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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 3:54 PM Title: Futuretake: A Thanksgiving in Progress

awesome story;) i've read it 3 times now!! and it doesn't deminish its appeal ;D

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 10:04 PM Title: Melting the Marshmallow Man

FINALLY!!! Love is spoken and what a wonderful birthday present, awwww!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 8:14 PM Title: Imprint?

of course Jake hadn't left in the morning like Bella had asked. of course Jake would imprint on a cat when he is a dog, makes perfect sense, heehee! Could not believe Edward threw away the napkin without even checking to see if anything was on it. I mean, come on, why wouldn't he have even checked looked at it first? oh wait, because he is a man! he must feel awful. I wonder if he tried to get access to garbage area in basement of apartment building to look threw trash and find that napkin? looks like he was trying to make it right with a new note, even though it isn't the same :/  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 6:06 PM Title: Sometimes You Have to Blow on It

Why on earth would you give a spare key to your crazy mother that lives in Jacksonville? Bella, Bella, Bella. at least the night ended well with Bella finally getting some action with Edward, and she got to tease him a little. so close to saying the L word, I wonder who will say it first? and how?  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 6:25 AM Title: Cougar Rawr

man, I am feeling cockblocked right now!! wtf is Renee doing with Jake, Charlie's best friend's kid, anyway? Her finger is just healing and now this, GAH!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:54 AM Title: What's New, Pussycat?

Tanya, Tanya, Tanya, gez! poor Bella, now she won't be able to use her hand for a few days :( at least Edward is there to take care of her. Renesmee? LOL  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 10:32 PM Title: Anticipation

I love beating guys at their own games LOL!! was definitely a fun evening at the Cullen home. an even better evening back at Edward's, YUM!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 9:50 PM Title: Show Me the Money

my family has learned to accept my sense of humor but I really have to tame it down at family functions, wish I could let it loose like that!!! Loved the teasing between Edward & Bella too  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 8:22 PM Title: Provoking the Precious

haha, I love teasing my husby too!! sounds like this dinner is gonna be fun though, can't wait :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Take a Hike

oh sweet Esme. I love all the movies references and I remember them all :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 6:22 PM Title: Operation!

TEN MILES??? I am surprised she could walk at all?? LMAO!!!! but with Edward there to inspire her inside, I guess it was worth it ;) nothing like Mom to interrupt, heehee  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:47 PM Title: Magnetic Junk

wow, Edward definitely has some guilt going on but that makes one part of our brooding Edward doesn't it? at least he is having some fun with Bella and that is really important, moving on and improving yourself. Bella handling it really well. Very well written!! now will Bella survive this bike ride?  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:19 PM Title: The Morning After

I was wondering after the restaurant when he didn't order wine with her. I thought maybe he was DD at first but after their date, it was getting obvious. Will he have a problem with Bella drinking? I mean she is a bartender? How will she handle it? That morning craziness... OMG, so hilarious!!!!!!!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 3:44 PM Title: Lucid Dreams

you would think the girls would have been happier LOL ;)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 7:54 AM Title: Shake and Bake

so Edward has more powers over Bella to get what he wants after she thought she was gonna get her way driving his car. at least Jake is gone. of course Em was making noise at graduation ceremony, so his style :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 7:31 AM Title: Graduation Presents

that was actually a pretty respectable drunk dial. poor Bella falling on her ass when trying to wake up Jake, ouch! love the surprise Edward showing up at her graduation, awwww  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 6:56 AM Title: The Money Shot

ugh, Jake is definitely pain in the ass!! but that drink, holy shit that was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 6:25 AM Title: Cat Scratches and Road Rage

OMG, that dream that was just cruel!! Both to Bella and all of us, MEAN, MEAN, MEAN!! Alice is a riot, and again, how is she knowing stuff about Bella hmmmm? Now what to say about Jake, GAH??  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:09 AM Title: Dyslexic Heart

oh, I agree, love this Tanya LOL! so Edward has secrets huh? don't we all... but what will his be? can't wait to find out. great first date & it isn't even officially over yet :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:41 AM Title: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter

damn, perfect start to their date! I gotta say, I thought Alice owned that dress shop the way she was acting with Bella, but that is just Alice. so how the heck does Edward know about 'Sex Hair?' and how did Alice just know that was the dress Bella would wear before she put it on? I know these are their talents in the books, but did I miss something in the first chapter? was Edward hiding around the corner & overheard a conversation or something? I am dying to know what is going on there!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:13 AM Title: That Was Unexpected

how the heck could he eat that much meat the day before a match?? or was it a pre-recorded event? that is crazy!! I am so happy they are going on a date tomorrow , can't wait :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 3:44 AM Title: The Meat Sweats

what a fabulous first chapter! think I am an addict already, thank goodness I know exactly where to get more to feed my new addiction LOL  Can't believe this is your first story in all these years, must have been bursting to break out! Looking forward to reading the rest of this story :) ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 7:15 AM Title: Tapioca is a Deal Breaker

So she is not pregers yet but the girls are trying lol.  Heidi better keep away

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 6:20 AM Title: In Which Charlie Redeems Himself

OMG I think things are changing in her body because she is pregers

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 4:55 AM Title: Glass Case of Emotion

How sweet Edward asked Charlie for Bella's hand.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:36 AM Title: Festival of Fire

Sounds like a great 4th to me lol.  I knew he just figured that she knew she was going with him silly man.  Love Charlie to dam funny.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 8:42 AM Title: Fun With Guns

Love it Edward got Charlie at his own game he had to of impressed him we know he impressed Bella lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 8:46 AM Title: True Love and Furrie Dreams

