Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 196
I think Jasper just wants to throw his hands in the air or he may want to put them around Edward's neck. LOL
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 195
Go Jasper Go Jasper!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 194
Really, all Edward has to say to Jasper is "I told her no more fighting with Angela". He makes me want to pull my hair out.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 193
Really, Edward can be so stupid. Believeing Angela. Dumb
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 192
Angela is just full of shit. What a liar!!! I kind of feel sorry for Edward here. Just a little.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 191
Angela is just a lair. Can't wait till she is fired.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 306
So did not see the Lauren/Daddy thing coming. Love it though. I would so love an Alice chappy.
Happy Birthday to Silverblossom
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 306
can't wait for the last few chapters of this. i have really enjoyed everyone of the chaps. also to find out that one of my fav authors who's fics i have read all of and still can't wait for the next chapters of her fics.
has her birthday on the same day as me is just wow!!!.
wish i could write but not any good at it lol.
this has been amazing to read and so well written.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY. SILVERBLOSSOM
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 306
Yes! Please! I would love a story about Alice and Jasper along the same general grounds as this one. He's a hot mover and shaker with money and she is a sweet, slightly heavy, intelligent, "nobody". The possibilities are mind numbing! Is he dominant? Does she all him Sir when things get hot?
I've loved tis story, by the way! It has heart and smarts. Thank you!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 306
Love it!! I love the fact that Charlie loves also younger girls... :) I can't wait till to read more! :)
Date: 07 Mar 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 306
Happy birthday silverblossom!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 306
looking forward to more
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 190
Angela really gets on my nerves
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 189
For an older man he is really clueless
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 188
Really, he still does not know that Jasper is going out with Alice. CLUELESS!!!! LOL!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 187
I agree with your author's note!!!! LOL!!!!! He is soooo dense.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 186
He just needs to man up!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 185
What happened to Jasper getting on his ass??? Wow, a book he has been looking for. I wonder how she knew that he wanted that book.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 184
I am glad that Jasper is pissed at him. I hope Jasper knocks some sense into him.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 183
LOL!!!!!! Edward is sooooo lost.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 182
HIS GIRL!!!!!!!! He is crazy. He is rude to her and will not ask her out but he does not want her going out with anyone else. I don't think it would have mattered if it was Jasper or anyone else. Edward would not have been happy. I love seeing his POV>
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 181
I understand his reasoning but still is not right to be that rude to someone. He could have done something different.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 306
Okay, I want to know what happened to jake and jane???? Will there be any outtakes on them? I just want to make sure he gets his!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 305
I gotta say, I can't blame heels for not being able to call Charlie dad, anymore!!
lol
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 305
Well now and can see his baby Lauren strip but Bella... hmm ok not sure how i feel about that..
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 304
I bet Edward has a nice guard and deadbolt for that office. : ). That way he knows that his Bella is safe and sound. Gotta love the man! I bet she still does lap dances for him though!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 302
How positively perfect!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 66
That's from Coyote Ugly. TBH, I didn't think the main character in that movie was all that hot. The brunette with the mean right hook was smokin' though.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 304
Happy B-day Silver! You are awesome! Kasi & Nikky this story was wonderful!! And sooo freaking HOT!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 180
I want to know why he thinks that he is not good enough for her. Is it because he owns a strip club.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 179
I know he was thinking of her in the shower.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 178
Wow, I still think that he should have said Thank you!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 177
Love the Bella radar too.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 176
Oh poor baby!!!!!! NOT!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 175
I knew he did not want other guys touching her.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 173
HaHa!!!!!! I am sorry, I have to laugh at Edward. He should not have been such an ass to her.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 172
OMGosh!!!!! Jizzing in his pants!!! LOL!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 304
aww sounds like everything is coming together nicely! I'm really glad that Charlie has come around!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 171
I had a feeling that Bella extra rules. I figured it was because he did not want her to be with anyone but him, if he was being honest.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 303
Well that went surprisingly good!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 302
Haha well he deserves it!! :D
Date: 07 Mar 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 301
Oh damn that's a big step on trying to amend their relationship!! :)
Date: 07 Mar 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 299
Maybe yes or maybe no but he deserves too suffer a little!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 303
Can I say that's love that it's Jane giving Jacob his punishment! You know how much I loved her in "His Cimmarian View"!
