Date: 27 Jul 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 101
Wow! That surprised me a bit. I wonder what Riley wanted Jasper for...or did Colleoni just set him up? Hmmm
I think Bella is gonna pop soon! :o)
Date: 27 Jul 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 101
I'm not understanding why Riley was after jasper?
Date: 26 Jul 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 101
woh Ed's moving up fast - love it
Date: 26 Jul 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 98
Good chapter - It's really wonderful to have someone on your team, at home, whatever, someone that's with you for and against what life throws out there. It's really what it's all about. I also loved this "She goes about life all la-di-fucking-da, in her own little world—whether she’s happy, sad, or withdrawn—and then some genius shit flies out of her mouth." Interesting to see the mob life from 'middle management' POV. thanks always for sharing your story...
Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 101
WOW 3 chapters, thank you so much.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 101
Hmm wonder if Riley was helping those other organizations.
where was jasper? Hmm
Date: 26 Jul 2013 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 100
Oh shoot! I hope he doesn't get caught.
I wonder why the boss wanted Riley gone...
Date: 26 Jul 2013 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 99
Hmm I wonder if the boss called jasper in to save him? Hmm
Date: 26 Jul 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 101
Uh oh! This is still really good! Thanks Lexi :))
Date: 26 Jul 2013 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 101
Hope we find out why Riley had to go. Thanks for the updates.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 100
Damn...Guess Riley did something the Boss didn't like.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 101
Thank you for updating..
Good chapter. Taking out Riley well eliminating a middle man.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 99
Corleone called him to do something straight for him, now Riley is looking for him. This does sound bad.. watchaup2.. LOL
Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 101
Please keep going I love your mafia stories. Sadly I miss QS, ROTS and WTS
Date: 26 Jul 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 101
Ooh, really awesome. Connecting the dots. I wanna hear from Colleoni, what is he really up to?
Date: 26 Jul 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 100
Yowza! Edward is enterprising. Dang, he got Riley good. Love the increased action in these latest chapters, but I wonder what's up for real, though. This is wild!
Date: 26 Jul 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 99
Okay, now I'm scared. What does Riley want with Jasper? See, that cat always struck me as shady. How does he manage to come out smelling like a rose while CJ goes down -- that applies to Riley AND Jasper. Wasn't Jasper hired to do CJ's books? Something stinks, and it ain't yesterday's garbage. Edward is right to keep quiet and observe. It would be a shame if he can't truly trust his best friend, his lady's brother, his kid's uncle. Riley, I never trusted that dude.
This has me on the edge of my seat. I'm glad the drama is picking up a bit more.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 101
I had a feeling this was going to happen but this getting more interesting. Can't wait to see where this is going. This is worse than waiting for the next week night time drama TV like Revenge or something. I'm being patient Lexi. I promise
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 101
Awesome! Keep 'em comin'! ;)
Date: 25 Jul 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 101
Wonderful chapters!!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 101
I was kind of sad that he had to kill Riley. I wonder why he had to kill him. Anyways, I love all your stories, I can't wait for your updates!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 101
shit's getting real now, just in time for the baby. should be interesting!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 101
Poor Riley, oh well...love the update thanks!!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 101
Man lexi...that was a great set of updates!!!! Favorite line...so help me jasper if she's asleep when I get home!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 101
It keeps getting better!! Awesome update
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 100
Yea! Eddie spaghetti is hot and poor bella will think he's fucking someone else :( old habits die hard but she's getting better and better. Riley is leaving a bigger and bigger puddle as I type this out... on to the next
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 99
Yep shit bout to pop off!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 101
Wonder why they took Riley out??
I loved Edward threating Jasper if Bella was asleep :D
Too funny.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 25 Jul 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 101
Well holy Em Effing shit. Those were three crazy updates.
Loving the story.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 101
Wow, did not see that coming.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 101
Love that he is loving B, big belly and all. Can't wait for more
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 100
oooh Thinking Riley was skimming money and big boss found out.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 99
hmmm now what is Riley up to? Something smells funky
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 101
So I was wondering. Edward is being groomed to take over for CJ dad. Will Edward get to knock his grandfather off too. I love the way you write your Edwards. And thank for being my number one author. You rock!!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 101
Great chapter...well, not for Riley. lol
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 101
Never trusted Riley. It's time for Edward the Capo!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 99
You have me a little worried with why Riley's there. Loved the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 101
....he should have told Jasper that Riley had it in for him...that's the OTHER reason he's helping...maybe Colleoni found out about Riley and Alice's pregnancy/abortion and that didn't sit right...hmmmm *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 101
Cant wait for more wonder what Riley did
Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 99
Wow, I wasn't expecting that turn of events. Will we ever know what Riley did to PO Colleoni?
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 101
I keep forgetting Jasperbis significantly lower ranking. Why was Riley there?
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 101
the day to day reality of a made man is brutal as you describe it. you pull no punches. i like that. a person knows where he stands....you write a mean bad-ass story!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 100
oh no....I wonder why Riley had to go? messy, this hit was...
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 100
Damn! Shit is seriously greeting real! Well, he'll! I liked Riley I thought he was a good guy.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 99
oh oh this doesn't sound good....loved the bent over the counter sex in the pizzaria...even if you didn't spell it out...
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 99
Why do I have an uneasy feeling about this?
