Date: 15 Feb 2013 12:35 AM Title: First Lesson
You teaser you
Date: 14 Feb 2013 10:00 PM Title: Monsieur Charmant
We just got some important info on dear Edward... Hmmm
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:20 PM Title: First Lesson
I think I am going to use those tips!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:11 PM Title: Monsieur Charmant
Oh Oh! There is a kid involved! I don't know how Bella will react! ;) Great chapter!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:17 PM Title: Monsieur Charmant
So Cara is Edward's ex and Lexi is her girlfriend? Is that why they are not together? I didn't think he had a kid or an ex.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:38 PM Title: First Lesson
Great update and I can't wait to read EPOV ;)
Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:20 AM Title: First Lesson
Madame Esme can seduce even a rock or a dead person, kkkkkk, the poor man didn't stand a chance, I just love her!!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 12:10 AM Title: Final Touches
It's not really a mistake, but in this phrase: "... but somewhere along the way his career started to come fist and our marriage second.", is missing a R in the first.
Finally, Bella saw that Peter was the boring one and never deserved her time!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix it right away. xo ~Mina
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:44 PM Title: Final Touches
good chapter very reflective for Bella.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:20 PM Title: Different Choices
I wonder if Madame will match Bella and Edward?
Date: 10 Feb 2013 4:45 AM Title: Final Touches
I need one of those make over thingies...
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Final Touches
great chapter and update!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 8:15 AM Title: Different Choices
:D Great chapter and I want to know more and I hope Bella will let the walls around her drop! Edward is a good man!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 10:18 PM Title: Different Choices
Have to find a Madame Esme for me, desperately!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2013 9:09 PM Title: Different Choices
It was awesome and I hope you did great on your finals :) Love how this story is going so far
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:50 AM Title: The assistant
failure... teaches us lessons. IT does suck to fail but it is a tool to improve.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:27 AM Title: Shopping Spree
I want to sign up for this. I just don't need a new man, my old one is just fine. LOL
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:18 PM Title: The assistant
*Gasp* Madame failed??? How is that possible???
Date: 06 Feb 2013 9:04 AM Title: The assistant
:) Great story! I say it to many authors, but I always mean it... If I don't like it, I wouldn't read it anymore, but this one is amazing to read ;) xD
Date: 04 Feb 2013 7:13 PM Title: Prologue
My Edward's closer to Henry Cavill, for the Edward in your story and almost every other...
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:58 PM Title: The Spa
Wow, I just saw the picture of Esme that you've in your mind for this story, and I gotta say, I would love to reach her age looking like that!!! And I just sorry that my Edward never matches Robert Pattinson ¬¬
Finally Bella's starting to fight against the lies that Peter said to her!!! The bastard!!
Author's Response:
I sometimes imagine Henry Cavill for Edward, but I went with Rob because I just love him, LOL. Thank you for reading and reviewing. xoxo Mina
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:21 PM Title: The Spa
Great chapter and I can't wait to read more of it ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:07 PM Title: The Spa
I really love this story. Look forward to the updates. Thanks!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 9:50 PM Title: Prologue
I am sorry if i offended you as i said i didnt mean to be rude at all i do appologize
Let me rephase my review.....
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I loved this fic and i skipped over it a few times cos of the banner i should'nt of i was being biased and i shouldnt of again i do appologize it is a really really good fic and i am glad i read it and gave it a chance.
Maybe i shouldnt judge a book by its cover or in this case a fic by its banner sorry for offending you O
Oh and i agree about kstew she acts the same way in every movie she's in she's not that good an actress but was perfect for the part of bella so i completly agree with you there i do appologize again
i will rec this fic to all my fanfic friends on twitter as a little forgive me plea x
Author's Response:
Thank you and I accept your apology.
Date: 02 Feb 2013 9:14 PM Title: Shopping Spree
Absolutly love this fic but err dont mean to be rude i have gona past it a few times looking for a good story to read only because of the banner i really dont want to sound like i know everything or better yet a bitch but the banner should really draw you in it sort of doesnt maybe its just me being biased but when i read a twi fic i always see for e.g edward/rob Bella/Kristen Esme/liz it is a really fantasic amazing fic thats jus my 1 tiny critisizm am really sorry if i did offend you its sort of like when 50 shades comes on the big screen i am gona be like ugh cos i read master of the universe so i see bella/ana edward/christain but again really good fic and i am lookin forward to the next update an see were this fic goes xxx
Author's Response:
I made the banner based on the sotry and how the characters were in it. I have never liked KS, and Bella in this story is supposed to be a woman of poise and beauty. Anne Hathaway is my choice and doesn't hurt she is a terrific actress. Sorry if you don't see it that way, but maybe next time you shouldn't tell the writer. who also made the banner, who her characters should be portrayed by. It was rude, and the banner shouldn't be the thing that catches your attention, it should be the summary and story itself.
Thank you for reviewing.
