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Reviewer: Just me Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

After it all comes 'out in the wash' so to speak, he will have retired, have had a shotgun wedding (even though he planned to ask her before she became pregnant), girlfriend passing out at the airport & in the loo at his retirement party, etc.  Most isn't public knowledge but in the public eye someone always knows or is willing to share information for the right price, so after the fact it could look like a case of "girlfriend forces his hand at retirement, et al"  Love that it isn't and love that it could look that way too!



Author's Response:

I think I got what ya mean now. You are the first person to mention seeing it like that.  I will be posting a new chapter soon. I sent it to my beta tonight. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Just me Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 28 Black and Blue

Well, it would seem to the outsider that he is retiring because he knocked up a semi-unhealthy person.  I wonder what the press would do with a situation like that outside of  fic!  Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, not quite sure I am understandong what you mean. Edward didn't even know that Bella was pregnant when he chose to leave baseball. besides that they haven't made any kind o fpublic startments reguarding the fact that she is.

So maybe if you explain a little I can understand where your coming from.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: NHSheridan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 29 Finding Balance In Life

I love your story. I hope you continue writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, and I am glad that you like the story so much. I am about halfway finished with the next chapter, and I also have another story that I am co-authoring with MY Bella called Worth The Burn.  When The Game That Changed It All is complete I also have another story that I will be owrking on. I don't have a title for it yet, but will post more information about it soon.

 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 The Rules Of The Game

So so far things are good, but I am worried about how the prologue went.  Please tell me there is a HEA??!! It is, after all, a Bella and Edward story right?  I am loving it so far, just nervous about how it started.



Author's Response:

Sorry it took me so long to respond to your review. I had a nasty case of some upper respiratory virus and was sick. Yes this is an Edward and Bella story and as far as I'm concerned it would be wrong for them to not have a HEA. So yes there will be one. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the rest of the story.

Reviewer: debbieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me

he must be coming home cuz he cant stand to be away from her.  It kills him not holding her in his arms at night.    Slo what if they were married and they had kids.. i know it would kill him for her to be the one in a clinic by herself with one of there kids. I just hope that it is a happy ending to this next chapter and not a tearfull one.   I guess i better get going to read the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Those are some of the reasons he is coming home. The next chapter won't end easily, but that damn prologue had to find its way into the story at some point. Beleive me it was as hard to write as it will be for you to read.  Look at it this way, not that we are to that point things can only get better. Thanks for the awesome review!!

Reviewer: debbieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 17 It's Me!

that was a cool chapter.. I am a big nascar fan.. I like kacey kahne.. my husband is a big earnhardt fan.. Did you by chance go to the race and meet jimmie?   it sounds like you did.. i just had to ask..  :)  lol    Great chapter cant wait to read more.. thanks



Author's Response:

Big Nascar fan here too!! Love Dale Jr as well and Jimmie Johnson is one of myfavs as well. My beta Hope4More loves Kasey to death. LOL I have been to the race and to the track, but unfortunaltely did not get to meet Jimmie. That would have been awesome. But everything I described about the museum and track are real.

Thanks again for the great review. They continue to put huge smiles on my face which is always encouragement to keep writing.

 

Reviewer: MightyAphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 29 Finding Balance In Life

Another fantastic chapter!  I think what happened to Jake is a good penalty from the team.  It was realistic, and personally, I would die if someone fined me that amount of money.  I am sure that Jake isn't done for just yet and something wicked will probably be coming this way :)  I look forward to the next chapters and especially seeing Alice be Alice for the wedding and parties!  I wish I had her energy.



Author's Response:

You are right!! Not quite done with Jake yet, but it will still be kept realistic. I couldn't imagine being fined that amount of money either.  Gosh I wish I had just half of Alice's energy. LOL

 

Thanks for the great review. I am glad you are continuing to enjoy the story. I am writing just as fast as I can to get the next chapter done.  The wedding is coming soon. Not this next chapter, but probably the one after that.

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 29 Finding Balance In Life

still loving the story!



Author's Response:

So glad that you are. Writing as fast as I can to get the next chapter posted.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 28 Black and Blue

i love this story!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you do!!!!   Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!

Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases

I found your story and I  am really enjoying it.. I feel there is a coum before the story ready to happen.. I hope that things stay the way they are for Bella and Edward.  Your a good writter.. I hope to read more from your if you write more..  Thanks for sharing your story..  debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for your compliments. As a writer it is always good to hear that our readers are enoying the story. I can't promise that is will be  sunshine and roses, for them but I can tell you that I am a sucker for a happy ending. So I hope that gets you through whatever they might have to endure.

