Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Great story of friendship and what it means through life and love. Withstanding the ups and downs life throws at you.
I enjoyed reading your thoughts on this story. It appears as though you're working your way through everything I've written. With Glass I took some liberties, especially with Bella's job, but she needed a push. I'm glad that you've enjoyed my stuff. Thanks for the kind words.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
Forgot to mention how extremely odd it was that her work gave her crap about her moving to L.A., to the point that she quit. Telecommuting doesn't matter where you are in the country. Hell, in the world. It's still all done over the phone and computer. I work from home here in San Francisco, for a company in Chicago, on an account in New York . . . it shouldn't have mattered to them. Just found it strange. I'm so glad that BxE found their home. Very happy it is so close to the others. I loved that all three men proposed at the same time. Wonder if they'd planned that? It was very cute. All three women were so very excited. Edward coaxing out of Bella what was wrong at bedtime, was sweet of him. That she wants a baby was making him very happy. Cute ending.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Why would they want that house? And, for more than the asking price? The only thing I can think of, is guilt. They feel guilty for what their own daughter did. They want to give Bella closure. However, that idea changed when they didn't just do it all through the realtor and even done with it. When they made the arrange,nets to see the place, I knew something was wrong. Did they actually think that attacking the innocent one in the whole thing was a good idea? What is wrong with them? Sick people. She didn't need that. At all.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad she finally realized, with a little nudge from the awesome Rose, that she is in fact, in love with Edward. I'm very glad they spoke and that they admitted their feelings. In this case, he needed to hear it from her first.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Gotta love Rose. She sees through the crap and settled it all. Hopefully, they will pull themselves together. It just dawned on me that Emmet can work anywhere, as he's a teacher. Bella can work anywhere, as she works remotely. Edward wants to open his own restaurant, which are a dime a dozen in Los Angeles. Also a giant fashion mecca, so Alice could still have her clothing line. Hmmm. I think everyone needs to start packing and moving.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seems a little odd that you would throw this on Bella's plate as well. Wasn't it full enough already? Edward not speaking to her for two weeks was a little harsh. She gave him honesty. Something he already knew, that she wasn't ready, yet he didn't like it. So instead of a little compassion and understanding, he stops talking to her altogether. This story has taken a left turn, with no blinker. Emmett was the one to make the mistake here. Why would he tell Edward she was out on a date? He's not a stupid man, was he thinking this would help them. It didn't. It hurt them.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
She's so conflicted. It really is kind of soon, too. Loved Laurent in this chapter, telling her to get her head out of her ass . . . too funny. Loved that both Jasper and Emmett flew in to surprise Alice and Rose. So sweet.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
It was wonderful of Alice to show up with breakfast. Well, it looks like she really isn't needed in NY any longer. Especially since Laurent and airing had to go back to Paris. Does that mean she's leaving earlier than expected? Liked the girls having a Skype night to include Rose. How sweet was Edward to bring her to bed? Awwwww.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yay, Edward picked her up from the airport! Perfect. He did get quiet, that was interesting. At least we learned why rapidly. I have to say I love that Bella speaks French. With Edward running a French restaurant, I makes me wonder if he too, speaks French?
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
I forget what Rose does for a living or, it wasn't mentioned yet. Would she be able to move to where Emmett is? I'm so glad that it was Edward that was there. Even happier that he took that leap by kissing her. Very convenient business trip to where it seems her main office is located. I wonder if she'll move there? It would be a nice change of scenery, that I mentioned in an earlier review.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah, insight into how they all met online. Thank you for that. It was good to have laughter for her again. Leaving her alone right now, may not be the best but, I do understand they all have lives and jobs. I hope that is Edward that shut the door before calling to her.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
She really needed to get that out of her. Holding that crap in, is lethal to your well being. I'm so glad that everyone came again. I'm sure Alice would be there as well, had she not had her work commitment. I'm so glad that Emmett found her. Rose taking care of her in the shower. Edward taking care of her knees. Such good people.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Interesting turn of events. Of course her delayed depression is warranted. It owes the seem like she is depressed about Garrett, just about being alone. Which, she has self inflicted. Sort of a catch twenty-two here. She was lonely, so she cut off all ties with the people that could pull her out of the loneliness. Seems like it may be time for a change of scenery. A new life. Get out of the house you shared with the man that passed away.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have put both cinnamon and vanilla in my pancakes forever. Try yours with adding vanilla next time, you'll never have them without again ;) to use your own words. I really liked that they all fit so very well together. That the men enjoyed one another, too. It was also great that Edward not only offered his help but, actually did help, in preparing breakfast. Knowing he'd pulled away from her months ago, and she felt it, should really help to speed up her healing process. Unfortunately, it may also cause a trust issue with the next man.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
The life that Garrett promised Kate? What about the life he'd promised Bella? His double life caught up to him in an epic way. I hope you'll let us hear what Rose and Alice say to Tanya. Too bad Kate didn't go with Garrett. Yes, I know how awful that is of me to say, yet she had to know about Bella. Too bad Bella neve got the luxury until it was too late.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was tragic. Yes, an officer at your door is never good. Wow, that is horrible. It's wonderful of both Alice and Rose to drop everything and go to her, when they've never met in person. That's a strong bond. It's also wonderful that their brothers want to be there to support their sisters.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
I sure wish writers would put translations at the end of the foreign phrase instead of the end of the chapter. Many say they feel it ruins the flow, but I feel it ruins the flow if I either don't know what is being said until the end, or wait have to scan down to the end of the chapter to find out what is going on. JMO
Date: 05 Feb 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Real life can certainly be a lot to deal with, but I'm glad you let this story reflect that fact. It was such a good story to read since the three women were such fast friends and the way their lives intertwined was such fun to read!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a great time writing it. Now if only I lived closer to my "Rose and Alice" we'd be good. But alas, this isn't fiction. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was kind of weird for Kate's parents to make an offer on the house, more than Bella was asking, even! They got an earful for their troubles, too! I'm glad Bella got a chance to tell them how she felt about everything. Now there should be no ties to Denver or that family anymore!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this chapter, and not just for the lemon. The fact that Edward and Bella declared themselves was great, and the scene at Bella's door with Rose and Emmett was really funny. The capper was that goodnight John boy, from Jasper!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
Actually Rose has a pretty good idea here, I want to see all of them together, too! What she and Jasper talked about is a real problem, the people they all love are scattered over the country! Not very conducive to stable relationships, for any of them!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella got all that out , because it was slowly poisoning her. Good thing it only took one bottle of Jack Daniels and a screaming session, with tears! Good thing, too, that her friends were there to pick up the pieces.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Had a sneaking hunch that this was happening! When your heart tells you something is wrong, always listen! Bella felt Garrett was up to something and boy, was she right! I can't believe Tanya had balls enough to say that to Bella! Some people have no shame!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm seeing why this plotline appealed to you. It's just like the friendship a lot of you authors develop I'll bet. Poor Bella , she's lost her fiance and just when they were planning their wedding, too. Thank heavens her friends are on their way to help!