[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:59 AM Title: EPILOGUE
aww what a lovely ending! thank you for sharing hun xx
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:51 AM Title: Toujours, Paris
yay they're getting hitched! :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:49 AM Title: Saying Goodbye
aww love it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:42 AM Title: Game Over
aww yay! i'd soooo move to paris too!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:33 AM Title: Amusing Surprise
awww! and hahahahaha! oh dear...edward! *snickers*
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:29 AM Title: Last Stand
BURNNNNNN! way to go bella! hehe loved it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:20 AM Title: Choosing Battles
ooh *rubs hands togather* can't wait to see what bella does!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:15 AM Title: EPILOGUE
Loved this story so much. Was so happy to find it here after it was pulled from ff. thank you for writing.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:05 AM Title: EPILOGUE
I have really enjoyed this story. I started reading it on fan fiction but finished it on this site. I'm sorry because of bad comments that you had to pull it. I would love to read the outtakes, you shouldn't let cruel people let others who appreciate your writing lose out on enjoying extras from this story. Loved the ending!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 3:10 AM Title: Madame Esme
First off, I love Esme! Second, swooning a little at Demetri waiting for her to sit down. and third, I would have been kicked to the curb in a heart beat! not at the crumbled bills (I don't think) but candy wrappers!? bye bye, Lolo! I think I even found a granola bar wrapper in my purse the other day! Smh!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 2:45 AM Title: EPILOGUE
thank you for anamazing journey. i loved this story.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 2:25 AM Title: Bonjour Paris
I may or may not have started giggling in excitement because the speaking of the french means we're one step closer!! He he ... On a seperate note, Guy just reminded me that the Guillaume's in my life (friends, family) would have caniptions when people tried calling them William! *snickers* and *roll eyes* they think they're cool or something ... Moving right along!!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:57 AM Title: Before Peter
"That bastard didn't even have the decency to leave me for a younger woman!"
DIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bwahaha!!
And yay! Paris time!!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:54 AM Title: Awful Discovery
*flails* FLAILS!!!! Thank GOD she didn't have to give him anything! Grr!! "Oh, it was a moment of weakness." Or whatever the excuse he gave. Bastard!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:48 AM Title: Sweet Talk
Well, shit!!!! Them some swoon worthy words right therrrreeee!!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:44 AM Title: Faux Pas
I'm on to you, Em!!! ;-)
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:34 AM Title: Modern Matchmaker
One simply cannot be called a Madame and not assumed to be a pimp! Lol I feel you, Bella! I feel you girl!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:31 AM Title: Curious Assignment
Dun, dun, dun!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:29 AM Title: EPILOGUE
NOOOOO! More please. Never end!
Author's Response:
Aw... Thank ou for reading. xo ~Mina
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:09 AM Title: EPILOGUE
Absolutely wonderful!!! This story captured me from the first words. I'm so glad you finished it and I found it after it was pulled from FanFiction. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 1:03 AM Title: Simple Boring
Blah blah bla, Peter! No excsues!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 12:39 AM Title: Red Handed
BASTARD!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 12:36 AM Title: Friendly Surprise
Interesting information, you say??
Date: 20 Apr 2013 12:34 AM Title: Prologue
alright! Digging in!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:32 PM Title: EPILOGUE
This was such a great story, I'm sad to see it end.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: EPILOGUE
It was a wonderful ending to the story. I loved that it ended with Esme's wedding, it made it perfect since she's who made Bella's change possible.
Thanks for keep writing the story and sharing it with us.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:15 PM Title: Toujours, Paris
Six months, I kind of lost track of time, I loved it was where they met, and La vie en rose playing on the back. ;)
Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:11 PM Title: Saying Goodbye
If only we could all learn to choose us first every once in a while, we would all be happier. I'm glad Bella did and it has turned out so wonderful for her.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:03 PM Title: Game Over
I imagined it had to do with time spent in the airplane, I wasn't wrong ;)
I'm sure he'll never forget his pills again.
So Bella wants to move and Edward wants to get hitched, I wonder in which order will it happen?
