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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 53

WOW!!!!!! Edward is really mad. What is his problem???

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 52

Which character is Madame Taystie VonGeena suppose to be?? I am thinking Tanya. If so, she is probably the other one that did not vote for Bella. Probably feeling threated. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 51

All but two, well we know that Edward did not vote for her. So who is the other????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 298

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 297

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 296

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 295

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 294

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Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 298

Oh some father daughter time! Love it ;)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 296

Okay, from Charlie's perspective, why did Renee show up at his parents' house?  Was their marriage arranged the way he tried to arrange one for Bella?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 50

Can't wait to find out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 49

I am thinking that Edward is turned on as hell. BUT will he admit that she is good. Will his pride let him????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 48

Go Bella Go Bella!!!!!!!!!! I am hoping we will Edward's POV of this!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 46

LOVE the name!!!!  :) :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 45

At least Bella is not the first one on stage. This way she can see what some of the girls do on stage. Can't wait to find out her stage name. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 44

Can't wait to see Edward's reaction. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 43

Poor Alice. I hope Jasper makes his moves soon and then showers her with love.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 42

I can not wait to see what Edward's reaction is. lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 41

I am thinking that she is just letting know what will be excepted. I am sure they get some young girl thinking they can make alot of money and then when it comes time to perform they are scared and freak out. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 298

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 298

Oh yay, marathon sesh, since my Internet restored. Loving it. TY xx

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 40

I knew Jasper was going to show up. I love how Alice is reacting to Jasper. Bless her heart. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 39

So Alice is there with Bella. Is Jasper there? If not is he going to show up??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 38

LOL!!!!! I wondered if your Bella was going to a little clumsy!!!! Yes, I have wanted to learn to pole dance and strip....but only for my husband. They say pole dancing is very good exercise.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 37

I love how Jasper and Alice met. Great job.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am really enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 35

LOVE it!!!!! I would not expect this Bella to be anything but blunt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 34

I knew it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 33

Thanks for the answers in the author note. Edward has not seen the last of Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 32

That mouth of hers...will she ever learn to keep it quite. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 31

Well......I knew her mouth was going to get her somewhere. Let's just see where she is going with it.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 297

Good to know that his heart wasn't in it!  Hopefully, he can redeem himself in Bella's eyes and Edward's!! But the rat Bastard (jake) should still get his...

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 297

thank you for the updates.......Charlie a little to late.....thank god you finally saw the light

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 289

is wrong say guilty lol

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 293

haha trash is gonna but prbly not the last of it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 293

Loved it 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 292

The girl really is dense, isn't she?  Perhaps Rose can knock some sense into her noggin!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 290

Perhaps Jasper was aware of Robbie via Alice?  

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 289

Marvelous mind twist!  I love it!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 288

Aah!  Now the question is, did Bella realize the level of that kink, or was it something they discovered together?  Nice!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 293

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 284

Nope!  The man has better things on his mind...and other points south!

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 293

Take that, Tanya!! Great chapters!! It's really hot! I can't wait till tonight!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 293

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 292

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 291

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 290

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Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 293

They we go 

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 289

Lol rabbit is really a rabbit lol 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 293

Oh yeah high society bitch be slapped!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 293

Aw, I like that Edward will always help her with her battles.  I for some reason thought Rose was his sister, but regardless, she's family. :)  I loved Edward's metaphor.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 292

She insulted his sister and she thinks she's classy?  She talks like she rolled straight out of the dumpster.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 293

yea for E's speech

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 291

Eep!  I am so excited for the next chapters...

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 290

Lol.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 289

I did actually think that Bella had a collection of vibes.  I like this twist though, that's kinda cool. :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 292

oh  i hope rose or b kicks her arse

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 288

I like that Edward is the only one she will ever dance privately for. :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 291

rofl  skakya is in for a real surprise

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 287

Yup, agreed, their perfect match. :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 290

lol for rabbits

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 293

Loved it

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 293

Well there ya go. Wipes hands 

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 293

no no no no!!!!! where's the cat fight?

we want fight, we want fight, we want fight, fight fight fight 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 292

Tanya has no sense of self preservation.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 293

Aww!  

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 293

Yup that's how you get rid of trash lol :)

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 293

that was good

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 292

Oh hell no she didn't I hope she gets her ass kicked lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 291

Oh Tanya so crazy thinks she's Edwards fiancé when he has a wife lol :D

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 292

she is going downs so good! who else is standing in line?????????

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 292

Please you must give Bella's response to this!!!!!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 286

Hmm, hot squared. ;)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 285

Hot!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 284

Well, he did tell her not to make a peep. ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 30

I told you, I think her mouth gets her in lots of trouble.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 29

Well, is Edward going to be a dick or what???? LOL

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 28

Well, Bella is in luck. Maybe if/when she gets with Edward then she can help Alice and Jasper

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 27

Ok, she is there. Now let's see what happens. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bella is a brave one. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

I hope Bella's luck changes. It could be dangerous or funny with her being a stripper. LOL!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love the name!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMGosh!!!!!!! She is having some seriously bad luck with jobs.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

I can not believe that the boss said that to her. He must be a real piece of work. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Bella. She is having bad luck. I am wondering if her mouth is getting in her way besides getting hit on. 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 290

Aww their to sweet for words lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 289

So that's the famous rabbit Charlie was talking about lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 288

Oh lap dances!! :D lol

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 287

I also think that they did!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 286

Damn!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 285

Hat damn!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 284

Lol :)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 290

Bwahaha!  I think she would like the new rabbit!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 290

Awe

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

I drink coffee from home. But at Starbucks a small (tall) runs over 3.00 a cup

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

Again, I am glad that Bella has Alice. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am glad that Alice is excited for Bella to be there. Glad that Bella has some money. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

LOVE Alice!!!!! I have a feelings Alice is going to want to rip Jacob's head off....both of them!!!!!! LOL

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

I think Jacob is a little shit. He sounds like he would be abusive if he had the chance. I am thinking that Jacob puts on an act in front of Charlie and Charlie does not know the REAL Jacob.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well, Alice does not sounds to happy

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