Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 114
oh yeah Joshie...you f'd up
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 113
Glad Colleoni is helping......I hope
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 112
poor B. I'd be scared too. hmmm does joshie know or not.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 111
"I'd grabbed the bat that sits near the front door," I had to laugh at this a little. When I lived in NYC, I used to keep a baseball bat by my front door. Luckily, I never had to use it.
Well, they certainly have a mess to clean up now. And, his mother is coming to stay! Can't wait to see how Edward deals with this now.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 110
I am floored that Bella went behind Edward's back and told his mother to come to the christening ... and stay with them. this should be a really interesting reunion between mother and son.
And, now someone's trying to break-in?
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 111
That was exciting.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 111
Omg lex...tryin to clip ed....wtf is next?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 111
Glad E dropped them. Arseholes.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 110
hmmm sounds like Elizabeth is a real piece of work.
Dun Dun Dun....Ms cliffy
Date: 12 Aug 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 111
I can't believe someone tried to kill Edward and Bella. It is a good thing that Edward and Bella are smart. Edward needs better security at the house, so Bella and the baby are safe when he is gone.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 110
Well, it will definitely be interesting to see how Edward gets along with Elizabeth. Hope she has changed and they can have a real relationship.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 111
Wow!!!! Crazy two chapters!!! Holy crap!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 111
I have never really trusted Carlisle, and honestly, I don't know if I trust Jasper anymore, either. He's been acting strange, & has been awfully secretive lately. Not to mention that he's with Alice now, which makes him more important to Carlisle than Edward, for now, even though Jasper isn't half the man that Edward is, and never will be.
I don't think Jasper would hurt Bella or the baby purposely, but he's naive, & I think he's underestimated how slimy Alice's dad is, and may be a bit blinded by love & possibly greed.
Ultimately, I think all of this stuff is happening lately because Carlisle feels threatened by Edward. He probably fears that Edward may try to take him out, & take over everything, which he definitely SHOULD, & hopefully WILL! Carlisle is a snake - one who turned on his own son. He also is the one who mentioned calling Elizabeth to Edward in the hospital, and then lo & behold, she mysteriously knows everything, and is in touch all of the sudden.
Bella's definitely right when she says that Carlisle & Esme aren't blood...Edward should do well to remember that, especially considering what happened to CJ - Carlisle's own blood! Not to mention Riley - one of Carlisle's top men - easily disposed of over some petty shit to do with Alice. Who knows if she was even telling the whole truth about her & Riley. I think she says & does a lot of things for attention. She's spastic, immature, she lies & exaggerates - is a drama queen...not to mention a total slut.
Carlisle is only throwing this big party for E/B/& Little Eddie for appearance sake - to portray himself to be the "good guy", not because he loves them, or gives a shit, so I hope that doesn't sway Edward in any way. I can almost guarantee that he knew that those guys were coming to clip Edward. You're not in Carlisle's position, and not be aware of what's going on. Hell, he seems to know everything else that's going to happen beforehand. So I believe he knew, and most likely set it up. No unmade guys are gonna even attempt something like that without some sort of permission or instruction first, unless they are stupid, crazy, or have a death wish.
Another slimy thing Carlisle done recently is having Edward do his dirty work for him & Jasper by killing Riley, even though it was beef between Jasper & Riley - over Carlisle's skank daughter Alice, no less. But I guess as long as he keeps Alice happy, Jasper's in Carlisle's good graces. Jasper SHOULD have been the one to handle his own business with Riley...not just the clean-up, and then act like a pussy. Now the F.B.I. has paid Edward a visit, and most likely, Carlisle that set that up, as well.
Carlisle reminds me of that old saying about your worst enemies come with smiling faces. Edward better wise up about Carlisle...keep his eye on Jasper, too, before it's too late!
I'm so glad E/B/& Little Ed got through everything okay. I just hope that everyone that has it comin', gets it!
