[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 105
Yeah edward can be calm and cool during a mob situation,but bella in labor he freaks out.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 107
Hmmm... Sneaky little Jasper. And I can't wait until she's pushing that kiddo out to see what she says to Edward... I can just picture her telling him he's never touching her again. Hahahaha
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 106
He is cracking me up with all the nervous dad to be stuff. It's like he can't even think straight...lmao
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 105
Bwahahahaha Toni Braxton contractions instead of Braxton Hicks contractions. Typical man.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 107
I love how Jasper calms Edward down. They need each other. It's nice to see how tight they are. Sneaky Jasper! Harboring a Alice crush for years. Awesome. Great updates tonight.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 107
Jasper always struck me as a slipery mo-fo. What's his angle? That was a total buzzkill from all the hilarity of the previous chapters. I guess we have to get back to work, huh? It would be a shame if Edward had to ice Jasper. Which loyalty comes first?
Another excellent set of chapters, Lexi. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 106
Oh Edward, he's a piece of work.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 106
Is it sad that I'm loving flustered Edward. He is sexy calm, and now even sexy all sweaty and nervous! Loving the updates.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 105
Oh my God this is hilarious! I can see it all--the comedic timing is brilliant. The way he's behaving toward that nurse cracked me up. I thought he was gonna flash his piece. Edward is a mess. I'm shocked that Bella is the voice of reason here, but she's proven that she keeps her head under pressure. The quiet times haven't been her friend.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 105
Girl! I just spit out my ice water when I read Toni Braxton contractions! That is funny shit!!!! Loved the chapter.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 107
oh that's all :( ... cant wait to met baby M!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 107
Sounds like both Jasper and Alice did some shady shit....seems like nobody is immune from danger, from being a target....I hope Edward can make Bella happy...
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 107
I'm ready for this baby!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 106
Poor boy. He is a mess. Thank God Jasper and Alice made it there. Maybe tey can calm and distract him.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 105
"Toni Braxton contractions"!! That was a hoot!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 106
Geez, Bella is a really Bitch! In labor or not there is no reason to treat your man like that. He has done all that he can for her and it's still not enough. Lord Give Me Strength!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 106
Hilarious! Toni Braxton contractions! Lmao! Another great update!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 106
I'm laughing at Edward right now! He's such a typical first time father! So cute. It is a scary thing bringing home a small needy crying human when you're so young. I was 20 with my first one and scared to death! You do the best you can. Love these last couple of chapters....some lightness after the butchery of the ones before. Such is life, huh?
Date: 07 Aug 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 106
Poor nervous Edward!! to funny! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 105
Toni Braxton contractions!!!! I'm choking I'm laughing so hard!! When I went into labor with my first, my husband jumped up out of bed and immediately rolled to the floor clutching his stomach like he was the one in labor.....men!! I love the bit of comic relief here.....
Date: 07 Aug 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 105
Lmao... Toni Braxton, that's hillarious!!! Nervous E is cute... He's gonna be a daddy!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 104
Lol! Love their frantic ness!
Date: 02 Aug 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 103
Loved how domestic them seem!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 104
when she started talking about having the use the bathroom? yup, i knew it was baby time...but no bag?! i had that packed as soon as i hit 8 months...and had to re-re-and repack it wanting to wear those clothes...
Date: 02 Aug 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 101
shit, shit, shit...and jasper being a punk? grrrrr!!! n
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 100
bella, bella, bella...yeah, she is totally gonna flip out...
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 99
what the heck does riley want with jasper? and why would alice be trying to help riley find him? she knows the two of them have issues...
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 104
Yeah the baby. I have a feeli g jasper is going to mess up and it will mean jail time for edward.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 104
Woooo here comes the baby!! :D
Date: 01 Aug 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 104
Aghh!! Jasper didn't take the car, thank god.
Cant wait to read more;-)
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 100
Wow, I was right, these guys don't mess around. I thought maybe Edward would have some loyalty to Riley but I guess Jasper & Colleoni trump Riley.
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 99
Eek! With these guys nothing's a safe bet.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 104
He better hurry up if she has been having contractions and feels like she needs to push. Can't wait for the baby to come. See ya next time and hopefully what he left u dee the porch won't be found by anyone.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 104
Oh lord, I'm crying laughing at these two. They are so precious. Oh my goodness!! Love them.
Thanks for sharing another great set of chapters.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 103
Is she in labor and doesn't know it? That's what it sounds like. Bella's hella cute, to quote Edward.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 104
YESSSS , the baby is coming ! TIMBERRRRRRRRR ! Excellent chapters, thank you for sharing. Take care of you.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 104
I am so excited for the next chapters! Love this story!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 104
Woo Hoo Baby's a comin!!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 103
B really needs some self confidence boosting.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 104
"You and the fuckin' desert!" OMG Lexi - stop it's too funny.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 103
Christ is Bella in labor; these two are wack-a-doo....ssshh I love it
Date: 31 Jul 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 104
Yeah, the baby's one the way. I'm atually surprised that Edward is being as calm as he is. I thought he would be panicking more.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 104
so gross and yet so funny
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 104
oh wow, how exciting!!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 104
Ok have I told you that I freaking love you?? Cause I do! I love all your stories but I swear these last 2 chapters I just can't I'm still laughing it is so hard to type. I love these 2 they are all kinds of crazy but it just works for them.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 104
Can't wait! Hope it looks just like Edward! ;)
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 103
So i'm reading this at 2:15 am and I woke up my husband and my son because i'm laughing so loud like a fucking loon. I got yelled at well sort of hahaha
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 104
The baby is coming!! Jasper and Edward go crazy.
