Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 67
I can't wait to see what happens with these two
Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 66
Looks like things are on the up & up
Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 64
Holy crap! Of course they make a little headway & take 20 steps back bc Alice has ran her mouth!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 63
Best ending to a chapter! I'm laughing out loud!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 62
This is a bit better!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 61
Just when I thought it was going to get better!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 60
You make me laugh with those final thoughts!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 58
Well that went from bad to worse!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 57
The two of them I just want to bash their heads together!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 56
Oh crap! Edward is going to be happy.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 55
The things Alice says are hillarious!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 54
Just kiss her Edward!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 53
I bet Bella is wanting a little something too!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 52
Maybe Riley didn't want to pay?
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 51
Jasper is taking them possibly being together very well
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 50
They just need to nap together.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 49
Buh bye jakie & good riddance!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 48
Riley seems good but then he pulls a stupid stunt like this.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 46
CJ might have been a bit too nice there.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 45
Assassinward with his purple backpack! TOO FUNNY!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 44
That was smart of him to kiss her cheek.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 42
He is so cut out to be in he mob & be an assassin! I love assassinward!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 41
Giddy up! IT HAS BEGUN!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
I can't wait to see what he does to him!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 38
I hope he makes him suffer!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 37
He is going to go ballistic? Will he be able to actually leave for Tampa now?
Date: 21 Jan 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 36
Jake just dug his grave!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh this is not going to be good!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 34
She won't give up. That's a GREAT thing!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 33
I was so hoping she would go in his bedroom.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
What happened to her? Chapter 36 is getting close
Date: 21 Jan 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
Will she come along peacefully or not???
Date: 21 Jan 2015 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
Maybe you can make her feel better Edward.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
He is soooo falling for her!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
Will Bella attack him in a fit of lust?
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Shit is about to get REAL!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
Looks like jasper has some deciding to do. And he is pretty drunk so Edward might be able to get away with something with Bella since jasper is so drunk.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
So so funny the two of these guys.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Omg jake is a total jack ass!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is not getting any tonight!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella has penetrated edward's wall.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
It wouldn't surprise me if she sneaks into his room one nite very soon!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is now going to need to show him how thankful she is.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope he gets those answers.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Looks like the date might not happen.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my my my! Bella is mad!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
How is Bella going to react to that?
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Jake is going to get it & so is bella
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
She is such a HUGE tease!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
He is spot on about trust! CJ might be a bit jealous!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is about to be movin on up!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is going to eventually do some serious damage to jake!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
So Bella doesn't like Alice being interested.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
I knew it & Bella was just a flirtin!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
This might work out good so he can see Bella w/o jasper around.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 123
I NEED MORE LOL!
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 123
I understand what Elizabeth is saying. I'm surprised she said as much as she did against Carlisle at the dinner table last night since she is obviously afraid of him and how her actions toward him could hurt her son. Bella is good at keeping secrets to protect the ones she loves, Jasper before and Edward now, so she won't have any trouble keeping this from Edward I don't think.
I can't check out Bold Gestures, well I can but not for the first time, because I have already read it and it was great. I really loved that story just like I love this one too. I wonder why this one and that one do not have follow up stories when your Storm series has so many?
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 122
Bella took that news well. I think she is right about Elizabeth. Lizzie wants him only if he leaves Esme and I doubt that will happen.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 121
Everyone's version of the truth, not really lies, or exagerations, or even delusions of grandeur, but more like people wanting to save face and memories that have got distorted along the way. That old saying, there's your version and there's my version, and then there's what really happened. I don't know why Bella felt it unnecessary to tell Edward nothing of what happened downstairs while he slept. I would have told him, otherwise he will be under the mistaken impression that it went well and will have unrealistic expectations for the future. He will be disappointed. I'm glad that at least Edward told Bella that his mother and Carlisle used to be together, at least she had a head's up about that.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 120
Elizabeth was so rude to Esme. I think if I were Bella I would have told Edward that, so he has a head's up that she hasn't changed that much. If she is on Lithium then she has a mood disorder, perhaps in addition to self-medicating with alcohol. She probably tries to handle her symptoms with the alcohol instead of such a strong drug as Lithium.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 119
Awkward...but ok so far.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 118
I wonder what kind of a future Rose will have with Emmett? His description hasn't been too favorable so far. I hope he will change.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 117
Poor Esme has to deal with Elizabeth at this dinner and at the Christening.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 116
So they threw the Dr's orders out the window and decided to have sex before the six-eight weeks were up. Not only could he have hurt her, now she could be pregnant...again. I know you know that, but seriously these two really need to learn about birth control. I'm glad they are getting married right away. Then Bella will not be able to testify against Edward, since he will be her husband.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 115
I think Jasper would make a perfect conciliere to Edward when the time comes. Maybe that's what Carlisle Sr. has in mind for his son-inlaw.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 112
Can Edward trust his godfather?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 111
That was exciting and completely came as a surprise. Carlisle Sr. probably could have prevented that if he made Edward or that other guy Capo already, but then again maybe it would have happened anyway if Edward was Capo then the other guy would have taken him out to get the job. Now he has to be eliminated. What about Jasper, were these two going to take him out next? Or was someone else going to do it? Edward doesn't seem too worried about Jasper right now so I guess it was Paul and his brother who were going to scoot next door. I don't get why one of them only had a knife, he should have had a gun too. They were entering the house of a known hit man and only one of them had a gun, that just sounds dumb. Maybe they were...dumb, I guess, underestimating Edward.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 110
That doesnt sound good...who's at the door?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 109
Maybe he will be Edward Charles Cullen, so Bella can give their son her father's name as well...like she originally wanted? The ending was very special. You do have a knack of bringing in the emotional elements into your stories. Beautiful.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 108
All that stress, makes me feel anxious too. I was thinking when the nurse left the room in a hurry to get the Dr. that the baby was in distress, but no. They would be back by now. I wonder did she wait too long to get the epidural though?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 107
OK now that is sorted out. Good. Now for the baby to make an appearance.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 106
So Jasper made it out of the butcher shop safely. Yay!
