Date: 23 Jan 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
wait wait wait.... thought in last chapter you said they found E's car at the cabin???? In this chapter he drove away in it????
Oh E.... sending her away isnt going to help anyone. Silly man.
Author's Response:
Yeah, total oversight on my part. Not even my betas caught that. I'll be fixing it.
He is, indeed, a silly a man.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Go Bella. Way to fight!!!. HMMM so if not Skankya ordered then whom I wonder? Silly Edward. Hope J doesnt hurt him too bad
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Argh, we still don't know who is after Edward!!
Author's Response:
You will eventually. Promise.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm a blubber pmsing mess over here!
Author's Response:
I believe in HEA. Promise.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Way to go Bella that's how you kick some ass
Date: 23 Jan 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
He needs his ass kick
Author's Response:
I agree.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
James is a sick fuck
Date: 22 Jan 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
He cut off her ear? OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, you are evil, leaving it right there haha :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
You know, I was going to head back to work when I ended this chapter. That is SO not happening now haha :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my word...I think I might cry myself...you've drawn me in for sure!! I totally cringed when Pennywise emailed Edward!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am so glad to hear your Edward describe her eyes as large brown eyes. Nearly every story I read describes them as "large, brown, doe eyes" and Bambi automatically pops into my head haha :)
Date: 22 Jan 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
oooh such an evil cliffy.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow the nurses in that hospital dont pay attention much huh? Sweet end. Glad emma wasnt hurt too
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
OH man, I should not have started reading this while I was eating breakfast at work, because now I'm having a heck of a time stopping and getting back to work. meh, one more chapter... :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I can already tell that I am going to love this story! I really like when something is hinted at (like Edward knowing Bella's dad), and the reader can see it coming, but the characters can't. Haha, it's going to be great, and I am so gald I do not have to wait for updates just yet!!
P.S. If you need someone to smack Tanya, I'll be happy to volunteer!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
Things are going well she is taking good care of him
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awwwwwww! Mean. So mean! Is it Bella's ear? Because that is just wrong.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Looks like a cut and paste mishap up there....Charlie is an honorary member of the member?
Date: 22 Jan 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
I cannot wait until these bitches get what's coming to them.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh shit someone shot him.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG these Step's and Cousins are all out to get E huh?
Date: 21 Jan 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
glad they told each other how they felt. Skankya and Tricky Vicky are really pissing off the wrong family. The cops really want a lawsuit with how they are treating E.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...Edward can't get rid of Tanya fast enough. She is one crazy woman! I can't wait to catch up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
YOU TOTALLY LEFT ME WITH MY MOUTH ON THE FLOOR!!!(HA HA HA) PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying your story. Is there any difference b/t what you post on TWCS and FF.net?
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Omg that was crazy!! Tanya is a dumb bitch and I can't wait for her to get what she deserves. I'm so glad that Bella showed up, but shit of course Eleazar was there I'm sure James Victoria and Tanya have something to do with Edward being shot. Oh I hope he isn't hurt too bad! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
You are the Queen of the cliff hangers! Still loving the story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
No you can't leave us hang like that
Tanya know ex actually what she's doing and smart but not so smart way because she's making herself look crazy
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
You shot him! Dude everyone around him just seems sketch!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow... Shit is getting out of hand!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
He loves her. Shit is getting strainge
Date: 16 Jan 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome story!!!! I can't wait to read more. It is ironic also because I was an avid Stephen King fan back in high school. I was even a member of the Stephen King library where I would receive 3 hardbacks every month. It was always my favorite of his.
Anyway I love the constant angst and fear. There have been no dead moments and can't wait to see how it will work out.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
How very sad and freak him the fuck out
Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
ooohhh...i'm hooked...please update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh this is getting really good now
I have feeling Tanya, James & Victoria are in evolved and ding this to him and has one of the most important people to home now Bella
I hope you up date really REALLY soon PLEEEEEEEASE with a cherry on top
Date: 14 Jan 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Edward's world is crashing down on him. First, Cousin Kathy is murdered and now Bella in danger. Good mystery!
Date: 14 Jan 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
"So, tell me Bella Swan, why did you want to become an editor?"
She gave me a smile. "Because I love to read and grammatical errors piss me off.
LOVE it!
Date: 14 Jan 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG you are evil leaving it there. Poor Bella (and aunt Kathy)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. The shoe drops really hard!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hot damn! He likes her. Hehehehe.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!! I don't know who is doing this but I bet it is not about Tanya...but what is it? There is something in Edwards past that he dosen't know. Maybe it has something to do with someone that wanted him and got hurt or died. I need some backround on him. LOL I like to try to figure out who did it. Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Tanya needs to die. People like that never stop.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Meet Bella!
