[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 66
concussion be damned, lol!!!! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 65
holy crap! that is how Edward finds out? dang, I was not expecting it to play out like that! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 117
I don't blame Edward for not being excited about his mom coming. She wasn't a great mother when he did live with her. She had a chance to be a great mom and she didn't. That had nothing to do with his dad.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 117
WOW!! Meeting Esme and Elizabeth promises, I'm looking forward to it.
I'm sorry for how the life of Edward's mother followed, fate was not kind to her.
I'm glad that Edward and Bella are having good time.
Kisses.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 115
Wow! That was a lot of unknown history revealed. Who knew that Colleoni held a torch for Edward's mom all these years? That was a huge surprise for me. Can't wait to see what happens when Elizabeth arrives in town.
Not as surprised at Carlisle telling Edward that he will be his second in command. Can't wait to see what Edward decides about that.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 30 Aug 2013 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 117
Edward is so cute with little Eddie.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 117
hmmmmm Daddy C is picking up Elizabeth. That does not sound good. Sounds like some good things coming up LOL
Date: 29 Aug 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 117
Eddie Spaghetti....
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 117
Bella's a sweet Mama;-)
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 116
Yeah!:-). Loved it.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 117
Well...I thought ed was carlisles for a bit there....another excellent update lexi!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 116
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 117
Thank you for the nice chapters.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 117
Love love love!!! Too short! I needd more! Sorry I'm impatient...
Date: 28 Aug 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 117
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 117
Loved them cant wait for more
Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 117
Can't wait to meet Mom, now that I know the back story. The baby stuff is cute as can be! I hope I live to see my great-grandbabies....
Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 116
love how you wrote this....with passion and full of real emotions. you always exceed my expectations with your writing. I love this story, how full of things that touch me deep inside it is, how so un-fake it is. If I were a writer, I could say it better....
Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 117
Loved these updates! They are so sweet together!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 117
:) loving this
Date: 28 Aug 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 117
Yeah the history btwn his mom and godfather would be hard to digest if i was edward too
Date: 28 Aug 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 116
Loved the lemon did they practice safe sex ie: birth control or condom? Im only asking so if she gets sick idont assume soething
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 117
Colleoni getting Edward's mother from the airport with their history... hmm. Interesting.
I'm actually looking forward to see how well behaved Liz is. If she's there for her family from her heart, or if she's only there to get what she can. Bella seems gullible and an easy target for Liz.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 116
I remember those days, where you get to have sex only when the baby is asleep, and trying to stay silent enough not to wake the baby. I think that's the best sexy times you've written for these two.
Looking forward to them getting married and the christening.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 117
THAT WAS GREAT,LOVE IT I WANT MORE! THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 116
So cute...'the baby's asleep, be real quiet and hurry up' sex! lol *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 117
Uh oh...did Bella just get pregnant again?
Esme & Elizabeth having dinner together ought to make for a very interesting evening. LOL
Can't wait for the next chapters! ;)
Date: 28 Aug 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 117
great! love this Edward and Bella, I feel they are still so inocent, good hearted to be on the mob life, I hope is stays that way for them...
Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 117
That was just...my teeth hurt that was so sweet.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 116
I love how they are so open and goofy durning sex. They are just themselves. It makes it so special to read.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 117
you always leave me wanting more
Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 116
woo hoo for sexy times
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 115
I feel sorry for the mother of Edward, she made a mistake and ended up paying dearly, Edward's father loved him, but he loved his mother, and after what happened and everyone knowing her case with Colleone
his life was a inferno.Agora with your back as are the feelings of Colleone?
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 116
Well folks that is how it is with babies. You sleep when you can. Sex when you can and sometimes sleep is more important than sex.. You never thought it would be but hey go without and it gets real important fast.
Thanks for updating.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the beginning. Plan to wait til it's complete then devour it in a few days. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 112
The life we r03;r03;chose Edward is dangerous, and this unfortunately involves Bella and her son. I fear that there is a possibility to be his best man who put a mark on it, anyway Colleone delivered his own son.
Date: 17 Aug 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 115
Thanks for all the background. Helps understand where Edward came from ad how things got so messed up with his Mother.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 115
Jasper's first kill and first go with a gun. They sure are toughing him up. He also seems to be up for the whole boss thing now. Great chapter.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 115
This chapter was so very good; I loved everything about it. First - so heartbreaking Liz's story, unloved, ostricized, scared...so sad for Ed sr, jr and her. They were all so young and it broke my heart. So much information too about the families, and Edward's concerns, and yet funny stuff in there too...and Jasper taking those steps. I could read about these guys forever; your touch is magic.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 115
Oh wow! That explains a lot!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 111
Wow. So I'm assuming those two work for one of the made bosses and they wanted to kill Edward so he is not in the running for the job? That is messed up. Bella was really brave. I was really proud.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 115
I love the way you lead this story, thank you for the great updates.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 114
This isn't going to end well for josh
Date: 15 Aug 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 113
So his godfather wants to take him out?
Hmm maybe it wasn't him then?
Date: 15 Aug 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 112
I was wondering if it was his godfather too...