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapters! ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 111
U Truely are such an amazingly talented writer!!! I just wanted to thank for writing such a truely captivating & intriging story!!! U truely amaze me with ur abilities as a writer time & time again with ur beautifully captivating flowing written words!! Thank for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazing story!!! I definatly give this a 10 star rating!! I will most definatly be impatiently awating ur next update!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 111
OMFG! That was an amazing chapter. Edward needs to invest in an alarm system or move them to a gated community for security, because I don't think this will be the last attempt on his life. I pity Joshie. Edward is gonna kill his ass.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 111
Ya How the hell did Bella get caught up in that, like for real!!! Ya Edward, your a Marine act like one!!!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 110
Bella had no right to go behind Edwards back and contact his mother. Regardless if she called first or not and then making all those arrangements behind his back. He is such a pussy because I would have been MAD AS HELL and he just took it! Man up son!!!!!
OOOOh, somebody's creepin', drama coming up next!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 110
I'm looking forward to Elizabeth's arrival and how it will go with Edward and her. She seems like a real jewel.
Ut-oh... someone's trying to break in.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 111
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!
Oh! boy is goin' down! Dirty play there, asshole *shakes fist at Joshie*
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 111
more please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 111
What a cliffy, can't wait to see what happens next great chapters
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 111
Oh wow! I guess it was just a matter of time.
His godfather didn't have those guys sent to take him out did he?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 110
OH NO! Are they coming after the baby??? No!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 110
Oh shit ! Why did they try to kill edward
Date: 12 Aug 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 111
Whoa. I don't even have words for how thrilling that was. Bella is a tough one, I'm proud of her. What in the world is going on? It's bedlam!
Another excellent set of chapters, Lexi. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 110
Just when things were kinda peaceful, somebody has to start some crap. First I was worried about Elizabeth, but somebody is snooping around their house- FTW?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 111
Great chapter! I am surprised that they came after them like that. I am excited to see if Edward has a plan for retribution.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 111
Wow my heart rate spiked with this chapter. Wonder what Carlisle is going to do when he hears of this? Or maybe he knows? Dear God I hope not.
Mwah
Barb
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 111
Who is Joshie? I guess I missed knowing who he is....this was close, so close. Bella was calm and kind of saved the day with her bravado. Kill the fuckers, she says....love that! This was a very intense, well written piece of the life.....
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 110
Uh Oh. Dun Dun Dunnnnnnnnnn Thank god the next chapter is done. Don't think I could of waited. MwahBarb
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 110
Edward Masino III!! Love Edward as a daddy....I wonder what the real scoop is with his mother....someone is breaking into their house? no fucking way! do they want to die?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 111
Damn! It's getting real now! Damn! Great updates.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 110
We damn! Whose at the door???? By the way...daddyward is hot!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 111
can wait for more!
MrsB
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 111
Oooo i hope edwards godfather lets edward clip joshie since he sent those guys.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 111
Holy shit cant wait for more
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 109
It was difficult, but they made it, finally, Little Eddie is here. Beautiful set of chapters, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 109
Awe the babies finally here... Love it. And I must say I love the name Eddie, not that I'm bias or anything...lol
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 109
Finally Hes born. :-) I thought he'd never get here.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 109
Sobs - I love Little Eddie - I'm a mess
Date: 09 Aug 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 109
Aw, little Eddie has finally gotten here! YEAH!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 108
OMg I died -
Fucking Alice. I wanna see how calm Jasper is the day she goes into labor when I call in a bomb threat . . .
This chapter is so so good and it is scary
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 108
Thank God, that doctor fianlly got there. Now, Edward and Bella can stop panicking and start pushing that baby out!!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 107
Alice has a big mouth
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 106
Hilarious - you are so funny - - I'm dying over here.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 105
Omg - tears - dying laughing - You know I didn't really scream either - just whimpered and pawed the wall over and over.......at the very end I did do that get it out get it out in an exercist voice though (according to hubs) Thanks for your stories - always
Date: 09 Aug 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 109
Woo hoo for baby!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 108
Wow Alice really is an idiot.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 109
I loved it! Now I'm crying:-( you have to promise you will never stop writing, I just think you're amazing!!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 109
Aw! I'm so glad everything went well for them!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 109
Oh! I'm sobbing here. The miracle of birth, life, love. It was all so beautiful. I was scared for a minute, but things seem to be well...for now.