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:39 PM Title: EPILOGUE
What a fantastic story, so sad to see it end. Thank you so much for the wonderful tale you have spun.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:37 PM Title: EPILOGUE
I am gonna miss this story I haven't rated it much cause it's hard to when your are on a mobile but I have enjoyed each and every chapter. Thank you so much for writing this
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:35 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Mina~ Thank you for sharing with us all this wonderful tale of someone having the ability to find true love and worthiness in themself after haivng their heart broken and being shattered by someone whom they loved and trusted. This is such a wonderful story and it will forever be one of my favs. Thank you, Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:19 PM Title: Toujours, Paris
very romantic and I loved it!
Author's Response:
thank you. don't forget to check out the pics on my blog :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:15 PM Title: Saying Goodbye
this was such a touching chapter showing the wonderful friendships she has had and has gained. WONDERFUL!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:04 PM Title: Game Over
I love this sweet frenchward!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:51 PM Title: Amusing Surprise
I love a silly goofy doped up or drunkward. <3 YAY!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:48 PM Title: EPILOGUE
What an absolute masterpiece. I'm so sorry for all the BS drama you had to put up with over on FF, but please know what an amazing story this is and what an incredable writer you are. Thank you so much for writing it!
Lisa
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words and I'm glad you liked this story. xoxo Mina
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:40 PM Title: EPILOGUE
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading adn reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:40 PM Title: Last Stand
Love it, hate the snake gets anything from her, but love that she still comes out on top
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:36 PM Title: Toujours, Paris
*sobs* YES! now that is a proposal. so romantic!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:31 PM Title: Saying Goodbye
a perfect good bye party and toast!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:19 PM Title: Amusing Surprise
*giggles* A giggling Frenchward? And here I thought he couldn't get any sexier and you go and make him giggle. I love it and the surprise visit!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:16 PM Title: Choosing Battles
Loved this update... Love this story!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:13 PM Title: Last Stand
You go girl with your newly improved bad but good self! You made me proud Bella! Sit on that Peter Peter Dumb Fuck Cheater!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:06 PM Title: Choosing Battles
OMG! What is the secret? What did karma do??? Inquiring minds want to know and luckily I can click Next to find out...yay!
-Tina
Date: 19 Apr 2013 7:56 PM Title: Amusing Surprise
That was unexpected, a bit scary but a lot of fun. I guess Edward and Rose had set up the surprise for Bella, but he didn't mention his fear of flying before.
Poor Edward, he'll probably wake up with a terrible head-ache and then he'll have to face Bella, the video... good thing she isn't too angry.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 7:50 PM Title: Last Stand
Way to go, Bella!!!
She did what she needed to do to move on with her life. Peter has made terrible choices and he'll pay for them for a long, long time.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Choosing Battles
Things have gone well for Bella back home. I can't wait to find out what they discovered about Peter it seems to be huge.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 7:36 PM Title: Adieu Paris
Well, found you on here, and looking forward to more.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 6:37 PM Title: Adieu Paris
I hope they are back together soon. I think it's time Bella moves to France...
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 1:45 PM Title: Prologue
I'm sorry you got taken down from ffn there loss.... But I just wanted to let you know I love your story and I totally followed you over here so I could read the rest of your wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 12:18 PM Title: Adieu Paris
OMG I cried like a baby on this chapter. I hate for her to have to go, but I just hope she comes back. Can't wait for more and I do hate that this story is coming to an end.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 11:42 AM Title: Adieu Paris
I am so sorry that you pulled from FFN but happy to know you are here :)
Date: 19 Apr 2013 9:19 AM Title: Second Chances
I clicke the update link on FF and almost died! I thought I lost you. I'm glad I found you and Emse and Carlisle found each other!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2013 5:26 AM Title: Adieu Paris
not surprising the story got pulled down from FF.net when you know it's plagiarised content
Author's Response:
I don't see it as plagiarizing, I took some dialogue from the movie, but that's it. I clearly stated the story was the movie with the Twilight characters with a spinoff. I haven't taken credit for anything. I own nothing. And it wasn't pulled for plagiarizing, I pulled it because not only I got acuse of that, but then other guest reviewer (I imagine it was the same one that sent me hate mail for writing a same sex couple in the story) reported me for the one single lemon. I decided to save myself some tears and pulled it.
