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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 276

thank you for the update.....are Edward's parents Esme & Carlise?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 275

Aww for the girls helping her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 274

WOW he's going to come for 2 months?

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 273

I'm wowed the Charlie could step over him and not on him, lol. ;)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 276

No clue, but I am eagerly awaiting the answer! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 276

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 275

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Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 276

He talked about her I guess.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 276

?????? Um Emmett or Rose have mentioned her?

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 275

That sounds like how I looked on my wedding day. Minus the black ribbon. I wore a white dress that was already hanging in my closet. My husband black slacks & a black button up shirt with thin silver strips. Our honeymoon was staying at home & turning off our cell phones for the weekend. It was funny & a bit annoying telling people. "We're getting married!!!!" "Ahhhhhhh finally!!! When?" "Friday" ".............. This Friday?" "Yup" "............ Are you pregnant?" The answer is no I wasn't but everyone kept asking but needless to say both our families were watching me to see I would start showing. I finally did, about 4 years later.

Bella & Edward are going to be so happy. Is this story almost done?

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 276

Either from back form forks or there the lovely couple hat gave her a ride the rest of the way to Alice's house after her truck broke down I think it's the later part though hehehe

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 276

GAVE HER A RIDE WHEN HER PIECE OF SHIT TRUCK BROKE DOWN ON THE WAY TO ALICE'S??? MORE WEDDING PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 276

Who told them?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 275

The wedding of Bella and Edward, I love it.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 275

Aw, this was sweet. :)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 274

Lol, living in sin...;)  I am glad Charlie has finally seen the light. :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 275

Loved it :)

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 275

well I know I am hooked ....cant wait to see the wedding and 5 days with E in romantic heaven

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 274

Yeah Edward and Charlie both made right decisions!! :D

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 274

thank you for the update...Charlie walking over jake PRICELESS!!!...I'm hoping Alice & Jasper change their minds and get married also.

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 274

:) Super! He becomes smart ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 274

looking forward to more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 274

Loved it :)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 274

cant wait to see how he does by his daughter

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 274

Awwwww everything is wrapping up so nicely.

yeah Alice & Jasper are the kind of people to choose to live unmarried, some people live better that way & hey more power to them. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 274

:)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 273

Love your story can't wait  for more.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 273

Good job Edward your forgiven for all you made Bella go thru!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 272

OMG he didn't just say that in front of Charlie I just hope Charlie is the one who hits him if he doesn't. I hope Edward kicks both of their asses!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 271

Oh hell no he didn't!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 270

I hope Jacob gets he's ass kicked!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 269

Ok I'm beginning to forget what he made her go thru :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 268

Oh wow crazy much Jacob?? O.O

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 273

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 272

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Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 267

Aww that was sweet of Edward!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 271

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 270

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 269

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 268

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 267

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Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 273

OOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!!!!!!!!! OH HELL I THINK I JUST............. OH NEVER MIND SEE YOU TOMORROW.

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 273

Lol... That's the truth Jacob... You don't deserve that girl, only Edward does, only Edward does... :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 273

Good for Charlie but he had a right hook coming, IMO.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 273

!!!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 272

Both, I hope.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 273

I hope Charlie takes a really good look at Bella when she's looking at Edward & they say their vows. I hope he can see how truely happy & "in love" Bella is with Edward. She's going to be just fine. 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 268

Charlie should shoot Jake!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 267

Dang, he just put it out there straight up.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 273

Ha ha I loved it so good :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 273

woo hoo Go E. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 272

OMG  he's actually saying it in front of Charlie???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 271

Hope Charlie knocks him on his arse with that comment

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 270

Little boy needs to go home

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 269

WTG E

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 273

Brilliant!

Reviewer: vggnns Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 273

About damn time Charlie!

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 273

LMAO

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 271

stupid Jake you can not force someone to love you

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 268

I really like it better when Jake is a dog in these stories or dead

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 267

now that took guts

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 271

Please tell me Charlie is going to deck the boy now!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 267

Atta boy, Edward!  Take the high road!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 273

Best ch

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 272

OMG please tell me they both get him!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 272

Well, I was thinking Edward, but now I am thinking Charlie is going to do it.

Reviewer: KeniNic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 272

My money is on Charlie!!!! I am so in love with this story! Keep it coming

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 271

Oh know if Charlie puts up with that then, he is nothing but a fucked up excuse of a human being!! 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 272

Charlie

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 268

I see Edward's fist in Jacob's face.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 268

Jake is a moron.  hope E decks him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 267

Glad he put Charlie in his place

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 267

Obviously Charlie doesn't get hints...he needs to get hit hard.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 266

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 265

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 264

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 263

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 262

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Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 266

Yeah, issues of being a big ole fool & listening to people talk crap about his daughter let alone believing it.  He needs to wise up.

Reviewer: fallenangel8526 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 266

:)

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 266

Sometimes you have to hit the bottom and then work yourself up.  He has to finally realizes what a great kid she in order for him to go on...some small town talk is not what you should base your decision on!  He needs to be slapped!  And what happened to Alice in that same small town!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 266

Charlie was a wanker and needs to pay for awhile.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 265

lol  good info for e

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 264

Charlie is being a wanker

 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 266

Well of course he would be selfish and say that he's alone idiot I say!! O.o

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 265

Of course he would be happy no one touched he's Little Girl!!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 264

Haha so that's why he call her that!! :D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 266

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 263

Charlie when would you learn!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 262

Aww he's been sweet!! :)

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 266

Jakes got a lot to answer for !!

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 266

He still a dick.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 264

I do think so!  Or at least I hope so!!

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 263

cruisin for a bruisin Charlie ??

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 263

Oh oh!! I hope they will behave!

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 263

Really charlie that is down right as behavior 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 263

hmm   Wonder if charlie would like a split lip.

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 262

awwwww

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 262

nice of E to try.  Kinda agree with not telling her esp in case it goes wrong

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 261

Think Charlie REALLY needs to explain what happened with graduation and all.

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