Charlie did good!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 170
I like your Rose. It is nice to see/read a nice Rose.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 169
Oh, I knew Edward had feelings for Bella but he still did not have to be such a jerk.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 168
I knew that Angela saw her as competition.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 167
I don't know why people were giving you shit for posting Edward's POV. I for one am very glad that you are doing it. Thanks. I love reading how Edward was feeling.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 166
I am thinking that Bella was driving him crazy
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 165
Now we get to see Edward's POV1!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 164
I can not believe that Edward was not watching Bella as she danced. I would have thought that he would not miss that. lol.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 163
I am soooooo happy that Jasper and Edward showed up. What did Edward mean that "She is Mine"????
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 162
OMGosh!!!!! If Charlie and Jacob show up there they are going to have a fit with what she is doing. I don't know, Jacob may like it afte the way he was talking about sharing her.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 161
Does she have a cell phone??? She needs to call someone.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 160
What in the world is wrong with Charlie?? Letting someone treat his daughter like that. That is just wrong. Poor Bella.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 159
I guessed Charlie but not Jacob. I hope they really do not think they can make her go. They have lost their mind.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 158
OMGosh!!!!! Let me guess, Charlie!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 157
Why does he always want her to stop flirting. Why does he not want her to do that.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 156
Loving this story
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 299
Good job Charlie man up to your mistakes
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 155
Glad to see they are much more comfortable with each other.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 154
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 153
It is good to see them all having a good time together.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 152
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 151
I am soooo happy for Alice and for Jasper!!!!!! It is about time.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 150
WHAT??? You are just WRONG to do that to us!!!!! WRONG WRONG WRONG!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 149
I hope they are a lone. Let me guess, Emmett is going to say something and ruin the mood. lol
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 148
Work it Bella!!!!! Work it!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 147
Who else is in the club?????
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 146
She is probably getting getting whipp lease from his moods.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 145
Why does he want her to stay there??
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 144
Well, it is about time he starts acting right.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 143
Well, it is about time that he gets that stick out of his ass and does something right.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 142
I am thinking that Edward lost it after she left. Either that or Jasper whooped his ass in his own office. lol
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 141
I can't believe that he did not catch her if she ran home. Surely he can drive faster then she can run.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 140
I am with you.....Stick that in your pipe and smoke it EDWARD!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 139
OMGosh, Jacob is a jerk too. Boy, your Bella isn't a magentic for trouble, she is a magentic for JERKS!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 138
Thanks for giving us this background on Bella.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 137
I hope Edward feels like a heel when she gets through. Jerk!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 136
Wow, Bella is really going to tell him everything.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 135
I am thinking that Edward is going to get his ass handed to him. I hope Bella blows him out of the water. Give him hell Bella.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 134
What the hell did he mean when he said "I'm not sure what he sees in you; maybe your father paid him"???? Edward has lost his mind. I am thinking that Bella just needs to knock the hell out of him. lol
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 133
What the hell???? Truthfully Bella was only defending herself. What was she suppose to do just stand there and let Angela hit her??????????????
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 132
I REALLY hope he is not mad. Angela started it. He has to be reasonable....right??? Angela was being mean not only to Bella but also Alice, who is Jasper's girlfriend. Edward has to see that that is just wrong.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 131
I knew that they were going to end up in a fight. But at least Bella did not start it. Angela came after her. I am glad that Angela was screaming things like that. I have a feeling that her ass is out of there. LOL
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 303
I like Charlie seeing what is really before his eyes! :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 302
Ooh, I do hope Jake suffers...he's a monster, he totally deserves it. Actually I just hope he is neutered of his ability to harm others.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 301
I hope it is positive. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 300
I am glad he has apologized.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 299
I hope someday soon she wall call him Dad again. She is being affectionate and open with him. Still, Jacob must have been terrifying so I can understand her hesitence.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 298
Oh Charlie's moving? Yea, Bella and her Daddy's relationship can heal from this rift.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 297
I am glad Charlie knows he's made mistakes. I hope this has opened his eyes to Jacob's true character, I cannot imagine that boy not hurting someone down the line...
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 296
I liked this, I did not know Charlie and Renee's marriage was arranged...