Wonderful chapter, Lexi. Thank you for d sharing.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 108
Yeah I think Alice leaving that room is the for the best lol!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 109
I have no words, it was so beautiful.
My husband can not stay in the delivery room with me, he was so nervous that it was not funny, he could not drive, talk, nothing ... even though my delivery was quick.
I was worried for Bella, afraid that something would happen.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 108
Actually this is the greatest moment of our lives, but it is so scary ...
Great chapter, poor men, they can do nothing but wait, and still are desperate, my husband could not even drive ...
Date: 09 Aug 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 109
Oh wow, that was great. Eddie Jr. Sweet chapter. I felt it for him when he was thinking about his father and his godfather was there in his place. I wonder if he's going to tell his mother. Probably not!!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 109
That...just unbelievably sweet! The ending, Edward kills me. So sentimental. I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 109
My Lord that was beautiful.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 108
I love how you captured the moment. The sweetness between godfather and godson was spot on. The drama in Bella's room...Jas is right. Always drama with them! Great update.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 109
Loved it! And their going to have more, haha! Soo cute. Love how you do the touchy feely scenes. Another Edward;-)
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 109
That was great
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 109
this was really good, it was like I as there
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 109
So sweet!!! Loved these chapters!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 109
Hey Lexi Gemgirl here! Finally leaving a review....sorry I am lazy with that. This chapter was well worth the wait. You nailed it....every emotion you feel when you are giving birth for the first time. You are excited in a good and bad way. I agree with Bella telling off the doctor. He should not have put her through that. When you do the final scans they have a pretty good idea how big the baby is going to be. She is petite and being her first birth it was unnecessary grief for her to be put through that. My first birthing experience was not great at all. I can relate to her frustration at the doctor lol. I guessed correctly about the name. I had a feeling she was going to name him that. Such a beautiful chapter. But what I love most about you as an author is the subtle little hints you dropped last chapter. No I am not going to write my feelings on that. You have to draw your own conclusions. Loved this chapter so much.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 108
Why would Alice say that? She needs to be beat, haha.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 109
Awww...so sweet. I hope the baby ends up looking like Edward, though. LOL
As for Alice...she needs a Prozac! That girl is so annoying.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 106
He's cute and they're out of their mind. Haha
Date: 09 Aug 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 109
whew!! just a small girl having a big baby boy!! yikes, I forgot how hard this really is to do....my baby is 32.....congrats to Bella and Edward! Baby Eddie!!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 108
what's wrong? is the baby breech? oh god this was a hard chapter...
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 109
Loved it
Date: 08 Aug 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 107
well at least that explains the Riley thing
Date: 08 Aug 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 106
OMG He is hilarious.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 105
toni braxton.....ROFL
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 107
I am glad that Jasper and Edward are getting back to their close friendship. They are going to be family forever. They needed to work it out. It is about time that Jasper realized how much he loved Alice. Maybe she won't act so crazy when she feels secure in their relationship.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2013 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 105
This should be good. LOL
Date: 08 Aug 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 107
Sounds like Jasper may be a bit manipulative...
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 107
That was certainly interesting.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 107
I am glad Edward was so nervous. It fits his character. Now jasper. I hated hat he lied too. Bella was perfect.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 107
Hmm wonder how much of what jasper is saying is the truth...
Date: 07 Aug 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 106
Lol! He seems so frazzled!
I think they will do good with a baby, lots to learn, but they will do good!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 105
Oh the joys of doing that for the first time! Love their crazy time lol