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 105
They didn't call ahead to the Docter's pager so a room would be ready for her arival I guess. Thank goodness they remembered to tell the nurse that the water had expelled. Geesh!
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 103
The baby's coming now.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 102
I can't believe how selfish Edward is being. He should be staying to either help Jasper or be the look out...like Riley did for him, showing him how to use the grinder, and was Edward's look out when it was his first time. Jasper's going to get pinched, isn't he? I sure hope I'm wrong.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 101
Oh boy. Now tell us what the F? Why did Riley get marked for death?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 100
What the hell happened to necessitate this result? Edward is a cold blooded killer now, that's too bad. He liked Riley, and now he's murdered him and feels nothing.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 98
Things are going too smoothly. Of course there are risks of getting caught, even if the FBI don't know him as a mobster, the Police could catch him in the act. He isn't invisible. The life of crime...you only get away with it for so long.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 97
Well I should think so. I don't know why she would doubt him.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 96
That's too bad that Edward is dragging Jasper down with him.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 95
Why the hell did he have to go and kill Aldo? Jasper is not going to be happy. It sounds like a dick move and a betrayal too.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 94
I thought Bella knew not to ask him about his work?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 93
CJ should have went to his father with what he knew, that he knew his father was questioned by the DEA about him, rather than try to take him out. I mean the DEA already had the evidence against him so how would it help him to take his father out? If CJ had of talked to him, even grovelled a bit saying he should have listened to his pops advice about staying away from drugs, if he had of done that then his Dad would have told him when he was given a heads up about the big bust. CJ has too much pride to ask for his DAD's help, or to admit he was wrong.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 92
I'm sure there are many things about Alice's family, her mother being a drunk, her brother cheating on his wife, her Dad being a Mob boss, etc. etc. that has influenced Alice to chase men the way she does, so is it any surprise what happened between Alice and Riley and now the way she makes herself too available to Jasper is really pretty low. She deserves better than that. She and Bella really need to do something to improve their own self-worth and stop leaning on men all the time. Jasper I think really likes Alice, but he hates that she has been with so many men and he hates being chased by her the way she has chased so many others. He wants her to realize she is too good for that.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 91
I have heard of DEA, but I often wonder how it differs from ATF and why doesn't the FBI cover both of those now that HOMELAND Security takes over some of the FBI's and CIA's territory. So it sounds like Daddy Dearest ratted out his son to the DEA or the Feds rather than have him killed for not doing what he is told and possibly for trying to take him out, his own Dad?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 90
He has to tell them something, that they are not safe and that there is an internal war about to explode and they need to get out and take cover.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 89
Now get home and make sure Bella is ok. I think Bella and Jasper and Alice need to get somewhere safe.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 88
Just because Carlisle Sr.'s guys didn't show up at his house doesn't mean they are against him. I can imagine it is hard for the lower ranked guys to ask questions...like Edward they just do what they are told. So if Riley or CJ tell them to stay away...they stay away. I would think it would look pretty suspicious if Edward doesn't return any of CJ's calls or show up when he is called to a meeting. And what is going to happen about the button ceremony? Maybe Edward was going to get CJ's neighborhood which included the Pizzeria not when CJ is killed which Edward suspected, but rather Riley though CJ would take ove after Carlisle SR. is taken out and Edward would move up.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 87
I'm ready for the next three chapters. I really want to know what happens with Edward's connections with the mob. I hope Edward gets a Will done soon to provide for Bella and the baby.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 86
Jasper is right. Bella and Edward being together makes her happy and allows her to forget, provides a distraction, but in time it will not be enough. She needs therapy. I think it is pretty therapeutic to talk about what happened to her with Edward, but now that she is talking...keep talking. She would benefit from doing something that promotes her self-esteem too. A hobby, work, something. I can't wait to find out what is going down with the two Carlisles.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 85
I really, really, really don't like the thought of Edward leaving Bella alone, especially with some guy she doesn't know coming over with the car keys. He should go get the car himself or take Bella home until he knows everything is safe for them, I think.