Date: 15 Aug 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 113
Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 115
this story keeps getting better.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 112
I'm glad he called his Godfather. Good move I think.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 115
Love the back story on liz
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 110
Great story. I am still sticking to it. Keep writing the violence and the sex. You are GREAT.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 115
This is so fucking good! What an amazing chapter. Your character development and plot....just, thank you for writing!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 115
Wow, that was a huge chapter. I can't help but notice how cynical my point of view was in regards to Colleoni. He wasn't a bad guy, unless you want to consider being a cooz hound being a bad guy. He seemed more a product of his times with a very honorable relationship with Edwards Dad. Which is good because that would make him such a hypocrite after what he did to his son (that CJ deserved).
thanks for writing, loved it.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 114
wow - that was scary to me - huh - vry atmospheric
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 113
good - I always wondered if someone could pick up one of those cannon balls in the park...lol
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 112
man so many things to consider
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 111
This chapter is amazing - so good
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 115
I love the longer chapters! this is getting better every new chapter and I like so much that is so different from the Storm series, youn momma Bella makes me feel nostalgic, I was a mom at 19 too, she can do it! :)
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 113
Still feels like a mystery in regards to Colleoni, I'm not sure why I don't trust him. Probably because I don't trust any of them except Edward & Jasper but I don't trust Jasper to always make a smart choice just because he's not wishes enough?
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 110
If Dad was on fire and Elizabeth had a bottle of water, she'd drink it....damn...so good this story
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 112
So I'm not the only one questioning Colleoni's involvement in this.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 115
Poor virgin Jasper baggin' a bone! God I love this story. Thanks so much for the multiple updates today. I had a really tough day with my elderly parents, so it was a great treat at the end of a crap day. By the way, I just finished reading ALL THREE Storm stories. Simply amazing story telling with incredible character development. I absolutely loved all of them. I can't wait to re-read them when they are published.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 115
The whole story Carlisle told was just... wow. I was starting to suspect that Carlisle was Edward's father. This chapter held a wealth of information, by far my favorite one yet. Edward deserves to take his birthright, beside his godfather, to be groomed for the up and coming boss.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 115
Wow Carlisle with jokes lol love it. x
Date: 14 Aug 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 115
wow that was some chapter! the whole story of Carlisle, Esme, Ed, and Liz....the real story. I think it was the right thing to do. Edward needed to know. Now maybe he can have a chance at a relationship with his mom, knowing she did want him. It's not a shock to me that the boss wants Edward to be his successor....what does Edward really want? Poor Jasper....his first kill....no longer a virgin! It was a very satisfying chapter, over all....
Date: 13 Aug 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 114
Bye bye Joshie. Geez Edward is a cold, sadistic MF when it comes down to killing. I guess I can't blame him. The guy threatened his family....
Date: 13 Aug 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 113
So it wasn't Colleoni. Good. You know I really do like all the blood and guts in this story. Am I a sick fucker or what?
Date: 13 Aug 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 112
Could the old man have ordered this? I hope not. I hope it was this Joshie person, will be dead soon if it was him....what a thing, to come into a man's home with his wife and new baby there.....Bella was cute for wanting to help...
Date: 13 Aug 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 115
Damn that was an intense chapter. I loved the information in it. This is my favorite chapter so far.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 115
Oh my god great chapter you are such a good writer you keep me wanting more, can't wait for the next chapters
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 114
Yes Joshie, you did fuck up, royally. I like how Edward shot his kneecap then claimed he tried to escape, lol.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 113
So Coleoni didn't have anything to do with it. Jasper's gotten awfully chummy with Coleoni. Can't wait to for Joshie's excuses.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 112
I'm wondering if Coleoni didn't have it done for a test, but that'd be fucked up. Joshie is a dead man walking.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 115
Oh my God. Where do I even start. First the Free Willy comment shkuld go down in history as the best quote ever. So frickin funny. But everything after that was note worthy too. LOVE IT ALL! !!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 115
Good update! Loved the end of the last chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 115
This was an amazing chapter, I loved it. And as soon as I read the 'sleepin with the fishes' line I just had to put Catatonia 'I Am The Mob' on as background music :-)
Thank you.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 115
Wow, now that was an amazing chapter. Colleoni is on funny fucker "What'd I say?" Colleoni shouted. "You don't know, you say somethin'. Now you got me feelin' bad and shit...I didn't know we had a virgin on the boat." He pointed to the captain's chair. "I'll buy you breakfast...but don't be a pussy about it. It happened and that's it." He gave Jasper a sympathetic pat on the back. "You get an 'E' for effort." He rolled his eyes at me. "You hungry?". As if it was a regular conversation. The conversation really cleared up a lot of things that were missing for Edward and I'm glad that you wrote it the way you did. Again, great chapter!
Talented as always.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 114
I was hoping jasper would fare better. But Mobward more than made up for it.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 113
I'm loving this side of Edward coming out. I'm anxious to see Jasper in this mode.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 112
I wonder what Coleoni has to say about this? Loved the chapter n
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 115
I never wanted that chapter to end. There was so much revealed. I could listen to the old man all day. That's crazy about him and Elizabeth. Wow!!
You had me pissed, broken hearted and near tears, then angry again, then laughing. Brilliant.
Did he really say bestest?
Another riveting set of chapters, Lexi. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 115
Awesome updates! Thanks for sharing.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 115
wow huge history lesson. Good info.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 114
Hmm...I think the old man is up to something. Is he cleaning house and making shaking off dead weight, literally?
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 115
Well, I feel a little bit better about Carlisle, at least...but I still don't fully trust him. I'm still a little iffy about Jasper.
Bella has been doing so much better, and I couldn't be prouder.
Thanks for this wonderful story. I'm looking forward to the rest! ;)
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 113
Hmm, something smells fishy, and it ain't the pier.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 115
Just hope edward doesnt let it go to his head
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 112
Okay, I gotta go back. I need a refresher on who this Joshie is. God, there's nobody trust but your own family, but even that is looking a little suspect right now.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 115
That was funny, a virgin on the boat. HA!