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Reviewer: shegoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 310

I love this story every time I read it

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 312

I love this story every time I read it

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

I love this story every time I read it

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Have enjoyed this story! The chapters could have been longer/ condensed down to make longer ones, but overall I have enjoyed reading this story!

Reviewer: awestruck Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2018 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 314

I have really enjoyed this story, even laughed out loud several times, which is not something I do very often when reading a story. :-)

I have to share this; my mom was 49 when I was born, my dad was 58. I was their 7th child. My 3rd oldest sibling, who was in her mid twenties, was pregnant at the same time. She gave birth to a daughter a few weeks after mom had me. It raised a lot of eyebrows in the little town we lived in, lol! Some of my brothers and sisters already had kids in their teens when I came along. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Love it 

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

All just so Brilliant. Thank you so much

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

All just so Brilliant. Thank you so much

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

All just so Brilliant. Thank you so much

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2016 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 54

Is okay My stripper name would be Goldie Harris!lol

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

AWESOME!!! story ;) how about some domella? thanks for sharing and the o/t, f/t's ;D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Thanks for another awesome fic.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

This one has been on my TBR list a while.

Sherry

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 22

I live in Canada, and what the employer in this chapter wouldn't be legal here. I'm not sure about other places in the world. 

Reviewer: kevsjunk Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Is this posted anywhere with more than a paragraph per chapter? I really want to read this but not if each chapter is so little. I'll spend more time flipping to the next page than reading. 

Reviewer: kng1986 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

I get the impression Bella doesn't want to marry Jacob and be the dutiful little house wife.  I can't imagine why she wouldn't jump at the chance. 

This is too funny.  I was born in 1951 and if my dad expected any of this crap, my mom would have castrated him.

Reviewer: rogueslaygal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 126

How can you NOT sing when you see lyrics from The Rocky Horror Picture Show? Before seeing the movie a bunch of times I was able to watch a local stage production & it was so awesome!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 76

I think your a/n are just as funny as Bella in this fic. 

Reviewer: Dramamomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 250

I am going to say immaculate conception for you with you seven kids as it is with my mother and her seven kids. Please don't ruin that for me ever again not a picture I want in my head.

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 314

Thank you for writing and sharing your story!

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 33

It's sad when ur notes are longer than ur chapters

Reviewer: mfrancesj Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Awesome story

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Outstanding story.  Read entire story last night.  Job well done.

Reviewer: ALIGAULT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 315

I LOVED THE STORY, GOOD WORK ! NOW TO THE NEXT ONE :)

Reviewer: vampchick09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 151

GOOO ALICE!!!! RIDE JASPER HARD ;)

Reviewer: vampchick09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 105

MONSTER COCK!!!!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 315

Yes,I wondered about that too.I am so lazy with posting a chapter--can't imagine how you posted multiples per day!

HEA for everybody! :)

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 280

What happened to the truck anyway?Did she sell it as scrap?

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 226

Okay,that was a little better!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 225

Okay,that wasn't romantic--at all!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 218

His home,hopefully,because Jacob might attack Bella at Alice's again.

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 175

Yeah,I guessed that--that Edward didn't want her giving lap dances due to purely personal reasons.Possessive!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 172

That was so funny!I too had imagined he had hit the desk in frustration!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 170

That's true--Rose is usually portrayed as snooty at the best and completely bitchy at worst.And it is rare to read a horrid Angela.

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 150

Drat! I knew it was too good to be true!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 140

You tell it like it is,Bella!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 103

How come he didn't hear her?Must have been in a zone!

Reviewer: archy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 100

This story is hilarious! If I had read it as a WIP,I would have reviewed much more,but right now I am in a hurry to finish it.I love Bella's attitude towards life,and as for Edward...he has a lot to learn!

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

I enjoyed reading your story. I have to say that the age difference squeaked me out a bit, but it was still a good story line. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 289

That rabbit is definatly a surprise.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

SPEAK BELLA!

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 227

So will Bella tell him or not so much?!?! Hmmmm

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 172

Fucking hilarious banging into the door 

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 161

Bathroom window???

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 119

Funny as hell love this 

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 77

I'm sure Angela will call her out on it

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 66

Coyote ugly , jersey girl

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 64

Maybe Angela is the headliner and sees her as a threat? Or maybe she noticed how jasper looked at Alice and Bella was with alice

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 46

Yeah. !!!!!!

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Hilarious I love it

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

Note definitely 

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Fuck you billy jake and Charlie !!! Do u understand that 

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Can you say what the hell black?

Reviewer: nonenonenone Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

Please combine some of your chapter, maybe I'll come back when you do.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Sweet thans again for the story!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1

LOL!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 315

It was great!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 314

Sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 313

Crazy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 312

Knew it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 311

Let me guess she is pregers too

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 310

Mind bleach!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 309

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 308

Oh my

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 307

Yuk!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 306

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 305

So funny!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 304

Cool

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 303

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 302

Oh fun!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 301

Wow!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 300

Humble is good 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 299

At least he is trying!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 298

Bella is so cool!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 297

Dumb ass!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 296

Regret is a terrible feeling

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 295

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 294

You go Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 293

Do I sense a Jacob Tanya team up?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 292

Oh you are in for it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 291

Oh. Yeah forgot about her

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 290

See we aren't the only ones with our minds in the gutter!  I like the other rabbit too!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 289

Sure did!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 288

You are going to get her pregers at this rate!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 287

Lucky girl!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 286

Dang...he is sooo freaking hot!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 285

Wow!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 284

Yummmm wish I was you Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 283

Yeah I like choice number two!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 282

Ha good one Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 281

Calm down you aren't her father!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 280

Hah!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 279

Sweet 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 278

Duh Charlie!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 277

They gave her the ride!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 276

? Not a clue

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 275

Again the best family is nonfamily!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 274

Living in sin you go alice

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 273

About time you woke the freak up Charlie!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 272

Done so done!

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