Very interesting chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward, he's scared!
Good chapter.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Edward, he's scared!
Good chapter.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella was angry when Edward told Charlie!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this chapter!
The story begins well, it's exciting.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well a beginning. Let me say this about Renee. If she lied and said he hit her when he didn't then why ask her again? Just a perpetual lie. Best thing to do is take your time and get to know him one on one. Let him prove himself.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
nope I would say when she stold the books she started coping the actions in that one book.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
well. He does need security and he needs to get it asap. Tanya, Victoria and James..
Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
good first chapter.. Press charges on Tanya let her has some jail time. Then she has to pay the damages herself. yep.. serve or pay.
Date: 11 Jan 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ugh Skankya is pathetic. Glad he and Bella got to meet in person.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
lots happening :)
Date: 08 Jan 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'd be installing security cameras. Immediately.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Man this is a little creepy. I hope Alice is going to be ok.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Eeeek! I'm afraid for Alice!
Also, I think Edward needs to bring Bella down a notch. Not sure it will happen as she sure tends to get away with it!
Super engrossing. I'm feeling the need for more chappies!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Time for Alice to get the hell out of town!
Regarding Tanya et al, I bet Bella knows someone who knows someone who can take the thing to the place, if ya know what I mean.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
That bitch Tanya just keeps upping the craziness
Date: 04 Jan 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great Chapter, so someone is trying to bring his book to life, Tanya and her crazy cousin..figuring maybe they can get some money or mke him seem crazy.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
ooh the plot thickens.
Glad B talked to E. Renee and liers like her need to be shot. so pathetic.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
another great chapter, cant wait to rread more.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great story line!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting...Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
What has Bella's mom have told her to feel the way she does toward he father who loves her so much and misses her just the same and Emmett as well who misses his little sister so much and loves her as well
please up date soon
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if its Tanya breaking in, or is someone trying to make him have a meltdown..
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya sure is a monster!
Rennee must have told Bella some very evil lies about Charlie.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow..........is this Victoria, James & Tawnya working together against Edward to steal his money? Poor Edward :-(
Date: 30 Dec 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really liking the mystery.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Okay, dude needs bars on the windows and a rabid guard dog. Ex be crazy.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I laughed through most of this chapter. Edward is such a nut. LOL But he better watch out I think someone is gonna try to kill him. Now that they have a copy of his will. Can;t wait to see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yep they are after Edward. And Bella is a dumb ass.
Author's Response:
Yep, they are. However, I disagree with Bella being a dumb ass. I guess I don't understand why you feel that way.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Renee has done a number on Bella's head. What a bitch.
Victoria and James have got to be involved with Skankya somehow. Wow whomever broke in was busy fast with the stealing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm not a fan of Renee.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read more I hope you up date really soon
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder who is calling
Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Shock and now he is drunk calling lol
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to find out what Charlie supposedly did...I bet Renee lied.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I always enjoy a psycho Tanya. She just suits the role.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! cant wait for more:) wondring who he is calling?
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm wonder what horrible lies Bella believes about Charlie and Em. Poor eddie stuck in the middle. Eww for Creepy James and Victoria.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Tanya is such a bitch! I bet James and Victoria have something to do with Tanya! Edward needs to watch his back it seems. What could have happened to have Bella not have contact with Emmett and Charlie? Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmm I have a feeling Renee did something to make Bella hate Charlie. And w ho is Edward calling?
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this story so far. Think you had me hooked after the first chapter! Look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
thank you for the update..............I so want to know who Edward called
Date: 23 Dec 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: 23 Dec 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
not a great start things will get better
Author's Response:
They will get better. Sort of.
Date: 23 Dec 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds amazing cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW, Tanya is relentless1
Author's Response:
Oh, you have no idea.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for an intriguing storyline. I am looking forward to your next chapter and getting more aquainted with my favourite characters.
Author's Response:
You're quite welcome. I'm enjoying writing it.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY A M A Z I N G !!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT A GREAT CHRISTMAS GIFT TO FIND UNDER MY LAPTOP. I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO A HUNDRED CHAPTERS MORE!!
Author's Response:
Lol! I don't know about 100 chapters more. That's a bit more than I planned. I'm looking at around 20 total.
Date: 22 Dec 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story. It will be interresting when Edward and Bella meet and find out how much they have in common.
Author's Response:
Thanks!