Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 84
That's how I like him, "giddy like a girl"...his girl.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 83
Stephenie would end it there...fade to black.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 82
That's great, Bella is ready for her man. Way to go girl!
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 81
That was a really nice first date, even if it didn't end thhe way they wanted.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 80
Sounds like Bell might have a knack for the restaurant business, or at least an interest in it.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 79
What kind of a man has his own son killed? Surlely Carlisle Sr. wouldn't do such a thing. If he would kill his own son, then Edward certainly isn't safe. I hope Jasper and Alice are safe with Emmett coming by. I wish Edward and Bella and maybe jasper and Alice too would just go away for the weekend until 'whatever' blows over.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 78
Oh boy...The future is completely uncertain and not entirely predictable.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 77
I hope it is safe to go to Sal's
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 76
things are heating up in Edwards world. you have me intrigued.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 75
So far so good.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 74
She has one more week to decide, she has made her abortion appointment, she wants the baby and wants to get married to Edward. Well I'm glad that's decided.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 73
Is this Edward complaining? Is he never happy? Geesh? Such a little B... no wait that's his girlfriend, little B.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 72
Sounds like Edward is thinking with his head, although CJ may get pissed off, feel threatened and do something stupid.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 71
And now your stories collide. Who owns the stripbar anyway? Which one of Edward's kids or grandbabies?
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 70
Jasper would feel better if he knew there was only one time, one time that they lied about. He already feels better knowing that Edward didn't know, and that he didn't bail, and that he is staying.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 69
I think they are both holding on.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 68
They'll be alright now. The poor car, though. I had a rental this summer, and it was a dark blue, brand-new Charger. I loved it. It was fast, looked gorgeous, spacious inside, big trunk, great excelleration, had no problems with power even going up steap hills and it was surprisingly great on gas too.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 67
Bella is such a kid...but of course she is, right?
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 66
Finally. I know...drabble and all, it takes ten chapters or more to get done what occurs in one normal chapter. Glad they are working things out.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 65
The thing is that Edward and Bella wanted to keep their one time a secret and they agreed not to tell anyone about it, so that's why Edward didn't share. I know he also lied about it, but did he really have a choice?
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 64
Is Bella taking sides, or is this the only way she can keep Edward from killing her brother? I gather Jasper knows Bella is pregnant. Alice and her big mouth.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 63
Are we having fun with this yet? I guess it is the drabble style to drag out the interactions between them, but it throws me. I know Angst is frustrating, but it pays off eventually.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 61
OK It's about time you put us out of our misery. Bella and Edward better have it out and then kiss and make out...up, I mean.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 57
I had to read that a few times to see who said that..."It's like you're slipping away." That sentence is true for each of them. I think what he did with the bacon and touching her intimately, while kissing her neck should have pleased Bella. It should have been obvious to her that he still wants her. I really don't get why she didn't respond in kind. I guess she knows now, since it is September, if she is carrying his child, or not. I look forward to them getting past this hurdle, lack of communication. I don't know why he hasn't been telling her that he is ready when she is...just give me a heads up.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 56
Oh my goodness...Please Bella kiss him and tell him everything.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 55
I think it's time to make a move on him little Bella, even if it is chase. Getting him jealous with Tyler, which i think was going to be Alice's idea, would not be the way to go, I don't think.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 54
What happened to that date Edward mentioned he wanted to take Bella on? Is he waiting for her to ask him?
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 53
I hate how comfortable Edward is with his new line of work.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 52
I was thinking it was weired that Riley didn't tell Edward to rent a car or use an unmarked car aquired along the way since a Charger is a pretty recognizable car. What's up with that? Now the whole hit is off...interesting.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 51
I just don't knowabout Riley sometimes; Edward is wise to keep his guard up
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 50
You can't climb Mount Everest in a day.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 49
I thought Edward might hold onto Jake's gun, to use it in the future...a gun registered to Jacob Black could have come in handy, I think.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 46
I wish Bella had of told Emmett that he does not know all the details, and she did not want to discuss them with him, because clearly his mind was made up, but generally speaking there is no situation in which a man has the right to beat up a woman or force himself on her, no matter what the reason he may have none are justification for that.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 45
I'm glad it is a little clearer now that Jake is dead, Bella needed to know for sure.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 44
Boy that was a long one. Bella does need therapy. I know Edward and Jasper want to help her but they are too emotionally involved and Bella doesn't want to upset them, and what she needs to talk about is embarrassing, she feels ashamed, even if she did nothing wrong and it is Jake who is the one who should feel ashamed. Of course he felt nothing other than entitled.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 43
Ok. That's done. Now the healing?
