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Reviewer: Spamula69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  I loved that.  So good. 

I especially loved the line about the drool and the bloated tongue.  That was just beautiful.


Reviewer: ShadesOfPurple Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella dude you gotta continue this!! Make me proud sister!! WOW!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) Ariel is my absolute favorite ever and this is so dark, but I LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

thanks darlin'!

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