Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 90
I thought CJ was, I was worried. Now I'm worried about Alice.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 89
I'm glad Riley is a good guy. I liked him right off the bat. I loved thier talk, kind of a father son moment.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 88
Damn! Did not see that coming.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 91
In response to your A/N, I like this Bella, although it took awhile for me to get into the whole thing, having only read the Storm series for Mobward-type fics...anyway, I was tickled to find the updates for Tribute this a.m. ... you are very good to us, keeping us hip-deep in AH E/B drama...*hugs*
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 91
Thanks for the new chapters!! Love them!!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 90
The plot is ticken, heeee!!!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 91
Oohhhh are we getting into some action??? 😉
Loved it!!! 😘
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 89
Great chapter... I really hope Bella is not on trouble
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 88
Carlisle is a smart guy, I like it!!!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 91
Can I just say that I loved the slew if chapters. Now that the skip is done... I'll get my mobward fix here. Incan count in you and cara for awesomeness.
Crazy shyt is going in and totally understand the need to venture out in the story to get the full jest. I'm just glad they're ok. Of course they've still got shyt to work out but they're good. That's all we can ask for.
Now, answering some of those questions that olpopped up would be fantastical. Lol
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 91
Loving it.
Looking forward to seeing what will happen now.
Carlisle stopped Edward from goind to CJ'S, he could have been caught up in that. Hence why Carlisle told him to wait a while, he knew this was going down.
He took the bait with Joey and Edward didn't, but Edward not turning up at CJ's did that just make him an enermy???????
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 91
Thanks for the updates, loved the updates and I love and appreciate your Candor when speaking to the Fandom, "life as been shown is to short and certain fictions are most certainly a dime a dozen" Move on folks!
Thanks again
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 90
Oh. Has he set up his own son????
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 89
Wow.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 88
The plot thickens.
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 91
Loved it!!!! Can't wait for more
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 91
Loving this story.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 91
dam he set his own son up, lol. serves him right.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 91
The cliffie is not too bad;) love this story. Looking forward to more! Thanks so much lexi :)))
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 91
Loved the updates. Super love the mob stuff so look forward to finding out what the eff is up, how Edward will deal and can we chicks be a little less crazy!? I wanted Alice and Jasper shut up so Edward could tell us what we're gonna do next!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 91
Why would people hate Bella? She has gonw through a lot, instead, they should be worried about her... a lot! I know I am...
Thanks for the updates, Lexi. You improved my night a lot!
xoxo
Mina
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 90
It's killing me smalls, I'm excited to see what happen!!
~Kat
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 90
Oh damn! Please don't leave it there! This has got me on edge. Thanks Lexi :)))
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 91
Alice is really delusional huh?
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 90
oh wow. B must have been going nutso
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 89
Glad Carlisle is being careful as he can and trusts E
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 90
oh hell, what happened! you can't leave us there!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 88
CJs really screwing things up isnt he. idiot.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 89
Things are starting to go down. Thank you for the update:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 89
Shit, even sick and old, this Carlisle is scary... Thanks for the update! zo Mina
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 89
Curious What Colleoni is not telling him.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 88
this chapter answered a lot of questions, yet raised a few more. thanks for the update, Lexi. you made my night :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 87
She knows she needs to toughen up and she will, i doubt she'd ever be Bebella but thats another story. His devotion to her is ruinin my panties swear to christ this shit is hot, he keeps sayin he doesnt know what hes doin but hell if this is not knowin imma combust when he does get it! Love this shit!!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 86
Bella is so strong not weak although i agree with the aspect of her being immature. At the same time she and edward are on uncharted territory together so i hope they can teach each other something grow together; i think bella becoming a mother will help her learn to be happy within herself and giving her more purpose in life. Hell i have no clue how id act if id be raped and abused for over a year so fingers crossed she can only go up from here.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 84
The lemon was juicy but i think im still high from Eds sweet thoughts of his bella from the previous chap ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 83
Those words he said to her *swooon* made my heart beat so fast he just wants her to know she is loved and beautiful and believe it! Loved this
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 81
Damn pregnancy cock blockin Edward lol that was too funny. I would like to see bella working at the pizza spot cause she is a goof cook and sometimes you just need a womans touch to fix things
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 79
I feel so far behind but the situation with CJ seem to be coming at a boiling point although i dont know how i will feel about Carlisle clippin his own son that shit is too hard to comprehend...
Date: 28 May 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 87
They are a lot smarter than they give themselves credit for. Far Moore people have folded under those burdens and they carry on and lift each other up. Now what will the world bring to their doorstep next?
R
Date: 26 May 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 87
ACK...ok, Bella is a bit better but she's still on the neurotic side. Please get her into therapy....cz she's gonna crack.
Thanks for writing...
Date: 26 May 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 60
AHHHHHH...I really do hope that you have Bella grow up. I could barely get through this chapter..it was annoying me so much.
*sigh* the both of them have their heads stuck up somewhere the sun don't shine.
I want to scream at how stupid the both of them are.
sorry..for the rant, but nothing pisses me off more than whimpy Bella..and oblivious Edward.
I have no patience for that kind of behaviour.
I just recently found this story again after it was pulled from FF.net.
I'm hoping you get these two sorted out and soon.
Thanks, for writing.
Author's Response:
I don't understand why people continue to read stories they obviously dislike. There's plenty of mobwards out there. I'm sure you could find one you enjoy better.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 86
Awww...he's so earnest in wanting to do things right for her...such a sweet Edward...and he's hot, apparently, too! lol *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 84
Awww..so cute...he made love with his baby mama! lol *hugs*
Date: 21 May 2013 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 87
Gah! I cant wait! :)
Date: 20 May 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 87
I think I actually read the last few chapters-updates- on your blog, but I'm reviewing here. *shrug*
I freakin' love this Lexi...You keep me wanting more and more. With this, Higher, and Riders (that I so miss) Anyway, personally, I think Bella needs professional help and I understand she gets bored. I would to, all day everyday while E is working. Hopefully, she'll be better when she starts school? And if she works at Sal's, that would help her to. Keep her mind busy and she'll be helping.
I can't say how much I love this and your other stories enough. Really, I can't. Words would not do it justice.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 87
I had to catch up again. I'm not getting your updates for some reasons. As always very good reads Lexi. Glad to see we are going to get some action coming up. I love your Mafia action. rubbing hands together. Yours are the best.
Date: 16 May 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 87
Love this story! Can't wait till the next chapter!,,
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love ya Lex, I really do. I love all your versions of Mobward and Bella...but the whining is getting to me at this point. I aam hoping for a silver lining soon. Thanks so much for keeping me occupied for all these months with your awesome stories!!! -Red
Date: 16 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 87
My God Madge! She's driving me crazy! I just wanna slap that whiney bitch! Please get her into counselling ASAP!
Date: 16 May 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 75
War for Oil, huh? Sure. Terrorism is just a ruse promoted by Big Business & The Republicans to protect their interests in the middle east. Sorry, but Edward's little mind trip took me right out of the story.
Date: 15 May 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 42
Huh. I actually found all that violence kinda hot! Sick, twisted freak - right here.
Date: 15 May 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 87
Awe I ll say it again...I love massino....
Date: 15 May 2013 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
I thought Alice was forward, but Bella acts like a complete skanky ho!
Date: 15 May 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jasper seems very obsessed with these connected characters. I'm not sure exactly where he is coming from, but he has very strong reactions to them.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 87
I've loved this story from the first chapter... There is just something about the way you write Mobward that is just so damn alluring... :-) (As much as I love this Edward, I think Skip will always be my favourite)...
I feel for Bella. She's young yes... but she hasn't had anyone to guide her and tell her that how Jacob was treating her wasn't right. She had no-one to turn to with her fears, and that in turn has kept her mind and spirit from growing up as they should have. On top of all that she's experienced, she now has a body that's screwing her around even more with the hormones going wild...
I'm glad to see that Edward is trying to understand where she's coming from, why her thoughts and emotions are going off into sometimes, weird directions. With his help, she'll finally be able to grow and mature, all in safe arms... (Hopefully)
Till next time,
Sandy
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 87
Its not the end right ? Please don't do this to us Lexy baby.
Its really good one. You always do the best.
Date: 15 May 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Alice is a real trip! I'm feeling about as uncomfortable around this crew as Edward is.
Date: 15 May 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 87
Love to see her maturing, and them maturing as a couple.. and this a/n solidifies that shit is about to get real..... So nervous and excited for what's coming!!
*bites nails*.. thank you!!
Date: 15 May 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 86
WHY am I feeling so nervous??? Something's going down... *bites nails*... xx
Date: 15 May 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 87
Loved it!! Very interested in what the meeting is about especially with Esme calling. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 14 May 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
Yeah I.m smell sex all over u is jazz scent challenged?
Date: 14 May 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 84
they finally made it happen!
Date: 14 May 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bells she such a coci tease love trianglehere we go again.
Date: 14 May 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 87
Can't wait for the wedding and to find out what is happening with CJ.
Date: 14 May 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 86
Bella needs a backbone if shes going to be a wife & mom.
Date: 14 May 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 87
I'm still on the ride and I love it. I'm just glad Jake is out of the landscape now. Bella can rebuild herself with Edward's help. Thank you for the updates.
Date: 14 May 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 87
I love the one on one time, now for some action. I can not wait to see what these two will be up against.
Date: 14 May 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 87
I love that they are growing together
Date: 14 May 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 87
I love how you handle your story your baby. so Thanks for sharring
Date: 14 May 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 87
Great to hear from you again. Bella is kind of all over the place. I hope she can put her big girl panties on and start living. Find her groove.
Thanks for the update!
Date: 14 May 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 86
Heavy but lovely!!!
Date: 14 May 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 87
I love these two and she is young and has a lot to figure out...at least she's talking about it. I also love how they don't completely have their shit together and how each day they're put another piece of the puzzle in. I'd also love to see Edward's tat...js. And love how Edward takes his time to assess the situation...kind of chill. I hope you don't end this too soon; it's wonderful.
Date: 14 May 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 87
While it was good to have her tell her side of things, she needed his more. It's nice that they are in each other's corner, and are finding their way together. Here I am as jittery as Edward, anticipating what's going to happen next.
Date: 14 May 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 85
After all the Love I think now the shit is going to hit the fan!
Date: 14 May 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 84
from sweet to hot to beautiful... only you my dear Lexy!!!
Date: 14 May 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 83
Oh my heart and belly has buterflies ... nut buterflies :)
This is beyond sweet... THank u Love u
Date: 14 May 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 82
At least!! So maybe I need to thank Alice and her big mouth :) !!
Date: 14 May 2013 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 87
As long as the updates keep coming I look
forward to were you are going to take the story.
Date: 14 May 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 87
Love this sweet Bella but hope she does toughen up! I do hope he's always faithful. I have trust!
Date: 14 May 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 86
Awwww...glad Edward is patient while Bella has some growing up to do and deals with depression which is a bitch!
Date: 14 May 2013 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 87
Good chapters. I am so glad they finally allied. It is my hope that Bella will heal and start making decisions for herself.
Date: 14 May 2013 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 87
Love it!!! She has to work on her self esteem!
Date: 14 May 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 87
Wow so glad you've come back to tribute! Don't let stupid jealous girls get you down. No one can hurt you unless you let them. Xxx
Date: 14 May 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 87
Loved it.
I understand where Bella is coming from. They may have talked, but she is still going to feel like that after Jake. He was after all putting it about.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 14 May 2013 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 86
I loved it.
It puts more puzzle pieces down for Edward and Bella.
Date: 14 May 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 85
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 87
Still loving this story
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 87
She's just seen what other mob wives have been thru. Great chapters. I'm anxious to find out what CJ had going down!