Mina
Date: 02 Feb 2013 8:31 PM Title: Shopping Spree
Oh the make-over starts and I can't wait to read more! :)
Date: 02 Feb 2013 7:56 PM Title: Shopping Spree
I have to find a Madame Esme to help me, kkkkkk
Date: 02 Feb 2013 5:51 PM Title: New Angle
Great story, I love this french Esme. I am looking forwards to see what she will do for "Mademoiselle S"
Félicitations et amitiés de France :))
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:47 PM Title: Simple Boring
Goodbye Peter!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:35 PM Title: Something Nude
Good advice Rosalie!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:24 PM Title: New Angle
God, I had to read three chapters, but I'm still loving it... I can't wait to meet Mademoiselle S... Great chapters!! :)
Date: 02 Feb 2013 2:13 AM Title: New Angle
I agree with Esme, Bella should had found something extremely hard and throw at him!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2013 4:54 AM Title: The Offer
Peter fell out of love with his wife. At least he did not get Char pregnant then run. There is not a good way out of that and as much as it hurts it is over. Bella has to buck up and put that all behind her.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 4:39 AM Title: The List
Well I think B needs to have a suitor. Happiness.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:44 AM Title: The Offer
I knew it, Peter was the boring one, Bella was always doing something different with Rose, but he never changed, and even if Bella think otherwise (only because Peter said that), she's fun woman that was stuck with a man that didn't know how to do anything new!!!!
Did the stupid man had the courage and the lack of originality to propose to two different women at the same place??? Really?? For god sake, Bella, you're better without him.
I'm almost seeing Charlotte leaving his sorry ass, and than he'll come crawling after Bella, but she'll be to happy with Edward to miss anything about that excuse of a man.
I hate the bastard...
Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:42 AM Title: The Offer
I'm glad Bella is going to find herself.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 12:39 AM Title: Enchanting Soirée
Maybe Edward has the same instincts as his aunt, but I think Bella didn't let go of Peter yet, the man that she thought she had a perfect marriage with!!! Sometimes it's difficult to think that another other man won't live you too!!!
She needs to realize that Peter was a scumbag for cheating on her inside her house, and for being a liar of the worst species, and that didn't deserve her love. And like Esme told her, the best revenge is to show him that she's happy and don't miss the boring life that he gave her one bit, because if she was boring, so was he, and changing of woman wouldn't change that!!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 12:30 AM Title: Enchanting Soirée
I love Edward in this story, so charming.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:40 PM Title: The List
In the end I think Esme does a lot for the girls for them to never suffer the way she suffered when her husband left her, and I obviously supposing that she really loved her husband, but hopefully he wasn't Carlisle and he'll appear any time sweeping her out of feet!!!
Author's Response:
You are absolutely correct on Esme's motivation, you really get her! And as for Carlisle... well, let's just say that he IS part of her past, but no, he isn't the cheating ex-husband.
Thank you for reading and reviewng, next chapter will be up in an hour. xoxo Mina
Date: 30 Jan 2013 2:18 AM Title: The List
I love it. Nice touch with using Jacob Black as an actor.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 12:07 AM Title: The List
What a wonderful story. The development of the characters is amazing. I love how Bella is slowly seeing things differently then she originally thought they'd be. I'm always so excited for the updates!!
Date: 29 Jan 2013 7:39 PM Title: Irish Luck
I'm so curious to how this story will end ;) Great chapter!! :)
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:33 AM Title: Irish Luck
well now she knows the Madame is interested in the girls and does not use them as a pimp would..
Date: 29 Jan 2013 3:54 AM Title: Irish Luck
Great chapter, great insight.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:30 PM Title: The Rules
Loving this Mina, and I say screw ffn and their bullyish behavior! Keep up the great job, I FLOVE this it owns me.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:28 PM Title: The Rules
golden eyes.. what have we here? Waiting for you. Good story
Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:20 PM Title: The Client
I have a feeling she will not help him.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:16 PM Title: The Photographer
Enchante.. I can not spell it. Well no French here.
Good chapter
Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:05 PM Title: Soft Curve
Bella needs her.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:02 PM Title: The Girls
the story behind the business..
Date: 27 Jan 2013 6:40 PM Title: Sweet Talk
well maybe she can find some way to help Bella over what Peter did to her.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 6:08 PM Title: The Rules
Loving the multiple chapters we have been treated to today. Yay. So we have met Edward. Can't wait to see him return. :)
Date: 27 Jan 2013 6:07 PM Title: The Rules
:) It's a great chapter and I can't wait till Esme will Bella under her wings and when Bella changes her opinion ;) Great story!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:53 PM Title: The Photographer
Nice real nice there. keep them coming.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:49 PM Title: Fresh Start
I cannot wait for the next chapters. I really like this story so far.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:53 PM Title: Simple Boring
He is an asshole! No matter what, cheating on her in her own house, on her birthday? It shows that Peter is really rotten to the core...
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:45 PM Title: Red Handed
Wow! How horrible for her!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:56 PM Title: Faux Pas
we will hope this turns out for Bella.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 2:33 PM Title: Faux Pas
Come on, Bella! Go to Paris already!
By the way I'm French, so if you wan't to include anything in my language and are not sure about it, do not hesitate to ask. That would be my pleasure :)
Love,
A. x
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and for the offer, I will keep that in mind. xoxo ~Mina
Date: 26 Jan 2013 2:11 PM Title: Faux Pas
Just found the story and really enjoying it. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 1:58 PM Title: Curious Assignment
Brilliant!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:58 AM Title: Curious Assignment
okay I am in.. I hope you are committed to writing and updating often.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:56 AM Title: Simple Boring
well how lovely. You my wife are boring. Well life will now change..
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:51 AM Title: Red Handed
so sad.. Peter you are always my guy.. what is wrong with you?
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:58 AM Title: Curious Assignment
Nice and intriguing story. I was afraid Edward was the cheating husband, given the summary and the characters listed. I'm happy he's not!
Greetings from France,
A. x
Date: 26 Jan 2013 8:55 AM Title: Something Nude
Wow, I can't wait to read more of it ;) Amazing start of this story! :)