Date: 29 May 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward should give her what she needs. Thanks, I love this story ;)
Date: 28 May 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Will she ever get over it?
Date: 28 May 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMGosh!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again SOON!!!!! You can not leave us hanging like this. We NEED to know what is happening. I am glad that Edward is not willing to give Bella up. He needs her and she NEEDS him.
Date: 28 May 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG and her parents think she asked for it .
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
POOR BELLA!!!!!! GOD HER FAMILY IS A BITCH AND TO HTINK THAT CHARLIE WOULD LET THOSE BASTARDS GET AWAY WITH RAPING HIS ONLY DAUGHTER IS DEPLORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ALL DESERVE TO GO ROT IN HELL!!!! I MEAN THAT'S HIS FREAKING DAUGHTER AND JUST BECASUE SHE HAS FANTASYS DOESN'T MEAN ANYTHING THAT DOESN'T MEAN SHE WANTED TO BE TAKEN AGAINST HER WILL BY SOMEONE SHE TRUSTED!!!!!!!!!!! AND HE'S A COP AND BECAUSE OF WHAT THOSE BASTARDS DID SHE CAN'T HAVE CHILDREN AND HER DAD DID NOTHING TO ARREST THEM FOR FUCKING RAPING HER!!!!!!!! ITS CALLED A FANTASY SHE DIDN'T GO TO JACOB AND SAY OH YEAH I WANT YOU TO DO THIS TO ME NO HE FORCIBLY HELD HER DOWN AND RAPED HER!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND TO THINK THAT HER PARENTS DON'T GIVE TWO SHITS ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TO EHR BECAUSE SHE FANTASIZED ABOUT IT IS FUCKING RIDICULOUS!!!!!!!! Sorry end rant but yeah no they better get what they deserve and end up in jail and Charlie and Renee better be with them for obstruction of justice or some shit I mean really that is your child and there you sit protecting her rapists because of something she wrote as a fantasy that no one was supposed to see no that's not right! But as long as jsutice is served and that they all die I'm fine! Update soon!!!!!!
Date: 28 May 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
don't let her go
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
i do not see how her parents would not stand by their daughter
what a shame
Date: 28 May 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMGosh! Poor Edward and poor Bella. That is just awful. I hope Edward makes them pay.
Date: 28 May 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can not believe that Renee said she did not have a daughter. That is just awful. Hope Edward gets his answers.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Go Edward!! Kill them all
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
just help the one you love
Date: 27 May 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
woot woot go Edward!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG! I don't want Edward to go to jail. He needs to accept Isabella unconditionally ;)
Date: 27 May 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Renee is a bitch
Date: 27 May 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
kill her parent also
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
man her parents are worthless
it isn't even worth edwards time or bellas she is better off without all those people
look forward to more
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
i am glad she is seeking help and talking
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
heartbreaking
so sad a friend would do that to another
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
what a bitch for a mom
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
charlie is being an ass
Date: 27 May 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
That witch deaer god
Date: 27 May 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ugh stupid swans !!!
Date: 26 May 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
love it want more please :)
Date: 26 May 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh, my! That's not going to make Edward happy.
Date: 26 May 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
How could her parents do that to her. Edward needs to stay out of jail so he cant kill her like he wants to.
Date: 26 May 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
Poor Bella. I hope she gets through this.
Date: 26 May 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
Master is amazing
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
loving this
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
can't wait intll next up date
Date: 26 May 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
Really liking this story! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 26 May 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
poor girl she is going through alot so glad she had him with her.
Date: 26 May 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 14 My Demons
Thanks! I love this story ;)
Date: 26 May 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella has been lucky to be surrounded by people who've been ale to read her so well.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?
vary good I like this alot
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2013 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! Great job on picking Aro.
Date: 18 May 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love it! Yjanks ;)
Date: 18 May 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
help her beleive in herself
Date: 18 May 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Truly loving this story. Unfortunately all I want is...more. Your fault for such a good story! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 17 May 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
LEt him Bella!!!
Date: 17 May 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am so glad that Bella is reacting positive to Edward!!!!! and to Jasper!!!!!!
