Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! Stupid Edward!
Date: 16 Sep 2022 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Edward! Tanya is crazy!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2016 1:54 AM Title: Epiloge
I've enjoyed this so much. The pace was perfect. The chapters would build to a heart racing tempo then calm down until the next series of heart stoppers.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
He should write some children books.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
I forgot all about it until I read about her diamond earrings. What ever happened to the ear that was sent to Edward? Did they find out who it belonged to?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the character development already.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 11:05 AM Title: Epiloge
as much as i loved this nothing else was said about what happened to those that hurt them. i would have been nice to have an update in the epilogue..i am one of those readers that needs to know what happened to all the characters lol
Date: 29 Aug 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
another booboo,the officers who harassed him never gave a name,yet Uley is mentioned. i don't point out booboos to be rude. i like your stuff,i point them out because i do know some authors like to go back and pull stuff and repost it. :)
Author's Response:
It's fine. I appreciate you pointing out the errors. I'm rarely ever on this site anymore so chances are good, I probably won't go back and fix them at this point.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
caught a booboo here. bella tells him to contact a gal named hiedi and then in the next sentence it says he contacts jane,but jane is his character in his book
Date: 28 Aug 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ok so when will Bella and Edward meet?
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 6:54 AM Title: Epiloge
Such a great story! I absolutely loved it, so many stories I can only get a few chapters in before I change stories but yours had me constantly hitting next, for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing such a great story!!
melissa
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:20 AM Title: Epiloge
That was the best what a great life they have. Thanks so much for a great story
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2013 11:34 AM Title: Epiloge
Sad its over, loved every second of it.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2013 6:32 PM Title: Epiloge
thank you for your wonderful story
Date: 15 Mar 2013 4:43 AM Title: Epiloge
IT'S SO SAD TO REACH THE END BUT.............WELL DONE!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2013 2:58 AM Title: Epiloge
That was a really great way to end the story.
Date: 15 Mar 2013 2:49 AM Title: Epiloge
I so love a happily ever after! Thanks for the great story.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 9:08 PM Title: Epiloge
nice wrap up ending. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 6:16 PM Title: Epiloge
Loved it!! wasn't expecting 4 kids but I loved it... the more the merrier I say!
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story. I am home sick and just happened upon it. Yo had me very nervous at some points. Great plot.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
That is a wonderful thing
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Woo hoo New baby and new pregos!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Love a HEA!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was a great ending. Will is adorable.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
AWWWWWWWWW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 BABIES WOW !!!!!!!! I KNOW THE FEELING WERE EXPECTING 2 BABIES IN OUR FAMILY DUE 6 DAYS APART. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you for the update...........well done........babies, babies and more babies......I can't wait..I hope they are all healthy and that Edward gets his girl.Alice gets a boy that looks like Jasper and Emmett & Rosalie get a brewser just like Emmett maybe twins for them one of each
Date: 19 Feb 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love these two. The wedding was perfect for them. I like William Charles, but that is my Dads name. What is Carlisle's middle name? That may be an option..... I can't wait for the baby! Great job...thanks!!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Im so excited about the baby. What about Arron Charles Cullen??? or Carter Charles Cullen????
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
Really did they expect anything less from Renee. Why would she do anything to make their lives easier.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
IT DOES'NT HAVE TO END, HMMMMMMM............. SEQUEL SOUNDS GOOD!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Baby cullen! Baby cullen! I'm so excited!
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter. Loved the wedding. The new house sounds nice. A normal, nice name please. Heathcliff?? She want her kid picked on everyday of his life???
Of course Renee is going to be trouble.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am so enjoying this story looking forward to reading more.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love that things are going smooth and a baby on the way how exciting.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit there is the reason for all of his tingles
Date: 13 Feb 2013 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Renee is an evil bitch or is she just stupid??? I love that they are back together
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh! That was such a dramatic start. To think that Bella would be taken again. Poor Edward I don't know how he survived it. Thank god he had a distraction and it wasn't all that long of a time frame.
the movie premiere was great I loved the name mash. The baby is a really nice touch
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
I knew ice cream was bad for you.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad they moved past what happened. I'm so glad they are happy.
