Date: 23 Apr 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Great way to wrap it all up!
Date: 23 Apr 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Great ending, but so sad to see this story end... :)
Date: 23 Apr 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
sweet end. Glad they all got thier HEAs.
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 23 Apr 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
cute ending
Date: 23 Apr 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Great story, its sad to see it end.
Date: 16 Apr 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Beautiful! Love the last bit!
Date: 15 Apr 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forwardto more
Date: 15 Apr 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Beautiful chapter and I can't wait to read more of it ;)
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can't wait for the end, even though I don't want to see it end
Date: 15 Apr 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
sweetchapter. Glad they found a nice house.
Date: 09 Apr 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
While bella maybe came on a little strong, i mean they did just lose their daughter. I'm glad she was able to get it out.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Denali's have real nerve. Glad she's selling the house though
Date: 08 Apr 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Graet chapter and I can't wait to read more ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good Chapter, I'm glad she got to give the Denali's a piece of her mind.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe it's almost over. I love this story.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
So glad it all seems to be working out for them now. Bella deserves to be happy. Such a sweet story. :)
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
woo hoo E1 moving to CA!!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad they are all going to be together.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love the chapter and I can't wait to read more of it ;)
Date: 30 Mar 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
LOL, but they are finally together! :) Super! And I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
YEY for lemony time!!! Happy Dance
ROFL Jon Boy
Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
:) Finally!!!! loved this
Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
about time looking forward to mroe
Date: 25 Mar 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
lol that was a funny way to end it sadly there is a whole generation that wont get it.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
I look forward to these chapters all weekmand then I read right through them and all I want is more!!
Very cute with the Walton's reference....I wonder how many people in the fandom will get it? LOL
So glad they finally worked things out.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad that they were finally honest with each other.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love it ;) I can't wait until the next update ;)
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to more
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
:) loved this
Author's Response:
I'm glad!
Liz
Chapter 16 teaser:
We left the airport after collecting Alice’s five bags and headed for home. When we finally pulled up, I noticed that it was dark save for a lone light that was shining from the living room window.
“Rosie, are you sure that my sister is here?” Emmett asked.
I looked at Alice and smiled at her. “Yes, Emmett, she’s here. She’s probably sleeping.”
“Yeah, Em, so don’t go roaring in the house. Got it?” Alice asked as she flicked his ear.
Emmett ducked his head. “Dammit, Alice! Leave my fucking ear alone!”
“Aww, poor Emmy,” Jasper chuckled.
“Let’s just get the bags and go inside. I’m tired,” I ordered.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Rose and Jazz are such good friends.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are. Thanks for reading.
Liz
Chapter 16 teaser:
We left the airport after collecting Alice’s five bags and headed for home. When we finally pulled up, I noticed that it was dark save for a lone light that was shining from the living room window.
“Rosie, are you sure that my sister is here?” Emmett asked.
I looked at Alice and smiled at her. “Yes, Emmett, she’s here. She’s probably sleeping.”
“Yeah, Em, so don’t go roaring in the house. Got it?” Alice asked as she flicked his ear.
Emmett ducked his head. “Dammit, Alice! Leave my fucking ear alone!”
“Aww, poor Emmy,” Jasper chuckled.
“Let’s just get the bags and go inside. I’m tired,” I ordered.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
So glad that happened. It's about time she pulled her head out of her butt and stopped punishing edward and herself for Garrett's mistakes. <3
Author's Response:
Yeah...now they have the hard stuff to figure out. Where to live??
Liz
Teaser chapter 16:
We left the airport after collecting Alice’s five bags and headed for home. When we finally pulled up, I noticed that it was dark save for a lone light that was shining from the living room window.
“Rosie, are you sure that my sister is here?” Emmett asked.
I looked at Alice and smiled at her. “Yes, Emmett, she’s here. She’s probably sleeping.”
“Yeah, Em, so don’t go roaring in the house. Got it?” Alice asked as she flicked his ear.
Emmett ducked his head. “Dammit, Alice! Leave my fucking ear alone!”
“Aww, poor Emmy,” Jasper chuckled.
“Let’s just get the bags and go inside. I’m tired,” I ordered.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love that they are finally together. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Liz
Chapter 16 teaser:
We left the airport after collecting Alice’s five bags and headed for home. When we finally pulled up, I noticed that it was dark save for a lone light that was shining from the living room window.
“Rosie, are you sure that my sister is here?” Emmett asked.
I looked at Alice and smiled at her. “Yes, Emmett, she’s here. She’s probably sleeping.”
“Yeah, Em, so don’t go roaring in the house. Got it?” Alice asked as she flicked his ear.
Emmett ducked his head. “Dammit, Alice! Leave my fucking ear alone!”
“Aww, poor Emmy,” Jasper chuckled.
