Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 70
He likes you he thinks your're sexy!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 64
Angela is big trouble!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 63
For sure I would be all over that!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 62
Poor Alice I feel your pain!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 61
Hook them up Bella!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 59
Not going to happen!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 58
Nah it is Ed's rules for Bella!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 57
Oh boy something is going to happen!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 55
Oh boy...give him hell bells!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh Ed you are going to get it back tenfold in a minute
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 52
Ha! No stripping for me I am Alice!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 50
He is going to try and make her not win!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 49
Ohh you are pissing him off!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 48
Woohoo! Hot Bella!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 43
Open your eyes Alice!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 39
A job you don't have to talk to do!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 37
Oh Alice I feel your pain. Short and fat!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 36
Come on Bella he is trying to help you
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
Nope not winning him over!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh Ed you are going to be difficult!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
Come on jasper is just as hot!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh boy! I could never do it!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
He can manage my ass anytime!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Jasper you better be nice to her!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hard Bella hard!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Crazy! Don't drink the water in forks!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
What a douche bag Jacob is!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is the bomb! Get out of there!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hah! I guess I am a failure as a wife!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Again the people of forks have lost it!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Omg! I would stick that book up his ass!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Crazy town! He is smoking crack!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
You go bela! Charlie you are out of your mind!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Crap! Told ya Bella!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have a feeling you aren't going to like what he says Bella!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2013 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 315
That was awesome!!! Thx! LOVED snarky and feisty Bella and sexy, dirty talking Edward! :)
ps: I've read all that y'all have posted under your names! (I usually don't read one shots as I need more than just a sampling!)
:) I've loved every story and hope y'all write more!!!!
:)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 98
Oh thank you for this story!!! I have had a hard time finding anything worth reading the last week and this is awesome!!! It's probably cause I've read all the good ones on this site and fanfiction though!!! I am addicted to reading--seriously, it is my full time job plus overtime!!! over 300 stories in a year.
If you have any stories you'd rec, please send them my way!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the wonderful words about this story. I hoep you keep it on alert as well as us, because we have a lot of stuff coming out and a few more out-takes for this as well. As for recs... I will give ya a few links:
I write with this person and she has several stories here at the TWCS: http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=558
Here is the account to get to our joint stories: http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=51415
Here is one of my favorite authors: http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=190
Kasi's account: http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=9581
Be sure to check out the many different things that we have posted as well.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
Hello I just read it all and I relly liked it every one is happy and where they should be hehehe he hehehe sweet happy and kinky ever after
Date: 18 Apr 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 54
Duchess Cole Hollow- and I like Kasi Rock
Date: 14 Apr 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
Awesome update! Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
That was fun, I really enjoyed it when Lauren slapped Charlie & they started fucking like rabbits.
YES!!!!! Alice/Jasper fun-time pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!?!?!!!?!!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 11 Apr 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
Love me some Charlie loving!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
I love this story.
Date: 11 Apr 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
Love it!
Date: 11 Apr 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
Yes! I always thought a side story about Alice and Jasper would be terrific. Thank you!! This look into Charlie and Lauren's relationship is excellent. I'm reminded of a line Booth had from the TV series, BONES. She asked if his parents went out after he and his either we're in bed as kids and robbed banks. Booth's reply was age old wisdom
"All prents have secret lives, Bones. If they didn't, they wouldn't be parents."
That pretty much sums up Charlie here. He has all kinds of facets to himself that Bella hadn't a clue of. Lauren just brings out the best in him. Love it!
Date: 11 Apr 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
cute chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2013 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2013 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
I liked this lil outtake. Well done. :)
Date: 11 Apr 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take
:) Wow... It's so cool to read the POV from Charlie and Lauren... Still loving this chapter ;-)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
Not a big lover of dribble fix, but I have to say when I started reading this one I could not stop... 1 and a half days. Love it.
thank you
Date: 17 Mar 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
love it
Date: 14 Mar 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
I am glad that Jacob learned his lessen and had a second chance at happiness.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
This was a wonderful drabble and I am glad I stumbled across it. Enjoyed the dynamic between Edward and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
Wow What a school...to bad there isn't one like that. I know a few people that could us some manners. Great out-take!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
This is a very good chapter.
Jacob had a good lesson.
I love the new banner.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
Alice & Jasper sexy kink!!!!! With full on dirty talk;)
wow so that's the training that he went through. No wonder Charlie & Bella were laughing up a storm.
I'll be sure to check out that new story for yours & I look forward to reading more out takes.
Read you later ^_^
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
I thought this chapter was marvelous. Walk a mile... I would love to "peek in" on Charlie and Lauren, but more than anything I would love an inside view of Alice and Jasper's! Alice and Jasper are fascinating each on their own; but together...! They could be both touching and breathtaking.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 68
It's getting interesting.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
Loved it :)
Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
I am glad that Jacob has learned his lesson. I still kind of think he got off easy. Miss Jane should have caused him some pain. lol. I love what he said to Leah. Great job with this story. Can't wait for more outtakes. I will be checking out your new drabble.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
:) Super! He's finally changed ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
:) loved this
Date: 13 Mar 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
Wow He got off kinda easy. But I liked Jane and Kate.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1
Oh I loved reading this chapter... I think ol Jacob got just what he deserved!! Very nice!!