Date: 24 Aug 2022 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
Tanya is crazy
Date: 24 Aug 2022 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Loved it!
Date: 24 Aug 2022 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Tanya is crazy! Loved it!
Date: 24 Aug 2022 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 14 Aug 2022 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 12 Aug 2020 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good story just wish it was finished.
Date: 23 Oct 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it!
Date: 23 Oct 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Date: 23 Oct 2018 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Date: 23 Oct 2018 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 23 Oct 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! I don't like Tanya!
Date: 23 Oct 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Quite a bit going on this chapter... seems things are escalating with the bimbo barbie and her banshee ways... Does n't she get it. Even if Bella was not around he was never going to get Edward back. What part of I do not want to be with you, does she not understand. Sheesh~! Oh and go Rosie, Go Rosie~!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think Crowley set up a camera to film them while she was either going down on him or having sex... OR both... she sure pales when he mentions it.
Yeah, I knew she would go bullistic when she found out Edward gave Bella his jacket, especially since he refused to let her have it...
Edward's been spouting how it is tradition for the football guys to give their girl their jacket yet he would never in a million years let skankya touch it...
I think it's about time someone started standing up to her. Bella came in with her sweet nature and won everyone's heart of the one tanya wanted to be a part of and none of them could stand her... Edward has told her several times now that he was Never in love with her, they were only dating because everyone expected it , and that he cannot stand her... get a clue barbie doll...
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Charlie went pretty easy on him... I think he was scared a bit until Charlie told him he could call him by his name. LOL
Well Edward is not above name dropping that is for sure~ sticking up for his Bella is always sexy...
Date: 05 Oct 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Slowly but surely, they are getting there... or not so slowly since technically they have barely know each other... but when you know, you know...
I loved the swing in the meadow, nice touch.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
The boy gets kudos for how he handled both situations... but i do not think that will be a deturent as they are pretty thick-headed and dense even when you tell them plainly...
Don't know What mikey was thinking... and did tan really think Edward would care she was sitting ON eric yorkie lap, pahlease...
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Woo how i love Alice. Denali is scared shitless of Carlisle... no problem there, AND Alice says... that it would Thrill daddy C for Edward to be with Bella... problem with daddy ~ solved
Now as for bitchya making like miserable for Bella.... uuh, that's a little different and Edward cant' be with her all the time, so how is that going to work...
She just Might give him the chance especially with her brother in his corner... but she will be skeptical... I know I would be~ but if he tells her about his dream girl, the one he's been waiting for... maybe just maybe she may give him the benefit of the doubt.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now we have a little more insight to Bella... another hs bitch vendetta... you heard the last words bitchfest said. She is going to really go after Bella now, not to mention jessica... apparently bitchya is too stupid to notice her 'friend' bitchica trying to get her man right under nose...
Edward is gonna have to tread lightly to even get Bella to talk to him at this point~!
Love Jazz as the big brother protector, and Emmy too... lol at least they heard for themselves that he broke it off with the thang... in front of the whole cafateria. *snicker snort*
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh hecks yeah, skankya will definitely make her life hell on wheels...
Edward should have broke up with the skank long before now, is it really worth the popularity to have to put up with a banshee in your face all the time... Bella is not going to want to have to worry about her father's job because the skank will do whatever she can to make her walk away from Edward. He needs to do the right thing and break it off with the girl before he tries to win Bella~!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yep, if you are doing things just because they are 'expected' you are really setting yourself up for a fall... especially if you cannot even stand the other person~
Oh, and good luck Edward getting rid of the pariah *snicker* me thinks this will be easier said than done...
And Yeah, tanya IS a bitch~!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
My what a shock of a move... looks like it Is a good move for the family... tanya isn't likeing it too much. LOL
Date: 23 Aug 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really hope u finish this soon.
Date: 20 Aug 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awe poor Bella!
Date: 14 May 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please post soon!!!! Please it has been too long
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank God for gps. Tanya and James are crazy.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now why didn t anyone put together that Hunter left the hospital right away. Ah well Glad he got the chip turned.