“Let’s just get the bags and go inside. I’m tired,” I ordered.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really enjoy this story - it comes across as a little bit cheesy (but I like it that way). The only bone that I have to pick is that it seems a little fast paced. But ultimately, I do like this story. :)
Happy writing!
EmiMills
Date: 12 Mar 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks...
Liz
Date: 11 Mar 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
WOW, that was hard to read.
Author's Response:
May I ask why? Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Have some faith! He is on his way!
Liz
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
Gotta love Rose. Looks like someone if gonna be moving soon
Author's Response:
Maybe, we'll see. They still have some talking to do. Thanks or reading.
Liz
Chapter 15 Teaser:
“Bella? Are you okay?” Rose grabbed my hands.
I blinked and looked in to her blue eyes. “Yeah…uh, yeah. I’m fine, Rose. Listen to this song, though.”
Rose was silent while she listened. “Yeah, okay, I’ve heard it. What about it?”
“Rose! Don’t you see? This song sums up my entire relationship with Edward! This is us, Rosalie!” My voice kept rising.
Rose looked shocked as she listened harder. “Oh my…Bella, you’re right!”
“Rose, we need to leave! Now!” I started searching for my purse. “I need to call him! Where’s my phone? We need to go; I need to fly to New York.”
Date: 11 Mar 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great and I can't wait till the next one! This is a very good story!
Date: 11 Mar 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
So New York or California? I have never been to California so I can't comment on there personally. Now new York is always hopping. But starting a new restaurant in New York is tough even the most seasoned chefs flip there. California on the other hand has a lot more opportunities for Edward to open his own place. Alice could design in California. Emmett and Bella can really work anywhere. It wouldn't take long for Emmett to get a teaching certificate there.
Date: 11 Mar 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to mroe
Date: 06 Mar 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
love it update soon
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
when will you review i cant waittttt
Author's Response:
Story updates every Monday!
Liz
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can understand her wanting to go slow. E was being a wanker not talking to her. Em should have not done that. So not cool. Glad she's gonna take a vaca.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Em is a block head, but he doesn't know how deep Edward's feeling run. No one does, except maybe Alice. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you are enjoying it!
Liz
Chapter 14 teaser:
I dialed and waited, and he finally answered on the fourth ring.
“Hello?”
“I want to know exactly what you think you are doing to her.”
“Hello to you, too, Rose.”
“Don’t give me that shit, Edward. What the hell is your problem?”
“Nothing, Rosalie. It’s something that Bella and I have to work out on our own.”
“Really? ‘Cause the girl that I just picked up from the airport looks worse than she did after Garrett died. You need to get your ass on a plane and get out here. Tonight!”
I heard Edward sigh into the receiver. “She looks that bad?”
“Are you kidding me? You haven’t talked to her for weeks! She loves you, you dope! She may not realize it yet, but she does. You need to fix this! I want my happy friend back, not her depressed replacement.”
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww sweet men. I like Rose's idea for store. We're not all sticks.
Laurant is so cute.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
ah that explains her aversion to Vday. not my fav either.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
lol kinda guessed it was E's restaurant. Too cute.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Woo hoo. Bet Carmen would like it if she moved to NY. hee hee
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great friends to have
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Em should have thought of the cemetary. that was my first thought after her house. Really like to punch Renee in the face after the last chapter.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Depression happens deservedly or not. Kinda expected in this case in my mind.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good Advice from Rose.
Em is too cute.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow Garrett really was a pussy huh?
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ah so a cheating story after all. Skankya was soooo out of line. What a biatch.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow great to have such nice friends.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh my. Thought this was going to be a cheating story.....but a death story is horrible too. Poor B
Date: 04 Mar 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
They are nothing being little drama queens in this chapter. Lol
Author's Response:
Yes they are. Good thing that Rose is on the case. Thanks for reading!
Liz
Chapter 14 teaser:
I dialed and waited, and he finally answered on the fourth ring.
“Hello?”
“I want to know exactly what you think you are doing to her.”
“Hello to you, too, Rose.”
“Don’t give me that shit, Edward. What the hell is your problem?”
“Nothing, Rosalie. It’s something that Bella and I have to work out on our own.”
“Really? ‘Cause the girl that I just picked up from the airport looks worse than she did after Garrett died. You need to get your ass on a plane and get out here. Tonight!”
I heard Edward sigh into the receiver. “She looks that bad?”
“Are you kidding me? You haven’t talked to her for weeks! She loves you, you dope! She may not realize it yet, but she does. You need to fix this! I want my happy friend back, not her depressed replacement.”
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forwardto more
Author's Response:
Thanks! Here's a small taste....
Liz
Chapter 14 teaser:
I dialed and waited, and he finally answered on the fourth ring.
“Hello?”
“I want to know exactly what you think you are doing to her.”
“Hello to you, too, Rose.”
“Don’t give me that shit, Edward. What the hell is your problem?”
