Date: 04 Feb 2014 2:10 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome!!! Excellent read!!! Thank you for sharing your talent! I saw you only have 1 story posted her, but if you have them on other sites, please let me know. I dont think you can private messenger people on TWCS, but you can on ffn. I'm under same pen name-so contact me there or reply to this review! I'd LOVE to read more of your stuf!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi
THank you for liking the story. I have another story - Picture of Love. That used to be here but I removed it as someone contacted me about publishing it and I had to take it down. If you are interested, PM me and I can advice you on where to purchase the copy
Date: 04 Feb 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 81 till Chapter 84
So good!!! Matt=evil!!! I'm surprised they just "let it go"!!! I hope that doesn't come back to bite them!
Glad they got married too. Now if they can just get a baby!!! So sad she lost it. :(
Date: 03 Feb 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 71 till Chapter 80
Her secret was as I suspected. Now Matt on the other hand...wow! Heartless jerk. I figured out who the "assailant" was too. I'm not quite certain of the motivation on Matt's part. What's up with Rachel?
So good!!! :)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 61 till Chapter 70
What could Analeigh's secret be??? I had a thought..what if Ryan is Matt's son???? :p
Glad Jamie and Analeigh worked their stuff out and Ryan is with them.
Bottom line: I don't trust Matt! ;)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 51 till Chapter 60
Lots happening in this chapter!! Matt's outburst-not sure what to think abt that. And the kiss. And the stranger's thoughts in italics. All strange things. I didn't think the break in was random. Why take the necklace? What semblance did it have to anything??? I'm glad Katherine is on alert, but is she for Matt as well or just Jamie? Do the police know more and just aren't telling her? I dont think Matt is innocent totally either.
Great story!!! Thx!!! :)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 46 till Chapter 50
What is Matt's agenda?? I can't tell. Is there more than meets the eye between Matt and Jamie???
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 41 till Chapter 45
I wondered abt contraception. I wonder if Jamie knows she's not on anything??? Will anything -good or bad - come from this????
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 31 till Chapter 40
Ok-I had it wrong. I was thinking Matt and Jamie were "roommates" in jail! And then I thought they were both male prostitutes. But I did suspect that Jamie spent time in jail and probably for murder. So far, I haven't of anything to warrant Jamie's reason for his "dark and evil past". Nor analeigh's secret. ??? :)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 26 till Chapter 30
The plot thickens!!! :)
*so many questions!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21 till Chapter 25
I caught the "another murder"!!! I figured that's what was in the past. Surprised abt Ryan tho. I wonder what's going on between Matt and Jamie and which one, if not both, are evil/bad???
Thx! :)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16 till Chapter 20
Matt returns!! And the plot thickens! What happened during those missing years. Is that why matt could never meet Analeigh
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 to Chapter 15
Well...concerned for Analeigh on a few things. 1). Her job-while I don't get the big deal as he has been released from the hospital and he isn't going back to see her, I'm worried she's too trusting of her coworkers and will get burned. 2). If Jamie has had 3 separate attacks on him, I'm worried-if it's the same person doing the attacks-they will target Analeigh now. 3). I get why she is not sharing info with Katherine, but I'm worried for her. The more Katherine talked, the more I wonder about Jamie. Is he on the up and up???
Awesome!!! Thx!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:04 AM Title: Prologue and Chapter 1 - 5
Hmmmm. Matt or Jamie? My vote is for Jamie!! I certainly would not have been as forgiving of Matt--I would have been on the phone to him screaming and yelling!!! :p Tho after 10yrs of not showing up, I think I might see the writing on the wall! Lol
*I'm guessing you are writing Aussie English. I'm American English, and while the queen's English is different, I didn't find it as confusing as Aussie English. :) However, I am enjoying learning the new words, etc, and I am getting more accustomed to reading it!
Thx! Great story!!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 to 10
I love this story!!! Only my 2nd original fic read on TWCS I have only read twilight and fifty shades fanfic for several years, but I'm really glad I ventured out to original fiction! Thx for sharing your talent!