I have another story that I am co-authoring with My Bella called Worth the Burn. It is pretty cool in my opinion. It is here and you can find it under my pen-name or hers. Then when The Game That Changed It all is complete I have a new story in the works and will have more on that later.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I look forward to hearing from you through the rest of the story.

 

Mary

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 28 Black and Blue

send jacob to the wolfs ! cant wait to read what you have in store for him !



Author's Response:

Jake is going to take a big hit to his ego.  Won't all happen immediately, but over the next couple of chapters it will all play out.

 

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!

Reviewer: MightyAphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 28 Black and Blue

YAY!!!  Oh I am so glad you posted this.  I have been checking daily to see that Bella and Jr. would be okay!  Please make sure to have Jacob's punishment really good.  I think maybe a "rehab" assignment down in AAA would be a good little ego crusher ;)



Author's Response:

Your reviews just make me smile for ear to ear!!!  So glad you love my story.  You must be reading my mind. A little time in the minors is just one of the things I have instore for him.   Be patient I am about to post the next chapter and it might seem at first that he is getting just a smack on the hand. But Edward's attorney is going to make Jake squirm just a bit for what he did.

I have another story that I am co-suthoring with My Bella and it is called Worth the Burn. I think you might really like it as well so check it out if you can.

 

Thanks bunches for reading and reviewing!!!

Mary

 

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 27 It All Comes Down To This

Great story - thanks!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 27 It All Comes Down To This

hot damn i cant believe it was a cliffy chapter cant wait to see what happens next ! love this story !



Author's Response:

You won't have to wait long. I just posted the new chapter. Hope it lives up to your expectations!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 

Reviewer: MightyAphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 27 It All Comes Down To This

Okay...I am not going to scream or throw anything at you, because I have faith that this is NOT going to be a big deal and that you ARE going to be posting a new chapter saying that stress caused this.  A few days of bedrest and Bella is going to be fine.  I will, however, say that I saw this coming and NOT COOL! Please fix it.  I can't stand for my heart to be broken.



Author's Response:

I would never break your heart or Edward and Bella's.  Glad you like the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Now hurry and go check out the new chapter!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 24 Spilling The Beans

Looks like they are moving on up!!  Did I mention I bought the house next to them.  I'll invite you over when I can.  LOL

 

Great update...again, but then again they all rock



Author's Response:

They rock caus eI got you to help me through it!!!n  Hey you got everything unpacked yet? I wanna come over with my binoculars and spiy on Eddie while he is out at the pool.  You can look too!! Yummy huh!!

 

OK, all caught up on your reviews here my dear. I can't thank you enough for taking the time to do that for me.!!!!  You are the best!!

Muah!!!!

 

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 23 Moving On And Reconnecting

Esme is here and the big showdown is next!!  Woot woot



Author's Response:

Yup, Esme is gonna figure out all their little secrets. Can't hide anything from her.  I wanna go house shopping with them.

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 22 Taking You Home

Thank goodness she got her shit together.  Him too.  We can't have two dumbasses trying to raise a baby.  Just wouldn't work.

They got engaged!  Yay



Author's Response:

No we can't have that, we'd have to raise it for them, and we have enough on our hands with the dumbasses we already are trying to raise. Not talking about our kids either. LOL

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 21 Used To Have It All Figured Out

Can I just say...Brook and Alice ROCK.  They have to, to deal with those two ra-tards.  Morons, idiotis...the list will go on.



Author's Response:

They do rock, although I have to say of the two, Brook i smy favorite!!  She will help Alice whip their asses into shape.

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 20 What Hurts The Most

Can we say...lack of communication!!  Uh oh.  What have they done?



Author's Response:

They opened that door an dlet drama move right in.  I tired to warm them , but they just wouldn't listen. Stubborn!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me

Here comes the drama!!!  Besides poor Lilly breaking her arm.  But love the cast, way to make Alice proud!



Author's Response:

Yes Auntie Alice will love the cast. Drama is knocking on their front door. Yikes!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 Come Sail Away

The vacation was awesome.  Can I go next time.  A little fun in the sun is just what the doctor ordered...Carlisle that is. :)



Author's Response:

Yes next time we are both going!!! Greece here we come!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 It's Me!

Yummy...a little Edward and Jimmy time!  My engine is roaring at the thought.  LOL  Poor Eddie...wanting a bambino of his own.  Just keep swimming, swimming, swimming.



