of her though. Gonna be issues, esp when skankya's daddy gets involved I bet.
Where are all the teachers in this cafeteria, letting skankya get away with punching him? Ah well. I think too logically sometimes.
MORE soon plz
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh so much drama. I hope Edward dumps her skanky aas and dates Bella.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE THIS STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE