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Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

So good to see this family reunited.

Great story

 

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you for updating :)

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

Very happy for update.

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26

I will never forget about this story, I will stay with it until you finish it.  I would like to say take your time, but I so want to see what happens next, and besides there isn't much out there worth reading anymore.

Reviewer: dcb855 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for coming back to this story, one of my favorites.  I don't care how long it takes, just promise me you will finish it.  :)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great to have you and this story back!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great update! Missed ya but I understand life happens!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 26

I think that's the best idea to demolish and rebuild. I'm still in shock about Seth and Jesse....I can't even fathom the thought of leaving my child.

Reviewer: roselynne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 26

i have so missed this story .... thank you for the update

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 26

I so love this story and was so excited to see the update from you!  Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

Sweetheart you just made my year!  I knew you would be back. I know you are winding down too. It will be sad to close this book when you are finished but please know I re-read this story many times. I love all the emotion you put into this amazing love story. 

 

V. Madison WI

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 26

Amazing chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: Steph1597 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

I like your new chapter thank-you. I'm looking forward to come Jackson and Bonnie action.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

I was so excited when I got this update. I've missed them so much so, that I've started rereading "People Like Us" for the umpteenth time.

All of their lives are changing and I hope it's for the better.

Thank you!

:)

<3

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

I was so happy to see this update. Great update to a wonderful story.

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

Just want to say this is still one of my favorite stories! I re-read the first one and then this one every couple of months. And I devour the updates! Looking forward to the next chapter! Love it! 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 26

great update

looking forward to more

well done

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great new chapter, glad everyone is safe. Love the new house idea, can't wait to see pictures of it!! 

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 26

Excellent story!!!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 26

A great addition to the story. So much further to go. Thank you.

Reviewer: WeeKittyAndTAT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

Michele~

I love this story so much and I was so excited for the update. Thank you so much! I hope to read more soon. This was such a great chapter, showing their undying and resounding closeness being unbroken. Excited to see where you take this now.

Kasi - AKA- TeamAllTwilight

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 26

Hi Michele,
it's great to read from you and I'm so glad that everybody is home :) I also like how Bella and Edward talked to Alexis and Mario, Mario surely has his hands full with her!

The idea of building a new house is a good one so that all bad memories can be stored away... I just hope that there will be no new drama soon... it will take enough strength to work through all this in therapy, especially for the kids.

I cross my fingers for the next chapters to come soon :) 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 26

cannot believe seth I really did not see that coming from him. those poor babies are going to need so much therapy. I cannot believe they are goingg to raze that house. wow

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 26

Love you and support You,  love this story and will never give up on You or it.   Love the chapter 

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

Just reread the chapter and I really hope that you will post the next one soon ;) I'm glad that the kids are safe and hope that Lexie' news will be the last portion of drama for now... the family really deserves some peace and quiet! I think its a good idea to wait until Edward learns about the pregnancy ;)

Is there any hope for a mew chapter soon?

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

Awww, Emmette makes me cry! Great chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

The men are too hilarious.  Hope Marco wears a bulletproof vest for awhile.  FBI needs a swift punch in the mouth.  Jerks. 

At least SWAT seems to have their heads on straight.  lol for Em breaking the ice a little.  eeek a development huh?

Glad Daryl is trying to get them out.  wow Peter's letting them go.  Peter finally did the right thing. At least "chief" is finally dead and Peter died quickly.    

Gotta love Andrea.  Max is so lucky she's there with him.

Daniels is one cool dude. I was wondering how long til Darryl would take off and leave them.    Again...gotta love Andrea.

 

YEY kiddies are safe!!!   

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

I've missed this story!! So glad you are posing again.  Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

God I love this story

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 24

So happy to have the privilege of reading your writing. 

Please please finish the story.

 

i know I've said it before, but you really need to consider publishing something. I'll buy it and I'm sure many others would too. You are so very good at creating characters that are real!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 25

I was hoping you wouldn't end the chapter before she heard the good news.  Now when Edward comes home maybe they can have some delicious reconnecting time & then she can drop the bomb on him.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 25

You are awesome. There is so much going on in the chapter and you mastered it. Great job. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

Edward will be fine. He is so happy to have all his babies home and safe. He won't want to kill the one  who is making him a grampa. She is lucky that he loves babies.  He will want to kill Mario at first,  but he won't.. Edward is all about family. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

Looking forward to the next chapter! !!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 25

Hugs and smooches back for this wonderful story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

OMG!!!!!! Love your story please post soon ,can't wait....Love it.great story

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

sigh, I am so glad they are found and that those arseholes are dead. Now they need to find the rest of his minions and put them all in jail. The drama never stops with this family. I am surprised that Edward and Bella haven't had heart attacks with all the stress.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh thank goodness the kids were found safe, and Peter and Calvino took themselves out. I can't wait for everyone to be home

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

fantastic amazing chapter. Loved everything about it. yes Edward is going to freak out. But him might not be as bad since he now has his whole family together again. Cannot wait till you update again. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing with us.so happy the kids are safe and on their way home.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

I cried right along with the rest of them.