Author's Response:

Yes Jimmie is quite yummy, but we both know that it's Mr Kasey and his candy Kahne that gets your motor running. Oh they are swimmimg, swimming, swimming!!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 16 Christmas And The Unexpected

I remember this chapter well.   Thank god it was a one time occurance for you.  However, it ended up turning out great.  Even with Tanya thrown in.  But that wasn't as bad as we thought.  Whew, dodged another foul ball. LOL



Author's Response:

I bet you do remember this chapter. What language was it I tried to write it in?  Maybe it was Ewok or somthing. LOL It wouldn't have turned out nearly as great if you hadn't been able to decipher my chicken scratch.   Hee Hee we are the only ones who know whose little test that was. LOL

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 Options

Poor Bella...all stressed out.  Edward has some tough decisions ahead.  Good luck padre



Author's Response:

Yes he does, and in the end it won't even matter.

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 Parents and Babies

Renee is a tiger.  Trying to get Edward to sink his claws, um sperm into her daughter.  LMAO.  Renee is funny.  Looks like Cam hit the target twice.  He shoots and he scores!!



Author's Response:

Oh yes, poor Bella, momma bear wants a grand cub to spoil. I don't think it will be long before Edward's little swimmers make it to the goal line. LOL 

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 13 Singing In The Rain

Love me some singing time.  Good song pics. Bonding with the tikes was too cute.



Author's Response:

Lets not forget that extra special shower that Max gave Uncle Eddie!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trick Or Treat

Love the prank.  However, I love Superman better!!  Red cape and all.



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella is a very lucky girl to have a red cape wearing Edward to save the day!!  She is lucky that someone I know was brilliant enough to come up with that idea!!  ;)

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 11 The Rules Of The Game

Halloween party on the horizon.  Visiting gun toting Charlie fast approaching...let the games begin.  LOL



Author's Response:

Think we should all run and hide now, before Emmett finds us!! 

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 Down and Out

Rundown...Eddie is injured.  (yes I know he hates the nickname, but he can't hear me.) :)  Bella talks smack to the nurse.  Should have stabbed her with a needle.  Then takes Eddie home to coddle him.  He gets an ingrown hair in his ass, over reacts...takes it out on Bella and she is now pedal to the metal gone!  Wowza



Author's Response:

Yes he does hate that nickname. but I won't tell him you said it. LOL Oh stabbing th enurse with a needle, ythat coul dhave been fun. Hmm, yes he did get a wild hair up his ass, remind you of anyone you know? Hint, I think he lives with you. LOL

Muah!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases

uh oh...eddie's hurt.  Brook is in town.  Yay me.   And they hit a home run.  I'm exhausted, anyone else?  Checks around the room.



Author's Response:

Hmm, That Brook friend of Bella's is something else isn't she!!   Yes home run, Edward scored!!  Geez I think I'm exhausted now too. Nap anyone?

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 Overtime

Such a gentleman.  She saw his house and spent the night.  Yay!



Author's Response:

Yes if only we all could be so lucky!!  Thanks BB

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 All Star Break

I loved how he was shocked to see her with his family.  She is blending nicely.  Now a couple of innocent dates...could there be more in the future?  Hmmm



Author's Response:

Yes she is fitting in quite well. As long as niether one of them do anything stupid like climb a tree I think they might just have an intersting future.

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 First Base

First she knocks his socks off with the good looks.  He is dreamy as well, then he smooches her in the doorway at the end of the night.  Swoon worthy I tell you!



Author's Response:

Ahh yes swooning we all would be if we could have our very own Cullen!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 5 Passed Ball

The tension is building between the two.  Rose and Em have a baby boy.  Ahhh.  Edward sent flowers.  Ahhh.  Bella is listening to baseball.  What???



Author's Response:

Seems, little Ms. Swan is quite smitten with a certain baseball player and can't stop thinking about him.

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 The Visiting Team

He's such a sweet guy.  Going to check up on Bella.  A concussion and a Cullen, not bad in a days' work.



Author's Response:

Thats the kind of job I want!! How about you?  ;)

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3 Foul Ball

Dun, dun, dun.  Who got hit by a foul ball?  Non other then Bella Freaking Swan!!  LOL  IF we all could be so lucky.  Will he autograph it for her?  She should at least get that out of the deal, rather then a concussion and a bump



Author's Response:

Oh, I think she will end up with a lot more than a bump on the head. Maybe some other kind of bump.LOL

 

Muah!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 Disabled List

Jacob Black will be a royal pain in my side.  OR thorn.  At least we have the Cullen boys to entertain us.  Bella not a baseball fan?  Hmmm.  :)



Author's Response:

Yes the dog needs to be nuetered!!  I think Bella wi change her tune about baseball real quick.   :)

 

Your the best!!

