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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is in the dog house.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Edward will be seeing her soon

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh no & she has a kid with her?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 5:11 AM Title: Prologue

I'm very intrigued!

Reviewer: Belighted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hooray! You are back and plus one, congrats! I did re-read from the beginning, but the story came back to me quickly. I can't wait to see what's next! Thanks for writing and sharing!
Annie B

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more 😍

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am truly enjoying this story and hope you update ASAP! READ YOU SOON. 

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 20

For a sec I thought you just forgot about this story or just stopped it. Thank god you didn't, thanks to this story I have now started watching SOB. I wanted to see why you picked it and from what I have seen from Jax's mostly (WOW by the way LOL) and the story overall I totally get it. I just hope you won't kill off Bella. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 9:36 PM Title: Prologue

Hmmm!! I look forward to reading : )

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow this Esme, not the usual "Esme".  What on earth did Bella do to get her to hate her this much?

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

I don't trust the fed guy. Thank you for keeping it exciting . Love love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love Edward and Bella banter. Great chapter. Thank you

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hope Red is okay. Glad Bella open up to Jasper. Great story,

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love love Esme character 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Omg! Love your story glad your back,can not wait for more.

Reviewer: Frosticles Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 20

Really well written, worth the wait, but could the next chapter br soon please?  :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 20

If I understand your a/n at the top, congratulations on your new addition.

I was so excited and surprised to receive this update. This is the 1st one I've gotten since chapter 15.

I did reread this from the beginning. I glad things are moving along.

Wouldn't there have been a date or name on the ultrasound picture?

Damn, as if there's not enough going on with Bella, there two crazy bitches & a dillusional mother to contend with.

I bet Alice overheard something at work to pass onto Jasper.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

Glad to see an update! I missed this story! ;) 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved it! glad to know more on her. cant wait to read more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Bella

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

Okay, I don't know everything that went on in the past but given her personal life I think she'd be better off running as far away from Edward as possible. He married, has a possessive, troll for a mother and he's too shady. I'm not sure if I trust him.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

When they finally get rid of Marcus/James, they need to paint that stupid police precinct in a very bad light with the media.   How did the gun not have his prints?  was he wearing gloves that I missed.   Run a DNA on the dogs mouth.

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 19

Soon....I hope!!! Love it!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 19

Omg I could not stop reading this story I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ok I am really starting to hate Esme, talk about bitch. 

Reviewer: MovieMoments Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks, love!

Reviewer: lissagirl26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

Please please update again as soon as you can your killing me here! Don't leave this amazing fic off! Your an amazing writer I can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love it!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

Love the story.  So very different than any others I've read.  Really looking forward to lots more~

Catherine

(shewoolf)

Reviewer: luvtwilight72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

I jut started reading this story today and i am addicted!! This a refreshing new plot and i love your Edward;)  i apologize for not reviewing every chapter but i just got sucked in and kept pushing next!  Looking forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: mebk03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

So am I reading to much into your chapter by assuming Carlise and Esme had something to do with Charlie's death?

 

Love the story so far.  Got all caught up today and can't wait for the next chapter.

 

Thanks for sharing......

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

And then.....

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 19

I get so excited whenever I get an update for this. I admit I wish they came quicker, but I'll take what I can get. Thank you for the refresher in the beginning. It saved me from going back to read the prior chapter.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

OMG  cant believe you left it there.  You are killing me.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love this twisty turny story.  Keep it up.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:31 AM Title: Outtake 1

I'd wanna kick Jake's arse too.   What a jerk

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 9:00 AM Title: Outtake 1

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 2:38 AM Title: Outtake 1

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 9:47 PM Title: Outtake 1

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 9:44 PM Title: Outtake 1

Eek! I can get the reason for tension and animosity. Thanks for the outtake. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 8:29 PM Title: Outtake 1

I honestly don't blame Edward for being mad because more often than not, a kiss usually leads to other things. Bella's lucky that he believed that nothing else happened, because most guys wouldn't have.