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
glad your updating again
great story
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love it d84;
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Date: 08 Aug 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward and Bella need a restraining order against Tanya. All their phones need to be tapped so they can find her. She has lost it. Edward also needs to show the tape to her parents. They need to know what their daughter is doing. I am sure she is taking drugs. Tanya is going to need help when this is over. Then she needs to go to jail.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please continue and update very soon please!!!! =D
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
James is always bad news, please update soon!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
You know James is bad news , can Bella and Edward ever get a break. First Charlie and Edward should trust their gut feelings and demand new doctors and place security at her door 24/7. Why must the bad guys always win.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
Whoa...I'm wondering is james in on it???? He reacted oddly...
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! THANKS FOR SSTAYING WITH IT! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, that was a good chapter. Please update soon
Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it ant wait for more :)
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
U need to update more lol and atop leaving us in suspense :) always love it!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Tanya is delusional
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Very good,but damn
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wowser. At least they got B back. How did the cops manage to let Skanya slip away???? Ugh James is a smarmy dude. hope he doesn't help Skankya get to Bella.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it !!!!!! Update soon xxx
Date: 07 Jun 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter and cliff hanger, write a chapter soon
Date: 27 May 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
The police better protect Edward. He needs to get Bella released and see her before he "leaves" with her. He needs to whisper to Bella that he isn't really leaving. She will be freaking out when Tanya tells her that she won Edward.
Date: 24 May 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love your story can't wait for more.
Date: 24 May 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG!! I hate Tanya!!! I hope she gets what she deserves and so does Jacob! Also hope they find Bella soon!!! Please continue and update soon please!!!!! =)
Date: 23 May 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
No the cops will be all over her
Date: 23 May 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was great...looove this story!!!
Date: 23 May 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
it's chunky monkey and they dont in large tubs, only pints. chunky monkey is my fave too.
Date: 22 May 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ugh skankya has gone too far. What a bitch. Wait if Jacob is homeless and skankya is not going home, where are they holding bella at? Why is Uley being smug? Is he helpingJake?
Date: 22 May 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Both Tanya and Jacob are crazy!!!
Date: 22 May 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just hope Edward is going to go all noble and sacrafice himself for Bella. But then Tanya doesn't have the smarts to survive two days on the run. I mean, even if they leave, what stops Edward from leaving her the minute that Bella is free? It doesn't sound well thought out Tanya.
Date: 22 May 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Of course she wont get away with it. They are nothing but high school kids. Even with a lot of money, they are young and stupid. She is doomed. The only hope now is that Jacob does not harm her before they get to her. If he knows of Tanya's little deal, he may just to get something out of the deal before it turns to shit.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!! What happend? Please tell me that Bella will be all right and that Edward will find her soon!!! Please!!! And also Please continue and update this story really soon please!!!! =D
Date: 15 Mar 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
Is that all you can do, hurt in anyway possible Bella, Darn, I wish some one would allow Bella to be badass just once.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
update soon
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow kidnapped
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
We all know who did it. Edward better tell everyone what Jacob said.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
ILOVE IT! JUST UPDATE MORE OFTEN PLZ!
Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Whoa. One guess, can't wait
Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
well that was obvious ... why ddnt either edward or bella explain that jacob was threatening and bella shdve been dropped at school not take the bus considering the situation ... stupid
Date: 05 Mar 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ohh. Can't wait to see what happened.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bi like very much! On to the next chapter
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
ugh They were stupid for ditching but I like that B stood up to Skankya at school. Grrr Of course skankya and jake the snake grabbed her. Ugh Ya killin me with the cliffies.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Pls continue and update soon pls!!! =D
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
How rude of Tanya to invite someone to another person's house for dinner. I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
Update soon I'm getting sooooo hooked!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm thinking Tanya is really insane,which makes her dangerous.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya is going to be trouble-big time!