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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 16: Road Games

Loved it :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16: Road Games

Sweet homecoming.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 16: Road Games

loved this

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the new chapter! Congrats on the full time job!

I really like this couple.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved this.  Congratulations on the job

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, our couple finally said the words.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved this

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Paperwork

Loved it



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Thanks for the review.  I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story so far.

Here is your teaser:

“I love you, Bella.”
I loved her so much. I could have sworn my heart had stilled, waiting to hear if she would say what I longed to hear.
“I love you too.”
I lifted her up off her feet and twirled her around.  She laughed until I put her back on the ground and kissed her with all the love in my heart.  We remained locked in a heated embrace until we had to pull away to breathe.
“Bella, I love you so much.  Being away from you the past few weeks, only seeing you for late night dinners after my home games, has nearly killed me.  I need to hold you.  I need you with me always.”
“I feel the same way, Edward.  I’m distracted when you’re not where I can talk to you, touch you.  I love you so much that it hurts when we aren’t together.”
Hearing her echo my feelings was such a relief.  I pulled her into another heated embrace then picked her up bridal style and carried her into the house. 
“Bella, I love you so much.  I don’t even want to be away from you for the night.  Please stay with me in the master suite tonight.  I’ll only hold you, but I need to feel you next to me.  Please, baby.”
Bella pulled my lips back to hers and kissed me with such passion it caused a moan to escape my lips.
“Edward, I don’t want to sleep in the bed next you.”

This chapter should be up in the next day or so,
tsm

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Paperwork

loved this



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Thanks for the review and the coffee cups!

Here is your teaser:

“I love you, Bella.”
I loved her so much. I could have sworn my heart had stilled, waiting to hear if she would say what I longed to hear.
“I love you too.”
I lifted her up off her feet and twirled her around.  She laughed until I put her back on the ground and kissed her with all the love in my heart.  We remained locked in a heated embrace until we had to pull away to breathe.
“Bella, I love you so much.  Being away from you the past few weeks, only seeing you for late night dinners after my home games, has nearly killed me.  I need to hold you.  I need you with me always.”
“I feel the same way, Edward.  I’m distracted when you’re not where I can talk to you, touch you.  I love you so much that it hurts when we aren’t together.”
Hearing her echo my feelings was such a relief.  I pulled her into another heated embrace then picked her up bridal style and carried her into the house. 
“Bella, I love you so much.  I don’t even want to be away from you for the night.  Please stay with me in the master suite tonight.  I’ll only hold you, but I need to feel you next to me.  Please, baby.”
Bella pulled my lips back to hers and kissed me with such passion it caused a moan to escape my lips.
“Edward, I don’t want to sleep in the bed next you.”

This chapter should be up in the next day or so,
tsm

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Paperwork

Fabulous chapter! I'm in love.



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Thanks for the review.  I'm ecstatic that you're enjoying that story so far.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter:

“I love you, Bella.”
I loved her so much. I could have sworn my heart had stilled, waiting to hear if she would say what I longed to hear.
“I love you too.”
I lifted her up off her feet and twirled her around.  She laughed until I put her back on the ground and kissed her with all the love in my heart.  We remained locked in a heated embrace until we had to pull away to breathe.
“Bella, I love you so much.  Being away from you the past few weeks, only seeing you for late night dinners after my home games, has nearly killed me.  I need to hold you.  I need you with me always.”
“I feel the same way, Edward.  I’m distracted when you’re not where I can talk to you, touch you.  I love you so much that it hurts when we aren’t together.”
Hearing her echo my feelings was such a relief.  I pulled her into another heated embrace then picked her up bridal style and carried her into the house. 
“Bella, I love you so much.  I don’t even want to be away from you for the night.  Please stay with me in the master suite tonight.  I’ll only hold you, but I need to feel you next to me.  Please, baby.”
Bella pulled my lips back to hers and kissed me with such passion it caused a moan to escape my lips.
“Edward, I don’t want to sleep in the bed next you.”

