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Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2020 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good story just wish it was finished. 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2020 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! I don't like Tanya!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

Quite a bit going on this chapter... seems things are escalating with the bimbo barbie and her banshee ways... Does n't she get it. Even if Bella was not around he was never going to get Edward back.  What part of I do not want to be with you, does she not understand.  Sheesh~!  Oh and go Rosie, Go Rosie~!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

I think Crowley set up a camera to film them while she was either going down on him or having sex... OR both... she sure pales when he mentions it.

Yeah, I knew she would go bullistic when she found out Edward gave Bella his jacket, especially since he refused to let her have it...

Edward's been spouting how it is tradition for the football guys to give their girl their jacket yet he would never in a million years let skankya touch it...

I think it's about time someone started standing up to her.  Bella came in with her sweet nature and won everyone's heart of the one tanya wanted to be a part of and none of them could stand her... Edward has told her several times now that he was Never in love with her, they were only dating because everyone expected it , and that he cannot stand her... get a clue barbie doll...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

I think Charlie went pretty easy on him... I think he was scared a bit until Charlie told him he could call him by his name. LOL

Well Edward is not above name dropping that is for sure~ sticking up for his Bella is always sexy...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

Slowly but surely, they are getting there... or not so slowly since technically they have barely know each other... but when you know, you know...

I loved the swing in the meadow, nice touch.

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 6

The boy gets kudos for how he handled both situations... but i do not think that will be a deturent as they are pretty thick-headed and dense even when you tell them plainly...

Don't know What mikey was thinking... and did tan really think Edward would care she was sitting ON eric yorkie lap, pahlease...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

Woo how i love Alice. Denali is scared shitless of Carlisle... no problem there, AND Alice says... that it would Thrill daddy C for Edward to be with Bella... problem with daddy ~ solved

Now as for bitchya making like miserable for Bella.... uuh, that's a little different and Edward cant' be with her all the time, so how is that going to work...

She just Might give him the chance especially with her brother in his corner... but she will be skeptical...  I know I would be~ but if he tells her about his dream girl, the one he's been waiting for... maybe just maybe she may give him the benefit of the doubt.

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

Now we have a little more insight to Bella... another hs bitch vendetta... you heard the last words bitchfest said.  She is going to really go after Bella now, not to mention jessica... apparently bitchya is too stupid to notice her 'friend' bitchica trying to get her man right under nose...

Edward is gonna have to tread lightly to even get Bella to talk to him at this point~!

Love Jazz as the big brother protector, and Emmy too... lol at least they heard for themselves that he broke it off with the thang... in front of the whole cafateria. *snicker snort*

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh hecks yeah, skankya will definitely make her life hell on wheels...

Edward should have broke up with the skank long before now, is it really worth the popularity to have to put up with a banshee in your face all the time... Bella is not going to want to have to worry about her father's job because the skank will do whatever she can to make her walk away from Edward.  He needs to do the right thing and break it off with the girl before he tries to win Bella~!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yep, if you are doing things just because they are 'expected' you are really setting yourself up for a fall... especially if you cannot even stand the other person~

Oh, and good luck Edward getting rid of the pariah *snicker* me thinks this will be easier said than done...

And Yeah, tanya IS a bitch~!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

My what a shock of a move... looks like it Is a good move for the family... tanya isn't likeing it too much. LOL

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: Randi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

I really hope u finish this soon. 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Awe poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fantastic!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please post soon!!!! Please it has been too long

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

more plz.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank God for gps. Tanya and James are crazy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Now why didn t anyone put together that Hunter left the hospital right away.  Ah well Glad he got the chip turned.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

loving this

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

Glad your back

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

glad your updating again

great story

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Damn.....

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love it d84;

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 16

Edward and Bella need a restraining order against Tanya. All their phones need to be tapped so they can find her. She has lost it. Edward also needs to show the tape to her parents. They need to know what their daughter is doing.  I am sure she is taking drugs. Tanya is going to need help when this is over. Then she needs to go to jail.

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

Please continue and update very soon please!!!! =D

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

James is always bad news, please update soon!

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

You know James is bad news , can Bella and Edward ever get a break. First Charlie and Edward should trust their gut feelings and demand new doctors and place security at her door 24/7. Why must the bad guys always win.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

Whoa...I'm wondering is james in on it???? He reacted oddly...

