Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 96
Jasper does need to put up or shut up and get out. Awww poor B.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 95
Bad ass Edward! I so enjoy all your stories so much, but have to admit this one just owns me. I get so excited when I see an update!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 95
Good thinking Ed. He talked too much!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 95
YOOOOOO!!! He has some skip in him!!! Damn that was cold but soo fucking good!! Im want soo much more. Loved the updates hun xo
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 95
Whoa! WAs not expectng Edward to ice Aldo. Not sure what that's all about. Is he just getting greedy? Or is there more to it?
Glad to see this in my inbox! Thanks!
Sally
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 94
Mmmhmm hot headed Edward rears his head again. Im glad Bella has made such big progress getting back to herself. Edwards a made man doin it big yay you!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 95
Wow! I hope he was authorized to make that hit - otherwise that was cold!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 94
Love their version of Spring Cleaning, and the recession even affects the wise guys. Reminds me of an episode of Sopranos where they were trying to shake down a Jamba Juice only to realize franchises down care about protection. Hope he stops shutting Bella out...
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 95
oooh E's becoming even more of a hard ass. Aldo had a big mouth huh?
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 94
hmmm wonder if RIley is lining his pockets and not pushing up what he's taking?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 94
*sniff*
missed you!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 92
knew Jasper Alice and about Riley?! I understand the anger of Jasper, Alice is a little stupid if you think your boyfriend would be okay with that, I hope nothing happens to Jasper, he just does not seem to love Alice, he was almost forced to stick with it.
I'm anxious to see what Riley knows.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 91
Carlisle should not play with his father, Carlisle is a large shark, he knew all that his son was up to.
I'm glad that Edward is safe, Bella could not bear to see Edward stuck, I do not.
Jasper does not seem to pay much attention to Alice, Jasper is a smart guy, I think he is more involved than it seems.
Lex kisses.
Date: 11 Jul 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 93
Welcome back! I'm curious to see how things play out with CJ arrested. :o)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 93
i just hope none of the backlash, cuz there will be backlash hits edward, cuz i totally see cj trying to point fingers at edward, or saying that edward set him up so that anybody that didnt get arrested would go after edward...but i am curious about jasper and alice...
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 92
jasper has the worse temper ever!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 93
CJ is going away.
Edward is in... wonder about Jasper.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 93
I don't know why but I just don't really trust Riley. Also have to wait and see where CJ ends up. I think Carlisle is ok as far as any of them go and Jasper just doesn't think stuff through and listen enough. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 92
oooh take your time...I love it and want it to last
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 93
If CJ thinks Edward is the rat, he can put a hit on him from jail. I think things are about to get very real!Great chapter!
Date: 09 Jul 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 93
i love this story!
Date: 09 Jul 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 93
That is some major foreshadowing there. Riley's head is already a little too gassed up, this sounds like trouble.
I hope Edward continues to be alert and trust few.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 93
Thank you for updating Lexi...Without Riders, Tribute and Offbeat is what I have to look forward to. I have missed this...
Will you be elaborating more on Bella's pregnancy? I mean I don't even remember if they have been to the doctor or how far along she is. It hasn't been talked about much in the past few or more chapters.
Love the chapter...and update soon please.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 93
Ahhh so that's how everything happened, smart move!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 92
No worry about the wait!
Oh yeah! Crap if he wasn't there it may look like he set everything up.
Hmm what is Jasper's deal. I hope he does have feelings for Alice...maybe it was jealousy?
Date: 08 Jul 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 93
So now we know for sure.
Looking forward to more
Date: 08 Jul 2013 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 92
I had wondered if they would consider Edward the snitch.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 93
Thanks for the update!!! Miss your mob ward!!!lol :)
Date: 08 Jul 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 93
It always amazes me when I read mob stories and family going against family. But, I guess that's the only way they can survive. Really ... survival of the fittest ... or smartest.