Etam sweet Edward with Bella.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 104
Yea, Edward is going to be a daddy! I'm so excited!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 103
At the end of the pregnancy I wanted so much sex ... I do not care about
my size, it was funny because the first four months I could not even think about sex, I just sickened and slept, then I just thought about sex.
I think Bella is going into labor, these cramps
seem to start contractions.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 104
I was thinking it was labor that's how I felt. Awesome updates.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 103
God. I love all of your stories! You create such great characters. I also look forward to your updates! Please keep writing. Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 104
Holy shit can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 104
Saw that from around the corner!! Yay Juniors coming!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 103
Thats good love, when you want each other no matter what. Edward is a real man he knows she shits, has a period blah blah and doesnt make her feel bad about it *swoon* thats a damn good man
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 104
crying I can not stand to wait on this
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 104
Yeah, the baby's coming.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 103
These two are so cute together.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 104
Here we go! All those pressure things were contractions....a little Masino is coming! I'm excited!! It's almost like my grandbaby.....LOL I'm stupid..... they're so cute in their panic!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 104
Yay! So excited for the next update! If you really love us, hopefully it will be very soon!!! ;)
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 103
a day in the life of Bella and Edward.....I hated that about the end of pregnancy, that having to pee all the time and getting constipated when the baby pushed on my bowels....ugh!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 104
Ha! He fucked the baby out of her... LOL
Can't wait to read the next one!
xoxox
Mina
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 102
I hope they don't use the same meat grinder for people as the use for meat. That would be so nasty. Also what do they do with the ground up people. Do they put it in the incinerator. I hope so. I would not want that to get mixed with hamburger.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 101
It sounds like its getting more dangerous
Date: 28 Jul 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 102
Edward makes it all sound so easy.
-C
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 100
Holy shit! He had to kill Riley! What on earth was that all about? I thought Riley was one of the 'good' bad guys.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 99
Hmmm ... Wonder what Colleoni wants Jasper for? And, more important, what's up with Riley?
On to the next chapter to find out ... maybe.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 102
I had never trusted Riley, but why iced him so suddenly? Something is up and Jasper is behind it. Can't wait to find otu the reason why.
Thanks for the updates, Lexi. Can't wait for the next one. xoxo Mina
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 102
I'm loving this story, this Edward
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 102
good chapter...lots of ummm detail
Date: 28 Jul 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 102
That was...HA! Jasper cracks me up! No love how blunt Edward was with him!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 102
Damn, I hope jazz doesn't fuck up because of his nerves and shit. And I think he better start talking soon. He owes Edward. Still loving it Lexi. Also started following on ff :))) thanks girl!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 102
...and we still don't know WHY?? Curiosity is killin' me! *hugs*
Date: 28 Jul 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 102
Hey when ur about to hit the six week dry spell you run when she says so!!!
Why riley???
Date: 28 Jul 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 102
Very interesting. Hope we get to find out why Riley had to be whacked.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 102
I'm not so sure Jasper can get the job done right, alone. He's way to squeamish. I think he'll take short cuts to get the job done quicker.
I knew it had something to do with Alice. I'm dying to know what it was.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 102
OMG I hope Jasper does not mess this up. I can't wait to hear this story from Jasper
Date: 27 Jul 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 102
hopefully he does it right
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 102
Oh my goodness! This is getting good!!! Haha love it!
Date: 27 Jul 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 102
Oh man, it was a terrible coincidence that I happened to be eating when I read this chapter. Great update
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 102
Oh man could you imagine having to do that job clean up...YUCK! Hope Bella stayed up and hope we get to hear a little about their kinked out evening if she doesn't go into labor first.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 102
I wished I hadn't been eating nachos while reading this chapter...I loved it! Thanks for the update.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 102
Yikes ... it's the Sopranos! I love it. Give me more, Lex!
Date: 27 Jul 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 102
yikes.... another grisly graphic chapter. such is the life of a gangster, I guess, but now I'm close to gagging just like Jasper.....Edward is truly a bad ass motherfucker!! I can't stop reading, though.....go figure!
Date: 27 Jul 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 102
lol for Jazz all gagging and shite. Love E wanting to get home to B.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 102
I hope jasper really does have it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 102
This was so damn hard! Im speachless in the best possible way, this is a thoro well job DONE!
Date: 27 Jul 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 102
Lmao! Loved this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 101
GAH...I love this! Nobody writes a mafia story like SLC. She is the Queen! All the twists and turns; not seeing certain things coming. Wonder what Colleoni is up to. Riley out just puts Edward one step closer to the top. And, Bella is a hoot. Such a mob wife. Love it!