Date: 28 Oct 2022 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. Exactly as it should have gone! A few of the lines reminded me so much of ficlit78's Out with the New, In with the Old. You do a great job of capturing their personalities, especially Eric's, both with the interactions and his inner monologue. I've never seen this scene "fixed" and I will always enjoy this episode more thinking of this far superior turn of events!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just love this, short and sweet, with a promise of what will come.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Totally agree. Alcide and Sookie??? *shudder* and Ewwwwwwwww! Laughed so hard when she up-chucked on him. Hehe! He sooooo deserved it. Taking advantage of a drunk woman. What a gentlemen!
Great one shot. A much better version of the scene from hell...
Date: 11 Feb 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this one-shot. Your story was recommended on the Ericizmine Bratpack FB page. I can't wait to read your other WIP....
Pat
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm a baby to FF writing so your review means the world. That is so amazing that you guys are enjoying my fic. I'm actually a member of the Bratpack, I must have misssed that post. Do you have the link so I can thank them?
Warm wishes
TJ
Date: 10 Feb 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Now THAT is how it should have gone. I HATE the mancrush AB has on Scumbill. Scumbill should not even be on the radar after all the lying and betraying he's done.
Welcome to the TWCS family!!! We need more SVM here!!!!