So, Edward is fitting right into the 'family'. But, is Jasper going to go along with all of this? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 07 Jul 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 93
Things are going in the right direction for Edward. He will have his place quickier than he was expecting. Thank you for the updates. Take care of you.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 93
CJ had to go, gotta stay away from the drugs if your mafia - maybe he never watched goodfellas :)
Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 92
Good chapter - glad for the update!
Date: 07 Jul 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 93
Wow, things are really moving along for Edward. As it seems they should, he earns it.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 93
I hope edward is ok once hes made.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 92
Thanks so much for writing.
I can't believe Alice would be that way to Riley, I get it in a way but I get Jasper's point of view more. He was absolutely right in what he said about her treatment of Riley. I don't get how she can't see how he would and should feel offended by that. And Alice thinks she's doing everything to make him love her? She has a very difficult(ok, slutty) past for him to get over and throwing herself at Riley doesn't help with that.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 92
Thanks for the update I always look forward to your new pages your the best
Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 93
Nice...jazz deserves in esp if he's keepin alice...
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 92
Riley is only kidding himself if he thinks Colleoni will bump him up instead of Edward. I am not trusting Riley just yet.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 93
Thanks Lexi, Love this story. You are the best at writing mob stories and Carano.
Who's Edward gonna take out to get his button?
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 93
Thank you again for updating. I think that Edward survived the Feds. He will have to be careful, with less of them to watch he will stand out.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 92
You are worth the wait. Got to worrying that you were finishing up stories so you could stop writing. I am glad you are back.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 93
I love this story although it is more difficult to read on this site than fan Fiction. Thanks for the update. Once again, it was great to see HollettLA in Chicago. Please tell her hello and thanks as well.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 93
Can he trust Riley?? Thanks for the update! I needed a break from RL!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 93
Just want to say,as you know, I love anything and everything you write. And while I tend to be impatient, I would never bitch at a writer for a long wait for an update. Now, that being said, thanks for the update :) I love all Edward's you write. This one especially. He's so sweet in an awkward kind of way, lol. So, if peeps can't understand a busy life, then they need to find a hobby to pass the time, lol. Cause I'm sure at least one will be shitty about the long wait. I'll stop rambling now. Your awesomeness :0)
Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 93
Love it!!! Colleoni is a smart cookie, kudos to him
Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 92
Love the chapter!!! Hey, no worries I hope everything in your life is great. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 93
Nice update surprise! Looking forward to the next!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 93
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE. LOVE IT!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 93
hmm wonder if Riley will get a bump up or rubbed out.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 92
Alice is really a ditz to not realize what jumping into Riley's arms mean.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 93
Thanks for sharing. I am already looking forward to the next update!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 92
You made my night with these updates! I am not going to lie and say that I don not wish for more frequent updates but when the story is good enough and you just sitting on the edge of your seat to see what happens next you are more than willing to wait. Thank you for sharing your amazing imagination with us!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 93
Things are still getting interesting! Can't wait for more. Thanks Lexi:)))
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 93
Why do I have the feeling that Riley thinks he is more important than Colleoni will make him? I think Colleoni is getting ready to start grooming Edward to take over the family. Instead of Riley being the next in line, it'll be Edward. Hmm.. Jasper has potential? I think that's what Jasper has always secretly wanted - be a part of the family - be important - respected.
Thanks for the updates and looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 92
Yay, thanks for the update! I have been wondering about these guys since Riders finished. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 92
I was excited to see an update. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
I think Edward has a good take on what went down with CJ and his crew. He's smart and learning their ways quickly. Jasper... I was like WTF? I don't understand why he lost his cool so quickly, unless it's out of jealously. Dude needs to get it together, before Collenoi finds out he walked away from Alice when he was suppose to keeping an eye on her. Jasper needs to remember she's young.
What's up with Riley? What's he got to talk to Edward about? Looking forward to finding out.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 93
Wow! The whole thing with Colleoni and CJ is just crazy but also really sad. If you cant trust your own blood then really who else is there?
