Date: 07 Nov 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
So this chapter is the same as the last one why?
Date: 02 Aug 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ahhhh, I see what you're doing with this. Okay so damn poor Bella. Is Jake just going to sit there & watch her or is going to take her back to Charlie's?
NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
A little over reaction? Great beach time. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well this was all hot & dandy then left on a sour note. I wonder what the next threat is going to be. Mr. Mallory is gone but maybe it was a family thing & they'll be after Bella next.
Next chappy please ^_^
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
Really? This story doesn't feel anywhere near finished yet but I'm glad there's going to be a sequel.
So her plan that night was to kill Lucas huh? Honestly didn't see that coming.
Wow that was really embarrassing what happened at the Cullen's. Maybe now they can grasp how important it is to do things on her terms & be careful not to surprise her.
Date: 24 May 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved her vulnerability in this chapter. Good job.
Date: 11 May 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Seriously? you can't just leave it like that? ugh - please? more? soon?
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ooooohhhhhhh you tease.
A news article for an update?
Okay whatever, Happy Mexican Mother's Day I guess.
Please post again soon, I want to know what happens.
Date: 10 May 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
that is a mean update.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Joe Mallory got shot before Bella passed out. I hope it was Charlie.
Next chapter please.
Date: 08 May 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Holy crap. Please update immediately. Charlie to the rescue?
Date: 04 May 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
I loved the chapter. Edward realized that she needed him but she opened her eyes that maybe they could do this together. The burn was scary. Loved all the kissing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
& so the plot continues to thinken. The mysteries this story keep getting bigger & bigger.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't beleive Edward isn't following her. Good chapter though. The Adam attack wass freaky.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
I forgot ar Emmett and Rose too old for school in this story? Also, Lucas had to know the vamps could hear him, shouldn't he have been more shocked or cautious since Bella hadn't mentioned them to him previously. Great chapter. I guess the last thing I am worried about it Charlie having her committed. She seems like that wouldbe something that she could easily run from considering everything else going on with her. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Edward is loving this conversation. I wonder what he's going to have to say about Lucas let alone her meeting him later. On that note I wonder she's going to say about Lucas, if anything. Oh the rumors that will be flying about that little meeting, add on the fact that Bella left in the middle of class to meet him.
I don't think Charlie knows about Bella, not all the super natural stuff anyway.
Next chapter please, I look forward to this story being updated.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is my favorite chapter so far. IT is simply Bella. And the Edward. I like the thought of these two solidifying thier feelings (mutually) before the big challenge in teh story occurs. Great chatper.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seriously, that's why Edward was ignoring Bella all week. Because of what she told Charlie.
So, sedusing Bella huh? This sounds like fun but let's see where & how far this goes. I wonder what Edward is going say when Bella tells him about all her injuries.
I wonder what the story is on Mr. Mallory; that's a strange family.
So, next chapter please; I look forward to this story being posted.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
So that's who Etta was; her sister. I imagine the things Etta saw are similar to what Bella sees only Etta was a different level & Bella learned to stay quiet about what she saw. I wonder what method Bella tried.
So is Edward giving her the cold shoulder because she took off without a word or is it the same reason as in Twilight? He's trying to protect her. Also I'm gonna guess it Edward that she keeps feeling is there but when she looks nothing is there.
Im glad Charlie was so excepting. It was a really good excuse, at least I thought so.
next chapter please.
Date: 30 Mar 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
There were so many emotions in this chapter and you left it off with a bang. I hope thier is some sort of edward confrontation/explanation next chapter. Great job.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
It is starting to make a little more sense now. Keep going. I am very inerested in this all coming together.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 Bonus!
Your Bella is so burdened and dark. The only light - which she totally rejects - is edward. But since she is so familiar with the darkness she should be able to accept that her fate and happiness could be found in someone else who at least knows of the evils of the world. Her thoughts here are so desolate. Great job with inner Bella.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, so, damn that was crazy sick & cool. I wonder what Edward is going to say when they meet (probably in her room when she gets there or down the street she's currently walking).
So, psychic huh? I would of guessed Wiccan or something. That's cool though, not for Bella but I think it's cool.
Looking forward to your next post; read you later.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Very engaging to read
Date: 16 Mar 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
you have really upped the intrque this chapter. Lucas, scott, murder, and no edward. I am totally with you now, keep bringing it. great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder where she fell to?
This is not a story I've read before. This seems pretty original; the only thing similar ive read to come close to this story was a 2 part story on fanfiction that sadly wasn't finished. It was like it was called something like "Branded" or Idk. Good story, sad it wasn't finished. Oh well, I hope gets finished I really like this story, please don't stop writing!!!!
I look forward to more updates.
Read you later.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
O-Kay freaky, I wonder what it's going to take to get Edward back in good graces with Bella? Also what was leading her? A power inside her? The bones? Or someone else? I wonder Edward is following her.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
THIS IS GREAT I LOVE IT!
Date: 03 Mar 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok very weird discovery. Otherwise I like her. She is dark and true and so honest. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is turning into a pretty fun story. I like where this is going.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Okay I am so hooked with this story, I want to know what happens next.
Please tell me you update regularly?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes i update regularly, every week is my intention.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
She knows?! Didn't see that coming!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Damn that nightmare was creepy.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Does Jacob know about the wolves and vampire stuff already?
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Why is she running? Good start.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow what a opening!