Reviewer: hope4more Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

And so begins the drama!!  Yay



Author's Response:

Yes it does. Any idea what is in store for our favorite couple?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 22 Taking You Home

aww im happy that they worked it out !!!



Author's Response:

I know I hate it when the angst is dragged out when I am reading a story, so I couldn't drag it out too long myself.  I will be posting the rest of the chapters I have completed tomorrow. 

 

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 20 What Hurts The Most

im crying now ... its soo sad she is so stubbared!



Author's Response:

Trust me, it was just as hard to write as is was for you to read it.

 

You might want to check out the other story I am co-authoring with My Bella.  It's called Worth The Burn, if you like The Game That Changed It All, then I think you will like it too.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 Foul Ball

Oh crap his foul ball knocked her out. I'm running to read the next chap to see what happens Lol

Author's Response:

Yep it did. But so worth it to meet Edward right? LOL

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 Disabled List

Aw so both Edward and Bella are lonely. I can't wait to see what kind of a connection these two will have when they do meet ;)

Author's Response:

I don't think you will be disappointed. :)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Ooh I'm liking this so far :)

I've been using FFn for over a year now and a lot of my favourite stories are being deleted and pulled from there. So I've stumbled over here as I don't want to start something new and have it pulled again. Also if you have a FFn account be careful as there is supposed to be fake emails going around from this guy named James, he's either sending the emails or has hacked into FFn system. Just be careful if you recieve anything from this guy ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the heads up on the fake emails. I do have a FFn acccount and have been posting over there first. But with all the crap going on wanted to post here as well so my readers would have a place to go is for whatever reason it gets pulled.

 

Glad you are enjoying the story so far. I have another story as well called Worth the Burn that I am co-author on with My Bella. She has benn post on FFn as well for a long time and has moved it here for same reason I have. So if you have time check it out. I know if yo like this you will like it as well.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: maggiejoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 All Star Break

so sweei............:)



Author's Response:

So glad you are still enjoying my little story. I have up through chapter 29 finished and hope to get the rest of them posted sometime this weekend. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 

EA

Reviewer: maggiejoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 Passed Ball

hey E, what's wrong with just asking the girl out for coffee or something!!!!!!!cheeez....:)



Author's Response:

You know Edward, always has to have a flair for the dramtic. Coffee would be too easy! LOL

Reviewer: maggiejoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 4 The Visiting Team

would take any kind of punishment to get to meet Edward



Author's Response:

I know so would I. The bump on the head would be so worth it!! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases

I love that this chapter has a little bit of everything - drama, fun times with friends, and sweet lovin'!



Author's Response:

Ahh, this chapter scared the crap out of me when I first wrote it. You know first love scene nerves. Glad disappoint!!

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 6 First Base

I loved the ball and how sweet Edward was on their "date."  The ending was perfect!



Author's Response:

Yes, but wouldn't any date with Edward be perfect? 

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 The Visiting Team

Lucky Bella! I think it's worth a concussion anyday to meet Edward, lol.



Author's Response:

Yep I agree completely, I would take the concussion too!!

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 Foul Ball

I'm really liking this so far, although in my head Edward plays for the Cubs(once a Cubbie fan, always a Cubbie fan;)) 



Author's Response:

So glad that you are liking it. Yeah I get the once a CUbbie fan always a Cubbie fan, it's like that for us Cardinal fans too!  That is the one thing Chicago and St. Louis has in common, very devoted and die hard baseball fans.  Imagine how I felt when long time Cardinals player Jim Edmonds came to play for the Cubs? He is my all time favoirte. But I still cheered for him. Shhh don't tell my husband he might disown me. LOL

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 Down and Out

man i would be pissed too .... but at least they didnt make it worse with yelling at eachother !



Author's Response:

HI, So glad you are enjoying the story so far. I see you have come to this website for the same reason I did. All the crap going down over at the other place.  I thought I betted have a backup plan jus tincase. 

 

I am post some more chapters today so keep an eye out for them. Thanks for reading and I look forward to seeing what you think of the rest.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 5 Passed Ball

i love reading the baseball stories ! great so far



Author's Response:

I love the baseball stories too. If you read over at FF let me know I can tell you about a couple of others that are really good.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: maggiejoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

why?????????.... nicely written, guess I'll just have to read to find out....:)



Author's Response:

Of course you must read to find out why!!   So glad that you like it. Hope you enjoy the rest.

Thanks for reading and look forward to hearing your thoughts on the rest.

 

EA

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