Date: 25 Jul 2013 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 101
Whoa! I guess Riley was doing some shady ish too. Unless, Mr C genuinly wants his Godson running the show! Gah! Its getting so good!,
Date: 25 Jul 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 96
I like how *real* you write your relationships. Thank you... xx - M
Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 101
Bella and Edward being affectionate and happy together makes me grin huge! I love that their getting their freak on daily because it will be a LONG time without afterwards. Dang Jasper got off easy!
-C
Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 100
Oh my gosh! My heart is pumping like CRAZY!! I was so afraid that something was going to go wrong. I feel bad that Riley had to die too, but I dont know the reason behind it so I might change my mind about that
-C
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 101
Jasper needs to toughen up if he wants to be part of the Colleoni family. I think Colleoni is doing what he needs to do to make sure Alice will be provided for and taken care of when he's gone.
Hopefully this will give Edward the opportunity to move on up, as he should, he is Colleoni's godson after-all.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 101
Thanks your are the absolute best I frenking love this story, can't wait for more see bella and Edward get married and have Edward mason3rd and I can't wait to see what else you have in store, I was shocked about Riley thank again
Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 99
Oh shit! This doesnt sound good at all. I'm worried!
-C
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 101
I was afraid he was gonna kill jasper! I'm glad things are better with B&E
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 100
Damn. Has Collenoi lost his mind? He's having everyone killed off. Now I'm curious as to what Riley did to get whacked.
Edward's right though, Bella will most likely think he had a chick in the restaurant with him.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 99
Is he gonna kill him??
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 99
My curiosity is getting the best of me... All of a sudden Colleoni summons Jasper to come to him, and then Riley shows up looking for Jasper. Sounds like somethings amiss with Jasper.
Date: 24 Jul 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 95
It's like a franchise - you pay for the family name and they give you corp benefits but you run your own business....
Date: 24 Jul 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 97
I swear, if he cries one more damn time and then reverts back to his shitty behavior.......
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 98
Ahh I thought she might get a baby for valentines! Soooo happy for update!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 98
yeah, being pregnant, especially at the end? SUCKED!!! and i was so sick and swollen and i never went through the 'nesting' phase much to my husbands disappointment, and to make it worse (for him at least, lol) i didnt even go through the horny stage...
but (accoring to him at least) i did go through the emotional basket case stage, convinced he was cheating...still not sure he wasnt/isnt but sometimes there is nothing you can do to change your situation...my son and his needs come first, always!!!
and i just blubbered all over your review, lol...
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 97
i truly hope edward does what he says...she deserves real happyness...
Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 98
I'm glad they really are back on track (for now, (sigh)). The baby is coming soon, right?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 98
I need to find out if there is a relationship between depression and OCD. I want Bella to be better! Edward is looking ahead for his future. Wonder what Family he will become a part of.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 97
Bella is so lost, and Edward can't fix her. I feel the anguish.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 96
I have all the faith in you Lexi!!! Love this story:)))
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 98
Great couple of chapters. Love that he's being more honest with Bella.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 98
so sweet together. wonder where/how he will get dishwasher from? hijack a sears truck?..lol
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 98
I glad that he is keeping his word about telling her things ... at least the things he can tell her about. I have hope for these two that they will make it.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 98
much better between them and she is learning.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 98
What a sweet valentines day!
Bella seems to know her stuff and I think she's a good match for him!
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 97
Yeah! A huge step forward for both of them. Maybe now he really will start talking to her again.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 22 Jul 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 97
Edward's so emotional. It's touching, but kind of disturbing.I hope he doesn't run into any threats pointed at him. That he stays out of danger--then again, the nature of what he does is profoundly dangerous.
I love that he isn't afraid to weep in front of his woman, that he's showing vulnerability only to her. Edward is a good man.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 98
ah, she's nesting! bella's grown up alot in9months...
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 97
Aw yay! I'm happy for them!
I hope they can fix things!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 98
I'm glad they are doing better!
Bella is right to be afraid, Edward is not careful, he is comfortable with the situation and can be stuck .CJ release but if will want revenge.
I feel like Bella and Edward need to connect, this stage of pregnancy is so difficult, if they do not unite to receive the baby.
Kisses.
I can have hope for a new story?
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 98
He's back and their back. Sweet. I knew I could trust ya;-)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 97
I feel sorry for them, they love each other, but ,who can also err!
Bella is sensitive and afraid, the two did not have time to meet, undated and are now having a child, it is very difficult!
Hopefully Edward help Bella overcome their fears and to feel loved. I love stories, everything.
Kisses.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 98
Aw! Every woman would get wet if Edward would mop their floors! Bella's an smart cookie!
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 98
OKAY! Now that's what I'm talking about! Much better than last chapter! They're talking and just living life. I am so ready Edward to be a daddy and Bella to be a mama!
-C
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 97
It was nice to see Edward like this. Realizing, wanting to do better ngreat update.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 97
Awe, that's more like it.
I'm not completely getting the image of Edward's working and not being there for her. It just doesn't seem like him but I guess that's the point he said he was the one who changed. I just wasn't completely visualizing it.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 97
Well this just makes me sad. I dont want them to doubt each other so much, like living with ghosts. I'm saddened that Bella fully believes that Edward is fucking around and just accepts it, doesnt fight, doesnt argue, doesnt complain, just burries it all.
-C
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 98
Aww sweet chapter! Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 98
Glad to see they are finding there way back to each other. Bella's 'street smarts' about the 'merchandise' was unexpected, but still useful for the future. Whether they discuss the 'life' or not, she's proving to be an excellent mafia wife. I just want them to keep it together and for Edward to be there for Bella and the baby when it comes.