Date: 27 May 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is in the dog house.
Date: 27 May 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward will be seeing her soon
Date: 27 May 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh no & she has a kid with her?
Date: 14 May 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hooray! You are back and plus one, congrats! I did re-read from the beginning, but the story came back to me quickly. I can't wait to see what's next! Thanks for writing and sharing!
Annie B
Date: 08 May 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 08 May 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am truly enjoying this story and hope you update ASAP! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 07 May 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
For a sec I thought you just forgot about this story or just stopped it. Thank god you didn't, thanks to this story I have now started watching SOB. I wanted to see why you picked it and from what I have seen from Jax's mostly (WOW by the way LOL) and the story overall I totally get it. I just hope you won't kill off Bella. I can't wait for more.
Date: 06 May 2015 9:36 PM Title: Prologue
Hmmm!! I look forward to reading : )
Date: 06 May 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow this Esme, not the usual "Esme". What on earth did Bella do to get her to hate her this much?
Date: 06 May 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't trust the fed guy. Thank you for keeping it exciting . Love love this story
Date: 06 May 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love Edward and Bella banter. Great chapter. Thank you
Date: 06 May 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hope Red is okay. Glad Bella open up to Jasper. Great story,
Date: 06 May 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love love Esme character
Date: 05 May 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Omg! Love your story glad your back,can not wait for more.
Date: 05 May 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
Really well written, worth the wait, but could the next chapter br soon please? :)
Date: 05 May 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
If I understand your a/n at the top, congratulations on your new addition.
I was so excited and surprised to receive this update. This is the 1st one I've gotten since chapter 15.
I did reread this from the beginning. I glad things are moving along.
Wouldn't there have been a date or name on the ultrasound picture?
Damn, as if there's not enough going on with Bella, there two crazy bitches & a dillusional mother to contend with.
I bet Alice overheard something at work to pass onto Jasper.
Looking forward to the next update.
Thank you.
Date: 05 May 2015 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Glad to see an update! I missed this story! ;)
Date: 05 May 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
loved it! glad to know more on her. cant wait to read more
Date: 04 May 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Okay, I don't know everything that went on in the past but given her personal life I think she'd be better off running as far away from Edward as possible. He married, has a possessive, troll for a mother and he's too shady. I'm not sure if I trust him.
Date: 04 May 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
When they finally get rid of Marcus/James, they need to paint that stupid police precinct in a very bad light with the media. How did the gun not have his prints? was he wearing gloves that I missed. Run a DNA on the dogs mouth.
Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Soon....I hope!!! Love it!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Omg I could not stop reading this story I hope you update soon!
Date: 28 Dec 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ok I am really starting to hate Esme, talk about bitch.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks, love!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Please please update again as soon as you can your killing me here! Don't leave this amazing fic off! Your an amazing writer I can't wait to see more!
Date: 26 Nov 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love the story. So very different than any others I've read. Really looking forward to lots more~
Catherine
(shewoolf)
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
I jut started reading this story today and i am addicted!! This a refreshing new plot and i love your Edward;) i apologize for not reviewing every chapter but i just got sucked in and kept pushing next! Looking forward to your next update.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
So am I reading to much into your chapter by assuming Carlise and Esme had something to do with Charlie's death?
Love the story so far. Got all caught up today and can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing......
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
I get so excited whenever I get an update for this. I admit I wish they came quicker, but I'll take what I can get. Thank you for the refresher in the beginning. It saved me from going back to read the prior chapter.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG cant believe you left it there. You are killing me.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love this twisty turny story. Keep it up.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:31 AM Title: Outtake 1
I'd wanna kick Jake's arse too. What a jerk
Date: 04 Sep 2013 2:38 AM Title: Outtake 1
looking forward to more
Date: 03 Sep 2013 9:44 PM Title: Outtake 1
Eek! I can get the reason for tension and animosity. Thanks for the outtake. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03 Sep 2013 8:29 PM Title: Outtake 1
I honestly don't blame Edward for being mad because more often than not, a kiss usually leads to other things. Bella's lucky that he believed that nothing else happened, because most guys wouldn't have.
