[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 10:11 PM Title: The Table
This Bella is a joke.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:46 PM Title: The Grey Suit
What in the Hell is Bella's problem and why is she being treated like she'll explode any moment?
Oh yeah. Jake's a slime ball dog.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:26 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:17 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:17 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:17 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:16 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:16 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2021 9:16 PM Title: The Navy Suit
Maybe I missed it or I'm mixing this up with other WIP's but what caused their breakup?
Date: 16 Dec 2016 12:23 PM Title: The Grey Suit
Seriously what the fuck is up with jacob and how he has everyone fooled ??
He's a douche !!!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:43 AM Title: The Epilogue
Such a great story!!
I really wanted to knock Jacob out. Edward was a idiot, but Jake was a dick.
Loved this!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 11:05 PM Title: The Epilogue
hi, great chapters
I loved your story was amazing
kisses, until the next
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:47 AM Title: The Epilogue
Wonderful story ... you should write out the story of their meeting and the time up til the breakup and what happened!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:56 AM Title: The Epilogue
wow you made jake a jackass and edward too. anyways i really liked it!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:12 AM Title: The Chair
I am rereading the story.
Your concept is good. Your writing style flows nicely. I love the way you develop emotions. I am having a hard time with Edward being such a cad . I am used to Edward always being such a gentlemen.
I am not a jake fan and in this story he is marginally better than edward. I do nto blame him. He gave 10 years only to have it tossed out the window at the blink of edward. I would be bitter too.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:19 PM Title: The Epilogue
Thank you soooo much for finishing the story! I loved the ending!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:02 AM Title: The Navy Suit
HE is cruel to the core. These women deserve better
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:43 AM Title: The Hurdle
IT would appear marriage is not very important to any of them. So they should part. Why bring a baby into the picture?
If Jake does not love Bella anymore and Bella never truly loved JAke why bother?
Why marry tanya for the same reason. Tanya simply needs a hunk. Bella needs an education and a real job.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 12:22 AM Title: The Beginning (JPOV)
Well that should make things easy unless Edward is attached to someone new and doesn't have feelings for Bella anymore. Or if Nessie is attached.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 2:07 AM Title: The Beginning (JPOV)
I like the story so far. I love that you are not going to make it hard on us about her leaving poor ole' Jake for Edward. Can't wait to read more.