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 42
So it's done. I wish Edward was not ok about torturing someone, but at least he deserved it.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 41
I hate that CJ is using this time to get info from Jake, rather than what they are supposed to be doing here and that is making him pay for what he did to Bella.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 40
Time for some blood shed...Jakes.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 39
Here we go, he's in. I gather there will be some kind of a ceremony where there is an annoucement and he get's his pin or something. Like in your other stories? I'm worried this trip with Riley and everything else is going to take too long and Jake is going to get to Jasper and Bella again.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
I'm glad Edward knows what happened to Bella and soon Jasper will know too. Jake needs to die ASAP.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
All I have to say is that I hope everything Jake has been doing to Bella comes out into the open ASAP so Edward or Jasper or even CJ can kill him in a slow painful way. He really deserves to go to prison where there are lots of men who can give it to him good before Jack meets his inevitable fate. But no this is a story and so Edward will not find out about what happened to Bella for a long time to come. I sure hope they are not separated for long. I do suspect that Edward is at her door saying her name as I write this note. I was hoping that you would end this chapter with Bella able to get away from him long enough to get Edward's gun or the 9mm and it would have been so healing and empowering if she was able to defend herself and take his sorry life.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
I wasn't thinking that the really bad shit would be what Jake does to Bella, I thought it would be what happens in Florida with Riley and Edward. I think I will read the next chapter in FanFiction.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
I hope they get up before Jasper does so he won't get the wrong idea again. I like the compromise they came up with and I hope they can stick to it.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'm reading this over on Fan Fiction too. I find Fan Fiction site a lot easier to navigate. I don't want to miss anything that you may have cut out over there so that's why I am back. I do wish Bella would mature quickly before she gets Edward in trouble with Jasper.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hate big chains on men. Grose. I'm glad he realizes that Jasper is his true friend, there for him expecting nothing in return. I wonder how Jake is going to take the fact that Edward bought Bella jewelry? I hope he doesn't steal it or break it.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cool. Jasper and Edward are two likable guys and good friends too. Edward is going to have a hard time sticking to the cardinal rule of brotherhood once he gets a look at Bella again.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 123
Please finish this! It's so good. I love it -I can't believe I've haven't read it before now. I mean I've read everything you've written and love every story. PLEASE finish this!!! Pretty pretty pretty please!!!!
Date: 01 May 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 123
Will this be updated soon??? I've been waiting patiently but I REALLY miss this story...
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 42
Not used to this type of Edward
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 123
Holy shit. Poor Bella. I don't want her to keep secrets from Edward. But this is crazy. I can't believe Carlise slept with Elizabeth. In their own home. Please update this story. Int the baptism and wedding supposed to be happening today?
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 123
loved all the chapters
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 123
Love this story and all your others:)
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 123
Wow what a secret to keep from your hubby
Date: 11 Oct 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so obssesed with all of your stories !!!! Didn't you say this story was already completed ??? The long updates are killing me I just want more !!! You write so well I feel like I know all of your characters I need .. No have to know wtf happens !!!!! It's killing me !!
do you plan to finish offbeat ?? Another one of my favs just wondering
love EVERYTHING you write keep it up !!! You are an amazing story teller
much love nikkilove113
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 123
ouch! I hate secrets! so will Bella keep this one? will it eat her alive? will it end up biting her in the ass? Edward keeps secrets too? although they are work related, but will she see it that way too? hmmm? ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 122
yea, Bella has never really been able to have sex with Edward & then she was prego. they should be able to have some fun now! lol ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 27 Sep 2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 123
Thank you for those 3 good chapters. It's always a pleasure to have an alert in my inbox for Tribute.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 121
whoa!! what the hell kinda family dinner was that??? ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 120
wow, those two ladies are good!! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 119
ok, that was all kinds of weird!! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 118
awww, Edward wouldn't care how she looked, he would think she was gorgeous anywhere, anytime :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 123
Wooo. Don't like Ellizabeth at all. I think Edward must know bout "the sex" so Bella won't get trouble ;)))
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 123
wow Carlisle complicates everything....it's a conundrum but such a good story
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 122
Edward using a machete....awful...but I could read about it....oooh shivers
Date: 24 Sep 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 121
Whoa, that's a family dinner for your ass. I don't even know what to say. Alice's reaction put the kibosh on Jasper's proposal, that's for sure.
Thus is crazy!
Date: 24 Sep 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 123
already read Bold Gestures Good story.
Keeping secrets from Edward.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 122
He did not hear all Esme said. well maybe that is good.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 121
Family dinners with the family that you don't like. UGH
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 123
Elizabeth, is a piece of work. I'm not sure if I trust her or am a fan of hers, I'm not sure if she's believable . Thanks for the update.:-). Love your stories.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 122
Love the updates!
Date: 24 Sep 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 123
I think blow is going to really be bothered by the fact his mom didn't want to but did it anyway great chapter.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 123
IFREAKIN LOVE YOU! THANKS
Date: 23 Sep 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 123
Wow Carlisle is one hell of a dickhead. Poor Eliza. Hope she gets to go soon.