This chapter should be up in the next day or so,
tsm

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 12: Full Count

:) loving this story



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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 12: Full Count

Loved it can't wait for more :)



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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 12: Full Count

Great chapter.

Being a Margaret myself, I think Magpie is preferable to Margie Pargie or Marge the Barge. Just sayin'.



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Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 12: Full Count

Loved it!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love it all. What an exciting day for Bella and all the kids. The date was awesome and now she gets to spend the night and the next day with him and his family. I am really glad that Charlie and Jake couldn't make it to the game. ;-). Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love this story!



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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter! Excellent first kiss and meeting the family already! can't wait for the next chapter.

Glad to hear you are recovering!



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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

I wish you well in your recovery. I really love your story and look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm thrilled that you love it so far.  My recovery is slow, hence the delayed updates, but thinkgs are getting better.  I hope to update again soon but here is a sneak peek to help with the wait.  The date is coming up!

I helped herd the kids and their families back to the awaiting limos for their ride home and then reentered the park.  Edward texted me that I should go in and tell the security guard that I was there for him and he’d lead me to where I needed to wait for him.  When I entered Minute Maid Park again, the security guard approached me. He appeared to be about my father’s age and had a kind face.  He was about six foot tall, his hair was cut in a buzz cut and he had a little belly, just like my dad.
“Evening ma’am.  What can I help you with?” the guard asked.
“I’m Bella Swan and Edward Cullen told me to wait for him.  Do you know where I’m supposed to wait?” I answered.
“Of course ma’am.  Mr. Cullen let us know that you were expected.  Follow me please,” he answered and led me in the direction of the tunnel where we waited earlier to enter the field.
“If you will wait here ma’am he should be out in about thirty minutes, unless he gets held up by the press.  Although, with you waiting for him, I’m sure he’ll be here as fast as he can,” he said then winked at me before walking away.

tsm

Reviewer: CrazyMazie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

Enjoying the story.  I found it a little incongruous that the winners of a "Green" contest would be rewarded by traveling in gas guzzling Hummers.  That said, I'll look the other way due to creative license. 

Hope you are healing well.



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Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Really enjoying your story. Take care of yourself and write when you can!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love it! I can't wait for them to see each other again. I am sure that Esme and Carlisle are going to meet Bella the day of the game. Great job....thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  The next chapter will be posted a week from sunday.  Here's a sneak preview of the chapter.
“Ms. Brandon, I’ve my limo assignments and I placed you and the superintendent in separate cars.  He will still ride with his family, but you will be in a different car.  I put myself and Mrs. Richburg in separate cars as well so we can ensure the students behave and requested no alcohol be in the bars,” I stated as I handed her my lists.
“Oh, wonderful but I do have one change to make to your assignments,” She said with a mischievous grin.
“Did something happen and someone won’t be attending?” I asked, worried that one of my kids won’t be able to attend the game.
“Oh, no nothing like that.  Mr. Cullen called me yesterday and requested that you not ride with the students since he is sending a private limo for you,” she answered while trying to keep a straight face.
“But, I can’t do that.  What about chaperoning the people in my assigned car?” I argued, confused that Edward didn’t say anything about this last night while we texted.
“Oh, I’ve someone covering that.  Mrs. Felix volunteered to cover for you so you could relax before your big Major League debut,” Alice reassured me, still wearing that ‘you will tell me everything later’ grin.
“Wow.  You and Ed – I mean Mr. Cullen thought of everything.  Thank you so much,” I said, dazed by the revelation that I’d be riding alone in a limo to the game tonight.
Alice gave me a look that said ‘I bet he’s got everything taken care of’ and I felt the heat of my blush creeping up my neck to my cheeks.
“Um, I’ll see you later then.  I’m just going to my room and get some work done before we leave,” I mumbled as a quickly left the room.
Am I really that transparent? How am I going to hold it together when we are face to face?  Everyone is going to see right through me!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

I still love this story. Totally into love at first sight. Cute texting and calls. Can't wait for the date!

