[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
The local MC could have used another back-up or three. And Bella is already getting mixed up in the local industry? Why not. It can't be too much of a secret.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Something not right with the books at CaraCara! Surely not.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have not encountered an uncultured Esme. Most interesting.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2013 8:18 PM Title: Prologue
Returning home with a secret and a child to a place with memories and people to remind you of the past may be difficult if your goal is to escape to a new life.
Date: 03 Apr 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it! Can't wait for another chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Shit's getting intense now!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Esme and Vickie are really getting on my nerves. Edward really needs to put his foot down. I mean damn, he is the leader. And I just wish Bella would open up to him. But I really do like this story, I'm just impatient for the lovin to start!
Date: 22 Mar 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG - the next chapter is going to be just explosice isn't it. Great Great Great chapter. Eay to rachet up the action and I really don't like mama bear or the drug addict - but I am baffled by the sonogram - whose?
Date: 22 Mar 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Is Maddie Edwards???
Date: 22 Mar 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 22 Mar 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm hooked!!! Esme makes me want to spit nails...and Vicky...what can I say about that dumb ass that hasn't already been said. I hate that Edward is married to her! This story is so good...and it's getting getting even better. You've done a great job developing your characters and keeping it real. These people have flaws and have made big mistakes along the way...I can't wait to find out how they deal with the consequences...I'm in!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
WOW great ch. Sorry about your loss, I had that happen last year and it's really rattles your whole life. Writting just seems impossible when things are our of sorts.
Take care.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Mar 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
So sorry about your loss. No rush on updates. Obviously take all the time you need. Loved the chapter. I'm glad Edward is going to get involved. She needs all the help she can get!
Date: 22 Mar 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
dun dun dun! Again! Argh! hehe
Date: 22 Mar 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
lies and half truths you would think it was Vicky or Esme.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
she has to do this right. Talk to security at the hospital. Nah she talks to motorcycle people. Comeon as a doctor not only is her safety important but the staff and the patients at the hospital. .. sigh.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Someone is after Bella. The club has to move the guns before the cops catch them. Esme is interfereing in Edward's life because she hates Bella. did I miss something?
Date: 22 Mar 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
well, that went well.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ooooh more please!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
He is getting too close now
Date: 22 Mar 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Maddie is too cute. Ugh for Vicky and Esme hanging round. uh oh who is watching M at the end???
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
getting very interesting
Date: 20 Feb 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Esme and Vickie are terrible but Edward seems to on to them. I wonder who's ultrasound it was. Is Bella going to fill Edward in now that she recieved the roses and note? Great story. Always look forward to updates. Thank you!!
Date: 20 Feb 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
lookingforwardto more
Date: 19 Feb 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh Esme and Vickie are really disgusting. hmm now whose ultrasound is that?
EEk for roses.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ooh cool cliffhanger. Very much looking forward to reading future chapters.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
You have got me hooked like a fish. Nice complexities in your plot.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking fowrward to more
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is so freaking good makes me miss season 1 of SOA and wanting more Edward and Bella all at the same time! LoL seriously love the story
Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
hmm thisgets more and more interesting. now who trashed the house? Vickie and Esme? or b's stalker. hmmm
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Whew! Glad Red is okay. And it was a dumb fight but so necessary!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no! Don't let Red die!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ugh, I just want to throttle Esme!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
She's not ridiculous, married is married!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Esme is a misguided bitch, but at least we get some of her motivation now. And that Maddie is too cute!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Whoa! Can't wait for Bella to fix him up!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great Chapter!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Interesting
Date: 12 Feb 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella did have a very shitty day!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.......
Date: 11 Feb 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to more
Date: 11 Feb 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter please update soon
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
he is alluding the question, why did she leave him 10yrs ago.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
im so glad that Red is alive, i hope the doctor visit goes well. excited to see what happens next!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
aww poor red. Hope Jazz and Peter can watch out for her. aww poor sad Maddie.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Noooooooooooo!!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
This story just keeps getting better and better...can't wait for the next update...
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
love it update soon
Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit not the doggie!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well, you certinaly know how to leave a person hanging and wating more!
I hope someone can get Red out! Love how she is so protective of Maddie, by the way!
So excited for the next chapter and to see where the rest of the story takes us! :)
Date: 10 Feb 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
looking forard to more
Date: 09 Feb 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Garrett is stupid to try and hide it.
ROFL for messed up Amish kids.
Wanna smack Esme for lying to E about that skank. grrr I hate Esme sooooooo much. noooo no Tricky Vicky getting back in your head and heart.
Ah so she's telling P and J huh? hmm fireworks? I bet not. Jazz isnt too happy about Jake either huh? He's a cop Bella, a simlpe background check and he's found you. Trying to hide from a cop while still being in public eye is next to impossible. Damn fireworks my arse. Damn.
Oh No not Red?!?!?!
Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh no not good at what is edward gonna do?
Date: 09 Feb 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
He did it! Save the dog!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
I cannot even watch Dumbo, I cry too hard to hear what is being said. But I cry just as hard when hearing the song in Beaches.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think Esme had something to do with Charlie's death
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Feb 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Esme needs to go down. Dont like her at all. The San Fran thing has me guessing like crazy!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Cant blame B for pulling back. Married is Married.
Naughty Jazz.
Cohn has a wife huh? what is his real story I wonder.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really not liking Esme. glad B stood up to her a little bit at least. Poor little Maddie too.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmmm Did B say she was in San Fran? why is no one connecting this San Fran supposed ATF guy to it? WAYYY to convenient he shows when she does.
Aww poor E.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
ewww Skankya putting her naked arse on his bike??? need bleach for disease. Damn Esme is gonna get someone hurt or killed with her nosy self.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm Laurant is going to be trouble I think. Em is so cute. I like this Nice Rose. Wanna hear this Lauren/San Francisco back story.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm Guessing Carmen is not on the up and up? ewww skankya. Esme I wanna punch in the face.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Esme is a bitch!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
How did I get so behind on this? Has TWCS had problems
Author's Response:
Yes, but the admins have been helpful in getting it straight. The updates were going to those that favorited, but not showing under most recent. Thanks for reading and reveiwing! I really appreciate it!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
oooh b staying in touch w rose isn't going to go over well.
wonder what happened besides Charlie dying.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
ugh. skanky Vickyis gonna pay for that lie I think.
Maddie is cute.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok alreadyhating esme.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:23 AM Title: Prologue
great start. can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
It's Bella's excuse and a damn good one to boot
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
I've never seen SOA but I'm enjoying this story. Wish Esme was a little nicer, more herself, but it's good drama I guess.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
I thought Esme had something to do with Bella leaving. well I will have to go back and read again. amazing story
Author's Response:
I think what you're thinking of is when Bella mentions the awful things Esme said to her before she left. Esme isn't the reason she left, but her behavior didn't help. There's is a love/hate relationship and more will be revealed as we go!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Janie
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to more
Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Feb 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward better not do anything with that skank! More soon please!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 02 Feb 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
So Esme is behind everything that happened to these two, can not wait till they finally talk and everything comes out.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love Edward and Maddie together, so cute!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love SoA and I love Twilight so your infusion of the two has me hooked on this story already. I can't wait to see how Edward responds to the Kohn issue and the reason Bella really came back. I'm also interested in finding out how Bella ended up with Lauren's daughter.
More soon please!!!!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Feb 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Very intriguing
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
That Maddie is too cute!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love mean Esme!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:56 PM Title: Prologue
Very interesting