Bella failed to realize that whether she wanted Jacob to kiss her or not, the point of the matter is the fact that she kept putting herself in that position.

Just because your dad is friends with someone doesn't mean you have to tag along, or befriend them as well, especially when you have a boyfriend that you supposedly love & respect, and you know that this one wants to be more than friends! I'm sure that if Bella would've told her dad what Jacob did, he wouldn't have expected her to be friends with him anymore.

With the way that Jacob was acting at that time, I would've been concerned that he might be the type to force himself on Bella, and then claim she "wanted" it, and wanted him, like he delusionally, yet obviously thought at that time.

I also agree with Edward 100% when he tried to get Bella to understand where he's coming from by hypothetically putting her in his place, asking how she would feel if he were to hang out all of the time as "friends" with other girls, especially ones that were known to like him in more than a friendly way. As you can see, she didn't like it one bit, so how did she think Edward felt when she was actually doing it all of the time?! 

And I must say that while Edward seemed very loving, devoted, & attentive, Bella seemed to be a bit of a cold fish, as well as selfish at that time, & was giving off that confused, playing both sides of the fence type vibe that a lot of teenage girls will unfortunately do between two guys, causing trouble. 

Not to mention that she considered being dishonest about what happened with Jacob. It would make me wonder what else she might be hiding. So considering Edward's temper, & who he is/his family is, I think he took it fairly well - better than most guys would've.

On another, yet related note, I understand Bella was hurt over her dad, & that she wanted to go off to attend college, & make something of herself.

However, I think that she totally went about it the WRONG way, which again, showed her selfish, inconsiderate nature, especially where Edward seemed to be concerned.

As much as he truly loved her, he would've never held her back, and would've probably came along, or done whatever she wanted, but instead, she chose to hurt him terribly, for no real good reason!

Besides her career, what did leaving & cutting almost everyone out of her life really accomplish?

I'm sure it hurt Edward even more to find out that one of the few people that Bella kept in contact with was Jacob of all people!

Now she's back, but with a ton of baggage, a kid, & unresolved feelings on both parts, on top of wanting their help. I hope she realizes what a big part she played in all of this chaos, and that most of it IS her fault.

If I were Edward, I'd tread very carefully because Bella seems to be the flighty sort, and he might get hurt again.

Although I don't care for Esme at all...she's a total bitch, and I think that she goes about things completely the wrong way - very childishly for a woman of her age, I can however understand her as a mother wanting to protect her son, no matter how old he is, from Bella, who had hurt & betrayed him so much in the past. Not to mention that she doesn't know the whole story behind Bella's kid, and that it's not biologically hers.

Before I go, a few quick questions I've been meaning to ask - a little off subject here...but what ever happened the night that Edward rode Tanya home from her "work" on his bike, a few chapters back? I hope that he didn't do anything with that nasty, diseased skank! I don't think she even washed after filming her porn, before Edward picked her up. So gross! It's bad enough that he was married to that other crack whore Vicky! What the hell was he thinking marrying her, anyway?! LOL

Looking forward to the next chapter of this great story! ;)         

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 6:18 PM Title: Outtake 1

I understand now why Bella staying in contact with Jacob was a hit to the gut.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'd be willing to bet just about any amount that either: 1) someone witnessed their intimate moment, 2) one or more people will cause Bella harm, either physically, emotionally or mentally, 3) Tanya's going to join forces with Esme (& Victoria) or Bella's stalker.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

You're back...yay!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

loved this

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yes but we have Vicky and Esme to contend with.. Esme being the worst.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm thinking that the ultrasound picture was possibly Bella's - that not only was she beaten, but also raped by that psycho ATF guy & wound up pregnant. If this is the case, I hope that she can still have babies of her own...hopefully with Edward in the future.

I also wanted to comment on what an absolute bitch that I think Esme is. Vicky is just a follower, but still a pain in the ass. Why the hell did Edward even marry her?  Tanya will probably cause trouble later, as well. The odds sure seem stacked against B&E. :(

And what the deal with Renee? She sounds like she could be trouble, too.

Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)

 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yeah. Welcome back. I am anxious to hear the rest of Bella's story but the glimpses into other pov's was good too. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

His not divorcing Vicki, what was said..

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

Cant wait to read more. Been missing ur updates....

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Missed you!!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 18

So much still doing on. Hopefully they can sort it out when they chat. E is definitely serious about Bella. Thanks for the update!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Esme is such a pain.   Vickie needs to just disappear. 

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hi! love this chapter and was so glad to see you were able to update.. looking forward to more.. Please try to update again soon.. loving this sotriy and  cant wait to see what will be happening! thanks

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 18

Still someone needs to check Esme......

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

Skanya and Vicky are both pathetic.   Poor Billy

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG! love your story

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

Still trying to figure out how what's going on with everybody all ties in together.......... I can't wait to see what Tanya thinks will get Edward's attention. Also I hope Esme's B/S catches up with her soon, I can't stand her ass

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

another or the same?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

I liked all the different pov's. it helped really move things along. It also made me have like 800 more questions. I can't wait until you start answering things for us. Great job. 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:08 PM Title: Prologue

I missed this chapter, so glad you are getting back to it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for the update! Even though I love Edward and Bella, it's nice to hear from the other characters. Maddie is so cute! Ugh Edward's interactions with her melt my heart! Thanks again!

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

OH MY!!!!!! Doesnt sound good! Really hope Edward and Bella can work through their problems. Kinda seems like they are starting too..  thanks for the update really looking forward to more! Hope it will be soon?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

:) love this

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ooo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

oh my

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 3:42 PM Title: Prologue

Please update soon!! looking for more!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Not only am I intrigued with hearing B's story but also what's going on with Esme & her plans with Tanya?

This chapter turned out well. Looking forward to future updates. I'm just glad it wasn't abandoned.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love your story ,can't wait for more. Thank You for writting this story its great.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

That was the best ch yet.

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Excited to see an alert in my inbox. So happy she finally decided to tell Edward. He needed to know. Feel so bad for Bell and Maddie. Can't wait to hear more of her story. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Please update soon!!!!

Enjoyed reading and looking forward to what happenings next!

Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) loved this

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor B.  Hope E and all help watch out even more. 

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Who the stalker?

Reviewer: natalie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

congrats on your nomination. good luck!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great update. I am glad she is starting to let Edward in. 

Reviewer: smoky jo Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

I think she's gonna tell Carlisle and I think esme is a control freak  great story 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

I want in on the deets of Charlies death.

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

She really needs to spill about her situation...

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

I think Esme wants Bella gone because she knows who killed Charlie...It is getting interesting!! Can't wait to find out what happens next...

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:04 PM Title: Prologue

I love your story. I read it all in one go and am now incredibly frustrated because it seems to be updated at long intervals.

However, I will wait and hope for a speedy update.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 15

Everyone knows Bella's return to Forks was not for career advancement. She is so flighty as to disappear, remain silent for 10 years, and then pop up with a child. Mighty strange, and women sometime run from abusive men.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

White Roses must be from the evil, dog hurting, stalker. Well, now Bella knows he is around.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

I can't think of a Tyler character who wasn't a nuisance. Hope this Tyler is smart enough to check out Cohn.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

So many misdirections and incomplete clues. Can't wait to read on!

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bella has too many secrets for me to guess who she can and will trust. Esme also has a lifetime of secrets and many must concern her son and Bella. I do not envy her position relative to her husband and son. She must be constantly fearful.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

For me, Bella is simply behaving as a professional should. Let Edward complete his divorce and come calling. Agent Cohn Doesn't seem thrilled with his marital situation.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

I shielded my children from the Disney terror provoking shows. My sister was absolutely traumatized in the 1950's. We took the kids to Disney World, and they saw the delight, not the horror and confusion. With a Father in a dangerous profession, and with knowledge of the MC's business and Edward's connection, Bella has dealt with death and probable injury to those around her all her life. The guy shadowing her must be a monster to push her back to living with the death of her Father daily.

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