Now he has a very good memory of her bedroom lol.  Charlie is just testing him to make sure he is good enough for Bella.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 6:33 AM Title: It's a Peacock Thing

They have so much fun together love there banter.  Why has he not asked her to go with him to Hawii yet??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 5:13 AM Title: Come and Go as You Please

poor girl she get so worked up and the way her mind travels that shit is funny lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Edwina and Biff

wow what a great day

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 4:38 AM Title: Six Degrees of the Girls

Her overies want to get with it lol Bella is catching on

Reviewer: lucre Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2013 6:11 PM Title: Tapioca is a Deal Breaker

After that a/n, it would be just be TOO rude not to review *smirk* . Am actually enjoying the read so much that it makes me wonder why this is fanfic and not an original.. thanks! Its really sweet and so realistic. Am reliving my first love experience thru this, just the good bits tho

Reviewer: PrincessSlayer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 9:05 PM Title: The Meat Sweats

LOVED this story, you had me laughing so hard at times! Keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: silverelvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:16 AM Title: Futuretake: A Thanksgiving in Progress

Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: kellishines Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:13 AM Title: Futuretake: A Thanksgiving in Progress

"Sometimes it's when you think your manuscript is perfected that you get in trouble. A curve ball comes your way, and you've got to adapt...because life is a work in progress."
That's probably the most beautiful thing I've read. Love this story. I found myself laughing out loud with almost every chapter. It earned more than a few odd looks from my family. Thanks for a great read. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:28 PM Title: Melting the Marshmallow Man

lol that is to funny

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 6:39 PM Title: The Meat Sweats

Totally loving Emmett. Can't wait for more.

E/k

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:16 AM Title: Imprint?

Jake and the cat to funny lol.   Bella is so in love she needs to tell him he just told her.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 2:09 AM Title: Epilogue: The Precious Revealed

Love it!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 5:27 AM Title: You Don't Get Lei'd in Hawaii?

Loved it!

Reviewer: Twix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 6:55 PM Title: That Was Unexpected

I loved it then and I love it still.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 11:47 PM Title: Six Degrees of the Girls

great chapter, he wa breaking down with the baby making almost..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 12:33 AM Title: Imprint?

Oh that was jut to cute of him to do that for her, I loved the chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 8:38 AM Title: What's New, Pussycat?

Tanya is an evil bitch even as a cat lol.  The kitten is cute

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:38 AM Title: Anticipation

The girls are happy lol.  what a nice way to end the day ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 10:14 AM Title: Show Me the Money

I would have so much fun at that table lol.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 9:42 AM Title: Provoking the Precious

your not alone lol there is often a blue cloud surounding my husband.  I love the overies they need to do stand up ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:01 PM Title: Take a Hike

Love her overies lol

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:42 AM Title: What's New, Pussycat?

Love the story..

Reviewer: silverelvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 12:39 AM Title: The Meat Sweats

Ok. This story is really funny and I don't want to sound ungratful so just ignore my last review and update as soon as you can. I promise I won't spaz out again.  I can't wait though !

Reviewer: silverelvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 12:29 AM Title: Provoking the Precious

What,  nooooo? It can't be the last chapter?  You have to update immediately !!!!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 7:57 PM Title: Provoking the Precious

loved the chapter, her inner dialouge is so cute.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 9:05 AM Title: Operation!

They are having fun together getting to know each other every way now it is mom and dads turn to get to know her also.

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Date: 05 Feb 2013 8:31 AM Title: Magnetic Junk

I have been in recovery for over 20 years now and that is right if was not for the shit that I went through i would not be the person I am today.  Riding behind him sounds like fun times to me

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 7:58 AM Title: The Morning After

Ok that is workable so am I 

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Date: 05 Feb 2013 7:34 AM Title: Lucid Dreams

That was a great begining ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:09 AM Title: Shake and Bake

that went realy good I think he impressed Charlie

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Date: 05 Feb 2013 5:27 AM Title: Graduation Presents

Jake is going to get his ass kicked lol.  That is a nice suprise what will Charlie think about Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 4:10 AM Title: The Money Shot

That is to funny Mike is such an idiot lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 12:07 AM Title: Cat Scratches and Road Rage

I could use a cards lol  Alice is to funny

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 9:58 PM Title: Cat Scratches and Road Rage

Just had to look up the Road Rage cards. One word - AMAZING!!! I'm in the UK so might need to find some english ones or failing that make some of my own!!

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 9:57 PM Title: Operation!

Love, love, love this story! Look forward to more. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 7:52 PM Title: Dyslexic Heart

Tanya is a bitch to Bella even as a cat lol.  That is one hot date :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:40 PM Title: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter

thing are going very well ;)  Alice is so Alice love her

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:15 PM Title: The Meat Sweats

omg this is so wonderful ...i love this story I laughed my ass off for weeks when I read this the first time ...dint you win some award for having the funniest overies in fanfic...so lets read this again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:18 PM Title: That Was Unexpected

Emmett love him lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:04 PM Title: The Meat Sweats

lol I am loving it

Reviewer: Pjdb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:18 PM Title: Dyslexic Heart

Love Tanya the cat



Author's Response:

Thanks! I couldn't resist. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Reviewer: JillianS Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:24 AM Title: Cat Scratches and Road Rage

This is really good! I've been sitting here chortling away like a crazy person, now I really want to know what happens next. Write faster.

Author's Response:

I'll post chapters as fast as time allows - the story is complete, so hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks for the review, and glad you're enjoying the story.

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