I'm sorry you feel like I have stolen something. I don't think I have. I haven't taken credit for it, and it's fanfiction. I'm not making money with it, this is just for pure entertainment. That's it!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 1:35 AM Title: Adieu Paris
So... the story got pulled up, I went to the blog, the chapter wasn't there and I came here, I couldn't wait :)
She had to leave, and it was so sad!!! All that she left behind, but that she can come back to. I'm glad we got to hear her conversation with Esme and that things are looking great for her as well. I hope time flies by and they can be together soon, no matter which side of the Atlantic.
Bella has a lot to do, see her parents, be with her father and then sit down to put together all that she learned in Paris. It's a lot and she has an assignment to complete and plenty to think about. It should give Edward more than enough time to finish his shoot and go meet her.
I can't believe we're close to the end. I hope you do write some outtakes.
See you tomorrow!!! A bientot!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 12:57 AM Title: Second Chances
Wonderful reunion! I was reading on the other site & the story vanished before my very eyes. That is tragic. I'm so glad I could continue it here.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2013 11:44 PM Title: Adieu Paris
I would love to see an outtake/future take of Edward and Bella with ( I HOPE) a little baby of their own.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 9:44 PM Title: Adieu Paris
I can't wait for Charlie and Edward to meet
Date: 18 Apr 2013 7:47 PM Title: Je t'aime
hey
great chapters!
My gosh... Peter is such a aaaarg... dick!
I love Edward and Bella... the two are really great together!
but Carlisle and Esme sooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!
bye
Lil
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:44 PM Title: Je t'aime
I look forward to Bella right out squishing that fly! I love how Bella and Edward are together. Happy sigh...
Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:13 PM Title: Je t'aime
OMG,I LOVE YOUR STORY! BEST ONE I HAVE READ SO FAR GREAT WRITING CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 10:55 PM Title: Je t'aime
It's so sad she has to leave. Poor Charlie.
Date: 16 Apr 2013 11:45 PM Title: Second Chances
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2013 5:37 PM Title: Second Chances
Yeah Esme! It's about time one of her 'girls' help her out! I'm so glad Bella could get this done for her! Thanks for the multiple updates...love it!
Date: 16 Apr 2013 1:14 PM Title: Second Chances
:) Great chapter... And oh, so beautiful ;)
Date: 16 Apr 2013 12:55 PM Title: Second Chances
I'm crying happy tears of joy for Esme!!! She deserves to be happy too!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2013 12:40 PM Title: The Best
Ohhh, I hope Carlisle's the man!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2013 12:26 PM Title: Second Chances
Such a great couple of chapters. I'm so glad Esme got her happiness.
Date: 16 Apr 2013 6:10 AM Title: The Best
Great chapter... I'm so curious as how it goes further... Is Edward moving to Seattle, or stays Bella in France... A lot of questions are in my mind... :)
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:41 AM Title: Crossing Lines
Thanks for all those updates! Just, WOW!!! They finally got it on!!! I look forward to more of their story. They have some majors obstacles still in their way, so I'm anxious to see how they overcome them. I'm, also, still looking forward to Carlisle's reappaerance in Madame's life. ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:43 AM Title: Crossing Lines
Things are starting to fall in the right place, now I just need to see how you'll make Peter die :-)
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:29 AM Title: Close Up
I just love the idea of what a camera can capture that we can't see, it shows amazing things!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2013 4:23 AM Title: Come Closer
I love to think that Bella finally has found someone that really likes her for who she is!!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2013 3:16 AM Title: Thoughtful Gift
I just ask for the death of Peter and Charlotte, and would love to see Carlisle appearing for Madame!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 12:09 AM Title: Prologue
Im loving this, such a beautiful story. Cant wait to read more, keep them coming! ;)
Date: 12 Apr 2013 9:22 PM Title: Crossing Lines
:) Great chapter... :) I can't wait to read more ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Crossing Lines
Fuck, that was hot! Pass that ciggy, please!
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:40 PM Title: Crossing Lines
Wow. Hot hot hot!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:21 PM Title: Crossing Lines
Awesome thanks for the translations
Date: 11 Apr 2013 1:57 PM Title: Close Up
Wow... so sensual and so hot! I can't wait to read more of it ;)
Date: 11 Apr 2013 1:41 PM Title: Close Up
I loved this, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:27 PM Title: Come Closer
I can't wait for next chapter. This was a great chapter.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 6:30 AM Title: Come Closer
Great chapter! :) I can't wait to read more of it ;)