I second your rec for I Remain Yours. It is an awesome story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story.  The next chapter will be posted a week from sunday.  Here's a sneak preview of the chapter.
“Ms. Brandon, I’ve my limo assignments and I placed you and the superintendent in separate cars.  He will still ride with his family, but you will be in a different car.  I put myself and Mrs. Richburg in separate cars as well so we can ensure the students behave and requested no alcohol be in the bars,” I stated as I handed her my lists.
“Oh, wonderful but I do have one change to make to your assignments,” She said with a mischievous grin.
“Did something happen and someone won’t be attending?” I asked, worried that one of my kids won’t be able to attend the game.
“Oh, no nothing like that.  Mr. Cullen called me yesterday and requested that you not ride with the students since he is sending a private limo for you,” she answered while trying to keep a straight face.
“But, I can’t do that.  What about chaperoning the people in my assigned car?” I argued, confused that Edward didn’t say anything about this last night while we texted.
“Oh, I’ve someone covering that.  Mrs. Felix volunteered to cover for you so you could relax before your big Major League debut,” Alice reassured me, still wearing that ‘you will tell me everything later’ grin.
“Wow.  You and Ed – I mean Mr. Cullen thought of everything.  Thank you so much,” I said, dazed by the revelation that I’d be riding alone in a limo to the game tonight.
Alice gave me a look that said ‘I bet he’s got everything taken care of’ and I felt the heat of my blush creeping up my neck to my cheeks.
“Um, I’ll see you later then.  I’m just going to my room and get some work done before we leave,” I mumbled as a quickly left the room.
Am I really that transparent? How am I going to hold it together when we are face to face?  Everyone is going to see right through me!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter. I like the slow build up. Looking forward to more sweet texts



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love this. These two are so cute and it is just the beginning. I can't believe Jake and Charlie won't be there to see Bella throw out the first pitch. I guess this will leave Bella free after the ball game. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful review.  It really makes writing so much easier when people share their thoughts about the stories.  hope you continue to enjoy the story and let me know what you think.  Here is your teaser to hold you over until sunday.

 

A quick knock on the door and Edward let himself in, calling out for his brother and Rose.

“Hey guys, anyone home?” I called out.

“In here Bro,” Emmett’s booming voice came from the area where the kitchen was.

“Uncle Edward!” the boundless bundle of energy that was Maggie yelled as she barreled toward me.

“Magpie!  What are you up to?” I asked as I scooped her into my arms.

Emmett and Rose’s five year old daughter was the most precious thing in the world.  She had Emmett’s dark hair and Rose’s brilliant blue eyes.  She was absolutely gorgeous.  And her personality, all bubbly and always happy, just made her even more beautiful.

“I’m helping Momma in the kitchen.  She says my little brother is tryin’ to kick out her tummy and she needs my help cooking,” Maggie giggled, wiggling to get out of my arms and return to the kitchen.

“Well, why isn’t Daddy helping with dinner?  Is he too lazy to get up off his bottom?” I asked, stole a quick little kiss on her cheek and set her down.

“Daddy can’t cook,” she answered through her laughter. “Momma says he burned water.”

She grabbed my hand and pulled me to the kitchen where I found Rose and Emmett in the kitchen kissing.

“Yuk!  That’s gross!” Maggie yells.  “Hide your eyes Uncle Edward or you might go blind.”

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sending my prayers your way.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the prayers.  I know that God works miracles every day and hope that He will grant us one with my dad.  Here is a little teaser to hold you over until Sunday.

 

A quick knock on the door and Edward let himself in, calling out for his brother and Rose.

“Hey guys, anyone home?” I called out.

“In here Bro,” Emmett’s booming voice came from the area where the kitchen was.

“Uncle Edward!” the boundless bundle of energy that was Maggie yelled as she barreled toward me.

“Magpie!  What are you up to?” I asked as I scooped her into my arms.