Date: 17 May 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is such a good story. Edward is so loving to Bella, who craves it so much. I hope they go after those creeps and make them pay for hurting Bella.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh edddie you have to help her you and jasper
Date: 17 May 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella! I am glad Edward is there for her and will get her the help she needs. Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh eddie so cute do anyone else wont to kill jacob
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 17 May 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
This one was okayish
Author's Response:
thanks for being honnest
Date: 17 May 2013 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
bribbing us with a new chapter for reviews shame shame but i'll bite! poor bella those bastards better get sent to jail and charlie too for that matter!!!!!!! god he's an asshole!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOl, all the like and not so many reviews, Trying to find out if it is loved as much as the reviews I have say !
I would never with hold a chapter from my readers for not enough reviews !
Date: 17 May 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Jacob is an asshole! Oh did we say that already?
Author's Response:
Yes I agree !
Date: 17 May 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Please, I love this story! Want more, please! XOXO, Cheri
Author's Response:
Have you reviewed all chapters it will help get to 200 faster ! cause I want to post the next chapter tomorrow too !
Thanks for reading hun !
Date: 17 May 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait for chapter 13...I'm so excited to find out what will happen.
Author's Response:
Well if I hit 200 reviews I will post it tomorrow !
Date: 17 May 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh poor Bella
Author's Response:
yes she has had some very bad things happen to her, that know one should every have to endure !
Date: 17 May 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor girl makes me want to cry
Author's Response:
I do cry with every chapter I write for this story ! :(
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward should kill jake and the swans
Author's Response:
I very much agree !
Date: 17 May 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad that Bella feels safe with Edward. What did he think about her outfit that she had on while she was fixing him dinner, in the last chapter???
Author's Response:
I am glad u are enjoying this
Date: 17 May 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella!! Thank goodness Edward is there for her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 13 May 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad that Bella is talking to Jasper. I know that he can help her. She is being a little naughty!!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
I LIKE IT!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 04 May 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can't wait to find out what happens next
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love that Edward told her that he loves her. Glad she is talking to Jas.
Date: 04 May 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
It would be best for her to talk about it
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
you are doing great job in your writing don't stop and i hope you fell better soon
Date: 03 May 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
hope you can update again soon, I cant wait to read more.
Date: 22 Apr 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am kind of glad that they did not confront Bella about her past in front of everyone. Can't wait to see what else you have planned for this story.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love it! Awseome ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yes. I ;m so glad Bella has more time. Let her get a little more comfortable. Edward is so wonderful for actually caring , he made the right choice by waiting. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much I am glad you like it !
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Im glad that bella has a champion in edward and his family. Great chapter!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am glad they didnt have the intervention it would of been to much on her poor little body and mind.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it love thepictures great writing can't wait for more feel better.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much bri
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
ah yes you got that right on the money keep up your good work
Date: 15 Apr 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow lots of pics! I could certainly imagine what you were thinking.
Author's Response:
there will not be pictures always but I like pics
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is wonderful!! I hope things go well when they talk to Bella about what they know, Great chapter!
Date: 14 Apr 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Looks like fun to me ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
i love that you put picthcer with it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I am a visual reader I love pictures as long as there hot ; )
Date: 14 Apr 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
LOVED!!!!!!!!! the pictures!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
i like this story it's good though i do wish you'd use actual edward bella pictures but your choice. update soon!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love your story can't wait for more .good luck with your surgery ,my pray's are with you.
Date: 13 Apr 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
hugs hope all goes well with your surgury. awesome story so far.
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
Channeling Pretty Woman? I love it ;) Thanks!
Date: 13 Apr 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
he will get to the bottom and help her
Date: 13 Apr 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
This was tooooooo short. We need more!!!!!! I feel sorry for both Edward and Bella. Bella for what she went through and for Edward because he cares for her and I know he feel awful about what happened and that he wants to help Bella so much. Love Alice in this chapter. Can't wait to see what Bella's reaction is to Alice playing Barbie with her. lol.
Author's Response:
I will get them out as soon as I can !