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Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

Good story

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

OH I KNOW ITS BEEN A WHILE BUT PLZ FINISH THE STORY PLZ    LOL

Reviewer: Figs78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

No clue what this story was about.  Read it in 10 minutes and completely pointless.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

What are bella and edwards ages or age difference?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter Three

thank you

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter Two

Bella dream too!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter One

I like!

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh yeah

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

MmmHmmm

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Good girl Bella

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Awwwwe

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Young tiger Edward :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter Eight

They are similar :-) E & B that is

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter Seven

!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

ok so i guess it's not his neice but i'm guessing that charlie dies on the job and esme not wanting to see bella go into foster care adopts her there fore she is edwards spsydo neice???

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am in love with this story.   Update soon!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter Ten

:)

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I'm loving this story...please say there's more of it posted somewhere...please, I want to read more... Thank you for sharing!

~ Helen.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Nine

im guessing that charlie died and esme and carlisle adopted her so therefore bella is edwards adopted neice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RebellioussSoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 7:36 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Poor Carlisle; he had probably gotten up the courage to tell Edward of his plans to propose to Esme and he shut him down. Edward just shut him down! With no remorse for Carlisle feelings. He's still a kid, so of course he's gonna assume this was Carlisle's way of letting him and Esme down gently. Seriously, the guy stuck around for this long. I don't see him wanting to walk away.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter Nine

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter Eight

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter Seven

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Reviewer: cantstopreadingff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter One

Can't wait to see where this is heading... :-)

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter Six

MmmmmHmmmmm! You go girl!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter Five

Home sweet homeward!!!

thanks!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter Four

I like her teenage inner Edwardlogue!!!

thanks! 

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter Three

Slow burn...painful erection...trying to kill us much! LoL! Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter Two

Oh hell! This is way better/different/awesome from the FF version!

thanks for the pre-Christmas treat!!!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter One

Thanks for posting here!!!

yay! Thanks!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter Six

love itcan't wait for more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter Four

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter Five

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter Six

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Reviewer: sandras Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter Two

oh too good!

Reviewer: courttzuniga Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter One

interested in reading more of this story.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter Three

How old is E?

Reviewer: robstenize Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter One

Amazing! i cant hardly wait for the next one. please continue :)

Reviewer: lililu0115 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter Three

hi I like it a lot and want to know what happens next with these two so please continue with the story please please please please please

Reviewer: handa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter Three

Mmm. All that tension....delicious

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter Three

Omg! Please more can't hardly wait.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter Three

Need details on their relationship!  Seems good so far.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter One

Interest Peeked!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter Three

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter Two

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter One

:)

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:20 AM Title: Chapter One

Please continue. This seems like a forbidden desire. 



Author's Response:

Lol... thanks!  Have no fear, I´ve got over a hundred chapters to unload on you!  Thanks for reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

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