Emmett and Rose’s five year old daughter was the most precious thing in the world.  She had Emmett’s dark hair and Rose’s brilliant blue eyes.  She was absolutely gorgeous.  And her personality, all bubbly and always happy, just made her even more beautiful.

“I’m helping Momma in the kitchen.  She says my little brother is tryin’ to kick out her tummy and she needs my help cooking,” Maggie giggled, wiggling to get out of my arms and return to the kitchen.

“Well, why isn’t Daddy helping with dinner?  Is he too lazy to get up off his bottom?” I asked, stole a quick little kiss on her cheek and set her down.

“Daddy can’t cook,” she answered through her laughter. “Momma says he burned water.”

She grabbed my hand and pulled me to the kitchen where I found Rose and Emmett in the kitchen kissing.

“Yuk!  That’s gross!” Maggie yells.  “Hide your eyes Uncle Edward or you might go blind.”

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Good luck with your surgery. I can't wait for these 2 to meet just the 2 of them!!! Great Chapter!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad the you enjoyed the chapter.  They will meet privately but this story is a slow burn so hang in there.  I went to the surgeon yesterday and he has decided he wants to build up the muscles in the shoulder before doing the surgery, so now I have to do 6 weeks of physical therapy.  I just want to get the surgery over with but I have to defer to the experts I guess.

Sorry this repsonse took so long but I wanted to be sure to give you a teaser.  This one hasn't seen Eternally Addicted's magic yet so please excuse any issues.

Thanks for reviewing and the well wishes,

tsm


teaser:

I arrived at Texas Roadhouse and saw Dad and Jake waiting for me just outside the door.  I parked near Dad’s patrol car and walked up to them, giving them both hugs.

“How are my two favorite men doing this evening?” I asked happily.

“We are great Bells but I’m dying to find out what your big news is,” Jake answered with a huge grin on his face.  “Did you meet someone that isn’t good enough for you and I’m going to have to kill if he hurts you?”

I rolled my eyes and tried to act like he was crazy but my blush gave me away.

“Bella, did you meet someone?  Do I know this guy?  I need his name and driver’s licenses number so I can run a background check on him before you’re allowed to go anywhere with this boy,” Dad stated sternly.

“Both of you settle down.  That is not what I have to tell you and you’ll just have to wait until we get to the table,” I stated, shaking my head at the two overprotective men standing before me.

I love them both but what I told Edward earlier about my social life was true.  How was I ever going to find someone that would stick around with these two grilling them constantly?

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love it! These two are so sweet. It was so funny when Edward was caught checking Bella out. Great job....thanks!!!

Author's Response:

It makes my day and encourages me to write more knowing that you love this story.  I can just see the look on his face when he gets caught checking her out.  Priceless. :)

Sorry that this response took so long but I wanted a teaser for you before a replied to the review.  Keep in mind that Eternally Eddicted has not waved her magic beta wand over this chapter yet, so all mistakes are mine. 

Thanks for reviewing and enjoy the teaser,

tsm

 

Teaser:

I arrived at Texas Roadhouse and saw Dad and Jake waiting for me just outside the door.  I parked near Dad’s patrol car and walked up to them, giving them both hugs.

“How are my two favorite men doing this evening?” I asked happily.

“We are great Bells but I’m dying to find out what your big news is,” Jake answered with a huge grin on his face.  “Did you meet someone that isn’t good enough for you and I’m going to have to kill if he hurts you?”

I rolled my eyes and tried to act like he was crazy but my blush gave me away.

“Bella, did you meet someone?  Do I know this guy?  I need his name and driver’s licenses number so I can run a background check on him before you’re allowed to go anywhere with this boy,” Dad stated sternly.

“Both of you settle down.  That is not what I have to tell you and you’ll just have to wait until we get to the table,” I stated, shaking my head at the two overprotective men standing before me.

I love them both but what I told Edward earlier about my social life was true.  How was I ever going to find someone that would stick around with these two grilling them constantly?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the new chapter. Looking forward to the next one!



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Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter!  I just know that he is going to ask Bella out.  Can't wait for more!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is awesome. I couldn't help but smile the whole time I was reading it. Bella is so cute. Great job....thanks!!!