Love bold gestures.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 123
I had a feeling the Elizabeth didn't give a rat's ass about Carlisle. I'm glad I was right. She is just doing what she can to protect Edward. I'm glad she was able to make Bella understand how this all works.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 23 Sep 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 122
Men were dicks back then. ah well. woo hoo on promotion though
Date: 23 Sep 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 121
wow what a blowout. Esme is such a bitch
Date: 23 Sep 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 122
I'm with Bella there at the end. I think Elizabeth is happy because she's back in Edward's life.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 23 Sep 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 123
OMG I'm so worried after this chapter...of course, Bella HAS to tell Edward. I don't know how to feel about this chapter...just worried! Ugh! lol *hugs*
Date: 23 Sep 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 121
After the last chapter, I figured the fur would be flying soon. And, boy, did it! I felt sorriest for Jasper. Here he was going to propose to Alice and then she shouts "Marriage is bullshit!"
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 23 Sep 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 123
A lot was revealed here. A LOT! So these are the games they play to keep up the front that needs to be there for all this to work out. What a burden they placed on Bella. How is she going to keep this from Edward? He will KNOW she's keeping a secret and I hate to think it may wear on their relationship.....what a tangled web we weave. Just stunning, this chapter. It says so much in very few words....
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 123
Carlisle is a real slime, just like I had originally thought. :( And for him & Lizzie to not only have sex in B&E's home, but then expect Bella to keep a secret like that from her husband is disrespectful & wrong! I understand why Lizzie doesn't want Bella to tell Edward, but still...her whole visit has been nothing but unnescessary drama brought into their otherwise happy home, whether it's her fault or not.
I've said it before, & I'll say it again...Carlisle's gotta go! It's time for Edward to get rid of that conniving bastard, & take his place!
And Alice...I understand her being on her mother's side, but that put's her in a precarious, awkward position with Jasper, Edward, & Bella, where I'm not sure she can be trusted, either. She's a bit of a loose canon as it is. :(
Can't wait for more!!! ;)
P.S. : LOVED "Bold Gestures"! Read it on FF as soon as you began posting it. You write such good stuff - I love it all!!! :)
***Any chance you'll update "Offbeat" or "Made in the Shades" soon? I miss them!*** ;)
Date: 23 Sep 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 122
There was a lot in this chapter. I'm not sure how much Edward likes Bella being more comfortable with sex. Did he like it better when he had to work more to make her more comfortable? Is her new found ease in her own body somehow a threat to him, his manhood? I hope not. Not sure what to think about Carlisle and Elizabeth. She says she just wanted to get away, but I think she likes him courting her again.....what a world. It certainly is entertaining!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 123
Poor Bella! She doesn't want to keep secrets. Just when I think things are coming together for them something else pops up! This is why I love your writing! Keeps me on my toes! Can't wait for more!
PS- I already read Bold Gestures! Love it! Thanks for writing all these awesome stories!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 121
Well that was entertaining! I mean it! What a dinner. Airing laundry at the dinner table. I'm glad Edward missed it. I feel for Elizabeth. Alice's outburst was spot on, wasn't it. This is really juicy stuff. Great chapter!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 123
I can't wait to read Bold Gestures, but need to get some of my current reads off my list first. Thanks for the explanation regarding Elizabeth and the decisions she has made. Hope keeping this secret doesn't come back to hurt Bella.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 123
Awesome chapter! Things are getting serious!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 122
Edward is very wise to see a possible alternative motive in Carlusle's promotion of him.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 123
When will we see the wedding??
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 123
I fell in love with Bold Gestures. It was an awesome story. I'd like to see more of something like that.
I'm not sure Elizabeth is on the up and up, I think she's playing on Bella's naivety. Elizabeth's a pro and Bella is a novice to this game. Colleoni is treating her like Jacob did Bella, it appears. He's using her fear to get her where he wants her. I think they're using each other to some extent.
Keeping things from Edward is gonna backfire on Bella. I doubt that Colleoni will let Elizabeth leave now that he 'has her' again. Bella needs to trust Edward will not go off the deep end and tell him what happened, in their house. Elizabeth and Colleoni disrepected their home.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 122
Hmm... didn't consider Colleoni having a motive to get to Elizabeth by promoting Edward. Makes sense though.
I think Elizabeth likes the chase.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 121
I knew Esme and Elizabeth were going to go to blows.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 123
Can Elizabeth be trusted?
Date: 23 Sep 2013 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 123
Oh my...so is carisle treating liz like jake was treating bella? She basicly is sleeping with him out of fear.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 123
Thanks for the update, I read bold gestures it was good but different. I love most all your stories you are my favorite writer, thanks for the great stories I'm always waiting for the next story or chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 23 Sep 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 123
Bella is so stupid. How did she make this woman manipulate her like that. If she wants to have a secure relationship with Edward that lie is going to ruin everything. Girl get your head in the game and stop letting other people guide your relationship!