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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 130

Go Bella Go Bella!!!!!!!! Tell her like it is. I hope Jasper and/or Edward walk up as Angela is spewing off at Bella and Alice. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 129

Glad to see Alice is not hiding from all of this. I am thinking that Jasper is going to have Angela's ass on a platter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 128

Oh no Angela did not!!!!! I am thinking that this is not going to end well. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 127

I am glad that he is being nicer but why does he still glare at her after a while?? Since the night of Edward's birthday party and he apologize...has he changed her schedule any??? Does she work more??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 126

Cute chapter!!! I like seeing Alice and Bella's friendship. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 125

Love this chapter. I am glad that Jasper and Rose are giving Edward a hard time. LOVED that Rose hit him in the head with her apple. LOL. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 123

Way to tell him!!!! I hope he feels like a heel. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 122

I hope Edward listens for a change. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 121

Well, now we know why Jasper has not asked anyone out. He was really hurt bad. I am glad that Edward cares about his friends but he was still a jerk. 

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 294

Tanya is nuts.  This chapter was awesome though. :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 303

lol  glad Charlie is being so cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 302

ROFL for boot camp

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 301

wow Charlie wants to move?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 300

awww go charlie for apologizing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 299

glad he apologized

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 298

hmm is it B at the door though?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 297

at least he knows he was an idiot

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 296

oh charlie

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 295

they are too cute

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 294

Loving this james

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 303

Loved it :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 120

I hope Jasper still kicks his ass. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 119

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I want to know what Edward was going to say to Bella. Was he going to apolize to her??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 118

I knew he would not be happy with her walking home. I hope he was falling her because he felt quilty.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 117

Well, I hope someone puts mister buttuu-headed asshole in line. I hope Edward feels about an inch tall. It would serve him right, jerk. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 116

WHAT???? I knew he would think something about Jasper hugging Bella and being so happy. Again.....Edward is a frist class JERK!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 115

I am glad that Jasper asked Alice out. I wonder what Edward thinks about Jasper being so happy while he is hugging Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 114

Edward is such a JERK!!!!!!! He knows how to ruin a party. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 113

I hope he does not break Bella's heart again. I hope he is nice. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 112

Get him Bella!!!! Let him have it!!! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 111

Again.....no filter!!!!! LOL!!!!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 303

maybe after you all get this done you could write an outtake letting us know just what the pup thinks of his boot camp

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 163

Yeah Eddie to the rescue

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 110

How sweet of Bella to offer to make the cake. I feel really sorry for her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 109

Wow, way to go Edward. You know just how to break a girl's heart. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 108

I understand that Edward does not want her "tainted" but he does not have to be an ass about. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 107

WHAT?????? I think he wants her to quit too. This Bella is not a quiter. Edward is going to learn that he has his hands full with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 106

I can not believe they are standing there talking while he is nake. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 105

No filter.....LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 104

OMGosh!!!!! She kept walking in, really. She is not thinking. I have a feeling that he is going to call out her name.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 103

OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!! This is hilarious!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 102

I can not believe she is walking home at night/early morning either. Man, if Edward finds out he is probably going to flip his lid. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 101

Glad that she got to punch the guy. I am with you, Edward was watching from somewhere. He is definitely keeping an eye on her. 

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 150

In her dreams lol#

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 128

RHPS been 2 times its great

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 88

Dunndunn

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 83

Oh bossy ward

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 100

Glad that everyone is getting along with Bella except for Angela and Edward. Edward needs to be a man and admit his feelings. Or at least grow a pair and be a man.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 99

Bella was alot nicer than I would have been. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 98

GO BELLA!!!! GO BELLA~!!!! Yeah, tell her off girl!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 97

Really, Edward. Where are your manners. Jezz!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 96

Jezz, she brings him a steak and he is sitting with another woman and he frowns at her. Boy what a gentleman. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 95

OH, I think she is going to get Edward a steak. That what she is doing, right. How sweet, even after he treated her like shit. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 94

Well hell, everyone else a bad day but he doesn't have to take it out on her. There for a minute I thought he was going to ask her out to dinner. lol 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 93

Did she do her little "song" knock??? Is that how he knew??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 92

Oh no, what has happened that Tanya is glarin at Bella??? I am wondering if Tanya said something ugly about Bella and Edward went off on her about it. lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 91

Love getting all this information from Vicki

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 90

That is funny. Wonder what Edward's story is. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 89

I knew that Tanya had to come into the story at some point. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 88

Oh no, what is going to happen? You know Bella is going to pust his buttons. lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 87

WOW

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 86

What is Edward thinking?????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 85

Can't wait to see how she does.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 83

I have a feeling that Bella is going to be unhappy. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 82

I am glad that most of the girls are going to have Bella's back. I am just wondering how much if any did Jasper and/or Edward heard.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 81

You know those girls are thinking......what the hell!!!!! a virgin!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 84

Well, like I said earlier, Bella has a mouth on her and she is always honest. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 80

OMGosh!!!! She just told the whole room that she is a virgin. LOL!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 79

I am thinking that Rose is going to have a talk with Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 78

OMGosh!!!!!!!! They are really open about their experiences!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 77

Oh no....I am thinking that Bella does not have any stories to tell. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 76

It seems that Rose like Bella and that is good. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 75

I think he has been looking for LOVE!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 74

I like that Bella does not let anyone get one over on her. Oh and her mouth!!!!! I am surprised that Rose did not go off on Angela. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 72

Oh no she didn't!!!!!!!! Angela better run!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 71

Loved your author note

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 298

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 294

Tanya I so hate her this is good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 70

LOL!!!!! I am thinking that he was going to say that he wanted to fuck her. Cause I am thinking that is true. Is he going into his private restroom to jerk off!!!! lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 69

So, Edward thinks she is a spy. lol. That is funny

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 68

OMGosh, no she did not look at his pants. Wow

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 67

Can't wait to see what Edward is thinking.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 66

What is Bella planning with looking like that?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 65

Can't wait to find out

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 64

Ok, it was not Tanya, it was Angela. I am thinking that Angela is afraid of the competition, that Bella is going to be better than her and take some of her tips away and take her place as top stripper. I am thinking the other vote was Edward.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 63

I was wondering the same thing. Why has Jasper not asked her out?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 62

I live in a small where everyone knows your business. It is awful!!!!!!  I really feel for Alice. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 61

I am thinking the thud is his head hitting his desk. I feel for Alice. If she is that down on herself, why does she not do something about her weight?

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 298

Well I hope they can mend their relationship because they only have each other!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 297

Yeah well you my friend were being selfish!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 296

O.O

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 295

Aww their so cute together!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 294

Haha :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 60

I am thinking that right now Edward wants to turn her over his knees and give her spanking and then fuck the shit out of her. LOL

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 59

Is Edward Bi-polar??? He is very confused about his feelings, I think.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 58

I was just wondering the same thing you said in your author note. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 57

I am thinking it could lead to exactly where Bella is thinking it would. lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 56

She did not tell him she was a virgin. Surprised a little on that one. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 55

I am thinking that she will.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 54

I am glad that Bella is not shying away from Edward and letting him walk all over her. Glad that she is standing up for herself. 

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