Now, I want to know what's going on with Seth?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 25

Phew, they're safe.

Great writing

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow, just wow, love the chapter

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wonderful chapter Ginger!

 

Looking forward to more:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 25

Omg, I'm still wiping tears from my eyes in order to tupe.  This was so good!  OMG so very good Uncasville Memmett loved it! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

I think bella had a right to be pissed E was keeping things from her, esp about the kids.  Alexis needs to grow up and realize E is not perfect.  

Sweeney needs a swift kick in the arse.  

Glad Mario is talking her down.  Smart man.  

oooh who yelled at the end I wonder?

Reviewer: nounoute Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 24

Salut

Désolé, je suis français mon anglais est pauvre ceci est mon ami Google Translate que je vous écris.

Mais, je voulais vous dire que je l'aime vos fanfictions Espoir ressort qui a été traduit, des gens comme nous qui lisent encore et encore et ce dernier bien sûr.

Merci pour votre travail qui ne doit pas être facile

Je suis impatient de lire la suite

See you soon

Nounoute

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

Hello and welcome back ginger :)

I'm really glad at the new chapter and it has had so many turns in things! With the team having finally been able to track down the kids, Alexis being pregnant with supposedly twins (at least :D) and Bella having a fit... WOW!
I'm glad that Bella and Edward have made up fast and that they do not let anyone get in between them egain! It's important for the whole family that they are in the same boat!
Now some mother-daughter-time was really necessary and surely the hormones have their say in Alexis' reaction, so now I'm just curious who overheard the last part of this chapter. Since Edward is not home I guess it's Papa Charlie :D

Looking forward to next week!!

Bella89

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Yay! Thanks for the update. Still love this story. As always, thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for this update!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

Every word is worth the wait. Bella's angry words were awesome, outrageous, understandable, etc.  great job with Alexia's words as a response. Now before you finish this I want to understand Calvino a little more. Love ya!  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

Bella wonders why Edward doesn't tell her things until he is sure. She is weak and a basket case. She was so wrong. She loves him, but she hurts him quite often.  Yet, she expects him to be perfect. On the Alexis front, they should have been more careful.  They know how babies are made. It was very irresponsible.  Luckily Edward and Bella love them and babies.  Mario needs to make sure that she finishes school. They also need to get married.  Have the big party at their one year aniversary. 

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great story! You are so talented you should be published.thank you for letting me take this ride with you.

Reviewer: fairfax19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 24

Keep writing as you can  We're still here :)   and still enjoying the story. 

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update.  It's great to have you back!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

Omg, I'm bitting the crap out of my nails! I hope all goes well with Em and Edward's rescue plans. Who just found out about Alexis? ?? Charlie or Esme??? I'm so excited you updated, I hope all is well and can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

So glad to have you back.  I hope things continue to get better.  You are truly missed.

thank you for making these characters human.  I like how Bella snapped at Edward, we all know she didn't nean it, it was just the stress.  I love how Drea is taking care of Max.  Way to go!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great to hear from you. I love this story and chapter. 

Reviewer: lia01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

Awesome thank you for.the update!

 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

another great chapter 

well done looking forward to next update

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

Glad to have you back!! Excellent as always. Hard to imagine how Bella & Edward first met...and where they are at now!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter!!! Who overheard the news??!!

I love all these kids!

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad you're back! Hope things get better

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

I am sooooo very happy to get your update.  Awesome chapter.  I am glad they have a lead on the kids. Andrea is doing a great job at keep Max calm. I probably would have blown up like Bella did and then felt horrible just like she did. 

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

yeah, I've missed you, I love this story and I jump for joy when I see a new chapter posted. Can't wait for the next chapter, and for Edward to find out that he's going to be a grandpa.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

You were one of the first authors that I found on this wonderful site way back when People first started. My first author that I made a "favorite" on my list. You had me hooked and amazed from the first paragraph. PLU will always be a favorite of mine and AFLO is no different. You have such a wonderful way of bringing your characters and story to a point that they seem so real, so relatable even tho I'm not a millionaire, not a movie star and unfortunately very single. You showed me a side of BSDM that I could understand and enjoy. You let me in to your imagination and let me believe in a true love that could survive bad times and a crazy family. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER and you are truly appreciated. Please don't deny your fans your amazing talents. 

XOXO,Cheri

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

I was so happy to see this here this pm. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: WeeKittyAndTAT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 24

LOVE it and you, thanks for the update. Kasi aka TeamAllTwilight

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 24

I was so glad to see an update!  I was just thinking of this story the other day and hoped you hadn't given up. This is one of my favourites. I love your writing.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

I was jumping for joy when this showed up in my inbox. You've been greatly missed. It's ironic that you updated this because I just finished reading, for the umpteenth time "People Like Us" last week and I was wondering about this sequel.