“Nothing, Rosalie. It’s something that Bella and I have to work out on our own.”
“Really? ‘Cause the girl that I just picked up from the airport looks worse than she did after Garrett died. You need to get your ass on a plane and get out here. Tonight!”
I heard Edward sigh into the receiver. “She looks that bad?”
“Are you kidding me? You haven’t talked to her for weeks! She loves you, you dope! She may not realize it yet, but she does. You need to fix this! I want my happy friend back, not her depressed replacement.”
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG... I hope everything will be fine ;)
Author's Response:
It will be...
Liz
Chapter 14 teaser:
I dialed and waited, and he finally answered on the fourth ring.
“Hello?”
“I want to know exactly what you think you are doing to her.”
“Hello to you, too, Rose.”
“Don’t give me that shit, Edward. What the hell is your problem?”
“Nothing, Rosalie. It’s something that Bella and I have to work out on our own.”
“Really? ‘Cause the girl that I just picked up from the airport looks worse than she did after Garrett died. You need to get your ass on a plane and get out here. Tonight!”
I heard Edward sigh into the receiver. “She looks that bad?”
“Are you kidding me? You haven’t talked to her for weeks! She loves you, you dope! She may not realize it yet, but she does. You need to fix this! I want my happy friend back, not her depressed replacement.”
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
:) love this
Author's Response:
I'm glad!
Liz
chapter 14 teaser:
I dialed and waited, and he finally answered on the fourth ring.
“Hello?”
“I want to know exactly what you think you are doing to her.”
“Hello to you, too, Rose.”
“Don’t give me that shit, Edward. What the hell is your problem?”
“Nothing, Rosalie. It’s something that Bella and I have to work out on our own.”
“Really? ‘Cause the girl that I just picked up from the airport looks worse than she did after Garrett died. You need to get your ass on a plane and get out here. Tonight!”
I heard Edward sigh into the receiver. “She looks that bad?”
“Are you kidding me? You haven’t talked to her for weeks! She loves you, you dope! She may not realize it yet, but she does. You need to fix this! I want my happy friend back, not her depressed replacement.”
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully she talks to Edward soon.
Author's Response:
She's gonna try, but he needs to talk to her first.
Liz
Chapter 14 teaser:
I dialed and waited, and he finally answered on the fourth ring.
“Hello?”
“I want to know exactly what you think you are doing to her.”
“Hello to you, too, Rose.”
“Don’t give me that shit, Edward. What the hell is your problem?”
“Nothing, Rosalie. It’s something that Bella and I have to work out on our own.”
“Really? ‘Cause the girl that I just picked up from the airport looks worse than she did after Garrett died. You need to get your ass on a plane and get out here. Tonight!”
I heard Edward sigh into the receiver. “She looks that bad?”
“Are you kidding me? You haven’t talked to her for weeks! She loves you, you dope! She may not realize it yet, but she does. You need to fix this! I want my happy friend back, not her depressed replacement.”
Date: 28 Feb 2013 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great story and I'm very curious as how it goes further ;)
Date: 26 Feb 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to let the past go and enjoy her life.
Date: 25 Feb 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to more
Date: 23 Feb 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ugh how can u not love him? Excellente....
Date: 19 Feb 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to mroe
Date: 18 Feb 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well at least her intentions are good. Even if they are a little misguided.
I hope Carmen askes her to stay. New York is where she needs to be.
Date: 18 Feb 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward never said he slept on the couch! LOL good chapter
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Aww. That's really sweet. I love that she didn't know and he didn't tell her. But really he didn't have to comp her meal. It was a business meeting work should of been paying. Lol
Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Feb 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter hon! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work! D
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah. I knew she should go to new York. Hopefully work, Edward and Alice can convince her to stay.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward stayed didn't he
I think everyone can see that Edward has this strong feelings for Bella but she doesn't to see it or get her hopes up feel more than she should
Date: 29 Jan 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Okay that was mean.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad this was a little lighter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
that was just mean lol :D cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to more
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
So touching and God, please give me friends like Bella's! She needs to concentrate on who and what she has and put who and what she lost behind her. Her friends are a big help there. Great work.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awe eddie 2 rescue!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that they found her. She needed to vent her anger. I'm not sure what kind of job she has but I hope she can go with Edward. Love the story!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
more more!!!! please? soon?
Date: 21 Jan 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
While it sucked that they has to worry about Bella like that it was great she got it out. I think Bella needs to leave Denver and start over somewhere fresh. New York would be a great place.
Date: 18 Jan 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
So sad. It has to hurt to be deceived so bad. I wonder where she went.
Date: 18 Jan 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well at least Bella got closure.
Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad Bella smacked her. She couldn't do it to Garrett and Kate but Tanya was the next best thing.
Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella. But I wonder if he was cheating? And it great they will all be related for real as long as everyone gets together.