Bella failed to realize that whether she wanted Jacob to kiss her or not, the point of the matter is the fact that she kept putting herself in that position.
Just because your dad is friends with someone doesn't mean you have to tag along, or befriend them as well, especially when you have a boyfriend that you supposedly love & respect, and you know that this one wants to be more than friends! I'm sure that if Bella would've told her dad what Jacob did, he wouldn't have expected her to be friends with him anymore.
With the way that Jacob was acting at that time, I would've been concerned that he might be the type to force himself on Bella, and then claim she "wanted" it, and wanted him, like he delusionally, yet obviously thought at that time.
I also agree with Edward 100% when he tried to get Bella to understand where he's coming from by hypothetically putting her in his place, asking how she would feel if he were to hang out all of the time as "friends" with other girls, especially ones that were known to like him in more than a friendly way. As you can see, she didn't like it one bit, so how did she think Edward felt when she was actually doing it all of the time?!
And I must say that while Edward seemed very loving, devoted, & attentive, Bella seemed to be a bit of a cold fish, as well as selfish at that time, & was giving off that confused, playing both sides of the fence type vibe that a lot of teenage girls will unfortunately do between two guys, causing trouble.
Not to mention that she considered being dishonest about what happened with Jacob. It would make me wonder what else she might be hiding. So considering Edward's temper, & who he is/his family is, I think he took it fairly well - better than most guys would've.
On another, yet related note, I understand Bella was hurt over her dad, & that she wanted to go off to attend college, & make something of herself.
However, I think that she totally went about it the WRONG way, which again, showed her selfish, inconsiderate nature, especially where Edward seemed to be concerned.
As much as he truly loved her, he would've never held her back, and would've probably came along, or done whatever she wanted, but instead, she chose to hurt him terribly, for no real good reason!
Besides her career, what did leaving & cutting almost everyone out of her life really accomplish?
I'm sure it hurt Edward even more to find out that one of the few people that Bella kept in contact with was Jacob of all people!
Now she's back, but with a ton of baggage, a kid, & unresolved feelings on both parts, on top of wanting their help. I hope she realizes what a big part she played in all of this chaos, and that most of it IS her fault.
If I were Edward, I'd tread very carefully because Bella seems to be the flighty sort, and he might get hurt again.
Although I don't care for Esme at all...she's a total bitch, and I think that she goes about things completely the wrong way - very childishly for a woman of her age, I can however understand her as a mother wanting to protect her son, no matter how old he is, from Bella, who had hurt & betrayed him so much in the past. Not to mention that she doesn't know the whole story behind Bella's kid, and that it's not biologically hers.
Before I go, a few quick questions I've been meaning to ask - a little off subject here...but what ever happened the night that Edward rode Tanya home from her "work" on his bike, a few chapters back? I hope that he didn't do anything with that nasty, diseased skank! I don't think she even washed after filming her porn, before Edward picked her up. So gross! It's bad enough that he was married to that other crack whore Vicky! What the hell was he thinking marrying her, anyway?! LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter of this great story! ;)
Date: 03 Sep 2013 6:18 PM Title: Outtake 1
I understand now why Bella staying in contact with Jacob was a hit to the gut.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'd be willing to bet just about any amount that either: 1) someone witnessed their intimate moment, 2) one or more people will cause Bella harm, either physically, emotionally or mentally, 3) Tanya's going to join forces with Esme (& Victoria) or Bella's stalker.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
You're back...yay!
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes but we have Vicky and Esme to contend with.. Esme being the worst.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm thinking that the ultrasound picture was possibly Bella's - that not only was she beaten, but also raped by that psycho ATF guy & wound up pregnant. If this is the case, I hope that she can still have babies of her own...hopefully with Edward in the future.
I also wanted to comment on what an absolute bitch that I think Esme is. Vicky is just a follower, but still a pain in the ass. Why the hell did Edward even marry her? Tanya will probably cause trouble later, as well. The odds sure seem stacked against B&E. :(
And what the deal with Renee? She sounds like she could be trouble, too.
Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
Date: 29 Aug 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah. Welcome back. I am anxious to hear the rest of Bella's story but the glimpses into other pov's was good too.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
His not divorcing Vicki, what was said..
