[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 5:52 PM Title: Assumptions
You have my attention, now what? Do you plan to continue? I really like what is written, but if that is the I am really kind of disappointed... Seems far from finished from my standpoint. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:41 PM Title: Assumptions
:) nice but is it over?.....strange ending.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 1:16 AM Title: Assumptions
i like this story but i dont really understand it...care to clarify for me? thanks ;) btw i like how you added Twitter to your story hahaha
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:09 AM Title: Assumptions
plz continue!it feels not complete!:0)
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:13 PM Title: Assumptions
Very cute. I would like to see more though, I feel like it's not complete.
Also, you might want to change the last paragraph where she refers to Edward by name before he introduces himself, unless that was done on purpose... I'm not sure.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:02 PM Title: Assumptions
I think this is going to be a really great story. I love the characters and the writing style. Please update soon !
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy that you see potential in the story. Thanks for taking the time to review, it really helps to know if you should continue.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:28 AM Title: Assumptions
i like it
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thanks for taking the time to let me know too!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:02 AM Title: Assumptions
Oh, very cool! This could be such a cute story if you expanded it. Like, maybe he was looking for something for his mother or sister, but ends up utterly capiticated by Bella. *sigh* I'm a hopeless romantic, lol.
It's certainly a very interesting and thought provoking piece by itself, though!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! Thank you for taking the time to review. I'm chewing on whether or not to expand.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:17 AM Title: Assumptions
interesting are you going to expand this?
Author's Response:
I'm thinking on that. I felt done with this story, but I do love the characters. If I can come up with something good maybe.