Renee is a piece of work, I can't wait to hear what she's bBen up to.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Bella did the right thing and I'm glad that she didn't put up with any bullshit.
Renee's here. I can't wait to see this.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is now my hero. While I love that she was so forgiving in New Moon, a part of me wanted her to at least be a little mad. I don't agree with making someone jump through hoops, but I don't think you should be a pushover either.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank god Bella is so resourceful. I wonder if the old lady is the same Dottie from Edwards book sighing. That would be really great.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thing were going to smooth, you knew something horrible was bound to happen soon. I don't believe for a second that its Bella's ear though. He's just messing with Edwards mind right now.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG! You have guys down pat. Secret soap opera fans, check. Being a baby about having to stay at the hospital and insisting that their fine, check. Being bummed out that they couldn't get off in two weeks, check. Professing love because of your cooking, check. Only thing missing was him scratching himself. Lol that was great.
Yet again Victoria was being stupid. Tanya really is a piece of work. I can't wait to see Charlie get his funds on her.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Damn. You really are great at the drama.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well at least Edward has something good going for him in the middle of all this madness.
Victoria is really stupid. Shouldn't she have made sure he was in the same state before she caused him of rape. Stupid bitch.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
So glad that things are over for them. Now a baby on the way. Things will be a rollercoster for Edward to keep up with Bella's mood swings. LOL Great Chapter!!
Date: 13 Feb 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh. I knew something bad was going to happen. But to kill a little old lady is just wrong. Then to not even have a moment until Bella was taken. Talk about emotional overload.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was a great first meeting. They were really cute together.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
That is really creepy. But it has happened. I wonder how far the person will take it.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh. This is getting good.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
It seems there is baby fever going on. I don't blame Edward for wanting to try and help his friends. He backed off when Bella asked.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a packed chapter! Great work.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just came across this story and so far it's great. There are some interesting twists and turns developing. I'm excited.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Good chapter-thanks!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
So glad he fought back and Bella too. Hope they get Renee for kidnapping and attempted murder or accesssory to murder. Yey for pregnancy!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think Renee knows more than she lets on. She doesnt care about Bella so I think she's being paid off. Grr for cliffy end
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh Renee is a worthless piece of scum. Yey for moving in together
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Omg! Wow so Renee is making an appearance ha? Crazy.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
liked seeing her POV. Glad she still talked to Alice and Esme. Brianna is running that company into the ground quickly. Kinda wanna see a chapter where they fall. And have all of Bella's clients follow her to New Moon. hee hee. yea Im evil. Ugh Guessing Renee at the end?
Date: 04 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
So it sounds like Renee has showed up. I can't wait to see how that goes over. Great job....thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Renee finally shows up and pissed that she couldn't keep Bella away from her father Charlie
Date: 03 Feb 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow Renee must be really mad to show up at Charlie's. Look out Bella momma is here and loaded for bear. Can't wait for the next chapter to see if I'm right.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ahh, Renee. Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Go Bella for letting him have it. Oooh Bree's gonna catch crap when E and other writers start leaving. Would serve her right.
hmmm Skankya's Daddy huh?
Date: 29 Jan 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
I thought for sure it was Renee that hired James and he had just gone too far and involved Bella.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Tanya is a freak and I think Bella is going about things the right way but it is time lol
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2013 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wel we know for sure it's Tanya's dad! Woot.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Eward you are so stupid sometimes, thanks for taking the vote away from her. she is hurting just like you.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Is it weird that I keep thinking Esme might be behind all this? Idk
Author's Response:
I can promise that she isn't.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Not going to yell, love the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 24 Jan 2013 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
you want to know what i'm thinking???? i'm thinking i need you to update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is a f*cking idiot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
He's male. Are you surprised?