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Cant wait to read more. Been missing ur updates....
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
So much still doing on. Hopefully they can sort it out when they chat. E is definitely serious about Bella. Thanks for the update!!
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Esme is such a pain. Vickie needs to just disappear.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hi! love this chapter and was so glad to see you were able to update.. looking forward to more.. Please try to update again soon.. loving this sotriy and cant wait to see what will be happening! thanks
Date: 28 Aug 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
Still someone needs to check Esme......
Date: 21 Jun 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Skanya and Vicky are both pathetic. Poor Billy
Date: 20 Jun 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Still trying to figure out how what's going on with everybody all ties in together.......... I can't wait to see what Tanya thinks will get Edward's attention. Also I hope Esme's B/S catches up with her soon, I can't stand her ass
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
another or the same?
Date: 16 Jun 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
I liked all the different pov's. it helped really move things along. It also made me have like 800 more questions. I can't wait until you start answering things for us. Great job.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:08 PM Title: Prologue
I missed this chapter, so glad you are getting back to it
Date: 15 Jun 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for the update! Even though I love Edward and Bella, it's nice to hear from the other characters. Maddie is so cute! Ugh Edward's interactions with her melt my heart! Thanks again!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
OH MY!!!!!! Doesnt sound good! Really hope Edward and Bella can work through their problems. Kinda seems like they are starting too.. thanks for the update really looking forward to more! Hope it will be soon?
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Jun 2013 3:42 PM Title: Prologue
Please update soon!! looking for more!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Not only am I intrigued with hearing B's story but also what's going on with Esme & her plans with Tanya?
This chapter turned out well. Looking forward to future updates. I'm just glad it wasn't abandoned.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love your story ,can't wait for more. Thank You for writting this story its great.
Date: 27 May 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more:)
Date: 27 May 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was the best ch yet.
Date: 27 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Excited to see an alert in my inbox. So happy she finally decided to tell Edward. He needed to know. Feel so bad for Bell and Maddie. Can't wait to hear more of her story. Thanks for the update!
Date: 26 May 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please update soon!!!!
Enjoyed reading and looking forward to what happenings next!
Date: 25 May 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor B. Hope E and all help watch out even more.
Date: 25 May 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
congrats on your nomination. good luck!
Date: 25 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 25 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great update. I am glad she is starting to let Edward in.
Date: 16 May 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think she's gonna tell Carlisle and I think esme is a control freak great story
Date: 23 Apr 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
I want in on the deets of Charlies death.
Date: 21 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
She really needs to spill about her situation...
Date: 21 Apr 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think Esme wants Bella gone because she knows who killed Charlie...It is getting interesting!! Can't wait to find out what happens next...
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:04 PM Title: Prologue
I love your story. I read it all in one go and am now incredibly frustrated because it seems to be updated at long intervals.
However, I will wait and hope for a speedy update.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Everyone knows Bella's return to Forks was not for career advancement. She is so flighty as to disappear, remain silent for 10 years, and then pop up with a child. Mighty strange, and women sometime run from abusive men.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
White Roses must be from the evil, dog hurting, stalker. Well, now Bella knows he is around.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can't think of a Tyler character who wasn't a nuisance. Hope this Tyler is smart enough to check out Cohn.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
So many misdirections and incomplete clues. Can't wait to read on!
Date: 13 Apr 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella has too many secrets for me to guess who she can and will trust. Esme also has a lifetime of secrets and many must concern her son and Bella. I do not envy her position relative to her husband and son. She must be constantly fearful.
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
For me, Bella is simply behaving as a professional should. Let Edward complete his divorce and come calling. Agent Cohn Doesn't seem thrilled with his marital situation.
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
I shielded my children from the Disney terror provoking shows. My sister was absolutely traumatized in the 1950's. We took the kids to Disney World, and they saw the delight, not the horror and confusion. With a Father in a dangerous profession, and with knowledge of the MC's business and Edward's connection, Bella has dealt with death and probable injury to those around her all her life. The guy shadowing her must be a monster to push her back to living with the death of her Father daily.