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! THANKS FOR SSTAYING WITH IT! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow, that was a good chapter. Please update soon

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it ant wait for more :)

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

U need to update more lol and atop leaving us in suspense :) always love it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

Tanya is delusional

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Very good,but damn

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wowser.  At least they got B back.   How did the cops manage to let Skanya slip away????    Ugh James is a smarmy dude.  hope he doesn't help Skankya get to Bella.

Reviewer: lanna26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love it !!!!!! Update soon xxx

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter and cliff hanger, write a chapter soon

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

The police better protect Edward. He needs to get Bella released and see her before he "leaves" with her. He needs to whisper to Bella that he isn't really leaving. She will be freaking out when Tanya tells her that she won Edward.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love your story can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

OMG!! I hate Tanya!!! I hope she gets what she deserves and so does Jacob! Also hope they find Bella soon!!! Please continue and update soon please!!!!! =)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

No the cops will be all over her

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was great...looove this story!!!

Reviewer: iwantEdward Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

it's chunky monkey and they dont in large tubs, only pints. chunky monkey is my fave too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ugh skankya has gone too far.  What a bitch.  Wait if Jacob is homeless and skankya is not going home, where are they holding bella at?  Why is Uley being smug? Is he helpingJake?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

Both Tanya and Jacob are crazy!!!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

I just hope Edward is going to go all noble and sacrafice himself for Bella. But then Tanya doesn't have the smarts to survive two days on the run. I mean, even if they leave, what stops Edward from leaving her the minute that Bella is free? It doesn't sound well thought out Tanya.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

Of course she wont get away with it.  They are nothing but high school kids.  Even with a lot of money, they are young and stupid.  She is doomed.  The only hope now is that Jacob does not harm her before they get to her.  If he knows of Tanya's little deal, he may just to get something out of the deal before it turns to shit.

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

OMG!!! What happend? Please tell me that Bella will be all right and that Edward will find her soon!!! Please!!! And also Please continue and update this story really soon please!!!! =D

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

Is that all you can do, hurt in anyway possible Bella, Darn, I wish some one would allow Bella to be badass just once.

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

update soon

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

wow kidnapped

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

We all know who did it. Edward better tell everyone what Jacob said.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

ILOVE IT! JUST UPDATE MORE OFTEN PLZ!

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

Whoa. One guess, can't wait

Reviewer: cofey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

well that was obvious ... why ddnt either edward or bella explain that jacob was threatening and bella shdve been dropped at school not take the bus considering the situation ... stupid

Reviewer: Pop-Ey33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ohh. Can't wait to see what happened.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bi like very much!   On to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

loving this

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

ugh  They were stupid for ditching but I like that B stood up to Skankya at school.    Grrr Of course skankya and jake the snake grabbed her.   Ugh  Ya killin me with the cliffies.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Pls continue and update soon pls!!! =D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

How rude of Tanya to invite someone to another person's house for dinner. I can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 13

MORE LEMONS PLZ!!

Reviewer: kanergirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

Update soon I'm getting sooooo hooked!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13

Shit!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm thinking Tanya is really insane,which makes her dangerous.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

Tanya is going to be trouble-big time!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Tanya is rotten!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

WTF...

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

How come the cute guys in high school always went for the shallow, bitchy girls?

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

Woooooo!! Loved it and can't wait to read more! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh skanyka really is pushing her luck.   How rude to invite someone to another person's house like that.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 13

loving this

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

Tanya made her bed and from the sound of it, she enjoyed it. I am glad that Edward is showing the world how slutty Tanya is.

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: missielynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Email a clip to her parents

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

lol for none of them lasting a day.    He needs to just make a copy and send it to skankya's daddy.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

loved this

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOL OMG!! I love that cant take there hands off each other!! Anyways wow Tanya is a slut, god i hate her. I hope she gets what she deserves. Please continue and update very soon pls!!! =D

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

Please continue and update soon pls!!!! =D

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it! Funny chapter!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it! I hate Tanya! Way to go Rose!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! I really hate Tanya!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11

They will not die without sex for 2 weeks. The girls needed to teach them about privacy. They just need to group date. The boys will make it, but they can have fun with the girls by driving them crazy. The boys know that they want it just as much as they do. They should torture them back. Keep it fun. 

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMG this chapter wa tooooo funny at the end!!! LOL I loved it! and also enjoying reading this story! please update ASAP!! thanks

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