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Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 249

That was a good one!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 249

Seve, wow, I'm impressed, what a full life and so blessed.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 247

I'm so glad he's thinking like I am, keep her away from the idiots until you've tied the knot.  How surprised do you think Jasper & Alice will be?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 243

Yeah, he night and from how he initially talked to her;-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 241

"My love". Awe, he's being very sweet, who knew.

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 249

The answer to that last question is so funny... ;) I love it ;)
I'm totally inpatient and the closer March 7th comes, the sadder I become :( I can't believe the story is almost done :( It is such an amazing story!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 249

Lol I shop at Walmart too!! Loved the chapter!! :D

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 249

I can't believe someone asked you that question! 

Love that Edward is taking such good care of her

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 248

Well actually yeah Walmart is kind of crazy!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 249

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 248

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 247

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 246

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Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 247

Well at least he knows that those two are idiots!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 245

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 244

:)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 246

Loved it!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 245

Aww Bella of course he loves that she has no filter and says what she has on her mind :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 244

Haha and he's still persistent about the wedding lol :)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 249

I cannot believe someone asked you that question! How rude! Poor person must be intimidated by a little dirty talk.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 249

Okay that last question got me, wtf? That was a weird question. Dude!!!!! You have seven kids! Seriously?!?!? I don't know wheather to be amazed or jealous. I have a weak cervix so it's its kinda dangerous & risky for my husband & I to have more than one. 

Im glad Alice & Bella are searing clear of their apartment for awhile. They should just put up a move out notice with their place since neither should be away from their guys for desire aswell as convienence. 

What did you see at Walmart the freaked you? I don't think I ever have. Or I just blocked it out. 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 249

I think it's sweet that he wants to be sure to date her before he marries her.  The man seriously cherishes the woman.

P.S.  about Walmart... I'm from NY.   The workers there are great.  It's the masses and hoards of shoppers that make it dangerous there.   God bless the employees!  They should be sainted!  I pray for their survival daily!

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 249

love the story and with 7 children I really hope you a very large washer and dryer. True story with my first to kids my husband got me a nice gift with my 3rd I told him forget the gift we need to upgrade to super capacity.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 248

Been there -  had more than enough - never , ever shopping there again!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 247

Smart man that Edward!  Just a feeling....

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 249

Awwwww i wish that they never came back

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 249

Bahahahaha!!! I love it! Congrats on being able to handle seven!!! I could only do two! :)

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 245

Update soon great chapter

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 248

Try not to go there

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 248

poor Edward in walmart

Reviewer: fallenangel8526 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 245

I absolutely cant wait for the rest of this story...im addicted lol :D

Reviewer: fallenangel8526 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 244

tease lol 

Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 244

I would have jumped him and made him continue

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 244

Man true love is killing do you know what this is like Romeo & Juliet 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 244

If he starts foreplay and then tells me it's time to get up; I tell him to make up his mind!  He c an't have it both ways.  I am so not a morning person!  I can only concentrate on one of them at once.. I mean please!

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 243

I love the fact that touching her means so much to him as well!  It seems as if Edward has kept his feelings bottled up and now that Bella has set them free, he basks  in them.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 244

Aw, he is just trying to get her to wake up, lol

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 243

Aww good thing he's being sweet!! :)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 243

Love

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 243

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 242

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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 243

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 243

waiting for more

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 243

This was nice and fluffy chapter

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 242

Awww Edward is so sweet with Bella. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 242

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 242

Edward is nothing like Jake OMG how could anyone compare them, no way. Edward loves her for her

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 242

I hope Edward is different and I know he's not like Jacob at all he's sweetness towards her proves it!! :D

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 242

Oh!  I don't think he's anything like jake! 

I mean he's acting a little domineering, but he has had Soo much pent up passion right now, that it makes sense. And it's not like she has said No. Soooo....

 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 241

He's sweet when he's not being an ass!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 240

:)

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 242

Awwwww this makes me wanna cry

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 239

Aww loved the chapter!! :)

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 242

How sweet of Edward to do that 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 238

Haha and she's the one who didn't want to be popping out babies lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 237

Oh damn!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 236

She's probably is turn on lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 235

Aww their finally together!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 234

Yeah he's way was better :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 233

Well I say fast full push cause slow hurt like yeah no words lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 232

Haha loved it!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 231

Damn!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 230

Haha but he loves her and her mouth!! Lol :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 241

aww me too!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 229

Damn!! I bet she's liking he's reaction to her v-card!! Lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 228

Oh damn!! Marriage!! O.O yup I love Edward even though he was an ass before!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 227

Oh she better and he better treat her good too!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 226

Oh O.O he just declared himself wow!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 225

Oh shit!! Yeah he's going to be surprised lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 224

So just like that he thinks he's going to sleep with her?? O.o

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 223

I just hope it's not Tanya or who knows maybe Charlie O.O

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 222

He better take care of her lol :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 241

AW so carrying

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 230

Gruff he may be, but you have to adore the fact that Edward wants her first experience to be wonderful.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 241

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 241

:)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 241

Sweet lovin boy has a dirty boy strick too

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 241

They are so made for each other.  She seems kind of quiet lately!  Is she still in shock?  

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 241

Is Edward running off get Bella's ring that he has for 

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 241

He's so sweet

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 241

He can be so sweet and it's very cute ;)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 241

Aww!

Glad your back safely!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 240

Oh my is he ever! Whew!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 240

love

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 240

Love it

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 240

Wow... Hot!!!, Sometimes I'm finding it so hard to cope with the time difference! :(

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 240

thank you for the update.yes he is

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 240

love it!

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 240

Man wow

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 240

Nice clean time.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 240

I hope your appointment goes well!  Also, I liked this chapter, very much. :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 240

wonder how he is going to hangle her being back in his gentlemens club?

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 240

So hot

Hope they have so much sex one or both of them pass out, then wake up to the other moving on top if them. I love sex-capaids. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 240

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 240

:)

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 240

He can't let her down now can he!  A promise is a promise!  

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 239

Definite yay! Thanks for all the updates.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 238

Now he's really sounding lie a keeper;-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 237

I think he'll say good. As possessive as he is I'm betting the caveman in him wants her belly swollen with his child;-)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 239

Loved it :)

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