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Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story. I have just found your stories "by accident", I was browsing authors and happened to click you much to my good luck! We have all been sick and I have been laying around reading. What a great way to spend an afternoon. I look forward to more updates....
My hubs is also a firefighter so I really enjoyed your other stories and good relate.
thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading ang reviewing. I'm sorry your sick but I'm thrilled that you found my stories. Since I'm new to writing, I'm a math teacher so writing fiction  isn't high priority, I tend to stick with what I know and love. Besides, why research for Edward's job when I can just ask the hubby!  ;)

Thank you again for reading and reviewing. Here is the teaser promised.

tsm

 

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."
My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.
Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

love this



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's your teaser for chapter 5. 

 

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."
My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.
Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

Fantastic story. Can't wait for the next update. This Edward seems so sweet, my favorite kind!!

Author's Response:

He is a sweetie and that's my favorite kind too. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and hope to hear from you again. Here is a sneak peek at chapter 5. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. See ya in a couple of weeks. 

tsm

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I heard him!!! Thanks for the peek.



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Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

loving it cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

I'm excited your enjoying the story so far and I look forward to hearing from you again. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here the teaser I promised. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!



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I love that you loved it. ;) thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story and continue to let me know what you think. Here's a little teaser for you. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

Very cute!



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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Here's a little sneak peek at the next chapter. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

love it , please update soon

 



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Thanks for reading and reviewing. It makes my day when I read that y'all love the story. Thank you again.  Here's a teaser to hold you over until the next update. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it :)



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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Knowing you are enjoying my story encourages me to keep writing.  As promised, here's your teaser. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: shannabanana1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

This is a cute premise for a story, I love me some BaseballWard!!!! Update Soon!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoy my Baseballward. I love reading stories of Baseballward as well. If you want a couple of good, complete Baseballward stories, check out Eternally Addicted's and NoelleSeven's profiles on fanfiction. They are who got me hooked on Baseballward to begin with. Bases Loaded on this site is also wonderful. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. As promised, here's your teaser. Hopefully it will hold you over until the next update. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella's klutzyness has helped her out. LOL  Edward is hooked.  I have been reading Tribute and like it too.  Keep up the good work!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the new chapter.  Edward is definitely hooked and Bella is even more smitten with him than she was before they met. I love Tribute and was so mad when they pulled it from FFN. It amazes me how they have gotten so picky when stories like Shades of Grey and Emancipation Proclaimation made the site extremely popular. Kind of hypocritical. Anyway, here is your preview of chapter 5. 

 

I stepped forward, my blush back in full force since I knew the jersey contained his name and number, to accept the items he was offering.

Looking into his brilliant green eyes once again and taking the items from him, I said, "Thank you so much."

His hands brushed against mine and I felt that tingle run up my arms again.

His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."

My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.

Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for the reply!!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love the story!!! I'm having problems with the updates. The chapter updates but the date doesn't. Do you know why? I cant seem to figure it out. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it and I'm thrilled you're loving the story so far. As for the problems with the updates, I have no idea. Try contacting the site admin and asking them. They usually get back with you fairly quickly and have always helped me solve issues I'm having with stories and my account. 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Here is a little teaser for chapter 4:

The beautiful brunette stood, turned to her class and indicated for them to stand and walk up onto the stage. I made sure to greet each child as they made their way up onto the stage, knowing that this would give me not only the chance to meet each one of these amazing kids but also the chance to meet their gorgeous teacher. When Miss Swan finally arrived and I reached out to shake her hand, she seemed to trip over thin air and began falling face first at my feet. 

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

If I was Bella I would die of humilation.  Thanks for the chapter, I liked it!



Author's Response:

I'm right there with you on dying of humiliation. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you loved it and hope to continue to write a story you will enjoy. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it :)

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my more please can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Sorry it took so long to reply. I truely appreciate you reading my story and letting me know what you think. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to their meeting. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. See you in January. 

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