Welcome back Sweetie! Muwah!

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update.  I did a little happy dance when I saw it in my inbox.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thank You for the update.  I was thinking about this chapter at work this week.  LOL.. Great minds I guess :)

 

Loved it and looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

So very happy with the update loved the chapter.   Totally understand RL and lack of updates just know you are loved and thought about! 

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

Still here!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love this story and get so excited when I see updates from you in my inbox!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

AMAZING so far

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 23

A great chapter and i hope you post again soon.

Reviewer: Bcullen1026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Dun dun dun...Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story and cant wait to read more. I'm sorry your going through so much and I hope that things get better for you soon. I'm not giving up on you finishing this, I'll wait as long as it takes for you to finish it.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks for update.

Hope whatever you are going thru gets better. Take care you!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

Never giving up on your story. It is so utterly awesome!

sending prayers that your life settles and becomes "normal" for you whatever that would be.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

omg, i can't believe those sick psycho's got two of the kids. i can't imagine what pain Bella and Edward are going thru. Please let them find the kids soon...... I hope things get better for you soon, hang in there.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

II'm so happy that your story is back. I have missed it.

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 23

i am still in there.  love this story and the previous one.   Pls keep writing, I need to know what happens.   love your storylines and your writing style. thanks. Pamela

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

I hope things are better.

Thank you for not giving up. I believe in you.

I'm not going anywhere.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story!  I look forward to the next chapter. I hope the FBI gets on with the search & finds those letters!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

Glad to see a new chappie, Michele. I was getting worried about you and this site has the email turned off.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

M- the update was amazing.  It was terrifying but in the way I expected it to be. Can't wait for more. Take care. 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi,

I really admire you for the effort you're making to write this story. I can only tell you I was very happy to see this post even if my heart is breaking for all of the family in this story. Sometime stories such "People Like Us" and "A Family Like Ours" become so real readers it's unbelievable. Your story telling abilities are truly beyond amazing.

I've been dreading this chapter since the beginning of this sequel. I really hate that they got Max as he has been so frightened for so long and Andrea is truly amazing.

Bella's and Edward's pain is horrific. I can't even imagine. Bella's suffering simply breaks me.

I already hate the female FBI Agent. She has zero compassion and not a bit of professionalism.

Sam is so smart and level headed. I'm so sad he forgot to set the alarms. I bet he never forgets it again.

Nicholas breaks my heart because he believes it's all his fault because he did not fight hard enough to save Max and Andrea.

I can imagine the pain of the family members trying to get home because of this tragedy. I've been through it and it's indescribable.

As to Covina and Peter, I hope Edward gets to beat the shit out of them and they spend the rest of their lives in solitary confinement or on Death row until execution.

Lastly, there is Daryl. I hope the that Anderson finds the packets of Daryl's information before the FBI so he can get Edward's to him, first. I also hope he can protect the children and I hope he does not die.

Hope to see a post soon but I understand if it takes awhile. Please don't give up on this story.

See you next post.

Reviewer: LBD Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

Awesome chapter. I was so happy the got back into the play room.

I loved how accepting Bella and then Edward to Sam's attending Art School.

I do hope Daryl plucks up the courage to tell Bella and Edward about Larry Covina and Peter's plans.

See you after the next post.

Reviewer: Steph1597 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good drama but I want me some Bonnie and Jackson action if you know what I mean:)

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

A always it is complex because there are so many players in this story. It's so difficult to pick a favorite part for this chapter. I really loved how Jackson is coming into his own, Bonnebell is his submissive and girl friend. (I like her given name. I think her parents were going for Beautiful Bell in French.)

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 23

I was so excited to see this update!! We knew the drama was coming, now I want to know what happens!!  I hope RL is settling down for you now. Don't worry that it's been a while. RL always comes first. I know I'm not going anywhere. ;)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

First, I will never give up on you or this story. Second, RL can be a bitch, that we all understand. Third I am so darn happy to see this update! I was just reading a fic the other day that listed AFLO & PLU as a recommendation. I replied to the author that PLU was one of my favorite stories of all time. Now, this chapter, hard to read but I knew it was coming. So proud of the Cullen kids, all of them. Hope Nick realizes that he probably couldn't have stopped this. Hope E/B can help each other stay strong. Also hope that if you ever decide to quit this story you will let those of us that love the way you write know. Until that time - you have a fan for life. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

Ahh, you work is worth the wait!!  

I'd like to hope that Daryll will come out a hero. Yes, he should have come forward before, but he is probably the kids only hope.

Why the hell hasn't the FBI searched the rest of the property yet? They would have found the letters. What about any of the other workers? And, I think the Kindle may save the day. Some of them have GPS trackers. The Cheif (asshole) probably doesn't know that.

Man, the only issue with waiting for the next chapter is worrying about the kids.

Be well and hope to hear from you again soon. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

poor family.. Missed you

Reviewer: lia01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the the update!!

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