-C
Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 92
I thought I was hallucinating when I saw the update, lol. It's all good you're a busy lady which is a great thing! Enjoyed the little verbal tussle between Riley and Jasper.
-C
Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 93
Love the story!! Keep up the great work.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 93
If Riley thinks he will always be higher (I miss that story! Sequel, sequel!)than Edward...he is one silly man! Thanks for the updates!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 92
No worries. So worth the wait. 92 chaps and I don't want it to end!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 93
Always here so when you can.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 93
Thank you, Lexi...love all of your stories! ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 93
I seriously dig Riley. I hope he stays good throughout the rest. Can't wait to see Edward move up n
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 92
Damn! I loved Jasper's outburst! It's nice to him react to Alice instead of a tiny annoyed with her like he seems all the time.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 92
So happy for the update. I love all your stories, but this one owns me right now! Thank you for all the time you spend writing your amazing stories for us!!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 93
Glad to see you return. I was starting to wonder if you forgot about us. Ed seems to be getting in deep. I hope he really know's what he getting himself into?
Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 93
2 chapters today! Great! So the button is coming.....I guess I knew that.....no Bella this chapter.....how's her pregnancy going? Is Jasper in or out? That seems up in the air for some reason.....gonna take a moment to get back into the swing of this story. I'll get there...
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 93
Love it! Can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 93
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 93
Im happy with how this turned out cause him killing his own son seemed like an extreme this way he's alive and all for his familys benefit. Bellas still prego but the button ceremony is what im excited to read about. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 92
Um Alice is young and it shows cause honestly you cant cuddle up with ya old jump off in front of ya new boo lol. Love this Edward even tho he and jazz almost crippled each other he still woulda threw hands for him!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 93
great chapters, can not wait for more
Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 93
I was so excited to see an update. It was interesting to see what will happen! I can't wait for more!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 92
I think Edward has a good sense about what happened to CJ and the rest who got busted....he seems to be intuitive about those things. What's with Jasper? Jealous of Riley? Riley and Alice? WTF? I didn't know they had a past.....guess I missed that.... I'm glad you updated this and that you will finish it. Get to finishing your stories when and don't feel pressures. You seem to be a feisty enough woman to not let pressure get to you about this. You just advised a young writer to write for himself. Take your own advice and do what feels right. I, for one, am grateful for what you choose to give us. It's for fucking free!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 93
So we finally have some answers... something tells me that Riley is someone Edward needs to look out for,
Thanks for the updates, can't wait for the next one!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 06 Jul 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 93
Another great update! Love your work.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 91
This story is AMAZING!! I can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 25 Jun 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 91
Love this story so far :-)
Date: 25 Jun 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 91
Love it! And your Bella is great. She's incredibly strong, got through awful abuse from Jacob, didn't trap Edward and has always been honest about her love for him. She's a key part of the story in keeping Edward level-headed and careful because he has more to live for with her, and now pregnant. So- love Bella and this story overall so good. Thank you for all your hard work- it show!
amy
Date: 22 Jun 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 90
Just to let you know Lexi, I love all your stories, especially these kind, the storm series especially. Really like this one though, love your Edward and Bellas as always, and to all the haters who giving you bad reviews, sc.rew them, lol. Keep it going. Sequel!! lol.
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 91
So did big daddy set up CJ? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 91
awesome story as always, really like bothedward and Bella characters, she may be a little nutty but she been through and lot and she is funny with it. Keep it up, hope there is asequel to this one
Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 91
Good job and it's great to be getting into some action.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 91
Lexi I know you got a publishing deal for QS. Does that mean you are done writing FF? What name are you publishing under because honestly I can't live without your writing?
Date: 09 Jun 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 91
I love your stories! Bitches are gonna hate what they're jealous of. Mobward fics may be a dime a dozen but nobody writes um like you!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 88
Aww, he feels left out. BUT sometimes that's the best way. The ones in the dark can really say they know nothing!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 89
Yeah, I'm still a little confused, but I know it will all come out soon enough. Great chapter